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Chaandni raat ki har baat.... - 18th April 2005, 04:51 PM

Doston,
Bahut dinon baad kuch khayaal aab sab ke aage rakh raha hoon umeed hai aapko pasand aayenGe


Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Kya woh dokha tha, jaane woh kaisa lamhaa tha
Beete mausam ki woh har baat tere saath gayi
Woh jo dekhe the, in aankhon ne, din raat tere
Mere sapno ki woh saugaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi
Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....



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18th April 2005, 05:06 PM

Hi Mast bhai,

I must say this is really a good one...

Whenever I try to read I try and read the feelings behind the writers words... I must say they are well potrayed in your words here...

keep writing

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hi - 18th April 2005, 07:36 PM

dear anu

bahhut waqt baad tumahra likha hua padha....dil khush hua aapko yaha dekh kar ek aar phir....aapke likhne me mayusi azar aa rahi hai dost? kya baat hai>>. kayi baar pichla yaad aa jaaye to aise ashaar dil ki aah banke nikltey hai? i hope ur in good spirits...bhuliyega nahi hum aapke dost hai aapke saath

Woh jo dekhe the, in aankhon ne, din raat tere
Mere sapno ki woh saugaat tere saath gayi
haiiiiiiii......kya kahu


Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi
touched the hrt..

jo chala gaya ho sake to usey yaad na kariyega.....though i can understand its hard but i am sure life willl bring all u lost back to you with even more added to it....wrapped with love......
ur writing had a magic that touched the soul....deep inside.......

luv Priya


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18th April 2005, 07:47 PM

Pyare Mast bhai,

Bohot acchha laga aapko yaha waapis paa ke. Kya baat hai bhaijaan, aaj kal bohot kam hi dikhaye parhte ho. Umeed karte hai sab bilkul khairiat se hoga.

Haiiii, kya khoob likha hai bhai. Aapke nick ki tarha bilku 'Mast'. Bohot acchha laga parh ke. Bas umeed karte hai ke ab regular basis pe aise hi aapse aur kuch kalaam parhne ko milenge.


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19th April 2005, 01:46 AM

Dear Mast ji, wah kya likhaa hai aap ne, bahut acchi lagi yeh rachna... humhari daad kubul karna aur aaise hi likhte rehna.


Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi
Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....


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Re: Chaandni raat ki har baat.... - 19th April 2005, 11:44 AM

Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi

alag alag sabdhon ko iss tarah yahan ek saath dekh kar padna aacha laga....kaamal ka sequence hai!....Classic!!
humari daad kabul kariyega!!

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Re: Chaandni raat ki har baat.... - 19th April 2005, 12:11 PM

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Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
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Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....
wah bohat khoob bade bhaiya

jiska koi chor nahi aisi tanha rah pe hum chale...
mitti jism ki bechaiN parchai tere saath gayi...
doob gaya jahaN mera dariya-e-gham maiN kahiN...
mere alfaaz-e-shayi ki dawaat* tere saath gayi...

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Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....

bhai bohak accha laga aapka kalaam ... dard maiN kahiN dooba hua .. par dil pe pur asar ... maja aa gaya padh ke .. dard hai par kahiN chubhta nahi hai ... meri dher sari daad aapke liye ...

aapka bhai

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19th April 2005, 03:33 PM

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Aaghaaz to bahut pyaar hai.. aage dkhen kya h\ghazab dhaati hai aapki kalam!!


Kya woh dokha tha, jaane woh kaisa lamhaa tha
Beete mausam ki woh har baat tere saath gayi

Woh jo dekhe the, in aankhon ne, din raat tere
Mere sapno ki woh saugaat tere saath gayi

Very Well said... Anu Bhai!!


Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Bahut khoob!!


Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi

Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

WaaaaaaaaaaH... Bahut bahut pyaara sher hai..simply loved it!!

Anu bhai!!

Posting after long but a very beautiful post... Kucch tumhare apne hi andaaz me bayaan kiye hue ashaar.. mujhe padhkar bahut accha laga... bhai bas yun hi likhte raho....aur kucch thhoda aur jaldi jaldi nayi ghazlein likho.....

Likhte rehna bhai... Daad to meri aapke saath hi hai... Do Take Good Care of urself...


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19th April 2005, 08:44 PM

Mast mere yaar ...jaane tumhaari ye rachna keise mis kar gaya.....kaabil-e-taareef ....tumhe parhna veise kuchh to nayepan ka ehsaas kara hi deta hai....

