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Dar-e-Dil apna kabhi hamine bhi sunaao - 8th March 2009, 01:57 PM

Pyaare DostoN

AAj pahli baar aap ke samne ek "gair-muraddaf" Ghazal pesh kar rahi hoon..
Sabhi Dosto.N se meri yehi Iltijaa hai ke apni raa'ye zarur de.


Dard-e-Dil apna kabhi hame.N bhi sunaao
Zakhm diye kaise ulfat ne hamei.N bhi dikhaao


Koi gunaah nahi hai pyaar jo tum ne kiya kabhi
Deta ho dard gar yeh ehsaas, use dil se mitaao


Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao


Gham mein khud ko mitanese kuch hota nahi haa.sil
Mile jo pal- do-pal pyaar ke, use Pyaar se bitaao


Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera
Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao


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Heloo Purvi Di ,

kaise ho aap ??? Bhaut Khoob likha hai aapne yuhi likhte raho aap .

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Heloo Purvi Di ,

kaise ho aap ??? Bhaut Khoob likha hai aapne yuhi likhte raho aap .

Thanks 4 sharing ...........................



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Hi Purvi................kya baat hai yaar i love the way u potray ur ghazals isliye to aap meri inspiration ho..................keep it up dear
   
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Hi Purvi................kya baat hai yaar i love the way u potray ur ghazals isliye to aap meri inspiration ho..................keep it up dear


Thanks sweety.....

thanks a lot for appriciation......

Naaz abhi muj mein woh baat nahi ke mein kisi ki inspiration ban saku.... yeh tumhari hus.N nazar hai... jo meri har ghazal pasand karti ho tum

shukriya dost.......

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Wah Bahot badiya ! Umid karta hun aage bhi padne milengi, I love those lines...

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Dard-e-Dil apna kabhi hame.N bhi sunaao
Zakhm diye kaise ulfat ne hamei.N bhi dikhaao

Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao

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aapke ehsaas bahaut pasand aaye......yunhi likhtey rahiyega

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Pyaare DostoN

AAj pahli baar aap ke samne ek "gair-muraddaf" Ghazal pesh kar rahi hoon..
Sabhi Dosto.N se meri yehi Iltijaa hai ke apni raa'ye zarur de.


Dard-e-Dil apna kabhi hame.N bhi sunaao
Zakhm diye kaise ulfat ne hamei.N bhi dikhaao


Koi gunaah nahi hai pyaar jo tum ne kiya kabhi
Deta ho dard gar yeh ehsaas, use dil se mitaao


Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao


Gham mein khud ko mitanese kuch hota nahi haa.sil
Mile jo pal- do-pal pyaar ke, use Pyaar se bitaao


Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera
Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao

Aadaab muhtarma,

Lo hum bhi chale aaye mehfil me, yakeen maniye aaj khud ko dili khushi mil rahi hai aapko har ghazal ke baat aur behtar likhta hua dekh kar. Gair muradiff ghazal humesha se mujhe bahut pasand rahi haiN aur bahut kam log ise likhne ki kosish bhi karte haiN, ahche aashaar the. ye sher haasil-e-ghazal laga...

Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao


ek do cheezeN kehna chaahuNga, doosra sher kamjor sa laga mujhe. Bahut ulajh sa gaya hai khayal, aur maqta se pehle vaale sher me dono jagah pyar lafz ka istemaal ghazal ko thoda bachkana sa baa raha hai, agar pehli jagah aap mohabbat ya ulfat kar deN to aur behtar lagega. Bas jyada kuch nahiN kahuNga par haaN yakeenan har baar aapko padhta huN to pichli baar se behtar paata huN...!! Bas aage v yuNhi likhti raheN.

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Wah Bahot badiya ! Umid karta hun aage bhi padne milengi, I love those lines...



ek nazar ki is mohobbat ne yeh kya kar diya kwahish
mohobbat ka agar saya bhi dikh jaye to sukun palun

Aadab janab,

Meri ghazal padhkar apni raa'ye dene ke liye aap ka shukriya.

Ummid hai aage bhi aap ka sath milta rahega

Khush rahiye

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Ghazal jee,
Hume bhi bahot pasand aayi aapki yeh ghazal

thori der kar di reply karne mein ..Muaaf kijiyega jee

aapki Diya



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Lo hum bhi chale aaye mehfil me, yakeen maniye aaj khud ko dili khushi mil rahi hai aapko har ghazal ke baat aur behtar likhta hua dekh kar. Gair muradiff ghazal humesha se mujhe bahut pasand rahi haiN aur bahut kam log ise likhne ki kosish bhi karte haiN, ahche aashaar the. ye sher haasil-e-ghazal laga..

Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
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agali baar har cheez ko dhyan mein rakh kar aur bahetar likhne ki koshish karungi...

Housla afzayee ke liye shukriya

yunhi mahefil mein aate rahiyega

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Purvi Ji,

Bahut achchha likhaa hai aapne, aapke ahsaas pasan aayeiN, Khush rahiye, aise hi likhti rahiye. Ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aayaa

Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera
Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao


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Pyaare DostoN

AAj pahli baar aap ke samne ek "gair-muraddaf" Ghazal pesh kar rahi hoon..
Sabhi Dosto.N se meri yehi Iltijaa hai ke apni raa'ye zarur de.


Dard-e-Dil apna kabhi hame.N bhi sunaao
Zakhm diye kaise ulfat ne hamei.N bhi dikhaao


Koi gunaah nahi hai pyaar jo tum ne kiya kabhi
Deta ho dard gar yeh ehsaas, use dil se mitaao


Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo
Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao


Gham mein khud ko mitanese kuch hota nahi haa.sil
Mile jo pal- do-pal pyaar ke, use Pyaar se bitaao


Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera
Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao



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Purvi Ji,

Bahut achchha likhaa hai aapne, aapke ahsaas pasan aayeiN, Khush rahiye, aise hi likhti rahiye. Ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aayaa

Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera
Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao


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Aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega

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very nice keep it up hope you will post like this more shayri....
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