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hota hai pyar ek hi baar??? -
19th January 2003, 05:09 PM
adab dosto ,kuch pesh karta hu..........comments ka intazar rahega..................sweetnashaji,amanji,wafaji n otherz
"aye kash tumhe humare pyar par yakeen hota, to mausam -e- bahar,patjad me bhi hota....... aye kash tum samaj pate humare ashq ko ki jubani, to taare bhi aa baith te sunne woh beeti kahani....... aye kash tum humari dhadkanno ki dhun sun pate, to saat suro se bane is dil ko samaj pate.............. aye kash tum samaj pate in ladkhadate labpso ke ishare, to khil uthte binbarsaat hi phool sare........... aye kash khole hote tumne humare liye dil ke dwaar, bin base kaise bataye ,hai tumse kitna pyar........ kar to liya apne humse pyar, par kar na sake humpe etbaar..... kar to liya humne bhi ikraar, par de na sake woh pyar..... nahi ban sake hum wo dil-dar, jiska tha shayad aapko intazar...... karte hai din raat tumhari ibadat, par shayad nahi is tute dil ko dhadak ne ki izazat..... aye khuda, 'jeevan se jyada hai hume maut par etbaar, gar hota hai pyar ek hi baar' ;-) |
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19th January 2003, 10:52 PM
Kya baat kahii hai dost!
 "aye kash tumhe humare pyar par yakeen hota, to mausam -e- bahar,patjad me bhi hota......." Wah Wah! Bahot khoob sher likheN hai aapne =) Aur jis taraH aapne iska ant kiya -- 'jeevan se jyada hai hume maut par etbaar, gar hota hai pyar ek hi baar' Taareef ke qaabil sab haiN..! Likhte rahiye, Aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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hi amanji |
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hi amanji -
22nd January 2003, 08:38 PM
salam amanji
i m so happy u like it....... hope it has improvement as u guided from the fst one u read.anyways will try to write aur accha then this . thnks a lot................... "dard -e- dil ko isi tarah bayan karte rahe ge, apne ashqko se inhe uhi sajate rahege" ;-) |
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Amazing -
27th January 2003, 09:33 AM
amazing....
Aap bahut hi aacha likh te hai. keep writing |
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thx |
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thx -
30th January 2003, 09:20 PM
hi mahekji,welcome to shayri.com..............mujse dosti karoge????
aap ne humari shayri ko pasand kiya isliye shukriya..............will try to write somethin better  ;-) |
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8th February 2003, 12:27 AM
hey
sorry for delay Mujse dosti karoge??????? huh .....ohh.........aaaaaa.......chalo kar hi late hai You are my first friend in syari.com apki agli post ka intezaar rahega bye mahek |
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shukriya |
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shukriya -
8th February 2003, 01:49 PM
sukhriya mahekji........well aaj kuch post karooga zaroor padiyega
phir milege................ ;-) |
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hi |
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hi -
15th February 2003, 10:01 PM
so guys kya kehte ho pyar hota hai ek hi baar????
;-) |
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12th March 2003, 06:31 PM
Nice shayri Sidh.
I think pyar ek hi bar hota hain. kabhi kabhi jise hum pyar samjte hein woh sirf infatuation hota hain. keep writing waiting for yr next sher always keep smiling |
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24th March 2003, 02:25 AM
wah wah wah bahut hi khoob likha hai sidh ji!!
aise hi likhte rahiye, riddhi |
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hi |
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hi -
25th March 2003, 10:20 AM
thks a lot ursfoeva.........
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27th May 2007, 05:38 PM
dosto adaab phirse mulakat hogi jaldd hi !!
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