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ik voh haiN jinheiN qaul nibhaane naeeN aate - 3rd November 2015, 04:16 AM

ek adh-pakii si Ghazal haazir-e-khidmat hai, bhool-chook muaaf kiijiyo



ik voh haiN jinheiN qaul nibhaane naeeN aate
ik maiN ke, diye, jisko bhujhaane naeeN aate

unko jo umeedeiN haiN ishq se voh bajaa haiN
hum hi ko naaz-e-husn uThaane naeeN aate

is aalam-e-be-fiqr ko jee bhar ke jee liyo
phir lauT ke bachpan ke zamaane "naeeN" aate

kis tarhe hoga dard numayaaN ash’aar meiN
kaaGhaz pe tumheiN ashq bahaane naeeN aate

ab “youN” nahiiN qabool to,achcha, khuda haafiz
chehre pe mujhko chehre lagaane naeeN aate

ashqoN ko saNbhaala to hoNTh thar-tharra gaye
“maikash” ko dil ke rog chhupaane naeeN aate


rab raakha
maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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3rd November 2015, 11:00 AM

adaab maikash ji.....

Waaahhh...
Subah ban gayi is khoobsoorat ghazal ko padh kar... behtareen ghazal pe daad qubool kijiye.... dua hai apko padhne ke mauke baar baar millte rahein..

Salamat rahein...



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waahhh maikash bhai........ kamaal ki peshkash hai aapki jaanib se....
ek ek sher lajawaab hain k ek misraa qayaamat...

mujhe nacheez ki daad qubool farmaaen..... duaaon me yaad rakhen.....

Shaad........


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waahhh maikash bhai........ kamaal ki peshkash hai aapki jaanib se....
ek ek sher lajawaab hain k ek misraa qayaamat...

mujhe nacheez ki daad qubool farmaaen..... duaaon me yaad rakhen.....

Shaad........


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adaab maikash ji.....

Waaahhh...
Subah ban gayi is khoobsoorat ghazal ko padh kar... behtareen ghazal pe daad qubool kijiye.... dua hai apko padhne ke mauke baar baar millte rahein..

Salamat rahein...
aadaab Madhu jee

bohat shukriya hai jee aapka, daad ataa farmaane ke liye shukriya alag se tasleem farmaaiye


rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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24th November 2015, 11:10 AM

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ek adh-pakii si Ghazal haazir-e-khidmat hai, bhool-chook muaaf kiijiyo



ik voh haiN jinheiN qaul nibhaane naeeN aate
ik maiN ke, diye, jisko bhujhaane naeeN aate

unko jo umeedeiN haiN ishq se voh bajaa haiN
hum hi ko naaz-e-husn uThaane naeeN aate

is aalam-e-be-fiqr ko jee bhar ke jee liyo
phir lauT ke bachpan ke zamaane "naeeN" aate

kis tarhe hoga dard numayaaN ash’aar meiN
kaaGhaz pe tumheiN ashq bahaane naeeN aate

ab “youN” nahiiN qabool to,achcha, khuda haafiz
chehre pe mujhko chehre lagaane naeeN aate

ashqoN ko saNbhaala to hoNTh thar-tharra gaye
“maikash” ko dil ke rog chhupaane naeeN aate


rab raakha
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Bhaijaan is haseen aur dil fareeb ghazal par mujh nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyeGaa...yun to har sher pur asar raha par matla to jaan hi le gaya...kalam-e-zor aur zyaada...



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27th November 2015, 10:33 AM

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ek adh-pakii si Ghazal haazir-e-khidmat hai, bhool-chook muaaf kiijiyo



ik voh haiN jinheiN qaul nibhaane naeeN aate
ik maiN ke, diye, jisko bhujhaane naeeN aate

unko jo umeedeiN haiN ishq se voh bajaa haiN
hum hi ko naaz-e-husn uThaane naeeN aate

is aalam-e-be-fiqr ko jee bhar ke jee liyo
phir lauT ke bachpan ke zamaane "naeeN" aate

kis tarhe hoga dard numayaaN ash’aar meiN
kaaGhaz pe tumheiN ashq bahaane naeeN aate

ab “youN” nahiiN qabool to,achcha, khuda haafiz
chehre pe mujhko chehre lagaane naeeN aate

ashqoN ko saNbhaala to hoNTh thar-tharra gaye
“maikash” ko dil ke rog chhupaane naeeN aate


rab raakha
maikash

wahhhh.............aap to janaab dil hi nikaal kar rakh detey ho...tareef karne ko lafzoN ki kami hai.

rabb raakha


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