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Haath phailaaye Sar-e-rah guzar jaane do, - 9th February 2005, 03:25 AM

JANE KYUN BAHUT MUSHKIL HOTA HEI AKSAR

Haath phailaaye Sar-e-rah guzar jaane do,
Jeene walon ki ab laash ko mar jaane do.

Qaid-e-zindaaN se to behtar hai rihaayee mairi,
Zindah rahne nahiN daite ho to marjaane do.

Cheen lo mujh se rawaadaariy-e-ihsaas-e-wafa,
dar-e-maut pe ab deeda-e-tar jaane do.

Jabr-e-heraast* ko touke, hai ye kis meiN jur’at,
Jou bhi ilzaam hai sab “dard” ke sar jaane do.
*akelapan, (lonliness)

Tod do silsilae sab vahm-o-gumaaN ke ab to
Toot jane do bharam, rooh ko ghar jaane do.

Kis ko hai hasrat-e-aasaayish-e-jaaN dunyaa meiN,
Zaalim-o-kaafiron ki basti hei guzar jaane do

Apne qaaboo meiN nahiN dil ka safeenah ae “sush”.
Jis Taraf rukh hai intehaao’N ka udhar jaane do.

Haath phailaaye Sar-e-rah guzar jaane do,
Jeene walon ki ab laash ko mar jaane do.


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लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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9th February 2005, 09:58 AM

sushil,

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khush raho.

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9th February 2005, 11:02 AM

bhai dard - sush

bohat din ke baad aap is forum mein aaye ho, mager bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal ke saath.
vohi dard ki tashnigi, vohi alfaaz ki rawaani jo ek sachchay aur achchay insaan ki pehchaan hai.
bohat khoob mere bhai.
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9th February 2005, 11:14 AM

Shushil bhai...

Tod do silsilae sab vahm-o-gumaaN ke ab to
Toot jane do bharam, rooh ko ghar jaane do.


Bohot hi saccha sher kaha hai aapne... bilkool ek veham ke aalam mein jee rahe hain hum log, kaun jane kab yeh saansoN ke aawan jaawan ka silsilaa rukk jaaye aur sab kuch dharaa ka dharaa reh jaayega...ummeed hai aap aate raheinge...Apna khayaal rakhiyega... Dua Go.


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9th February 2005, 12:09 PM

Hi Sushil Ji,

Shayad ek topic jis se ziyadatar log ghabraate hai. Maut!!! Bohot pasand aaya aap ka likha. Humari daad qabool kare aur uhi likhte rahe.


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9th February 2005, 12:53 PM

Qaid-e-zindaaN se to behtar hai rihaayee mairi,
Zindah rahne nahiN daite ho to marjaane do.


aur

Tod do silsilae sab vahm-o-gumaaN ke ab to
Toot jane do bharam, rooh ko ghar jaane do.



Sushil bhai......


kitna sach kaha hai aapne......kutch to dard ne maara hai aur kutch ye duniya..... jo maut bhi nahi deti aur jeene bhi.....

sach mein ye brahm hi to hai......aur ruh ko apne ghar jana hi hai is safar ko poora kar.....

yunhi likhte rahiyega......



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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

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9th February 2005, 01:16 PM

Tod do silsilae sab vahm-o-gumaaN ke ab to
Toot jane do bharam, rooh ko ghar jaane do.

Kis ko hai hasrat-e-aasaayish-e-jaaN dunyaa meiN,
Zaalim-o-kaafiron ki basti hei guzar jaane do


Sushil Bhai!

Bahutbhi behtreen kalaam.. Daad kubool kijiyega... Aapke shabd aur soch bahut pasand aayi.. Mehfil sajaate rahiyega... Apna khayal rakhiyega


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9th February 2005, 08:14 PM

Dard-e-sush saahab....bahut hi behtreen likha hai aapne..bahut pasand aaya...or aapki waapsi ki khushi bhi.

YooNhi mehfil ki raunak barhate rahiyega.

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9th February 2005, 08:15 PM

Haath phailaaye Sar-e-rah guzar jaane do,
Jeene walon ki ab laash ko mar jaane do.

Qaid-e-zindaaN se to behtar hai rihaayee mairi,
Zindah rahne nahiN daite ho to marjaane do.

Bahut gehra...dil ko chot dete huye...khuub likhte ho tum Sush...lekin meri tamanna yahi rahegi ki tum kuch hansi khushi, ka paigaam lekar bhi mehfil sajaao...

khush raho, jahan raho....

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10th February 2005, 12:24 PM

Sushil ji,
The writing is amazing, feel like talking to oneself at times. A strange feeling experienced so often but intesities vary from time to time. Feel the writing close to my thoughts loved reading it....
Take care


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13th February 2005, 05:35 PM

Aadab mere azeez-o-hamdardo.

I normally dont reply on my posts. It unnecessary puts them on top every time i reply, snatching chances from other friends posting new threads on front page.

Some of my friends however have complaind of my ignoring them by not replying their replies.... I m so greatful for all ur love..... I promis i will ensure i dont miss any of ur comments...

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लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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