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22nd June 2009, 11:20 PM
mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....
ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....
par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 10:34 AM
Nisha ji..........bohat khoob likha hai aapne........aur woh (mine).. (not mine) ...hahaha......too cute and sincere...........
aapki nazm ne to ghayal kar diya hai mujhe............bohat accha likhne lagi ho aap..............yuhi likhti rahiye................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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23rd June 2009, 11:00 AM
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Originally Posted by NISHA_VIRGO16
mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....
ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....
par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
nisha
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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
ye sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...likhti rahiye...dil se daad
Thanks & Regards
Aapka
Tanha _dil
Duniya mein dard-e-dil ki dawa hoti to pee gaye hote
Zindagi itni aasaan hoti .....to jee gaye hote.
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23rd June 2009, 11:45 AM
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Originally Posted by NISHA_VIRGO16
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
nisha
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Hey Nisha,
Aaj bade time ke baar maine Iss shayri parivaar mein kuch padha aur uska reply kar raha hun..
Yakeenan aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut acchi lagi hai.
har sher ko jaise aapne jis baat se shuru kar ke jis baat pe khatam kiya hai zindagi ka hissa hi laga hai...
Bahut hi khoob lagi aapki yeh nazam...
Umeed hai ke aap aage bhi aise hi likhte rahe aur padhne ka mauka milta rahe...
Khush rahiye hamesha.
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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23rd June 2009, 12:29 PM
zainy jee..
tareef ke liye shukriya....
aapki dua aur saath sang rahe to yuhin likhti rahungi....
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 12:31 PM
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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
ye sher sabse jyaada pasand aaya...likhti rahiye...dil se daad
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tareef ke liye shukriya janab....
insha allah aage bhi aapko nirash nahin karungi....
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 12:37 PM
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Hey Nisha,
Aaj bade time ke baar maine Iss shayri parivaar mein kuch padha aur uska reply kar raha hun..
Yakeenan aapki yeh koshish mujhe bahut acchi lagi hai.
har sher ko jaise aapne jis baat se shuru kar ke jis baat pe khatam kiya hai zindagi ka hissa hi laga hai...
Bahut hi khoob lagi aapki yeh nazam...
Umeed hai ke aap aage bhi aise hi likhte rahe aur padhne ka mauka milta rahe...
Khush rahiye hamesha.
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jasdeep jee...
aapne meri nazm ko apni rae layak samjha uska tahe dil se shukriya...
haan kuch zindagi k palon ko hi samet kar shabdon mein dhaalne ki koshish kee hai...
meri is koshish ko sarahne ke liye shukriya.....
insha allah aage bhi aapko niraash nahin karungi...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 02:14 PM
AadaaB Nisha Jii......
Main aaj aapko pehli baar padha hun...... aur wakai aapke ahsaas behad tez
aur sachche lage....... Bahut achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne........
Sabhi sher achche lage......... aur aapne bakhoobi sahi farmaya hai....
Likhati rahiye.......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath daad kabool kijiye...
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23rd June 2009, 02:34 PM
Dear Nisha.....muje teri yeh poetry aur imaandaar (mine & not mine) bahut acchi lagi, ahsaas behad umda lage, aur last wala sher dil ke kareeb raha.
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...
khoobsurat ahsaao.n par dil se daad.
pyar ke saath
teri diii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd June 2009, 02:37 PM
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AadaaB Nisha Jii......
Main aaj aapko pehli baar padha hun...... aur wakai aapke ahsaas behad tez
aur sachche lage....... Bahut achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne........
Sabhi sher achche lage......... aur aapne bakhoobi sahi farmaya hai....
Likhati rahiye.......
Khush rahiye duaoN ke saath daad kabool kijiye...
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salaam sameer ji..
duaon aur daad ke liye tahe dil se shukriya....
aur ehsaaso.n ko samajhne ke liye bhi....
umeed karti hun ab aap mujhe padte rahieyega...
bahut saari khushiyon ki duaon ke saath..
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 02:41 PM
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Dear Nisha.....muje teri yeh poetry aur imaandaar (mine & not mine) bahut acchi lagi, ahsaas behad umda lage, aur last wala sher dil ke kareeb raha.
