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15th March 2008, 09:43 PM
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Aaj pahali baar ek koshish ki hai maine. Shayri nahi, Kahaani likhne ki...main aaj vo kahaani yaha post karne jaa rahi hu, is ummid ke saath ke aap sabhi ka saath milega...yadhyapi aapko ye kahaani pasand naa aaye to bataiyega...jabtak aapke javaab aate rahenge main kahaani aage badhaati rahungi....aaj kahani ka pahale bhaag post karne jaa rahi hu. PAL PAL ZINDAGI KE Aaj pahale din Piyush late nahi hona chaahta thha, isi liye raat ko alarm lagake soya thha subha 6 baje ki. Alarm bajte hi utth khadaa hua taiyaar hona thha, bathroom me chala gaya. Piyush ek 16 saal ka ek smart, cute, intelegent ladka thha, ek baar koi dekhle to wow kahe bina nazar hata le..naa ho hi nahi sakta.use shayri ka bahot shok thha, aqsar shayriya karta thha.11th comarz ka student thha, nai school me admission hua uska, or aaj pahala din thha...1/2 ghante me Piush taiyaar ho gaya thha. '' Piyush, taiyaar ho gaye to niche aa jao '' Piyush ki mum ne puchha " yes mum i m ready i m coming " Piyush ne sidiyaa utarte hue kaha '' Good morning mum, where's dad '' Piyush ne puchha '' vo taiyaar hain, tu brackfast kar le ab jaldi '' mammy ne kaha 10 min me Piyush nashta karke mammy ko bye kaheke chala gaya, papa ke saath school ke liye.Papa ne use school drop kiya or office nikal gaye. Aaj school me pahale din thha, bilkul naya mahol, kisise jaan - pehchaan nahi. Abhi school start hone me 10 min baaki thhe. Piyush Campus me khelte ladki - ladko ko dekh raha thha, tabhi uske paas ek basketball Aa giri.. " Oye, ball pass karo " ek ladki ne awaaz lagai Piyush ne nazar uttha ke ladki ko dekha, or maano waqt thham sa gaya, ek pari jaisi ladki ko dekhke. " SARE JAAH.N KAA HUSAN KHUDA NE TERI NAZAR KAR DIYA LAGTA HAI '' apne khayalo me usne ye line banaa daali " Oye " ladki ne Piyush ke paas aake ball chin li or chal gai Bell baj gai thhi school ke start hone ki, Piyush man hi man kuch soch raha thha, uska man nahi kar raha thha waha se jaane ko, lekin jaana to thha hi. School ke 2nd floor pe uska class room thha, class me jaake ek seet pe baitth gaya. English class thhi 1st. 10 min ho gaye thhe class shuru hue tabhi gate pe kisike knock karne ki awaaz aai. " May i come in mam " Piyush ne kitaab se nazar uttha ke dekha to uski ankho me chamak si aa gai, jaane koi khoi cheez mil gai ho use, gate pe wahi ladki thhi jo use basketball khelte hue mili thhi. " you are late " Teacher ne gusse se kaha " As always " kahate hue ladki enter ho gai " oye tum? or vo bhi meri seet pe, come on get up " Ladki ne bigadte hue Piyush se kaha " Saba, first you are late, second you are disturbing us....."Teacher ke in shabdo ko bichme hi kaat'te hue Saba ne kaha " cool cool '' or Sahil ke paas chali gai. '' Saba !! bahot khubsoorat naam hai " Piyush ne muskutate hue apne aapse kaha Teacher ne black bord pe kuch likhne ke liye turn kiya to Saba ne Piyush ki shirt khinchte hue kaha " next period me seet khali kar dena " Piyush to bas sab dekhta jaa raha thha, or mand mand muskan uske chehare pe aati jaa rahi thhi. First period khatam hua 1 ghante baad " Oye, chalo fast seet khali karo " Saba ne eyebrows chadhaate hue Piyush se kaha Piyush bhi konsa kam thha, usne bhi jhhat se kahe daala " kyu ? tumhara naam likha hai banch pe ?" Saba ne ek pen haath me liya or banch pe apna naam likh diya. " Padhlo, now leave from here " saba ne Piyush ki books uske haath me dete hue usse kaha. " Smart haa..." Piyush ne banch ki or ishara karte hue kaha " yes i m, and u dont try to be x'tra smart ok, go " Saba ne gusse me Piyush ko javaab diya Piyush ko naa jaane kya haansil ho gaya thha, use bahot mazaa aa raha thha in sab me lekin fir vo chup'chaap waha se chala gaya chahare pe halki si hansi ke saath, or Sahil ke paas jaake puchha " Kya main yaha baitth sakta hu " " are kyu nahi yaar, baittho " Sahil ne bade dostana andaaz se javaab diya. "hi, i m Sahil varma " Piyush ki or haath badhaate hue usne kaha " I m Piyush yadav " Sahil se haath milate hue Piyush ne javaab diya " Saba ke bartaav ka bura mat maanna, vo aisi hi hai, or zara usse bachke rahana, shaitaan ek number ki hai " Sahil ne hanste hue kaha " Main bhi kam nahi hu dost " Piyush ne ektuk javaab diya hanste hue "Hahaha, fir to hamaare saath tumhari khoob jamegi , Saba meri bahot achhi dost bhi hai, jitni shaitaani me aage hai utni hi padhaai me bhi aage hai, puri class me sabse jyada marks aate hain uske, isi liye teachers use jyada kuch nahi kahate, poori class ki jaan hai vo, humara ek group hai chhota sa, rest me sabse milaaunga " Sahil ne apni books baahar nikalte hue kaha "Thanks " Piyush ka javaab isi tarha 2nd or 3rd period bhi nikal gaya or rest ho gai. Saba class se baahar jaa chuki thhi, Sahil or Piyush bhi ek saath baahar nikal aaye, Sahil Piyush ko lekar ground pe aa gaya jaha uske sabhi dost maujood thhe. " hi guys, meet our new partner Piyush " Sahil ne Piyush ka