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Ankahi Kahaani
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Aur aankhon mai hai summandar ka paani -
7th September 2007, 09:56 AM
Ae dost aaj tere sawaalon ke jawaab mai de na paai,
Kaise de deti tujhe wo jawaab jisme chhupi thi meri daastaane gum saari,
Dil mai hai dard ke toofaan kai,
Aur aankhon mai hai summandar ka paani,
Na jaane kyon dard nikala na baahar aaj banke lafz meri zubaani,
Jaane kaise tu aaj samjha na mere khaamosh dil ki kahaani,
Kaise kar deti bayaan wo lamha jo guzara hai mujhpe,
Uasme to ae dost hoti mere Pyaar mere Dil-Bar ki ruswaai,
Samjhaaun kaise tujhe ki chaah kar bhi zubaan aaj tujhase kahe na paai ki,
Sanam ne hi mere mujhe aaj chot kaisi hai lagaai,
Samjha paati shaayad mai tujhe apane dil ki majburiyaan saari,
Bahe rahi thi jab mai apani hi aankh se hoke paani paani,
Uas waqt jaane kyon hoke khafa tune dosti mai humaari hai duriyaan badhaai,
Kaash ke dikha paati mai tujhe ae dost ki,
Dosti hai teri mujhe apani jaan se bhi pyaari,
Par dil se tere Aaj nikal jaae na koi Baddua mere Maheboob ke liye,
Yahi soch kar shaayad mai tere sawaalon ke jawaab de na paai,
Fir na samajh ke mujhako jaane kaisi ab tune mujhase yeh naraazagi hai dikhaai,
Khafa hone se pahele! Yoon mujhase rooth ne se pahele,
Kya ek baar bhi tere dil se koi awaaz na aai,
Khaamoshi ne meri kya dil pe tere koi dastak na lagaai,
Aaj tu chhod chala mujhe akeli uan halaat mai ae dost,
Jab Tinako mai bikhar rahi thi meri Duniyaa saari,
Par shaayad aaj jaake "Gudia" samajhi hai ki,
Har kisi ki hoti hai apani zindagaani,
Aur har zindagi ki hoti hai lamha lamha ek aur nai kahaani.
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe.
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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.
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7th September 2007, 10:11 AM
Gudia G namaskar
Ek baar phir aapki bahut hi behtreen koshish.
isme ek bahut bada raaz chhipa hai jise samajh pana kaafi mushkil hai........
par mujhe aapke ehsaas har baar ki tarah is baar bhi bahut pasand aaye....
Khush rahiye hamesha.....
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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7th September 2007, 10:34 AM
Gudiya jee:
namaskaaR..
seedhe dil sey nikle huye lafz ko paRh ke baRaa hi sukuuN milaa.. YuuN to poori kavviSh Bahot hi Khuub rahi Gudiya jee.. par kosiSh ke aaKhir meiN jo aapne baat kahi hay,,"har zindagi ki hoti hai lamha lamha ek aur nai kahaani." wo baat dil ko chhu gaYii.. Bahot sahi kahaa haii aapne.. kii har ziNdagee ki hoti hai laMhaa laMhaa ek aur naYii kahaani..! bahot Khuub!! daad!!
guzaariSh hay aap YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee.. !
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN..
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat..jai Shree kriShna..!
aapka dost
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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nice -
7th September 2007, 05:52 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Ae dost aaj tere sawaalon ke jawaab mai de na paai,
Kaise de deti tujhe wo jawaab jisme chhupi thi meri daastaane gum saari,
Dil mai hai dard ke toofaan kai,
Aur aankhon mai hai summandar ka paani,
Na jaane kyon dard nikala na baahar aaj banke lafz meri zubaani,
Jaane kaise tu aaj samjha na mere khaamosh dil ki kahaani,
Kaise kar deti bayaan wo lamha jo guzara hai mujhpe,
Uasme to ae dost hoti mere Pyaar mere Dil-Bar ki ruswaai,
Samjhaaun kaise tujhe ki chaah kar bhi zubaan aaj tujhase kahe na paai ki,
Sanam ne hi mere mujhe aaj chot kaisi hai lagaai,
Samjha paati shaayad mai tujhe apane dil ki majburiyaan saari,
Bahe rahi thi jab mai apani hi aankh se hoke paani paani,
Uas waqt jaane kyon hoke khafa tune dosti mai humaari hai duriyaan badhaai,
Kaash ke dikha paati mai tujhe ae dost ki,
Dosti hai teri mujhe apani jaan se bhi pyaari,
Par dil se tere Aaj nikal jaae na koi Baddua mere Maheboob ke liye,
Yahi soch kar shaayad mai tere sawaalon ke jawaab de na paai,
Fir na samajh ke mujhako jaane kaisi ab tune mujhase yeh naraazagi hai dikhaai,
Khafa hone se pahele! Yoon mujhase rooth ne se pahele,
Kya ek baar bhi tere dil se koi awaaz na aai,
Khaamoshi ne meri kya dil pe tere koi dastak na lagaai,
Aaj tu chhod chala mujhe akeli uan halaat mai ae dost,
Jab Tinako mai bikhar rahi thi meri Duniyaa saari,
Par shaayad aaj jaake "Gudia" samajhi hai ki,
Har kisi ki hoti hai apani zindagaani,
Aur har zindagi ki hoti hai lamha lamha ek aur nai kahaani.
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe.
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gudia ab kyaa kahu ab kyaa andaza lagau ki wo dost kon hai?jo tumhe chhor ke chal diya.....usko aisa bilkul nahi karna chahiye thaa....khuda se duaa hai ki wo dost aapka wapis aa jaye.....aapki pukaar mein dam hai usko wapis aana hii hoga.....raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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7th September 2007, 09:14 PM
bahot pyara likha hei...lekin apke dard ka ehsas apke sathi ho hota hei
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