YooNhi likhte raho mere dost...

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20th April 2005, 01:01 PM

mast ji...
bilkul sach kaha hai apne..jo dil ke kareeb hota hai uske door jane per ye hi mehsoos hota hai......Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Kya woh dokha tha, jaane woh kaisa lamhaa tha
Beete mausam ki woh har baat tere saath gayi
Woh jo dekhe the, in aankhon ne, din raat tere
Mere sapno ki woh saugaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi

Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi
Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....
bahut hi khoobsoorti se sari nazm pesh kih ai...


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21st April 2005, 07:00 AM

Rohin bhai..aapne nacheez ko izzat di dil ko behad khushi hai..aapne is kalaam aur iske saath jude armaan aur ehsaas mehsoos kiye behad aacha laga

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21st April 2005, 09:08 AM

Anu....

Bahut khuub likha hai...aur dekho main jo sabse share karne jaa rahi hoon...uspe tumhein koyi eitaraaz nahin hona chahiye...ok...

dosto...hamare Anu Sahib ko...ek film ke liye song likhne ko kaha gaya thaa..unhein situation dee gayi thee...aur uspe...bus jald hee...within 24 hrs likhne ko kaha gaya thaa...mujhe batate huye garv mehsoos hota hai...ki Anu ne bakhuubi itna achaa kalaam unke aage rakh diya...

ab jo music director hain...wo Anu kee ek ghazal compose karna chahte hain...so Anu is going places...and we are with him...

haan, do you know that Anu was also at the Sa Re Ga Ma show, he is apparently great at singing too...

isn't that wonderful...i just feel proud ki he is my special dost...and i wish him grand success in whatever he takes on...

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Priya shukriya jo mere is azeez dost ne utni hi khoobsurti se mera haunslaa badhaaya jaise tum hamesha badhaati thi...bahut aacha laga...tumhara yeh pyaar dekhkar.

Mein theek hoon tum bilkul befikar raho..aur aapna aur mera khayal rakho..

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21st April 2005, 09:22 AM

aapki daad sar aankhon par janaab..ghayal ji aapne itne pyaar se is qalaam ko padha aur mujhe izzat di iska shukirya aur umeed hai aage bhi yeh lafz aapka dil lubhaate rahenGe

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21st April 2005, 09:29 AM

Mere veer Anu....

kaafi dinon ke baad tumhara kalaam padne ko mila......

dil ko choo gaya tumhara ye kalaam bhi......

aur ye kya....aate ho...ek kalaam post kiya aur chalte bane.....

ye theek nahi....

ab masroofiat gar khatm ho gayi ho to aana shuru kijiye janaab....

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21st April 2005, 10:10 AM

anu bhai,

maafii chahta hoon aapse.

kitne khoob kalaam aapke humne nazaron se jaane diye, bahot hi afsos hota hai mere bhai ; X

khair, yeh lehk aapka dil ko chuu gaya..

"Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi..
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..waah.. bas waah waah waah aur waah keh sakta hoon

beshak dil ko tadpaane waalii baatein likhte hain aap sir, bahot khoob!

isii tarah dard kaa "jaluus" nikaalte rahiiye

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Salam Salim Bhai...

Mujhe bhi bahut aacha lag raha ki mein wapas aa sabke beech hoon. Aab aapko shikayat ka mauka nahin dungaa aur sab khairiyat se hai aap sunaye..aapko yeh kalaam mere har kalaam ki tarah pasand aaya jaankar bahut khushi huyi..aur jaanta hoon aap aage bhi bin maange mujhe pyaar aur saath dete rahenGe..

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Parul ji..khusnaseeb hoon aur kya kahun..aapne nacheez ko padha samjha aur saath diya bahut aacha laga..aage bhi yunHi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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shalini ji behad aacha laga jaankar ki aapko yeh alag alag shabdon ki shrinkhala pasand aayi...waise gaane ka roop hi dena chahta hai..aapka reply dekhkar lag raha hai ki mehnat rang laayi...aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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heloo anuje.....
bahut waqt baad kuch apka likha padha........bahut hi acche ehsaas hain......starting bahut acchi hain........waise to puri ghazal hi acchi hain.........

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
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Kya woh dokha tha, jaane woh kaisa lamhaa tha
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dil se daad kabool karna aur dua karte hain hain jaldi hi aapki likhe bahut se gaane hum sune jaise paras di ne kaha..best of luck....