intro. karaya sabse " Ye Ronak hai, Anjali, Gaurav or ye Saba " Sahil ne Sabko Piyush se milvaya sabne piyush se haath milaya lekin Saba thhoda naraaz thhi, aaj school ke pahale hi din Piyush ko kisiki naarazgi ka saamna karna par raha hai. Khair, Saba to waha se chali basketball khelne... " Bahot achha khelti hai " Piyush ne Saba ki or ishara karte hue kaha " Bhaai, abhi dekha hi kya hai, dheere dheer sab jaan jaoge " Sahil ne zor se hanste hue kaha Bas fir aisie hi rest khatam hua or fir 4th, 5th or 6th period ke saath school bhi khatam ho gai. Piyush ghar aa gaya, aate hi change kiya jaldi se khana khaake room me chala gaya, jaate hi bed pe late gaya, Uski nazro ke saamne sirf ek hi chehara thha, Saba ka. Bas usi chehare me khoye hue kab neend aa gai pata hi nahi chala, dhire dhire poora din guzar gaya... To be continued APKE JAVAABO KA INTEZAAR RAHEGA Grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Hi Grazieeeee  m so excited now... nd I want to know aage kya hua plz zyada lamba intezaar mat karana...jaldi se rest of the part post karna MERA PEHLA PEHLA PYAR HAI (MP3) hope ki kucch dukh bhara nahi hoga... plz koshish karna happy happy rahe poori story...LOVE STORY mein sadness acchi nahi lagti ohk babz taek caer tadaa jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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15th March 2008, 10:43 PM
Hi sis,
thanks yaar apka reply aaya, kahaani sad hai yaa nahi ye to aap padhte padhte hi samajh sakengi..... sis, aapka responz mila, bahot achha laga......lamba intezaar nahi karaungi..jald hi 2nd part post karunga........tabtak wait kijiye  Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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15th March 2008, 11:04 PM
story achche laghti hai mujhe ye dekhna hai kay ..piyus yadav aur sahil verma achche dost bante hai ya phir ?.......
 e=pooja_d;275924]Dosto,Aaj pahali baar ek koshish ki hai maine. Shayri nahi, Kahaani likhne ki...main aaj vo kahaani yaha post karne jaa rahi hu, is ummid ke saath ke aap sabhi ka saath milega...yadhyapi aapko ye kahaani pasand naa aaye to bataiyega...jabtak aapke javaab aate rahenge main kahaani aage badhaati rahungi....aaj kahani ka pahale bhaag post karne jaa rahi hu. PAL PAL ZINDAGI KE Aaj pahale din Piyush late nahi hona chaahta thha, isi liye raat ko alarm lagake soya thha subha 6 baje ki. Alarm bajte hi utth khadaa hua taiyaar hona thha, bathroom me chala gaya. Piyush ek 16 saal ka ek smart, cute, intelegent ladka thha, ek baar koi dekhle to wow kahe bina nazar hata le..naa ho hi nahi sakta.use shayri ka bahot shok thha, aqsar shayriya karta thha.11th comarz ka student thha, nai school me admission hua uska, or aaj pahala din thha...1/2 ghante me Piush taiyaar ho gaya thha. '' Piyush, taiyaar ho gaye to niche aa jao '' Piyush ki mum ne puchha " yes mum i m ready i m coming " Piyush ne sidiyaa utarte hue kaha '' Good morning mum, where's dad '' Piyush ne puchha '' vo taiyaar hain, tu brackfast kar le ab jaldi '' mammy ne kaha 10 min me Piyush nashta karke mammy ko bye kaheke chala gaya, papa ke saath school ke liye.Papa ne use school drop kiya or office nikal gaye. Aaj school me pahale din thha, bilkul naya mahol, kisise jaan - pehchaan nahi. Abhi school start hone me 10 min baaki thhe. Piyush Campus me khelte ladki - ladko ko dekh raha thha, tabhi uske paas ek basketball Aa giri.. " Oye, ball pass karo " ek ladki ne awaaz lagai Piyush ne nazar uttha ke ladki ko dekha, or maano waqt thham sa gaya, ek pari jaisi ladki ko dekhke. " SARE JAAH.N KAA HUSAN KHUDA NE TERI NAZAR KAR DIYA LAGTA HAI '' apne khayalo me usne ye line banaa daali " Oye " ladki ne Piyush ke paas aake ball chin li or chal gai Bell baj gai thhi school ke start hone ki, Piyush man hi man kuch soch raha thha, uska man nahi kar raha thha waha se jaane ko, lekin jaana to thha hi. School ke 2nd floor pe uska class room thha, class me jaake ek seet pe baitth gaya. English class thhi 1st. 10 min ho gaye thhe class shuru hue tabhi gate pe kisike knock karne ki awaaz aai. " May i come in mam " Piyush ne kitaab se nazar uttha ke dekha to uski ankho me chamak si aa gai, jaane koi khoi cheez mil gai ho use, gate pe wahi ladki thhi jo use basketball khelte hue mili thhi. " you are late " Teacher ne gusse se kaha " As always " kahate hue ladki enter ho gai " oye tum? or vo bhi meri seet pe, come on get up " Ladki ne bigadte hue Piyush se kaha " Saba, first you are late, second you are disturbing us....."Teacher ke in shabdo ko bichme hi kaat'te hue Saba ne kaha " cool cool '' or Sahil ke paas chali gai. '' Saba !! bahot khubsoorat naam hai " Piyush ne muskutate hue apne aapse kaha Teacher ne black bord pe kuch likhne ke liye turn kiya to Saba ne Piyush ki shirt khinchte hue kaha " next period me seet khali kar dena " Piyush to bas sab dekhta jaa raha thha, or mand mand muskan uske chehare pe aati jaa rahi thhi. First period khatam hua 1 ghante baad " Oye, chalo fast seet khali karo " Saba ne