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...
khoobsurat ahsaao.n par dil se daad.
pyar ke saath
teri diii
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meriii pyaaaaariiii di....
daad ke liye aur sujhav ke liye bahut bahut bahut thanks....
waise to thanx kehna nahin chahiye, par aap to jaante ho na ki main kitna soch rahi thi post karne se pehle??? aapne jaadu ki chadi ghumai aur mera darr ??? furrrrrr... ... isiliye thanks.....
bahut bahut bahut saare pyaar ke saath
aapki nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 06:00 PM
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"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
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Nisha ji......aapki nazm padhkar bahut acha laga...iske sabhi sher zindgi ke bahut kareeb lagte hai.....ehsaas bahut gehre hai....aapne jo likha hai....sachmuch kabile taarif hai.....aap ki iss bazm ko bahut zarurat hai....aate rahiyega.....aur daad kabul farmaye.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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23rd June 2009, 07:53 PM
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Nisha ji......aapki nazm padhkar bahut acha laga...iske sabhi sher zindgi ke bahut kareeb lagte hai.....ehsaas bahut gehre hai....aapne jo likha hai....sachmuch kabile taarif hai.....aap ki iss bazm ko bahut zarurat hai....aate rahiyega.....aur daad kabul farmaye.....
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naresh jee...
salaam...
aapne mujhe aur meri nazm ko tareef ke kaabil samjha uske liye shukriya...
ummed karti hun aap yuhin mujhe sarahte rahenge....
duaon k saath
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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23rd June 2009, 07:55 PM
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....
ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....
par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
nisha
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nisha ji namaskaar
ek lambe antral ke baad aapko padne ka mauka mila hai. aur yakeen maniye aaj mujhe isme wahi paina pan nazar aaya jiske deewane hum huaa karte the....
ek shandar kalam per meri dil se nikali huii daad kabool farmaiyega
shukriya
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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23rd June 2009, 08:37 PM
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nisha ji namaskaar
ek lambe antral ke baad aapko padne ka mauka mila hai. aur yakeen maniye aaj mujhe isme wahi paina pan nazar aaya jiske deewane hum huaa karte the....
ek shandar kalam per meri dil se nikali huii daad kabool farmaiyega
shukriya
dilip
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dilip jee........
tareef ke liye tahe dil se shukriya....
khush rahiye...
duaon k saath
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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30th June 2009, 11:58 AM
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....
ek choti si koshish kii hai kuch likhne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aaegi... aur na bhi aae to aasha karti hun, aap sab apni rae zaroor denge.....
par post karne se pehle ek baat bata dun... ki yahan jo pehla sher hai (jo ki aakhir mein bhi repeat kiya hai) wo mera nahin hai.... isiliye "nm" saath likh de rahi hun..... aur jo mere hain unmein "m" likha hai.....
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]"
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bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
Love n Regards
Praneeta
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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30th June 2009, 12:52 PM
Hi nisha, i hv read u first time, this is awesome... Very beautiful n close to heart.,
i like it very much.
Keep writing, GOD bless u.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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1st July 2009, 08:53 AM
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bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
Love n Regards
Praneeta
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hi diii.....
i m sooo happy aapko achcha laga....
keep smiling....
aapki
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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1st July 2009, 09:01 AM
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bahot achcha likha hai sweety.....esp jise main blue kiya hai
Keep writing
Love n Regards
Praneeta
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hi diii....
thanx for appreciating....
aapki
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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1st July 2009, 09:10 AM
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Hi nisha, i hv read u first time, this is awesome... Very beautiful n close to heart.,
i like it very much.
Keep writing, GOD bless u.
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hi arvind...
thanx a lot for appreciating....
take care and keep smiling...
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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1st July 2009, 08:50 PM
Nisha jii
kaise hai aap?
aapki ki ghazal behat pasand aayii.. kuch alag padhne ko mila .... bahut aacha laga
aur aapka andaz bhi pasand aaya ... nm n m thats really sweet ....shayd mujhe bhi kucj sekhne ko milega ..
yu hi likhte rahye
aapna khayal rakhiyege
aapki dost
mandeep
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2nd July 2009, 07:18 PM
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Nisha jii
kaise hai aap?
aapki ki ghazal behat pasand aayii.. kuch alag padhne ko mila .... bahut aacha laga
aur aapka andaz bhi pasand aaya ... nm n m thats really sweet ....shayd mujhe bhi kucj sekhne ko milega ..
yu hi likhte rahye
aapna khayal rakhiyege
aapki dost
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mandeep jee...
aadaab!!!
meri khushkismati ki aapko ye nazm pasand aai...
bas ek choti si koshish thi... jise aap sab ne kubool kar ke uski keemat bada di....
khush rahiyega...
bahut saari duaon k saath..
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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3rd July 2009, 11:55 AM
Hi Nisha,
Very nice effort, keep it up... and thaks for letting us know which shers were not yours... Keep coming.. keep writing...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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4th July 2009, 03:10 PM
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Hi Nisha,
Very nice effort, keep it up... and thaks for letting us know which shers were not yours... Keep coming.. keep writing...
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hi pulkit..
thanks for appreciating....
i'm glad u liked it...
take care
always....
