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kabhii Khaamosh baiThogii kabhii kuchh gun_gunaaogii mai.n utanaa yaad aa_uu.Ngaa mujhe jitanaa bhulaaogii -----[Unknown] regards manu |
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Woh janey kyu janey tamana sa lagey hai, Appna nahi hai par appna sa lagey hai….. Woh qatal bhi karey to qatil na lagey hai, Woh jahar bhi de to dawa sa lagey hai…… Janey kaya hai uski udhas aankho.n mein ‘Sunita’ muh chuppa ke bhi jaye to be-waffa na lagey hai.. Karnail paa ji aapke sher ke jawaab meiN apni hi likhi hue ek gazal ke chand sher likh rahi hoon.......  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th December 2007, 12:19 AM
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wah didi aapne to khush kar diya bahut hi achha likha hai aapne ab ye aapke liye tu hamari yaad hamara ahesas hai aasman ko chhuta hua dharti ka sitara hai tum sada raho hamare paas bas yahi hamara armaan hai |
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19th December 2007, 12:34 AM
dil ki mehfil me wo mukaam hai tumhara,
ki khuda ke baad lub par naam hai tumhara..........  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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wah lamha bahut hi achha hai ek din khuda ne mujhe kaha ki bande pyaar mat kar deewana ho jayega maine kaha khuda tu mere pyaar se to mil tujhe bhi ishq ho jayega |
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mehfiil -
19th December 2007, 10:04 AM
hu_ii ham se Khataa terii mahafil me.n aa baiThe
zamii.n kii Khaak ban aasmaa.N se dil lagaa baiThe [Unknown] regards manu |
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wah dost bahut khub likha hai ab ye suno socha tha na honge zindagi me kabhi ruswa magar pyaar ki ruswai tanha kar gai gaye the unki mahefil me gam bhulane lekin waha bhi tanhai apna farz ada kar gai |
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MANU & KRENIL..........bahut khub............. rone se gham-e-dil ka guzara nahi hota, har shaksh dil ka sahara nahi hota, us roz lagta hai bekaar jiye hum, jis roz zikra tumhara nahi hota.................. "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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19th December 2007, 11:48 PM
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Laakhon mein intekhaab ke qaabil bana diya Jis dil ko tumne dekh liya dil bana diya - 'Jigar' regards manu |
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20th December 2007, 12:44 AM
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wah dost bahut hi khub likh rahe ho dil se dil ko milaya aapne door hote hue bhi deewana banaya aapne kaise bhula du aapko ek pal me jab pyaar karna shikhaya aapne |
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20th December 2007, 01:05 AM
Koi umeed bar nahin aati
Koi soorat nazar nahin aati - 'Ghalib' regards manu |
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dost achha hai ye tumhara jawab dil ki hasrat juban par aane lagi tumhe dekha aur zindagi muskurane lagi ye ishq ki imtihaan thi ya meri deewangi har surat me teri surat nazar aane lagi |
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ummid -
20th December 2007, 01:39 AM
Kehte hain ummeed pe jeeta hai zamaana
Woh kya kare jis ko koi ummeed nahin hai - 'Aasi Uladni' manu |
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20th December 2007, 01:55 AM
hame laga ki sirf hum hi aapko chahte hai
par aapko chahne walo ka khalifa nikla dil ne kaha shikayat kar khuda se par khuda khud aapko chahne wala nikla i love my eyes when you look in to them i love my name when you say it i love my heart when you it i love my life when you are in it |
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Har Dil Mein Dard Chuppa Hota Hai
Bayaan Karney Ka Andaaz Juda Hota Hai Kuch Loog Aankhoun Se Dard Baha Detay Hein Aur Kisi Ki Hansi Mein Dard Chuppa Hota Hai -----Unknown regards manu |
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20th December 2007, 05:07 PM
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uuhn dard ko na dekho dard se dard ko bhi dard hoga yaaro kabhi dard ko mehsoos karo fursad se dard bhi meetha hoga yaaro Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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20th December 2007, 10:20 PM
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bahut hi achha hai dost kagaj pe humne zindagi likh di asko se sinchkar har khushi likh di dard ko jab humne ubhara labzo me to logo ne kaha wah kya gazal likh di |
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20th December 2007, 11:06 PM
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wahhhh wahhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh NIHAR,MANU & KRENIL ...........bahut hi khub likha hai aap sab ne.......... wo mile hum se kahani bankar, dil me rahe pyaar ki nishani bankar, hum jinhe jagah dete hai aankhon ke andar, wo aksar nikal jate hai paani bankar........................ "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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20th December 2007, 11:32 PM
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bahut hi achha lamha ye raha aapka jawab agar hum ek aansu hote to aapki aankho se hokar aapke hoton pe marna pasand karte agar aap meri aankho ke aansu hote to vaada hai hum zindagi bhar na rote |
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20th December 2007, 11:46 PM