eyebrows chadhaate hue Piyush se kaha Piyush bhi konsa kam thha, usne bhi jhhat se kahe daala " kyu ? tumhara naam likha hai banch pe ?" Saba ne ek pen haath me liya or banch pe apna naam likh diya. " Padhlo, now leave from here " saba ne Piyush ki books uske haath me dete hue usse kaha. " Smart haa..." Piyush ne banch ki or ishara karte hue kaha " yes i m, and u dont try to be x'tra smart ok, go " Saba ne gusse me Piyush ko javaab diya Piyush ko naa jaane kya haansil ho gaya thha, use bahot mazaa aa raha thha in sab me lekin fir vo chup'chaap waha se chala gaya chahare pe halki si hansi ke saath, or Sahil ke paas jaake puchha " Kya main yaha baitth sakta hu " " are kyu nahi yaar, baittho " Sahil ne bade dostana andaaz se javaab diya. "hi, i m Sahil varma " Piyush ki or haath badhaate hue usne kaha " I m Piyush yadav " Sahil se haath milate hue Piyush ne javaab diya " Saba ke bartaav ka bura mat maanna, vo aisi hi hai, or zara usse bachke rahana, shaitaan ek number ki hai " Sahil ne hanste hue kaha " Main bhi kam nahi hu dost " Piyush ne ektuk javaab diya hanste hue "Hahaha, fir to hamaare saath tumhari khoob jamegi , Saba meri bahot achhi dost bhi hai, jitni shaitaani me aage hai utni hi padhaai me bhi aage hai, puri class me sabse jyada marks aate hain uske, isi liye teachers use jyada kuch nahi kahate, poori class ki jaan hai vo, humara ek group hai chhota sa, rest me sabse milaaunga " Sahil ne apni books baahar nikalte hue kaha "Thanks " Piyush ka javaab isi tarha 2nd or 3rd period bhi nikal gaya or rest ho gai. Saba class se baahar jaa chuki thhi, Sahil or Piyush bhi ek saath baahar nikal aaye, Sahil Piyush ko lekar ground pe aa gaya jaha uske sabhi dost maujood thhe. " hi guys, meet our new partner Piyush " Sahil ne Piyush ka intro. karaya sabse " Ye Ronak hai, Anjali, Gaurav or ye Saba " Sahil ne Sabko Piyush se milvaya sabne piyush se haath milaya lekin Saba thhoda naraaz thhi, aaj school ke pahale hi din Piyush ko kisiki naarazgi ka saamna karna par raha hai. Khair, Saba to waha se chali basketball khelne... " Bahot achha khelti hai " Piyush ne Saba ki or ishara karte hue kaha " Bhaai, abhi dekha hi kya hai, dheere dheer sab jaan jaoge " Sahil ne zor se hanste hue kaha Bas fir aisie hi rest khatam hua or fir 4th, 5th or 6th period ke saath school bhi khatam ho gai. Piyush ghar aa gaya, aate hi change kiya jaldi se khana khaake room me chala gaya, jaate hi bed pe late gaya, Uski nazro ke saamne sirf ek hi chehara thha, Saba ka. Bas usi chehare me khoye hue kab neend aa gai pata hi nahi chala, dhire dhire poora din guzar gaya... To be continued APKE JAVAABO KA INTEZAAR RAHEGA Grazie Pooja[/quote] |
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15th March 2008, 11:07 PM
hahahaha.......Ji Yash ji Piyush or Sahil achhe dost bante hain, aap jaisa soch rahe hain waisa is kahaani me koi thriler maardhaad nahi hai......
thanks for ur reply.......i'll be here very soon wd 2nd part Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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15th March 2008, 11:44 PM
very nice POOJA.....this story sounds very romantic and interesting....so plz carry on....i would love to read it....ab jaldi se aage badhao ise.....
take care dear......  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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16th March 2008, 12:24 PM
wah di bahut achi sotry app likh rahe ho padhne se lagta hai ki pehle bahut saari khushi hasil hoti hai aur baad saari khushi ek pal me hi chali jaati hai sayad dono dost ek hi ladki se pyar kar bethenge.
di ab aage badhavo taki hume pata chale ab kya hai aage AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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16th March 2008, 02:27 PM
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Thanks for coming and appreciate.......well di u r right, its very romantic story.... aajkal tak 2nd part post kar dungi........ Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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}Well aap jaisa soch rahe hain waisa nahi hai , kahaani maine alag tarike se likhi hai...aapko padhne pe sab pata chal jayega.........so keep reading.....i'll be here very soon grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th March 2008, 03:19 PM
Kosis badiya hai pooja ji. . . Suruaat achhi hai umid krta hu end bhi achha hoga...Goodluck
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16th March 2008, 03:59 PM
sabko di bolna acha lagta hai isi liye sabko di bolta hu
aur ab di app kab 2nd part reales karege. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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plz keep reading..... grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th March 2008, 11:58 AM
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17th March 2008, 02:52 PM
hmm............to kahani likhi hain...ek kaam karo yeh kishtoN mein na post karo ek saath saari kahani post kardo..
