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achhaa liKh rahi ho Pooja ..
Thanku dhaval

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wowwwww.............majja aa gaya matko, etna accha likh rahi hai tu.....bahut khoob, par naraz mat hona ki main teri story padne sabke baad aaye hoon....darasal aaj-kal office mein fursat hi nahi milti story bahut acchi lagi....bas main 5th chapter abhi nai pad paye usko phir kabhi fursat mein paduNgi aur haan main bhi mausam se sahmat hoon, ki ek hi baar sari story post kar de, kyuki intjaar karna mushkil hota hai.....

duao.n ke saath
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Didi,

Aapko yaha dekhkar sacch me bahot hi khushi ho rahihai, or koi baat nahi, jab aapko waqt mile tab tab padh liya kijiye......

or di aapne bhi kis bhondu ki baato se agree kiya hai......sacch kahu to kahaani kishto me hi padhne me maza hai.......sespanz bana rahata hai

saath dete rahiye

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wah wah kya title hain mera dil garden garden ho gaya....aur meri yahin dua hain kal holi ke din tujh par koi pakka green color daal de aur main tera wohi chehra dekhu

haan haan keh to aise rahin hai ki rahul naam daalke ehsaann kiya ho........chal fatafat 6th part post kar de.............dekh ab to di bhi meri side main haiNmeri nahin to kamse kam unki baat rakh le

grazie...
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Chirkut.......

Yahaa holi nahi manaate, yaha gulaal, rang nahi milta....badi cities me milta ho to pata nahi,lekin humare town me nahi milta......isi liye humne holi nahi kheli.........3 saal ho gaye mujhe to holi khele hue, sorry aapki ye rang me leepa mera muh dekhne ki ichha ichha hi rahe gai is baar..

Or ehsaan hi kiya hai Rahul naam rakke.....warna main to Saurav rakh rahi thhi....
or kyu kar du puri kahaani ek saath post? Sunita di to bholi hain, unhe 29 ki chaal samajh nahi aati .... aap logo ko padhte waqt nahi lagta lekin mujhe to likhte hue waqt lagta hai na.....kitni typing karni padhti hai......maine abhi tak 6th chapter tak hi typing ki hai, or vo maine post kar diya....jaise jaise typing puri hoti hai waise waise parts post kar deti hu........padhna hai to aise hi chapters me padho, warna nahi padhna ho to bhi padho...ab kahogi ke jabar'jasti hai kya...? ha hai...ab bolo kya karogi

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22nd March 2008, 07:47 PM

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Hi………
Pooja jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Ye aap kya kr rahe ho………….
Muje story bahut bahut bahuuuuuuuuuttttt achi lag rahi hai or rahul pe gussa bhi bahuuuuuuutttt aa raha hai such bool raha hu main
Chaalo apne kuch acha hi socha hoga
EHSAAS bs yaad rakhna es word ko
Or aaj ……………… kuch nahi …………. Muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha
& happy holi apko or apki puri family ko
meri or meri family ki taraf se .... enjoy it ..........{$}

Best of luck
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Hi Sahil ji,

Ek baar fir khusi hui ye jaanke ki apko kahaani pasand aa rahi hai...or Bechaare Rahul ki kya galti, uska to naam hi bhangaar hai....hahahaha......Rahul ki bajaaye Saurav hota to shayad aap gussa nahi karte....sab ye Mausam di ki pasand hai..unki pasand hi bekaar hai......hahahahahaha ...........joking yaar....Rahul ki koi galti nahi hai, or aaka gussa bhi khatm ho jayega 6th part padhke..........or kal kahaani nahi post kar saki maaf kijiye...type nahi kar saki thhi kal isi liye.....

Apko bhi Holi bahot mubaarakh ho....

Khush rahiye sadaa.....

