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ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai - 4th September 2015, 09:28 PM

Lijiye ek nayi nazm mehfil ke naam.....



zindagi ko is tarah nazdeekiyon se jaana hai
ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai

mujhse kuch kehtaa nahi yeh aaina bhi saaf saaf
shayad ise bhi ilm hai jhoota har fasaana hai

raat bhar peete rahe us raazdaan ki baat par
Fajr ne aakar kaha na mai hai na maikhaana hai



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bahut khoob likha hai mast bhai aapne
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Lijiye ek nayi nazm mehfil ke naam.....



zindagi ko is tarah nazdeekiyon se jaana hai
ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai

mujhse kuch kehtaa nahi yeh aaina bhi saaf saaf
shayad ise bhi ilm hai jhoota har fasaana hai

raat bhar peete rahe us raazdaan ki baat par
Fajr ne aakar kaha na mai hai na maikhaana hai


wahhhh mere Laal....kya khoob likha hai.

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai



yeh sher to dil loot le gya

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai..


Dear Anu....behadddddd khoobsurat ehsaas....sabhi sher dil ke khaas kareeb rhe...ya yu kahun ki dil meiN tees paida kar gye sabhi sher.
dil ki baate kehne ke liye shayri se badi cheej koi hai hi nahi....


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lijiye ek nayi nazm mehfil ke naam.....



zindagi ko is tarah nazdeekiyon se jaana hai
ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai

mujhse kuch kehtaa nahi yeh aaina bhi saaf saaf
shayad ise bhi ilm hai jhoota har fasaana hai

raat bhar peete rahe us raazdaan ki baat par
fajr ne aakar kaha na mai hai na maikhaana hai
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bahut nazuk bahut sachche ehsaas.....
Dard me dooba ye kalaam seedha dil pe asar karta hai mast ji..............

Likhte rahiye.....
Khush rahiye...................................



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zindagi ko is tarah nazdeekiyon se jaana hai
ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai

mujhse kuch kehtaa nahi yeh aaina bhi saaf saaf
shayad ise bhi ilm hai jhoota har fasaana hai

raat bhar peete rahe us raazdaan ki baat par
Fajr ne aakar kaha na mai hai na maikhaana hai
waahhhhhh..... fantastic............. superbb....... mindblowing...

i am speechless bro.... u made my day.... lovely words penned down by you..... hats off to you bro once again a very lovely poem......

my best wishes.....................

Shaad......


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wahhhh mere Laal....kya khoob likha hai.

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai



yeh sher to dil loot le gya

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai..


Dear Anu....behadddddd khoobsurat ehsaas....sabhi sher dil ke khaas kareeb rhe...ya yu kahun ki dil meiN tees paida kar gye sabhi sher.
dil ki baate kehne ke liye shayri se badi cheej koi hai hi nahi....


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Lijiye ek nayi nazm mehfil ke naam.....



zindagi ko is tarah nazdeekiyon se jaana hai
ik taraf meri khatayein ik taraf zamaana hai

khaamoshiyon se behne do haal-e-dil ruksaar se
na use khabr ki dil jalaa na mujhe bataana hai

bewafaa hum ho gaye yun anjuman mein aapke
doston se bhi humein ab faaslaa nibhaana hai

mujhse kuch kehtaa nahi yeh aaina bhi saaf saaf
shayad ise bhi ilm hai jhoota har fasaana hai

raat bhar peete rahe us raazdaan ki baat par
Fajr ne aakar kaha na mai hai na maikhaana hai

Bohat khoob Mast Bahi

Bohat achca likha hai aapne. Matla to bohat ho khoob kaha hai aapne.
Chand taassurat hain jo aapse baad meiN share karuuN ga. Filhaal ek badhiya kalaam par daad qubuul farmaayeN.

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Likhte rahiye.....
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i am speechless bro.... u made my day.... lovely words penned down by you..... hats off to you bro once again a very lovely poem......

my best wishes.....................

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Anu bhai

Namaste

dilkash Ghazal par mere dil se mubaaraqbaad aapko...andaaz pasand aayaa ..

Bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye

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12th September 2015, 10:49 AM

Bohat hi khoob.. baqamaal likha hai.. aur 50 pratishat se jyada Behr main hai.. bohat maza aaya padh ke bhaisaahab .. likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye


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Bohat hi khoob.. baqamaal likha hai.. aur 50 pratishat se jyada Behr main hai.. bohat maza aaya padh ke bhaisaahab .. likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye
yeh to meri khushnaseebi hai kunaal nahi to aapki jaanib se daad haasil karna koi aasaan baat nahi hai.....aage bhi aapke saath aur sujhaavon ka intezaar rahegaaa



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