samjhi...waise starting to mast hain par yaar ek baat kahu plz gussa na hona.........kyunki mujhe pata hain main jo kahungi usse tumhe gussa ayega so pehle se bol diya ....yeh character main male ka naam kitna sadu hain piyush kuch acccha sa naam leti hero ka jaise......rahul...smart as always... ...chalo chalo thanda pani peelo..........aur jaldi se puri kahani post kar do...................grazie... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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17th March 2008, 03:24 PM
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this is sahil.......... bahut hi achi story start ki hai apne ........ or kisi ka to pta nhi pr main apke agle din ka besabri se intzar karunga or umeed krta hu k kam se kam apki story me to sahil k sath insaaf jaruur hoga or piyush or sahil ki DOSTI kahan tk jati hai ye janna chahunga or sabha ki baat to baad me karenge ---------->{$} Best of Luck Quote:
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Nazron nazron me na jane koi kya kah deta hai.......
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17th March 2008, 06:51 PM
Chapter 2
Subha 6 baje ki alarm baj gaya, kal hi ki tarha aaj bhi 1/2 ghante me taiyaar hoke Piyush ne brack fast kiya or papa ke saath school nikal gaya. " Hi Sahil " " hi Piyush " " kaisa lag raha hai nai school me aakar? " ye savaal Piyush ke liye Sahil ki or se " well...sach kahu to bahot achha lag raha hai, sach me socha hi nahi thha ke school ke pahale hi din se mere achhe dost ban jayenge " bahot x'aited hoke Piyush ne javaab diya aaj Saba class me jaldi aa gai, 5 min rahe gaye thhe school lagne me. " Hi Saba " Piyush ne kaha. Lekin Saba ne koi javaab nahi diya, or apni seet pe jaake baitthgai Bas wahi borring Eco. Comerz ki class thhi aaj, sab bore ho gaye. Rest hote hi sab aise class se chhootke bhaage mano kisine unhe jail me band kar rakha ho. Sab ground pe thhe, Piyush ki nazre thhi ke kuch dhundh rahi thhi, lekin kise? Jise dhundh rahi thhi vo to door khadi hindi ke teacher ke maze lete dikhi. " BHOOOM " ek gubbara foota " are are ye bom kaha se foota " teacher had'bada gaye " hahahaha" Saba zor se hansi " are principal " ye kahake fir vo waha se bhaag gai " hahahaha, ye koi moka nahi chhodti, tumhe pata hai Piyush jab main is school me naya aaya thha 8th class me to mere saath bhi aisa hi hua thha, main class me baittha kuch soch raha thha, achanak Saba aai or mere kano me chwing'gum ka gubbara fod diya or main cho.Nk gaya, sab bahot hanse us din mujhpe " hanste hue Sahil ne Piyush ko ye baat bataai Saba ko chwing'gum bahot pasand thhi, vo khana bhale hi na khaaye lekin chwing'gum uske muh me honi chaahiye, chwing'gum se kabhi kabhi logo ko bahot tang bhi karti, kabhi kisiki seet pe chipka deti to kabhi kisike baalo pe hahaha " Mujhe sab bhool gaye, socha ke school se chali gai hu.. haa " ek shikayat bhari awaaz sunai di sab ko " Saara !! kaha thhi kal ? aai kyu nahi thhi, yaar school ke pahale din to aana thha na " Sahil ne pichhe mud kar ye sab Saara se kaha. " kal hi gaa.Nv se waapas aaye isi liye aaj anaa hua " Saara ne thhodi masumiyat se javaab diya " Piyush ye Saara hai, humare group ki pakaau mamber hahaha, Arts ki student hai, pakaau mamber ki pakaau sub. " Sahil ne Saara ko chidhaate hue dono ka intro karaya, Saara or Piyush ne ek dusre se haath milaya. Saara or Sahil ki bahot achhi banti thhi, dono jhhagda bhi khoob karte thhe, lekin ek dusre ke bina rahe nahi sakte thhe. Saara ne 11th me Arts. subjact li or Sahil, Saba, Anjali ne Comarz, or Gaurav ne Science, isi liye vo sirf rest me ya school ke khatam hone ke baad hi mil paate. Sab apni bato me mast ho gaye fir, lekin Piyush Saba ko hi dekhe jaa raha thha, itni khoobsurat ladki ke chahare pe itni kaatilana hansi, mano Piyush ke jeegar ko cheer rahi ho. rest khatam ho gaya or kal ki tarha aaj ki school bhi. Piyush ghar aagaya. " Mom i m very hongry please give me something to eat " " deti hu, waise tumne bataya nahi ke tumhari school kaisi hai, dost bane ya nahi, teachers kaise hain? " "Mammy school bahot achhi hai, yakeen maniye mere to kal hi achhe dost ban gaye. Sahil, Gourav, Anjali, Saara, Saba..... yes " " Yes bhi kisi dost ka naam hai ? " Mammy ne zor se hanste hue puchha " oh no mum " Piyush ne muskurate hue kaha, khana khaake vo apne room me chala gaya or apni books leke baitth gaya. Piyush apni baate apne mammy papa se kabhi nahi chhupata thha, uske mammy papa ki soch aajke zamaane ke hisaabse thhi, or isi liye Piyush ki apne mammy papa ke saath dost jaisa rishta thha bas isi tarhase 1 mahina