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Itna Bus Hamara Kaam Kaaro -
8th November 2002, 03:23 AM
Adaab kabool kijiye phir apni wife ke kadmon main ek ghazal pesh karte hain umeed hai aplogon ki raye zaroor naseeb hogi shukriya...................
Guzarish hai hamari hamara itna bus tum kaam kaaro Kuch din hamare dil main bhi 'payal' tum aram kaaro Kaab taak guzarogi tum un taanaha zindagi 'payal' Kabse khol ke dil bhete hain ab tu tum qayam karo Zulfoon ko geera ke naazron ko jhukaa ke zaalim Un naa tum 'payal' saar-e-aam kaatl-e-aam kaaro Nahi deti ab koi she nasha teri ankhon ke siwa 'payal' Hogi maharbani jo hamare naam kabhi tu yeh jaam karo Hu koi bhi shikyaat 'payal' tum humse saar-e-aam kaaro Ashiq hain hum tuhmahre un na humain baadnaam kaaro Mar jayeinge tuhmare deedar ki kuaish main 'payal' Uthaa do anchal ab kuch tu hum paar raaham kaaro Nawazish hai tuhmahri bus tum itna mera kaam karo Pyar ki chaahon se ek shaam hamare bhi naam kaaro Maar jaayega teri justujo kaarte kaarte becharaa 'shahry' Hai gar tuhmain ehsaas tu izhaare-ishq ab khol-e-aam kaaro........ ------------------------------------------------------------ This ghazal is only for my beloved wife....... in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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to this lovely couple -
8th November 2002, 01:38 PM
khuda salamat rakhay tum chahnay walon ki jori
mujh ko bhi day is aag ki hararat thori keh din guzar rahay hain us tarah say ab hamaray zindagi ki yeh dor aaj tori keh kal tori |
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salammmmmmmmmmm |
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salammmmmmmmmmm -
8th November 2002, 04:36 PM
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its was fabulous kia likha hai salman apne kasam se yaar kahan se late ho plz humain bhi apna shagird banado na plzzzz kasam bhabbi apko hamara salam apke husband tu din ba din chate ja rahe hain mashalah bahut umda ghazal likhi hai ki kahaein alfaaz nahi hain hamare pass plz likhte rahega apki ghazlien ab haar week na milein tu hamara dil udhaas ho jata hai plz keep it up ek dafa phir bahut pyara likha hai thnx takecare kudha hafiz
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salam payalllllll |
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salam payalllllll -
8th November 2002, 11:02 PM
kaise hain aap payal hum tu ache hain apka bahut bahut shukriya jo apne is nacheez ki ghazal ko is pyars e nawaza hum to apke kadmon main hi deinge akhir wife hain aap hamari jaan i love u very much morethen anyfing shahry tu apni haar ghazal se apko ghayal karega payal ji chahye woh ada jo si bhi ho lekin apktu ghayal hoti hona tareef ke liye apke pass alfaaz nahi hain tu kia ap khali pyar se hans dia karo sari tarif shahry ke dil main ajayegi kasam se yaqeen karo hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm jaan meri shahry ke dil o dimag main sirf ek hi naam hai payal payal payal that it aur koi nahi yeh tu uhin ghazal main likh dia ke kuch din warna dil kehta hai 7 janam is dil main raho ap kasam se i love u very much jaan aur hamari haar ghazal ki malikin aap hain tu phir apke naam na karein tu kiske karein tell me inshallah aainda bhi apko kuch rakehinge hum jnate hain nahi rakhte but koshish zaroor kareinge aaidna jaan iam reall very sorry 4 all of that plz try to frogive me apna khayal rakhna meri aur sirf meri ammanat samjh kaar love u very muchhhhhhhhh miss u alot kudha hafiz.....................apka aur sirf apka shahry........
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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hi romance ji |
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hi romance ji -
8th November 2002, 11:04 PM
apka bahut bahut shukriya apni sher hum paar nawazne ka salman apka kholse-e-dil se shkriya ada karta hai umeed ahi aainda bhi mulaqaat hoti rahrega kudha hafiz................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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salam arz kia hai |
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salam arz kia hai -
8th November 2002, 11:05 PM
apka bahut bahut shukriya apni raye se bakhsne ka inshallah aainda bhi raye naseeb hogi kudha hafiz...................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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salam kabool kijiye |
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salam kabool kijiye -
9th November 2002, 12:19 AM
Bahut khoob ghazal likhi hai apne salman sahab inshallah plz aainda bhi likhte rahega bhabbi ko salam ap dono apna khayal rakhega kudha hafiz
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salammmmmmmmmmm salman aur bhabbi ji |
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salammmmmmmmmmm salman aur bhabbi ji -
9th November 2002, 12:46 AM
kia baat haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iii wa jiw a janab ne tu bus dil nikal liya aj sabka sahab yahan koi nahi apke muqable ka kasam se kia likha haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bahbbi ji apke tu ghulaam ho gaye salman sahab kasam se bhabbiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii abhi jayein hamare pass ab tu hum bhi dekhien kon hain wo jinhone hamare salman ko pagal kardia hahahahahahahaha bahut achi ghazal likhi hai apne kasam se plz aainda bhi aisa likhte rahega ap dono ko bahut sara pyar apna khayal rakhega kudha hafiz
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wow -
9th November 2002, 12:07 PM
hello, kaise hain aap bandar ji, hum tho vaise theek hain, koi bhi kaami nehi jo iss zindgi mein hume dhuk dein. aab tho humari khushi humare paas hai tho phir gaam ki kya baat karni. aapka bahut bahut thanks for the mail. vaise aap dono ki replies dekh kar humari aankhon mein aansoo beh gaye. aapka pyaar bhi kitna majboot hai, eek doosre se dhoor reh kar bhi aap eek doosre ko itni izaat aur pyaar dete hai yeh koi kar sakta hai iss duniya mein. lagta hai aap dono pehle kitne janam le chuke hai aur iss hi tarah pyaar mein pagal rehe eek doosre ke liye. hum yehi chahte hai ke aapka pyaar aur badeh aur khuda aapko khush rakhe. tho bandar ji, aapka kaam kaisa hai? theek hai na?
