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ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin.. - 22nd June 2009, 11:20 PM

mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....

ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....

par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....


"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"



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Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...

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Nisha ji..........bohat khoob likha hai aapne........aur woh (mine).. (not mine) ...hahaha......too cute and sincere...........

aapki nazm ne to ghayal kar diya hai mujhe............bohat accha likhne lagi ho aap..............yuhi likhti rahiye................




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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....

ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....

par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....


"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"



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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]


ye sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...likhti rahiye...dil se daad


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"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"



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Hey Nisha,

Aaj bade time ke baar maine Iss shayri parivaar mein kuch padha aur uska reply kar raha hun..

Yakeenan aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut acchi lagi hai.

har sher ko jaise aapne jis baat se shuru kar ke jis baat pe khatam kiya hai zindagi ka hissa hi laga hai...

Bahut hi khoob lagi aapki yeh nazam...
Umeed hai ke aap aage bhi aise hi likhte rahe aur padhne ka mauka milta rahe...

Khush rahiye hamesha.



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Nisha ji..........bohat khoob likha hai aapne........aur woh (mine).. (not mine) ...hahaha......too cute and sincere...........

aapki nazm ne to ghayal kar diya hai mujhe............bohat accha likhne lagi ho aap..............yuhi likhti rahiye................

zainy jee..
tareef ke liye shukriya....
aapki dua aur saath sang rahe to yuhin likhti rahungi....

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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]


ye sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...likhti rahiye...dil se daad


tareef ke liye shukriya janab....
insha allah aage bhi aapko nirash nahin karungi....


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par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
   
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Hey Nisha,

Aaj bade time ke baar maine Iss shayri parivaar mein kuch padha aur uska reply kar raha hun..

Yakeenan aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut acchi lagi hai.

har sher ko jaise aapne jis baat se shuru kar ke jis baat pe khatam kiya hai zindagi ka hissa hi laga hai...

Bahut hi khoob lagi aapki yeh nazam...
Umeed hai ke aap aage bhi aise hi likhte rahe aur padhne ka mauka milta rahe...

Khush rahiye hamesha.


jasdeep jee...

aapne meri nazm ko apni rae layak samjha uska tahe dil se shukriya...

haan kuch zindagi k palon ko hi samet kar shabdon mein dhaalne ki koshish kee hai...
meri is koshish ko sarahne ke liye shukriya.....

insha allah aage bhi aapko niraash nahin karungi...

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AadaaB Nisha Jii......

Main aaj aapko pehli baar padha hun...... aur wakai aapke ahsaas behad tez
aur sachche lage....... Bahut achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne........

Sabhi sher achche lage......... aur aapne bakhoobi sahi farmaya hai....

Likhati rahiye.......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath daad kabool kijiye...


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Dear Nisha.....muje teri yeh poetry aur imaandaar (mine & not mine) bahut acchi lagi, ahsaas behad umda lage, aur last wala sher dil ke kareeb raha.


palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...


khoobsurat ahsaao.n par dil se daad.

pyar ke saath
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AadaaB Nisha Jii......

Main aaj aapko pehli baar padha hun...... aur wakai aapke ahsaas behad tez
aur sachche lage....... Bahut achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne........

Sabhi sher achche lage......... aur aapne bakhoobi sahi farmaya hai....

Likhati rahiye.......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath daad kabool kijiye...

salaam sameer ji..
duaon aur daad ke liye tahe dil se shukriya....
aur ehsaaso.n ko samajhne ke liye bhi....

umeed karti hun ab aap mujhe padte rahieyega...
bahut saari khushiyon ki duaon ke saath..
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Dear Nisha.....muje teri yeh poetry aur imaandaar (mine & not mine) bahut acchi lagi, ahsaas behad umda lage, aur last wala sher dil ke kareeb raha.


palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...


khoobsurat ahsaao.n par dil se daad.

pyar ke saath
teri diii


meriii pyaaaaariiii di....

daad ke liye aur sujhav ke liye bahut bahut bahut thanks....
waise to thanx kehna nahin chahiye, par aap to jaante ho na ki main kitna soch rahi thi post karne se pehle??? aapne jaadu ki chadi ghumai aur mera darr??? furrrrrr...... isiliye thanks.....

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"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"

Nisha ji......aapki nazm padhkar bahut acha laga...iske sabhi sher zindgi ke bahut kareeb lagte hai.....ehsaas bahut gehre hai....aapne jo likha hai....sachmuch kabile taarif hai.....aap ki iss bazm ko bahut zarurat hai....aate rahiyega.....aur daad kabul farmaye.....




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Nisha ji......aapki nazm padhkar bahut acha laga...iske sabhi sher zindgi ke bahut kareeb lagte hai.....ehsaas bahut gehre hai....aapne jo likha hai....sachmuch kabile taarif hai.....aap ki iss bazm ko bahut zarurat hai....aate rahiyega.....aur daad kabul farmaye.....

naresh jee...
salaam...

aapne mujhe aur meri nazm ko tareef ke kaabil samjha uske liye shukriya...
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....

ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....

par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....


"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"



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ek lambe antral ke baad aapko padne ka mauka mila hai. aur yakeen maniye aaj mujhe isme wahi paina pan nazar aaya jiske deewane hum huaa karte the....

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ek lambe antral ke baad aapko padne ka mauka mila hai. aur yakeen maniye aaj mujhe isme wahi paina pan nazar aaya jiske deewane hum huaa karte the....

ek shandar kalam per meri dil se nikali huii daad kabool farmaiyega

shukriya


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dilip jee........
tareef ke liye tahe dil se shukriya....

khush rahiye...
duaon k saath
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....

ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....

par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....


"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...
[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"



nisha

bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
Love n Regards
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Hi nisha, i hv read u first time, this is awesome... Very beautiful n close to heart.,
i like it very much.
Keep writing, GOD bless u.



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bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
Love n Regards
Praneeta

hi diii.....
i m sooo happy aapko achcha laga....

keep smiling....
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bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
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Praneeta

hi diii....
thanx for appreciating....
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Hi nisha, i hv read u first time, this is awesome... Very beautiful n close to heart.,
i like it very much.
Keep writing, GOD bless u.


hi arvind...
thanx a lot for appreciating....

take care and keep smiling...
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Nisha jii

kaise hai aap?

aapki ki ghazal behat pasand aayii.. kuch alag padhne ko mila .... bahut aacha laga

aur aapka andaz bhi pasand aaya ... nm n m thats really sweet ....shayd mujhe bhi kucj sekhne ko milega ..

yu hi likhte rahye

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Nisha jii

kaise hai aap?

aapki ki ghazal behat pasand aayii.. kuch alag padhne ko mila .... bahut aacha laga

aur aapka andaz bhi pasand aaya ... nm n m thats really sweet ....shayd mujhe bhi kucj sekhne ko milega ..

yu hi likhte rahye

aapna khayal rakhiyege

aapki dost

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mandeep jee...
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meri khushkismati ki aapko ye nazm pasand aai...
bas ek choti si koshish thi... jise aap sab ne kubool kar ke uski keemat bada di....

khush rahiyega...
bahut saari duaon k saath..
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Hi Nisha,

Very nice effort, keep it up... and thaks for letting us know which shers were not yours... Keep coming.. keep writing...


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Hi Nisha,

Very nice effort, keep it up... and thaks for letting us know which shers were not yours... Keep coming.. keep writing...

hi pulkit..

thanks for appreciating....
i'm glad u liked it...

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wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...


bilkul sahi kaha hai Nisha dear
dil se daad

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nisha ji bahut khub likha hai apne aaj pehli baar apko padha hai bahut acha laga

khush rahiye hamesha.
jese ki diya ne kaha bilkul sahi kaha

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
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bilkul sahi kaha hai Nisha dear
dil se daad

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hi diya....
dil se di gai tareef ke liye dil se shukriya....

hamesha khush rahiye...
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khush rahiye hamesha.
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wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
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salaam...

padne ke liye, pasand karne ke liye aur duaon ke liye shukriya....
ye sher sach to hai... par na jaane kyun, dil laakh chah kar bhi is sach ko apna nahin paata....
wo kehte hain na????
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

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Jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...

Ab aur kya kahu..??? Iske aage Ehsaas hi nahin.... Awesome....

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duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]

saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]

phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]

wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]

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Nisha ji,

aap ke jazbaato.n ki mai.n bohat kadar karta huu.n.. jo mehsuus kiya hai, filhaal koii lafz nahii.n sujh raha hai jin se unhe lafz duu.n..

Chaliye, jo bhi mehsoos huaa, gehraiii me.n mehsoos huaa

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Nisha ji,

aap ke jazbaato.n ki mai.n bohat kadar karta huu.n.. jo mehsuus kiya hai, filhaal koii lafz nahii.n sujh raha hai jin se unhe lafz duu.n..

Chaliye, jo bhi mehsoos huaa, gehraiii me.n mehsoos huaa

aap ka likha huaa pasand aaya

likhte rahiye

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mayank ji...
salaam!!

mayank ji, ehsaas lafzon ke mohtaj nahin hote...
aapko ye nazm pasand aai, meri khushkismati...
apne jazbaaton ko aap tak pahuncha saki yahi mere liye bahut hai....

apna khyal rakhiyega...
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phir se....aapka shukrguzar hu...ki aapne apne alfazo se hume rubaru karvaya...

dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi sher....

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phir se....aapka shukrguzar hu...ki aapne apne alfazo se hume rubaru karvaya...

dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi sher....

dil se daad kabool kare

khoob likhye

amit jii...
salaam...

aapne meri nazm ko tareef ke kaabil samjha uske liye shukriya...
ummed karti hun aap yuhin mujhe sarahte rahenge....

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