guzar gaya class me tests bhi start ho gaye, aaj maths ke test ke marks aane wale thhe, Saba ke Piyush se kam marks aaye Saba ke 28 or Piyush ke 28 and 1/2 out off 30 aaye " oye, tumhare mujhse jyada marks kaise ? mujhse cheating ki thhi kya " Saba note book dekhte hue gusse se Piyush se boli " Saba, class ke baad ladai karna, apni seet pe jaake baittho " Teacher ne Saba ko tokte hue kaha Class ke khatam hote hi Saba Piyush pe toot si pari " Kaha se cheating ki thhi " Saba ka pahala savaal Piyush se " Main or cheating, sapna hai shaayad " Piyush ne dono haath baandhte hue kaha " Fir mujhse jyada marks kaise aaye? aajtak kisike marks nahi aaye mujhse jyada " Saba ne badi tikhi zabaan se ye sab kaha " lekin ab aayenge, MERE " Piyush ne Thodi kuteel muskan ke saath javaab diya " Main sabse aage thhi or rahungi, i'll show u " Saba gusse me ye kahake chali gai Aisa hi chalta thha dono ke bich, kabhi Saba aage to kabhi Piyush. Din beet'te gaye. Piyush jab bhi Saba ko dekhta use lagta ki Saba se jyada khush is duniya me koi nahi, Saba ke labo pe humesha ek Muskaan rahati thi, lekin Kabhi kabhi Piyush ko lagta ke mano is bewajha khushi ke pichhe kahi gamo ki koi kaali chaadar bhi hai, jo Saba ki ankho me kabhi kabhi nazar aajaati thhi, kabhi kabhi Saba ki hansi banaavti lagti, Saba jab bhi tanha hoti to ek dairy leke baitth jaati, vo jab bhi us laal rang ki dairy ke saath hoti to ek anjana sa gam uski ankho se chhalakta thha, yun lagta maano vo kisise kuch maang rahi hai, Piyush ,Saba ke galo pe an'bahe ashqo ki lakeere dekh hi leta. Vo jaanna chaahta thha ke haqeekat kya hai, Jo Saba dikha rahi hai vo ya fir jo Piyush ne samjha hai vo...kashm'kash ke in dino me ek or mahina guzar gaya. or Sept. aa gaya. 5 sept. ko Saba ka janm'din thha, Piyush ne uske liye ek achha sa gift bhi khareed rakha thha.Piyush roz ki tarha taiyar hua or brackfast karke paap ke saath nikal diya school ke liye. Lessons chal rahe thhe, lekin Piyush ka man nahi lag raha thha, vo bar bar ghadi ki or dekh raha thha, use intezar thha rest ka, ke kab rest ho or kab vo Saba ko gift de. Rest ho hi gaya, lekin rest hote hi Saba turant hi kahi chali gai thhi, Piyush ji konse kam thhe, dhundh nikala Saba ko, vo school ke topfloor ki sidiyo pe baitti apni usi laal dairy me kuch likh rahi thhi " Happy B'day Saba " Piyush ne gift aage badhate hue kaha Saba ne hairaan nigaho se use dekha " Mera janm'din hai ye tumhe kaise pata? " Saba ne badi hairani se puchha " tumne to party ke dar se bataya hi nahi, lekin madam hume pata chal hi gaya " Piyush ne nazre ghumate hue kaha "Main apna b'day nahi manaati " ye kahake Saba utthke jaane lagi, lekin Piyush ne uska haath pakad ke use rok liya " Gift to lelo " Piyush ne Saba se kaha " Main gifts nahi leti " Saba ne bina dekhe kaha " Is berukhi ki vajhaa ?, kuch chhupa rahi ho tum " Piyush ne eyebrows chadhaate hue puchha "Nahi to main to bas aise hi, chhodo mujhe jana hai ECO ke nots banane hai " Saba ye kahake jaane lagi " Palke band karke jhhoo.Ntth bola karo, ankho ko sacch bolne ki bimaari hoti hai " Piyush ne Saba ke chahare ko dekhte hue kaha Piyush ki ye baat sunte hi uski aankhe chhalak pari, vo bahot hairaan thhi Piyush ki bahot se, aaj 2 saal baad kisine use itna gaur se dekha or samjha. Saba ansoo ponchhte hue waha se chali gai. Ab Piyush ki bechaini aur badh gai thhi, aaj use yakeen ho chalaa thha ke jo usne socha thha vo sach nikla, vo janna chaahta thha is maasoom chehare ki khoobsurat hansi ke pichhe gum ka kaaran kya thha, filhaal ye mushkil thha, kyuki Saba usse bahot chidhi hui thhi pahale hi din se, sidhe muh baat tak nahi karti thhi use. rest khatam ho gaya, school khatam hone tak Saba udaas thi, aaj pahali bar use udaas dekha Piyush ne isi liye vo bhi man na laga saka class me...School khatam hui, sab apne apne ghar chale gaye. Saba ghar jaate hi apne room me chali gai, or zor zor se rone lagi, bahot waqt baad sahil-e-ashq manzar-e-aam hue aaj. To Be Continued Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th March 2008, 06:55 PM
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17th March 2008, 08:06 PM
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di kya piyush jesha soch raha hai aisa hi hoga pls jaldi se jaldi 3rd part post karna kyu ki ab hume bhi acha nahi lagta hai is kahani ko padhe bina
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Dear Pooja:
aaj aik naye hi rop meiN tum naZar aayii.. ek kahaani ko liKhate huye.. mujHe be-Had KhuShii ho rahi hay.. derii ke liYe mwaafii chaahtaa huuN.. aaj hi site par aaya aur tumHaari kahaani paRhii.. bas liKhati jaa'o..! KhuSh raho..! apnaa Khayaal raKhanaa..! duaaoN ke saath ijaazat tumHaara dost ~ Dhaval |