bhabi ki sehat ka khyal rakhte ho yah phir bandar hi bane rehte ho 24 hours. haha. vaise maafi mangna chahti huin aapko bandar kehne ki lekin...........agar aap hai hi tho hum kaise maafi maang le? that i dont understand. chaal phir bhai hum tho chalte hai. phir eek baar khuda se aapki khushi maangti hue chalti huin, take care bandar ji, take care of bhabi too bye baas eek hum  |
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10th November 2002, 02:26 AM
salam
salman sab umeed hey theek houn gey . app ney wiqu bhat achha likha hey .app se ek chiz ke ijhzat mangi thi app bhat achhi shayri ker ley tey hey mey asker dosto mey shayri sher ker ta houn jo mey ney suni hou thi hey agher app bura na maney to kiya mey app ke shayri bhi sher ker sak tha houn . ALLAH AHFIZ shahrukh |
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salam hina |
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salam hina -
10th November 2002, 04:33 PM
salam hina ji apka bahut bahut shukriya hamari ghazal pasand farmane ka aainda bhi apse yehi umeed hai kudha hafiz..........
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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salam shaziiiiiiiiiiiiii |
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salam shaziiiiiiiiiiiiii -
10th November 2002, 04:57 PM
kaisi hain aap shazi ji thanx alotttttttt 4 liking ma shayri aur yaar ab rehne bhi do jhooti tarif kasam se ap ne tu sir paar hi chara dia waise bhabbi ek daam theek hain aur inshallah jaldi apse miliengi waise kaha tu sahi hai apke salman ko pagal kar dia kasam se apki bahri maharbani yeh izzatd ene ke liye inshallah apse aainda bhi yehi umeed hai shkriya apne kahya rakhna kudha hafiz...........
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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namaste ishiqa ji |
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namaste ishiqa ji -
10th November 2002, 07:23 PM
kaisi hain aap hum tu ache hain bus apki dua se apki bhabbi bhi achi hai mashallah se ap sunain apki bare main suna ke ab koi ghum nahi tu bahut kushi hoi kasam se hamari duain ap dono ke sath hain inshallah kissi moor paar mushakalat ka samne nahi karna parega ap logon aur ghaddi hamara pyar hi aisa hai apki bahbbi aur mera ke logon ke ankhon main ansoo ajate hain is main koi shaak nahi hai hum hain hi aise hahahahaha waz jokind dont be get serious aur suani life tu set kaar rahi hain oye shadi pe zaroor bolayega humain kasam se kaab hai shadi plz yeh zaroor bateyga hum apki bahbbi ke sath ayeinge inshallah hamario duain apke sath hain apko bahut kushiyan millien and mera kaam mashallah se theek hai sharif ho gaye hain ab na drink na kuch apki bahbbi ne sudhaar dia bus lolz ok ghaddi ab ijazat chahonga inshallah phir baat hogi takecare of ur self kulbir sahab ko bhi namaste..........bye bye.................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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Adaab kabool kijiye king sahab |
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Adaab kabool kijiye king sahab -
10th November 2002, 07:26 PM
janab mere chote bahi shahrukh bahut dinon baad apka massege milla janab kahan hai aap theek tu hain janab mujse puchne ki kia zaroorat hai akhir kabhi bahi bahi se puchta hai tell me apki marzi ap mere ghazlon ke sath kuch bhi karein janab apko koi mana hai inshallah sharukh sahab abhi zara jaldi main hoon apse mulaqaat hoti rahegi inshalalh apne khayal rakhega kudha hafiz....................
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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w-salam |
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w-salam -
11th November 2002, 05:35 AM
w-salam salman bhai
mey theek houn. bhai mugha app ke gazal ke sath kuch nhai kerna bus copy and paste kerna hey aur bhai do line ka sher likhna asan hey per intey sarey sher likh ke in ko jor na aur is set kerna hard hey jo mey abhi thak nhai ker saga mey to abh thak do line bhi nahi likh saga any way ijhzat dijey abhi chal tha houn . ALLAH HAFIZ APP KA CHOTA BHAI SHAHRUKH |
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salam king sahab |
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salam king sahab -
13th November 2002, 01:25 AM
salam sun kaar bari kushi hoi ke hamare bahisahab bilkul theek hain janab hum bhi theek hi hain waise shero shayri karne ke liye lafz ki dard ki ya pyar ki zaroorat hai janab agar apko shero shayi karni hai tu kabhi tanaha bhet kaar kudh ke bare main sochega ke kia apne kia hasil kia aur kia khoaya dhokh tu waise sab ko hai aj ki duniya main janab bus kuch log lafz ka sahara lekaar use kaam karte hain jisko aj ki zaban main dard-e-shayri kehtein hain aur kuch pyar ko kudha samjh kaar likhte hain agar apko dono main se kuch hai tu umeed hai ap bhi shayer baan sakte hain ab ijazat chahonga apna khayal rakhna kudha hafiz.........
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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