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oye hoye....mai mar java.....kya gal hai.............. kal meri aankh se ek aansoo nikal aaya, maine pucha, to muskurakar usne bataya, ki koi teri aankhon me hai itna samaya, ki chah kar bhi mai apni jagah na bana paya........ "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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20th December 2007, 11:53 PM
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wah lamha bahut khub ek raat khuda ne puchha tu dosti me itna kyu khoya hai tab dil se aawaj aai dosto ne hi di hai khushiya sari varna pyaar karke to hamesha ye dil roya hai |
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tasweer -
21st December 2007, 01:23 AM
terii tasviir se karataa thaa baate.n
mere ghar me.n aa_iinaa nahii.n thaa [Majaz] regards manu |
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21st December 2007, 02:16 AM
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wah manu bahut hi achha likha hai kaha the hum hosh me ke khud ko sahara dete yahi bahut tha ki har gam pe muskura dete agar tumhare chahere pe hoti dard ki zalak to hum aaino ko bhi rula dete |
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Chehre pe ashkon ki lakeer si ban gayi , jo na chaha tha wo takdeer si ban gayi, humne to uhi feri thi ret par ungliya, gaur se dekha to unki tasveer si ban gayi. "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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21st December 2007, 11:00 PM
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very good lamha ab ye suno rishto ki dor kamzor nahi hoti hai aankho ki baate dil ki aur hoti hai khuda ne jab bhi puchha dosti ka matlab hamari ungali aapki aur hoti hai |
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"dost hi dost ka saath diya karte haiN, dost hi dost ka dukh door kiya karte haiN, kabhi kabhi zindgi ke safar mein, dosto ! dost hi sre-aam aapko badnaam kiya karte haiN" "NOT MINE" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd December 2007, 04:10 PM
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dushmano.n kaa bhii dil hilaa degaa -------------[Sudarshan Faakir] regards manu |
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22nd December 2007, 07:30 PM
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bahot khoob manu dost ne ki dosti , dosti nibhane ke liye hum ne bhi ki dosti dost pane ke liye farq sirf itna tha dosto ki unho ne ki dosti gum bhoolane ke liye aur humne ki dosti unko pane ke liye Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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22nd December 2007, 07:46 PM
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bahut hi achha likha hai dost vishwas ki ek dor hai dosti betab dil ki majburi hai dosti na mano to kuch nahi aur mano to khuda ki bhi kamzori hai dosti |
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bahut khub.............. chand adhura hai sitaro ke bina, gulshan adhura hai baharo ke bina, samundar adhura hai kinaro ke bina, jeena adhura hai aap jaise yaaro ke bina....... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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22nd December 2007, 08:24 PM
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wah wah wah kya baat hain lamha ji aap ka jawab hazeer hain chand ne di chandni suraj roshni deta raha humne ki aapse dosti aur sada aapko pyar deta raha Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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22nd December 2007, 08:43 PM
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bahut khub mere dost aapka jawab beshak kuch waqt ka intezaar mila humko par khuda se badhkar yaar mila humko nahi rahi tamanna kisi jannat ki teri dosti se wo pyaar mila humko |
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23rd December 2007, 12:22 AM
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tere baare me.n jab socha nahee tha, mai.n ta.Nha tha magar iTna nahee tha - 'unknown' regards manu |
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SOCHA JAB HUMNE AAP KI SOCH KO TO HUMSE AAPKI SOCH BHI NIRALI NIKLI GIRE JO HUM IS PYAR KI SOCH KI GEHRAI MAIN TO YEH GEHRAI TANHAI SE BHI GEHRI NIKLI Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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23rd December 2007, 01:42 PM
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kabhi ham un ko kabhii apane ghar ko dekhate hai.n.........unknown regards manu |
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WOH AAYE HUMARI KABRA PAR MUSKURA KAR CHALE GAYE MUSKURANA TO EK BAHANA THA YAARO HUMSE SHARMA KAR WOH CHALE GAYE Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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use jo tumse milne aana tha. sharmana bhi uska ek yaar ki tarah tha hum to so rahe the hume kya pata vo humara hi pyar tha. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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kya baat kahi hai dost ab ye suno roop ka nazara pyaar nahi hota mann chaha sapna sakar nahi hota har kisi pe na marr mitna ye dost har kisi ke dil me sachha pyaar nahi hota |
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25th December 2007, 01:23 AM
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waah waah kyaa baat kahee hai tumne..............  ham intazaar kare.nge teraa qayaamat tak Khudaa kare ki qayaamat ho aur tuu aaye [Sahir Ludhianvi] regards manu |
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wah manu kya baat hai aapka jawab patzad ke patte toot jayenge patzad ke baad panchhi ud jayenge jab ji chahe hame pukaar lena hum qayamat ke din bhi aa jayenge |
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