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"Dil mein jo aaya woh likh diya" -
18th April 2007, 02:23 PM
Es mahfil ke sabhi dosto ko namaskaar…..aaj bahut dino ke baad kuch likha hai aur aapki naazr kar rahi hoon..umeed hai aap sab ka saath mileyga.
dil mein jo aaya woh likh diya kabhi milan kabhi judai likh diya...... pehli baar mile the yahan hum un raahon ka naam manzil likh diya....., kiya tune tar tar mera daman ja maine bhi tujhe bewafa likh diya...... ishq ka janoon thaa ya deewanapan jo apni saanso ko tere naam likh diya...... teri judai hai ab mukaddar mera is zindagi ka naam intzaar likh diya....... dard-e-mohabat ke siva shayari hai kya ja tera naam hamne gazal likh diya..... dafan ho gayi har aarzoo seene mein 'sunita' ne jabse tujhe sanam likh diya...... aapki dost  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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bhut khub -
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18th April 2007, 03:55 PM
namaskar sunita ji
bahut khoob sunita ji. apne to sach mein dil ko jazbaati hone par majboor kar diya. Aapke saare hi ehsaas kaafi achhe hai par yeh kuch lines to jiase bilkul mujhe apne par hi lagi. pehli baar mile the yahan hum un raahon ka naam manzil likh diya..... ishq ka janoon thaa ya deewanapan jo apni saanso ko tere naam likh diya...... dafan ho gayi har aarzoo seene mein 'sunita' ne jabse tujhe sanam likh diya...... Dua hai ki aap aage bhi aise hi ehsaas hamare nazar karte rahein!!! Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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18th April 2007, 06:13 PM
pranaam sister:
kaafi dino baad aapki bazm meiN koii teHreer ko deKha sach maaniYe baRii hi khusHii hoti hai jabhii maiN aapko paRHta huuN ..aSh'aar ko jis gehraayioN ke saath aap har baar pesh karte haiN wo baat mere dil ko hameshaa chhu jaati haiN.. chaNd sher mere dil ko bahot hi pasaNd aayeN..jisse maiN yahaaN bayaaN karna chaHuNga.. kiya tune tar tar mera daman ja maine bhi tujhe bewafa likh diya...... teri judai hai ab mukaddar mera is zindagi ka naam intzaar likh diya....... bahot hi khoob rahaa andaaz-e-bayaaN aapka bas yehi guzarisH hai ki apni umda sha'iree ke Z^riiye yuuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheN chHotu ke dil se niklii daad ko tasleem kijiyeNga didi apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapka chhota sa bhaii aur dost dhaval |
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18th April 2007, 07:03 PM
hello sunita ji,
bahut dino baad aapka kalaam padhne naseeb hua.kya gazab ka likha hia aapne,bahut khoob.itni gehraayi hai aapke ehsaason mai.aapko padhna bahut acha laga. likhti rahen yunhin,khush rahen. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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19th April 2007, 10:51 AM
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es housla-afjaei ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....yeh sab aap jaise dosto ki duao ka asar hai ki hum thoda bahut kuch likh letey hain....yu saath banaye rakhyega...aapki daad humey dil se kabool hai. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th April 2007, 10:53 AM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th April 2007, 02:23 PM
namaskar sunitaji apne bahot acha likha hai wakai kabile tarif hai, ummid hai apse app isitarah likhkar hume nahi raha dikhate rahe
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teri daad mujhe dil se kabool hai aur ab main koshish karungi ki routine mein jaha aa sakku.... lots of love teri sister .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th April 2007, 05:44 PM
hi suntia g, kaisi hain app?
