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TaRapte rah gaye roti ko kya dawa karte - 16th September 2010, 02:22 PM
yaaraan.e.meHfil: tasleemaat!



Mohtaram Janab Sarwar Alam Raz Saheb ne mundarja zail micre tarah par do ghazlen (aik 17 saal pahle aur doosri 17 saal baad ki) yahan inaayat ki hain:



:junoon.e.shauq meiN seHraa.navard kyaa karte?:



In donon ghazlon ko paRhne k baad chunke ye zameen mujhe bahut achchhi lagi, is liye main ne bhi mundarja baala zameen mein kuchh kahne ki koshish ki hai. Mujhe pata nahin k main kahan tak kaamiyaab hua hoon phir bhi aap logon ke peshe-nazar ye ghazal rakh raha hoon:



Bayeed kuchh bhi nahiN iske maasiwa karte
Fuzul baatoN se hat ke khuda khuda karte


Ki chaak chaak jigar ke sabhi qaba karte
Alam ki raat guzaari hai ilteja karte


Jo dil ho dil ki tarah dil to muddoa karte
Ruju dil ke nawaaoN se baarha karte


Qadaawari ki riyaasat mein ja-ba-ja karte
Ik aaine ke baraabar ik aaina karte


Bana k web pe Urdu ki Anjuman SARWAR
Faraaz-o-fikr ko dekha hai hum ne wa karte


Nazar ne dekha hai sahra-naward aapko bhi
Junoon-e-ishq meiN pairoN ko aabla karte


Zamana aapke naqshe-qadam pe chalta rahe
Hamaari zindagi guzri hai ye dua karte


Milan ki aas liye jeete haiN har ik saa-at
Tire khayaal pe hum kaise iktifa karte


Latafat-e-lab-o-rukhsaar thi agar haasil
Is ibteda-e-safar ki phir inteha karte


Ik aaine ke tasauur meiN usko dekha hai
KhatoN ki shakl meiN kaaghaz ko aaina karte


Gham-e-ma-aash se muhlat mile to hum uske
Khayaal-o-khwab-o-tasauur se raabta karte


Asa banaate qalam ko to koi baat bhi thi
Usi ke zor se paani meiN raasta karte


Hamaari jaan isi waste gayee WAQUIF
TaRapte rah gaye roti ko kya dawa karte


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1st October 2010, 03:44 PM
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yaaraan.e.meHfil: tasleemaat!




Mohtaram Janab Sarwar Alam Raz Saheb ne mundarja zail micre tarah par do ghazlen (aik 17 saal pahle aur doosri 17 saal baad ki) yahan inaayat ki hain:



:junoon.e.shauq meiN seHraa.navard kyaa karte?:



In donon ghazlon ko paRhne k baad chunke ye zameen mujhe bahut achchhi lagi, is liye main ne bhi mundarja baala zameen mein kuchh kahne ki koshish ki hai. Mujhe pata nahin k main kahan tak kaamiyaab hua hoon phir bhi aap logon ke peshe-nazar ye ghazal rakh raha hoon:



Bayeed kuchh bhi nahiN iske maasiwa karte
Fuzul baatoN se hat ke khuda khuda karte


Ki chaak chaak jigar ke sabhi qaba karte
Alam ki raat guzaari hai ilteja karte


Jo dil ho dil ki tarah dil to muddoa karte
Ruju dil ke nawaaoN se baarha karte


Qadaawari ki riyaasat mein ja-ba-ja karte
Ik aaine ke baraabar ik aaina karte


Bana k web pe Urdu ki Anjuman SARWAR
Faraaz-o-fikr ko dekha hai hum ne wa karte


Nazar ne dekha hai sahra-naward aapko bhi
Junoon-e-ishq meiN pairoN ko aabla karte


Zamana aapke naqshe-qadam pe chalta rahe
Hamaari zindagi guzri hai ye dua karte


Milan ki aas liye jeete haiN har ik saa-at
Tire khayaal pe hum kaise iktifa karte


Latafat-e-lab-o-rukhsaar thi agar haasil
Is ibteda-e-safar ki phir inteha karte


Ik aaine ke tasauur meiN usko dekha hai
KhatoN ki shakl meiN kaaghaz ko aaina karte


Gham-e-ma-aash se muhlat mile to hum uske
Khayaal-o-khwab-o-tasauur se raabta karte


Asa banaate qalam ko to koi baat bhi thi
Usi ke zor se paani meiN raasta karte


Hamaari jaan isi waste gayee WAQUIF
TaRapte rah gaye roti ko kya dawa karte



(Waquif Ansari)
ansari saheb bahut khoob likha hai,hamari taraf se daad kubool karen.ye sher mujhe bahut achchhe lge
Asa banaate qalam ko to koi baat bhi thi
Usi ke zor se paani meiN raasta karte



Hamaari jaan isi waste gayee WAQUIF
TaRapte rah gaye roti ko kya dawa karte

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6th October 2010, 09:11 AM
MASHALLAH!!... Bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal hai Waqhif sahab....................

Aap Sarwar sahab ki jin di ghazaloN ki baat kar rahe haiN, maine bhi padhi hai, shayed Sdc per bhi maujood haiN woh ghazaleiN, agar mil gayi tou yahaaN unka link zarur post karungi...

Aapki ghazal bhi har lehaaz se, un ghazaloN ke muqable kam nahi.....

Yuhi likhte rahiye.



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