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17th March 2008, 10:52 PM
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bahut khub yaar....ab jaldi se kahani aage badhao yaar....bahut mazaa aa raha hai tumhari is kahani ko padhne me.....so keep writing.... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Aap aaye, achha laga...bas bahot din se ek kahaani likhne ki soch rahi thhi, 2-3 din pahale story dimaag me aai or yaha post kar di... Shukriya pasand karne ke liye Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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18th March 2008, 10:32 AM
Hello Pooja ji
apki ye story bahut bahut hi achi hai such maniyega es padte hue mera dil bharr aaya or sahil ko to apne bahut jaldi saara se milva diya kaheen ye mere kehne pr to nahi kiya ? agar mere kehne pr kiya hai to aisa mt krna sahil ne akele rehna bhi sikh liya hai kyuki sahil apni khushi k liye chahe kuch bhi na kare pr ooron ki khushi k liye kuch bhi kr sakta hai best of luck {$} next chapter ka intzaar rahega sahil Quote:
TUTE DIL NE HIMAKAT KARDI,, SOCHA THA KI CHUPA LENGE GAMM APNa ,,, PAR KAMBAKHT ANKHON NE BGAWAT KARDI............{$} |
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Sahil bahot bahot shukriya ke aap itne dil se is kahaani ko padh rahe hain...Saara is kahaani ka hissa us din se thhi jis din se maine kahaani sochi thhi, kahaani ka har charitra main soch chuki hu, bas kahaani ka har bhaag likhna baaki hai...kiska kya roall hai is kahaani me sab taiy hai....baaki kahaani likhte waqt dimaag chalta hai, or dil me jo ehsaas aate hain vo dialog ko roop me likh deti hu... Sahil ko tanha nahi chhodungi.... iska agla bhaag kuch lamho me post karungi..... so keep reading Grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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18th March 2008, 06:19 PM
Chapter 3
Ek or subha hui, suraj ki kirne aaj din me thhoda badlaav leke aai thhi.N...kal ki udaasi ke baad aaj Saba ke chahare pe fir se muskaan laut aai...isi ke saath usme kuch badlaav bhi thha...duniya ka suraj ugg chuka thha, lekin school ka suraj ugna baaki thha...vo waqt bhi aa gaya.... " Hi Piyush, how r u? " bas Saba ka itna puchhna thha or class ka chonkna...sab use heraaniyat se dekh rahe thhe, Piyush bhi ek-tuk dekh rahaa thha Saba ko, Sapna thha ya haqeekat? soch raha thha shayad... Or tabhi Sahil dodke Saba ki or aaya or uske maatthe pe haath lagay "Bukhaar to nahi hai " badi hataasha se kaha " Kya hai haa? kya main Piyush ka haal nahi jaan sakti kya ? " Saba ne sabko ghoorte hue puchha " Bilkul puchh sakti ho, agar dimmag me koi shaitaani na ho to " Anjali zor se hanste hue boli...or sab hansne lage...Saba sab ko ghoor rahi thhi, tabhi Piyush khada hua " Raham khudaaya, *sukoot-e-tufaa.N zoro pe hai " ye sher Piyush ka Saba ke badle hue bartaav ke liye {*sukoot-e-tufaan = Tranquility of storm, tufaan ki khamoshi} "What ? " Piyush ki ye line sunke bas Saba ke muh se yahi nikla "Nahi kuch nahi, well i m fine, thanks for asking..." Piyush ne badi hi pyaari nazar se dekhte hue javaab diya... or itne me teacher aa gai..lesson shuru ho gaya... Aaj vo ho gaya jiske baare me Piyush ne socha nahi thha.... Aaj to dono ka hi man nahi lag raha thha apdhne me...jaise taise 3rd period nikal gaya or waqt ho gaya wahi masti, rest ka....rest hote hi Piyush or Sahil, Anjali ground pe chale gaye...Saara or Gaurav bhi aa gaye Sahil ne Subha ki Saba wali baat Saara or Gaurav ko bataai, dono hoob hanse... " To mujhpe hansaa jaa rah hai " Saba ne muh banate hue puchha " Are nahi yaar, hum tumpe kyu hansenge bhala, bas aaj tum itni badli badli lagi ke kisiko yakeen hi nahi hua, Kyu Piyush sahi kaha na? " Sahil ne Saba ko chidhaate hue Piyush ki or ishara kiya "Kya Piyush ka haal puchhne pe ban laga hai " Saba bigadte hue Sahil se boli " Are Saba chal yaar, ye sab to thhkte nahi mazaak udaate hue, chalo hum kahi aur chalte hain " Saara ne Saba ka haath pakadte hue kaha, unke saath Anjali bhi chali gai... Gaurav ka Bio ka test thha to vo kuch der baad padhaai karne chal gaya. Ab Sahil or Piyush rahe gaye. kuch der baad khamoshi tooti.... "Aaj waakkai me Saba bahot badli si nazar aa rahi hai, Aaj bahot shaant hai, kisiko tang nahi kiya, are tumne note kiya uske muh me chwing'gum bhi nahi hai" Piyush bahot hairaani se ye sab bol raha thha " Chwing'gum? hahaha, shayad khatam ho gai hogi " Sahil zor se hanske bola " I'm serious yaar, kya hua hai Saba ko achaanak " Piyush