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aap to alaa darje ke shayar hai ... aapke samne kuch kehne layak to nahio .... par ye jaroor ki aapne bohata accha likha hai... meri tareef kabool karen....

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21st April 2005, 08:17 PM

kunal (chotte bhaiyaa) kaise ho...wah tumhe to is bhai ke rang mein rang daalkar khoob rangilaa sa alam kar diya hai..

behad khoobsurat..

jiska koi chor nahi aisi tanha rah pe hum chale...
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tumne to meri is nazm mein jaan daal di aur ho bhi kyun nahi bhai kiske ho...

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Pulkit Bhai...ji der se to aaya hoon jaantaa hoon par aap sabse aur dur kaise rehTaa...aapka pyaar aur dulaar saath rahe to bas kya kehNe aage bhi aap isi tarah se apne bhai ka saath dete rahiYeGaa

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Chaand Bhai..aapne fir ek baar mujhe apne seene se lagaya bas dil ko rahat mili...umeed hai aap aage bhi is dost ko gale lagaate raheNgee

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swati ji bahut der baad baat ho rahi hai...par aacha laga aapko yaha paakar behad khushi aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi yeh meri khushnaseebi hai aur umeed hai aap aage bhi yunHi saath deti rahiYeGaa

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are kya paras tumne to saare raaz khol diye...lol aab mein kaha jaaun...hehe..

Chaliye doston aab aap sab yeh bhi jaan lijiye ki yeh sab hamari pyaari paras ki meharbaani ka hi natijaa hai and paras tum mere saath ho yeh khud mein ek achivement se kam nahi

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18th May 2005, 07:47 PM

Aman veer ji tusi hamesha varge mera saath dende aaye ho ...

dil ki khushi ka andaaza nahi laga paa raha hoon ... aisa nahi hai veer ji koshish karta hoon jyaada se jyaada shirkat kar paaun mehfil mein aur umeed par phir duniya kayam hai...

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18th May 2005, 08:04 PM

aman bhai...

bhai na jaane kitne arse baad aapse baat ho rahi hai..umeed hai ki sab theek hoga .. koi khoj khabar bhi nahi dete aap to..is tarah aankhon se ojhal na ho jaaya karo..aapko yeh kalaam aur yeh lafz pasand aaye bande ki khushnaseebi samajhiye...aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYegaa..

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Meeta ji...

bas dil ke tarannum hai koi jaata hai to koi aata hai..safar yunhi kat ta chala jaata hai..aap yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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mausam ji aapko yeh nagma pasand aaya behad aacha laga..aur umeed hai aage bhi yunhi aapka dil lubhaa sakungaa..aap yunhi guftguu ka aalam barqaraar rakhiYeGaa

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Dekhiye aaj mere dar par kaun aaya hai...
ek zamane mein jisko khudaa bataaya hai

ghayal veer ji sadra baad aaj chote veer di yaad aayi..chalo aage hun aande rehna taaki tuhaada haath sade sir rahe..

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2nd July 2005, 06:14 AM

Kya woh dokha tha, jaane woh kaisa lamhaa tha
Beete mausam ki woh har baat tere saath gayi
Woh jo dekhe the, in aankhon ne, din raat tere
Mere sapno ki woh saugaat tere saath gayi
haiiiiiiii anu........dhoka tha kya jisme humney kitne pal gujjare???




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too touchy and emotional any.hasti palkon ki barsaat tere saat gayi

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i replied here earlier as welll aaj phir pada to reply kiye bina jane ka maan na kiya

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Soni ji aapne nacheez ko saraaha behad aacha laga aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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barsaat hasti palkon se no priya to woh pyaar ki nahi nafrat ki barsaat ho...aapko yeh khayalaaat pasand aaye aur dobara se is kalaam ko saraahne ka behad shukriya...umeed hai aage bhi yahi pyaar aur saaath miltaa raheGaa



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Bewafaai mein bhi aye yaar kaisa aalam hai
Bhujte armaano ki jaali raakh tere saath gayi
Chootega raah mein woh daman na humne socha tha
Hasti palkon ki woh barsaat tere saath gayi

Chaandni raat ki har baat tere saath gayi
Tum gaye dil ki har baat tere saath gayi....

Kya baat..kya baat..vahi purasar andaaz..bahut khoob..

Kuch lines likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi hoon..maaf kariyega.
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