Dard

Vipinbox · **Dard -** 28th July 2002, 02:32 AM

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Na batorta dard tow
.......awara ho jate sab aasoon.

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fakhru · **Re: Dard -** 28th July 2002, 06:14 PM

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Originally posted by Vipinbox
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Na batorta dard tow
.......awara ho jate sab aasoon.
well brother this is a incomplete shaayri ;
it shld go something like this
Na batorta dard tow
.......awara ho jate sab aasoon,
hume to awaara duniya bulaati hai;
magar humaare motiyon ki bhi koi keemat na hoti.
well it shld go somethinglike this.i read ur more shaayirs some r incomplete and some are fab so keep it up.

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Vipinbox · 30th July 2002, 01:58 AM

Thanx a lot my dear brother.......