aapko humara namaskar, bahut acha likha hai apne...........sidha dil se hum b kuch kehnga chanhge "Dil mein jo aaya woh likh diya" juban pe jo aya..woh keh dia tu rahe sadha meri aankhon k samne isliye... humne khuli aannkon se..... sona sikhh liya umeed hai apko ko pasad ayega. apko ke jawab ka intezaar rehenga humein. tc Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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19th April 2007, 06:59 PM
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teri judai hai ab mukaddar mera is zindagi ka naam intzaar likh diya....... yeh lines dil ko choo gayi.... ab aaine ke saamne jhoot bolna mumkin nahi hota... Aap to sab jaante ho.. khair.. meri chodo.. Aapki is behad khoobsoorat rachna ke liye meri daad haazir hai... aise hi aap mehfil me rang bharte rahein.. humesha khush rahein... apna khayal rakhein.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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20th April 2007, 10:23 AM
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dil mein jo aaya woh likh diya kabhi milan kabhi judai likh diya...... kiya tune tar tar mera daman ja maine bhi tujhe bewafa likh diya...... dard-e-mohabat ke siva shayari hai kya ja tera naam hamne gazal likh diya..... ye ashaar dil ko chu gaye yunhi likhti rahain khush rahain takecare apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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21st April 2007, 10:46 AM
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kaise ho aap. aapko meri gazal pasand aaaye..bahut bahut shukriya, yu hi saath banaye rakiyega. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st April 2007, 10:48 AM
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bahut accha lagga aapko aapni post par pheli baar dekh kar...umeeb hai ab yeh saath yu hi banna raheyga. aapka bahut bahut shukriya..meri housla afjaei karne ke liye. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st April 2007, 10:50 AM
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wow....manish...aapka sher humey behad pasand aaya...yu hi saath detey rahna. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st April 2007, 10:52 AM
hi sunita ji
aapko merul ka sadar pranaaam sunita ji aapki ye rachna padhke hamein bhi hamara ek dard yaad aa gaya, sach sunita ji aapki ye rachna hamari kahani se bi kafi milti hai, aapki rachna padhte padhte rom rom khade ho gaye... khas karke wo baat jismein aapne kaha hai ki ja hamne bhi aapko bewafaa keh diya... ese hi likhte rahiyega aur mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega aapka dost MErul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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21st April 2007, 12:35 PM
kiya tune tar tar mera daman
ja maine bhi tujhe bewafa likh diy wah kya baat hai didi bahut gahraai mein dard ko samet dala hai kitna dard deta hai na kisi ko bewfa ka name dena..kyun ki jisse wafa ki umeed karke pyaar karte hai bewfa bhi wohi judta hai .. bahut khub likha hai sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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21st April 2007, 05:12 PM
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lots of love tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd April 2007, 07:31 AM
hi didi kaisii ho
bahut dino ke baad aapka ye kalam padne ko mila ek dam tazgii liye hai ye. or khoobsyrat itna ki kya kahoon. dil mein jo aaya woh likh diya kabhi milan kabhi judai likh diya...... sahii baat hai jab kuch samajh na aaye tab esa hi karna chahiye pehli baar mile the yahan hum un raahon ka naam manzil likh diya....., waah kya baat hai manjil ki shuruaat ko mazil likh diya waah kiya tune tar tar mera daman ja maine bhi tujhe bewafa likh diya...... uffffffff kya baat hai sahi baat hai dard ki inteha esii hi hotii hai ishq ka janoon thaa ya deewanapan jo apni saanso ko tere naam likh diya...... kya karen ye ishq main kaha dekha jata hai ......... teri judai hai ab mukaddar mera is zindagi ka naam intzaar likh diya....... waah intzar kiii intehaa hai ab to........ dard-e-mohabat ke siva shayari hai kya ja tera naam hamne gazal likh diya..... oho hooo bemishal sher likha hai ye ] dafan ho gayi har aarzoo seene mein 'sunita' ne jabse tujhe sanam likh diya...... didi pata nahi esa kyun hota hai hum jise sabse jyada chahte hain use hame taqleef dene main bada maza aata hai................. poora ki poora kalam bahut khoob hai dil se daad hazir hai kabool kigiyega shukriya dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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mani ji namaskaar kaise hain aap....! aapne mujhe padda aur mere ahsaaso ko mahsoos kiya...main tahe-dil se aapki shukargujaar hoon...yu hi mahfil mein aatey rahna aur humey aur likhne ka housla detey rahiyega. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 03:22 PM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 03:25 PM
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kush raho tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 03:28 PM
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dil kush ho gaya tumhara reply padkar...har sher ki tah tak gaye ho tum....yu hi aapni didi ka saath detey rahogey, to tumhari didi aagey bhi koshish karti raheygi kuch likhney ki....sadha kush raho! tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd April 2007, 08:57 PM
pranaam di,
di aaj bade diino baad apko padha. bahot achha laga.........bahot khuub likha hai aapne bhi. ye do line bahot pasand aai. pehli baar mile the yahan hum un raahon ka naam manzil likh diya....., daad kabuul kijiye apni gudiya ki......... yunhi likhti rahiye..... grazie aapki matko pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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meri pyari matko.....tujhe bahut dino baad jaha dekha hai, bahut accha lagga...meri gazal tujhe pasand aaye. tu aajkal kaha kho gaye hai...site par bahut kum aati hai....study dil lagga kar karna aur jaldi humse milne bhi aana...! lots of love teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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