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30th March 2009, 10:44 AM
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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30th March 2009, 12:17 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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well..........before appreciating, i wud love to ask "kaun hai woh khushnaseeb"
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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30th March 2009, 12:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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All i can say is........
Mujh ko na apna hosh na duniyaa kaa hosh hai
Mast hoke baithaa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein
Taaron se puuchh lo merii dastan-e-zindagii
Raaton ko jaagataa hoon tumhaare Khayaal mein .....
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30th March 2009, 05:44 PM
wah wah dear bahut payri ghazal likhi hai keep it up
*****When you awake alive in the morning, thank GOD for it*****
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31st March 2009, 06:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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it's really a romantic one ............. kon hai jo sapno me aaya , kon hai ko dil me samaya..........keep it up............
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beautiful moment.........
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31st March 2009, 06:24 PM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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it's AWESOME.............PURVI diiii....................very romantic.....keep it up
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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31st March 2009, 07:15 PM
Hi naaz,
Are yaar abhi tumne muje jaana hee kitana hai... mein to bahot hee ****ntic hoon ................
thanks a lot for appriciation.
purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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1st April 2009, 12:28 PM
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well..........before appreciating, i wud love to ask "kaun hai woh khushnaseeb"
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......................................, Raaz ki baatei.N raaz hee rahe to accha hai..................
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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1st April 2009, 01:26 PM
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......................................, Raaz ki baatei.N raaz hee rahe to accha hai..................
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But us raaz ko doston ke saath to share kar hi sakte hain na?
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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1st April 2009, 01:29 PM
Purvi dii Aap sach me bahot romantic hai, aapki romani gazlon ne itna bata diya.
Thanks for sharing such a good "Gazal". Keep up. Keep sharing.
Suna hai pyar me nind ud jati hai,
koi humse bhi pyar kare Kambakhat
Hume nind bahot aati hai
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Hi naaz,
Are yaar abhi tumne muje jaana hee kitana hai... mein to bahot hee ****ntic hoon ................
thanks a lot for appriciation.
purvi
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Are yaar is ghazal ko dekhkar to koi gunjaish hi nhi bachti ki tum kitni romantic ho
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1st April 2009, 01:38 PM
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Are yaar is ghazal ko dekhkar to koi gunjaish hi nhi bachti ki tum kitni romantic ho
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Ahem.......... Ahem.............................
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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2nd April 2009, 01:20 PM
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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2nd April 2009, 10:24 PM
Pyaari Di,
Ghazal ki ehesaas to lajawab hai ...main to ehi soch rahi hun gar Di abhi aise ghazal kahne lagi jij se to jij ka kya halat hoga ..Hi re
ghazal bahot hi achhi hai ...aap pahle se behtar ghazal kahne lagi ho ...mujhe to aapki har thread achha lagta hai
apna khayal rakhiyega
with love
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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3rd April 2009, 04:14 PM
Nice work,
So romantic, Best wishes, keep writing,
Rashid
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
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4th April 2009, 11:39 AM
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wah wah dear bahut payri ghazal likhi hai keep it up
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Thanks for appriciation Dear.
Keep smiling..
God Bless you
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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4th April 2009, 03:14 PM
superb purvi ji................
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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5th April 2009, 11:38 AM
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it's really a romantic one ............. kon hai jo sapno me aaya , kon hai ko dil me samaya..........keep it up............
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Mannjee,
meri ghazal padhne aur sarhane ke liye aap ki shukra guzaar hoon
aage bhee yunhi padhte rahiyega
Khush rahiye
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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6th April 2009, 02:21 PM
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it's AWESOME.............PURVI diiii....................very romantic.....keep it up
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Hi, Lamha
Thanks for appriciation Dear...
It has to be romentic, I've written for someone sp.
keep smiling
God bless you
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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6th April 2009, 02:59 PM
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Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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Oye Hoye Di.. How romantic and chooo chweeet..
Reps +++
Very cute feelings......
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6th April 2009, 11:54 PM
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Purvi dii Aap sach me bahot romantic hai, aapki romani gazlon ne itna bata diya.
Thanks for sharing such a good "Gazal". Keep up. Keep sharing.
Suna hai pyar me nind ud jati hai,
koi humse bhi pyar kare Kambakhat
Hume nind bahot aati hai
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AAdab,
Ghazal padhne aur housla afzayee ke liye aap ki shukra guzaar hoon.
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..Khush rahiye
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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7th April 2009, 11:50 AM
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Are yaar is ghazal ko dekhkar to koi gunjaish hi nhi bachti ki tum kitni romantic ho
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HUmmmmmmmmm......... Accha hai.... aur abhi bhi koi shaq ho to.......Next ghazal mei.N woh bhi dur kar dungi......
Keep smiling
Purvi
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Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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8th April 2009, 11:38 AM
Pyaari Diya......
Yeh tumhara pyaar hai jo meri har koshish ko pasand karta hai....
apna pyaar yunhi banaye rakhna
Hamesha khush raho
Tumhari
"Ghazal Di"
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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8th April 2009, 11:47 AM
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Originally Posted by Ek Ghazal
SDC ke saare dosto.N ko Namaskaar / AAdab,
AAj ek aur ghazal le kar aapke samne aayi hoon.. yeh ghazal mai.ne apni zindgi se jude ek bahot hee khaas insaan ke liye likhi hai....
AAp ki raa'ye ka intezaar rahega.................
Chupke se muje dekhti hai jab aankhe.N tumhari
Raaz -e-dil saare kholti hai nigaahe.N tumhari
har lamha guzarta hai bas tere khayalo.N mein
Tanhayi mein saath hoti hai Yaade.N tumhari
Na din mei.N hai chain kahin, na raato.N ko nind
Khwaabo.N mein bhi satati hai mulakate.N tumhari
Vo meethi si muskan, vo andaaz –e-bayaan
Ghayal muje karti hai woh adaaye.N tumhari
Na hota hai hosh muje, na khabar koi jahan ki
kuch aise lubhaati hai woh baate.N tumhari
Sharm-o-haya se uthti nahi nazare.N yeh meri,
saanso.n mei.N samati hai jab saanse.N tumhari
Kis tarah se roke, kareeb tere jaane se ‘Ghazal”
Aagosh mei.N use bharti hai, jab Baahe.N tumhari
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Bahot Khoob likha hai aapne Purvi jii.....................So Romantic.............
Aise hi likhti Rahiye
Apka Dost
Fezan
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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9th April 2009, 11:27 AM
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Nice work,
So romantic, Best wishes, keep writing,
Rashid
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Thanks for appriciation
Keep smiling
God bless you
Purvi
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Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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Thanks a lot -
11th April 2009, 12:17 PM
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superb purvi ji................
zainy
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Zainyji,
aap ki comment se mera housla aur bhee badhta hai, shukriya dost... aise hee apna saath dete rahena
Khush rahiye
AAp ki dost
Purvi
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28th April 2009, 03:59 PM
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Oye Hoye Di.. How romantic and chooo chweeet..
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Very cute feelings......
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Hey Amit....
Missing U Brother...
Glad to know that u like this..........
Keep smiling always
God bless u........
Purvi
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Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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30th April 2009, 05:42 PM
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Bahot Khoob likha hai aapne Purvi jii.....................So Romantic.............
Aise hi likhti Rahiye
Apka Dost
Fezan
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Fezan jee
Housla afzaayee ke liye tah-e-dil se aap ki shukraguzaar hoon...
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega
Aapki Dost
Purvi
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Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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