Ne kaha " Saba ko kya hua hai ye to nahi jaanta, lekin tumhe kya hua hai iska andaaza hai mujhe" Sahil ne teerchhi nigaho se dekhte hue kaha " What do u mean ?" Savaalo se bhari nazro ke saath Piyush ne puchha " Ya, Chori chori Saba ko dekhna, Uske baare me har roz puchhna, Ye jaante hue bhi ke vo tumse baat karna pasand nahi karti fir bhi usse baat karne ki koshish, Koi uske liye gift nahi laya thha b'day wale din , lekin tum laaye...." Sahil Piyush ke chaaro or ghum' ghum kar bol raha thha ye sab " Kahana kya chaahte ho vo kaho " Piyush ne Sahil ko pakadke ek jagha rokte hue puchha " You are in love duffer " Sahil ne Piyush ko punch maarte hue kaha " What? Love? joke maar rahe ho?" Piyush ne nazre ferte hue kaha " Ab Yaar ye sab pyaar nahi to or kya hai..araam se baitthke sochna ke maine sahi kaha ya galat, ab tumhaara dost sirf kehane ke liye hi to nahi bana na? waise tum aksar Saba ke baare me sochte ho, hai na? " Sahil ek detectiv ki tarha baat kar raha thha...hahaha "Ha sochta to hu lekin Mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai? kab? pyaar aisa hota hai? " Piyush ke maatthe pe salvate thhi is savaal ke saath " Abe haa yaar aisa hi hota hai " Sahil zor se bola Sach me Piyush ko pyaar ho gaya thha Saba se, vo har waqt yahi sochne laga '' mujhe pyaar kab hua, mujhe pyaar hai? " Bechaara, use kya maloom thha ke pyaar hota nahi ho jaata hai..hahaha....khair vo thhodi uljhan me thha , saaf nazar aa raha thha uske chahare pe...isi uljhan ke saath ajki school khatam hui...or chhutti ho gai...Chahare pe wahi uljhan liye vo ghar pahuncha...or room me chala gaya " Piyush, beta khana khaa lo " Mammy ne awaaz lagaai " Mammy bhookh nahi hai " Piyush ne room ke baahar aake javaab diya or wapas chala gaya Aaj se pahale Piyush ne aisa nahi kiya, isi liye uski mammy usse kaaran janne room me chali gai. " Piyush, kya hua, tu itna pareshaan kyu hai ? " Mammy ne sar pe haath ferte hue puchha " Kuch nahi mammy, bas thhak gaya hu, sona chaahta hu " Piyush ne apna sar mammy ki god me rakh diya Uski mammy ne use thhik se sula diya or chaddar odhaa kar baahar aa gai... Shaam ho gai thhi, Piyush ke papa bhi ghar aa gaye...Or fir raat ho gai dinner ka waqt ho chala thha...mammy ne Piyush ko khane ke liye awaaz lagi, Piyush khana khaake chupchaap room me chala gaya...warna roz to apne papa se bahot baate masti karta hai...papa Piyush ke room me gaye usse milne "Andar aa sakta hu? " Papa ne gate pe knock karte hue puchha "Papa !! aaiye na " Piyush ne bad se utthte hue kaha " Yaar, main aaj tujhse bahot naraaz hu, tune aaj mujhse baat bhi nahi ki " Papa ne thhodi narazgi se kaha " Nahi papa aisa kuch nahi hai, bas kuch soch raha thha isi liye " Piyush ne papa ke paas aake kaha " Kya soch rahe ho? mujhe nahi bataoge, beta tum jaante ho main tumhe pareshaan nahi dekh sakta, batao kya baat hai " Papa ne Piyush ke kandhe pe haath rakhte hue kaha. Piyush ne school ke pahale din se lekar ab tak ka saraa kissa papa ko suna diya...." Papa Sahil ne jo kaha vo sacch hai kya " Papa ke haath pe haath rakh ke puchha " Hahahahaha, beta ye pyaar nahi atraction hai..tumne Saba ke baare me bataya usse to yahee lagta hai ke tum atract ho, jyada pareshaan na hovo, or padhaai pe dhyaan do " Papa ne Piyush ke sar pe haath ferte hue kaha Piyush ne haa me sar hilaya, papa jaane lage tabhi achaanak bole... "Lekin Piyush, Saba se uski udaasi ka kaaran janne ki koshish jaroor karna,jaha tak ho sake uski help karna " or papa chale gaye Ye sunte hi achaanak Piyush kuch sochne laga......" Main to bhool hi gaya thha iske bare me, Mujhe ab Saba se janna hi hoga, akhir kya baat hai jo vo chhupati hai apni hansi ke pichhe..." Yahi sochte hue use nind aa gai, or raat guzar gai.... Piyush mauka dhundh raha thha Saba se apne savaal karne ka...lekin usse pahale use Saba se dosti karni thhi, ab to Saba bhi narmi se pesh aati thhi usse....use dosti ka prastaav rakh hi diya 1-2 din baad....Saba ne bhi badi khushi khush haath mila liya...Saba pahale ki hi tarha shaitaan or hansmookh rahati thhi, lekin Piyush ko kuch or hi nazar aata...aaj use mauka mil hi gaya...Computer ke teacher nahi aaye thhe...to class free thhi...sab masti kar rahe the, Piyush Saba ke paas gaya or kaha "Saba mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai " "Ha bolo na " Gum ko chwing karte hue kaha " chalo bahar sidhiyo pe baitthte hain " Piyush ne bahar ki or ishara karte hue kaha, or dono bahar aa gaye "Pahale ye chwing'gum muh se nikalo " Piyush ne mooh banate hue kaha, Saba ne chwing'gum muh se nikal ke unguliyo ke bich daba di "Fenko ise" haath