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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7th July 2009, 08:11 PM
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...
bilkul sahi kaha hai Nisha dear
dil se daad
aapki dost
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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7th July 2009, 09:41 PM
nisha ji bahut khub likha hai apne aaj pehli baar apko padha hai bahut acha laga
khush rahiye hamesha.
jese ki diya ne kaha bilkul sahi kaha
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[
ye sher wake hi sach hai
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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8th July 2009, 02:53 PM
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wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...
bilkul sahi kaha hai Nisha dear
dil se daad
aapki dost
Diya
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hi diya....
dil se di gai tareef ke liye dil se shukriya....
hamesha khush rahiye...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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8th July 2009, 03:04 PM
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nisha ji bahut khub likha hai apne aaj pehli baar apko padha hai bahut acha laga
khush rahiye hamesha.
jese ki diya ne kaha bilkul sahi kaha
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[
ye sher wake hi sach hai
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dinesh ji...
salaam...
padne ke liye, pasand karne ke liye aur duaon ke liye shukriya....
ye sher sach to hai... par na jaane kyun, dil laakh chah kar bhi is sach ko apna nahin paata....
wo kehte hain na????
"main intzaar mein hu... ummed nahi kisi ke aane kee..
ye dil behlaane ki aadat hai... main samajhti hun, dil samajhta nahin...."
hausala afzai ke liye ek baar fir tahe dil se shukriya...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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8th July 2009, 07:29 PM
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mehfil ko nisha ka salaam....
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
nisha
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Jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...
Ab aur kya kahu..??? Iske aage Ehsaas hi nahin.... Awesome....
God bless U..
Ur Well Wisher
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9th July 2009, 12:59 PM
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Jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...
Ab aur kya kahu..??? Iske aage Ehsaas hi nahin.... Awesome....
God bless U..
Ur Well Wisher
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kabhi kabhi ehsaason ko lafzon ki zarurat nahin padti widhani sahab....
is nazm ko sarahne ke liye shukriya....
keep smiling always...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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10th July 2009, 03:13 PM
"Phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle..
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin... [nm]
saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
palkon ke beech sapne toot gae to kya??
har mod par apne ch.oot gae to kya???
jo rooth gai, meri zindagi hai wo, meri mohabbat to nahin...[m]
phirti hai to phir jae, badalti hai to badle...
duniya ki nazar hai, meri kismat to nahin...[nm]
Nisha ji behad khooooobsurat likhte ho aap..
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12th July 2009, 05:03 PM
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saathi na sahi tanhaii kubool..
khushiya na sahi ruswaii kubool...
meri chahatein hain ye, meri zarurat to nahin...[m]
wo na aae gar saamne, koi baat nahin..
wo na apnae kabhi, koi baat nahin..
ik haseen khwaab hai wo, meri haqeeqat to nahin...[m]
nisha
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Nisha ji,
aap ke jazbaato.n ki mai.n bohat kadar karta huu.n.. jo mehsuus kiya hai, filhaal koii lafz nahii.n sujh raha hai jin se unhe lafz duu.n..
Chaliye, jo bhi mehsoos huaa, gehraiii me.n mehsoos huaa
aap ka likha huaa pasand aaya
likhte rahiye
Mayank
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15th July 2009, 10:50 AM
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Nisha ji behad khooooobsurat likhte ho aap..[/B]
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shukriya ababbu ji....
yuhin padte rahiyega...
hamesha khush rahiye...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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15th July 2009, 10:54 AM
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Nisha ji,
aap ke jazbaato.n ki mai.n bohat kadar karta huu.n.. jo mehsuus kiya hai, filhaal koii lafz nahii.n sujh raha hai jin se unhe lafz duu.n..
Chaliye, jo bhi mehsoos huaa, gehraiii me.n mehsoos huaa
aap ka likha huaa pasand aaya
likhte rahiye
Mayank
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mayank ji...
salaam!!
mayank ji, ehsaas lafzon ke mohtaj nahin hote...
aapko ye nazm pasand aai, meri khushkismati...
apne jazbaaton ko aap tak pahuncha saki yahi mere liye bahut hai....
apna khyal rakhiyega...
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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9th August 2009, 01:45 PM
hai.n ghar kii muhaafiz merii dahakii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n
mai.n taaq me.n rakh aayaa huu.N jalatii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n -Imtiyaz Sagar
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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31st December 2009, 02:24 AM
phir se....aapka shukrguzar hu...ki aapne apne alfazo se hume rubaru karvaya...
dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi sher....
dil se daad kabool kare
khoob likhye
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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4th January 2010, 06:04 PM
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phir se....aapka shukrguzar hu...ki aapne apne alfazo se hume rubaru karvaya...
dil ke kareeb rahe sabhi sher....
dil se daad kabool kare
khoob likhye
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amit jii...
salaam...
aapne meri nazm ko tareef ke kaabil samjha uske liye shukriya...
ummed karti hun aap yuhin mujhe sarahte rahenge....
duaon k saath
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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