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Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN ( Tanha aasar) - 14th January 2009, 04:54 PM
kuch tanha se aasar jinper maine gazal likhne ki koshish bhii ki....
lekin nahi likh paya..... wo sher yahin ese hi pesh kar raha hoon

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

Dhadknon main unki apana pata doondte rahe
unkhi wafa ki baton me hum wafa doonte rahe

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya.


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14th January 2009, 05:00 PM
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Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
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Ye sher padhkar kuch ajeeb sa khayal aaya.... Achha likha hai yaar. Kaafi achha.... BAhut hi gehri peshkash hai.

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14th January 2009, 08:42 PM
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kuch tanha se aasar jinper maine gazal likhne ki koshish bhii ki....
lekin nahi likh paya..... wo sher yahin ese hi pesh kar raha hoon

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

Dhadknon main unki apana pata doondte rahe
unkhi wafa ki baton me hum wafa doonte rahe

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya.


aapka dilip




Dillip ji,
bahot hi achha sher likha hai aapne ...har sher dard ko bayaan kar rahe haiN....

bas dua ehi hai ki god aapko har dard se dur rakhe..

Diya


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16th January 2009, 01:57 PM
dilip ji namaskar..kaise ai aap..bade dino baad apse baat ho rahi hai..yaha apki gazal parhi..accha hai..khaskar ...

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

bas ummed hai ki yuhi hi likhte rahiye..
take care bye..





..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi..
Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
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Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to..
Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi..
Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
Main janti hun..Magar..
Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥..
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Hello Bhai.

Ye sher padhkar kuch ajeeb sa khayal aaya.... Achha likha hai yaar. Kaafi achha.... BAhut hi gehri peshkash hai.

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aapne mere jajbaaton ko samjha... banki to ye dil ke khyal the to sher ki shakl iktiyaar kar li
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ese hi sath dete rahiyega

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29th January 2009, 04:37 PM
dilip bhaa'ii:

namaste!!

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Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN


arre bhaa'ii aisii KhaahiSh kyuuN ??

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Dhadknon main unki apana pata doondte rahe
unkhi wafa ki baton me hum wafa doonte rahe


Hmm Khayaal achchhaa haii !!

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Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya.

waah!! bahot Khuub!! yeh Sher sab se zeyaadaah pasaNd aayaa..!!

dilip bhaaii aapke yeh aSh'aar dil ko chhu gaye... YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee... daad!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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3rd February 2009, 10:33 AM
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Dillip ji,
bahot hi achha sher likha hai aapne ...har sher dard ko bayaan kar rahe haiN....

bas dua ehi hai ki god aapko har dard se dur rakhe..

Diya
shukriyaa diya

ye doston ki duaaon ka hhi asar hai ki ab tak hum zinda hain......
aap hamesha hi sath dete rahiyega

shukriyaa


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3rd February 2009, 10:34 AM
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dilip ji namaskar..kaise ai aap..bade dino baad apse baat ho rahi hai..yaha apki gazal parhi..accha hai..khaskar ...

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

bas ummed hai ki yuhi hi likhte rahiye..
take care bye..
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Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
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Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN
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bhaoot gehra hai...... dard ser ka ya shayar kaa
tumhare liye....

kabhi na nibhaya unhone sath mera
kam se kam ab vo itni to vafa kare..........
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5th February 2009, 10:42 AM
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Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
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bahut khoob ...... janaab
shukriya manu ji
ese hi sath dete rahiyega

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hiiii... - 12th February 2009, 06:37 PM
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kahan ho itne dino se

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rahi baat sath ki to always..

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..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi..
Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
Shayad Nahi..
Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to..
Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi..
Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
Main janti hun..Magar..
Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥..
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Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN
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bhaoot gehra hai...... dard ser ka ya shayar kaa
tumhare liye....

kabhi na nibhaya unhone sath mera
kam se kam ab vo itni to vafa kare..........
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shukriyaa dost
sath dene ke liye
ese hi sath dete rahana..

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kuch tanha se aasar jinper maine gazal likhne ki koshish bhii ki....
lekin nahi likh paya..... wo sher yahin ese hi pesh kar raha hoon

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

Dhadknon main unki apana pata doondte rahe
unkhi wafa ki baton me hum wafa doonte rahe

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya.


aapka dilip
Dilip bhai ................hume aapke yeh tanha ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye.....last wala sher to masha-allah, dil ko chu gaya......ahsaas sach mein bahut acche haiN.....keep it up!
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Dilip bhai ................hume aapke yeh tanha ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye.....last wala sher to masha-allah, dil ko chu gaya......ahsaas sach mein bahut acche haiN.....keep it up!
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Dilip Ji......Aadaab ! Bahut khoob lage aapke sabhi ashaar......dil se nikle hai......isliye padhte hue dil ki gehraai tak toh jaana hi tha.....bahut achha laga padhkar........yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

Yeh sheyr toh waakai kamaal ka raha.....Dilip Ji

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....

khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....



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Dilip Ji......Aadaab ! Bahut khoob lage aapke sabhi ashaar......dil se nikle hai......isliye padhte hue dil ki gehraai tak toh jaana hi tha.....bahut achha laga padhkar........yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

Yeh sheyr toh waakai kamaal ka raha.....Dilip Ji

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....

khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
mehra ji namaskar
kaise hain aap


aapko mera likha huaa sher pasand aaya main aapka shukrguzar hoon
aage bhii sath dete rahenge is baat ka yakeen hai

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Sabhi sher khoobsurat hai Dilip jee............aur yeh na kahe ghazal nahi likh paya, bas kisi ek sher ko zehan me bhitha le aur intezaar kare khud ba khud aapko misre milte jayege ab woh 2 din me ho ya 20 din me........sabr kare.

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kuch tanha se aasar jinper maine gazal likhne ki koshish bhii ki....
lekin nahi likh paya..... wo sher yahin ese hi pesh kar raha hoon

Suna hai unkii duaaon main badi taqat hai
Kash Wo hi mere marne ki duaa mang leN

Dhadknon main unki apana pata doondte rahe
unkhi wafa ki baton me hum wafa doonte rahe

Lo Fir mere marne ki khabar Uda di Doston ne
shayad Fir se meri salamati ka khyaal aa gaya.


aapka dilip
dilip jii..saare sheyr hi qabil-e-sataaish haiN.....daad qubuul kijiyega....
aur maiN ghayal saheb ki baat se puri tarha sehmat hooN....yeh sab sheyr hi umda haiN..kisi ko bhi zehan meiN rakh ghazal likh dijiye, shayad waqt lagega...lekin ghazal badhiya banegi....

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Sabhi sher khoobsurat hai Dilip jee............aur yeh na kahe ghazal nahi likh paya, bas kisi ek sher ko zehan me bhitha le aur intezaar kare khud ba khud aapko misre milte jayege ab woh 2 din me ho ya 20 din me........sabr kare.

Ghazal woh nahi hoti ke likhne bhaithi aur likh di...........kaiee shayro ne to 10 saal laga diye hai sirf ek Ghazal ko likhne me.
pasand karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shuriya dost
aur der se aane ke liye aapse maafi ka talabgar bhi hoon.
shukriya.

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