jodte hue kaha. "to aise bolo na" Saba ne chwing'gum fenkte hue kaha...." Ab kaho " " Tum itna khush kyu rahati ho " Piyush ne tirchhi nazro se saval kiya " kyu khush hone ke liye kaaran hona zaroori hai " Saba hanske boli " Ha zaroori hai, jab koi bahot jyada khush hota tab. Achha ek baat bataao, main aqsar tumhe ek laal dairy me kuch likhte hue dekhta hu, or tum b'day wale din udaas kyu thhi, or kisine bhi tumhe b'day wish kyu nahi kiya ? " Piyush ke itne saare savaal sunke Saba ki ankho me nami si aa gai... " Mujhe mwaaf karna, agar had se jyada haq jataa diya ho dost pe " Piyush ne Nazre jhuka ke kaha "Sach kahu to bahot achha laga aaj ye sab sunke...Bahot saal baad kisine aisa savaal kiya mujhse..or isi kaaran us din main ro pari thhi" Saba ne kahana shuru kiya " 2 saal pahale meri zindagi ka sabse pyaara insaan mujhe chhodke chalaa gaya...Meri Maa...jisee dekhe bina subha nahi hoti thhi, or jiski god me sar rakhe bina nind nahi aati thhi, aaj uske bina jeena par rahaa hai...main apni Maa se bahot pyaar karti thhi, aaj bhi karti hu..2 saal pahale vo market se shopping karke apni car ki or jaa rahi thhi.N...tabhi roud crosse karte waqt kuch ladko ne signel tod diya or meri Maa ka accident ho gaya...kuch hi lamho baad hospitel me Maa mar gai...Maa ke jane ke baad main roti rahati thhi, khana pina chhod diya thha, ek din Maa se mili, sapne me, Maa ro rahi thhi...maine jab puchha kyu ro rahi ho to Maa boli ke beti royegi to Maa ke bhi ansoo hi niklenge na...us dinke baad se main kabhi nahi roi, main aapni Maa ko sapne me bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakti...isi liye har dam khush rahati hu, kyuki main jaanti hu meri Maa har pal mere saath hai, vo mujhe dekhti hain, mujhe khush dekhke vo bhi bahot khush hoti hain, or vo laal dairy...main usme roz apni Maa ko khat likhti hu, saari bate bataati hu, mere janm'din pe tumme mujhe koi apna nazar aaya, or isi liye maine tumse dosti bhi kar li " Saba ki ankh nam zaroor thhi ye sab kahate hue, lekin ek bhi aansoo nahii gira aankho se...labo pe muskaan thhi, lekin Piyush zaroor rone laga thha... " Or tumhare papa ? " Piyush ne ansoo ponchhte hue puchha " Papa, hain, lekin nahi hain....Papa ne mujhe sambhaala hota to aaj shaayad Maa ki kami na mahasoos hoti...papa ko to apne kaam se hi fursat nahi, unhe kabhi waqt hi nahi mila ye jaanne ka ke main kaisi hu, lekin main khush, tum fikr na karo hahaha ".... Piyush Bas Saba ko dekhe jaa raha thha....itne me 3rd period ki bell baj gai...or achaanak Piyush ne puchha " lekin tum apne janm'din pe kyu udaas thhi, halaanki tum us din ke siva roz khush nazar aai ho? " Piyush ne hairaani se puchha " Meri Maa ki death 5 Sittambar ko hu thhi " Ye kahake vo class me chali gai... or Piyush bas dekhta hi rahe gaya...vo jaan chuka thha ke 5 sittambr ko uski Maa ki maut hui thhi isi liye vo janm'din nahi manaati...or ye baat puri class jaanti thi, siva Piyush ke..isi liye kisine use wish nahi kiya thha...Saba ko pasand nahi uske janm'din pe koi use wish kare....ab to Piyush bhi sab jaan chuka thha....vo bhi class me aa gaya...Saba ka dukh jaanke vo bhi udaas sa ho gayaa thha, lekin Saba to bahot khush thhi us waqt bhii..use dekh kar Piyush bhi muskura uttha..... Aaj Piyush ke savaalo ka javaab use mil chuka thha, thhoda sukoon sa mila use aaj...or ye sab usne ghar jaake papa ko bhi bataya...uske papa bhi thhode gambheer se ho gaye thhe... " Beta, Saba ko dost kaha hai to uski dosti nibhana bhi, dost ki pahali or akhiri nishaani yahee hoti hai, bhale hi khushiyo me na shameel ho lekin gamo me ek saccha dost zaroor shirkat karta hai.." Piyush ke papa ne use bahot shaanti se ye kaha " jee papa " ye kahake Piyush room me chala gaya apne, or padhaai me lag gaya.... Din se raat or raat se din ho gaya.... To Be Continued Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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mohatarma pooja maam.....apki kahaani padhke atyant prashanta hui.....
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di ab pls jaldi jaldi kahani ka end laavo kyu ki ye sab padhke to sahi me bahut dukh ho raha hai sayad aisa kisi ne nahi socha hoga.
ho sake to di kal hi 4th part post kar dena kyu ki ab jyda intzaar nahi hota hai hume bhi padhkar ab dukh hota hai isi liye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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Aur plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz meri Id bolck mat karna fir se....varna is baar 2L ki jagah 3L lagane pad jayenge.........
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