Grazie

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23rd March 2008, 12:19 AM

waah ek kahani ki toh happy ending huyi bhagwaaan
chalo abh Piyush ki train bhi track per le aao tum

waise babz ek baat jo mujhe acchi lagi tumhari woh yeh ki tum zyada w8 nahi karwati next episode ke liye..like it



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Hi..........
Pooja ji.............
main khush hi rehta hu ....
aap btaiye kaise ho .................

aap ki story such me bahut achi hai
or haan MAUSAM DI ki pasand etni bhi buri nahi hai
pr jo koi bhi sara k kuch jyada kareeb ayega fir chaahe wo
rahul ho ya fir sourav to $ahil ko to bura lagega hi
becoz "$ahil love her damit"
or usske bina to jingi bejaan c ho jayegi
mano jine ki ichha hi kahtam ho jayegi
main na to koi writer hu or na hi shayer..
bs jindgi ne bahut kuch sikha diya or main muhfat hu
jo bhi dil me aata hai bol deta hu ,, dil me koi baat rakhna
meri adat nahi hai..
or haan jyada daant mt nikalo story etni serious hai or
apko majak ki padi hai ....
kaheen ye saba tum..............????
kya main sahi soch raha hu ..........????{$}


keep it up

enjoy the happy SunDaY

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Hi Sahil ji,

Ek baar fir khusi hui ye jaanke ki apko kahaani pasand aa rahi hai...or Bechaare Rahul ki kya galti, uska to naam hi bhangaar hai....hahahaha......Rahul ki bajaaye Saurav hota to shayad aap gussa nahi karte....sab ye Mausam di ki pasand hai..unki pasand hi bekaar hai......hahahahahaha ...........joking yaar....Rahul ki koi galti nahi hai, or aaka gussa bhi khatm ho jayega 6th part padhke..........or kal kahaani nahi post kar saki maaf kijiye...type nahi kar saki thhi kal isi liye.....

Apko bhi Holi bahot mubaarakh ho....

Khush rahiye sadaa.....

Grazie

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Angry yaar ye mere post aakhir gayab kahan go jaate hain....... - 23rd March 2008, 08:34 PM

Ho kya raha hai yahan par.....sab miljulkar mere pechhe kyun pade ho.....
mujhe bahut gussa aa raha hai.....kisi ko mere post par reply nahi karna hai to mat karoo atleast use delete to mat karo............
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haaaaaaaaaaaachaa bina kehke aapke saath aisa hota hain lagta hain SDC ka bhoot apke piche lag gaya haiN

koi naya mod nahin hain..lamha bhi aam member hi haiN....aap bina wajeh tikka tippani kyun karte rehte hain ki sab aapse kuch keh jaaye..........story enjoy kariye na nahak main ulat sulat batein karke apna waqt barbad karte hain...aur mayankji ko pareshan.....aisa chalta raha to saare L khatam aur aap down ki jagah out ho jajenge
   
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24th March 2008, 02:57 AM

Chapter 7

Sahil or Saara dono ki prem kahani ki shuruaat ho gai isi ke saath. Sahil or Sabaa ne Rahul ko shukriya kaha usne jo bhi kiya un dono ke liye... Sab bahot khush rahate thhe, Piyush bhi khush dikhta thha, ji haa sirf dikhtaa thha...khair din mahine beet'te gaye...or isi ke saath March aa gaya or saath hi ferval party ka din bhi, 3rd year ke students ki vidaai ka waqt aa gaya thha...subha 9 se dopahar 3 baje tak party chali, sabne bahot masti ki, aaj hi ka din milta hai juniors ko apne sinors ki khichaai karne ka, so sab ne sabhi 3rd year ke students pe joks banaaye...khana pina sab hua, or fir 3 baje jab jaane ka waqt hua to sabko vida kiya gaya...

" Akhil bhaai apko bahot miss karenge " Piyush ne kaha

" Main bhi tum sab ko bahot miss karunga, lekin fikr nahi yaar apna ghar to ek hi area me hai, milliya karenge" Akhil ne kaha

Sabne Akki ko or baakiyon ko bye kaha or exams ke liye best luck kaha fir sab apne apne ghar aa gaye....May bhi aa gaya..exam time...ab exam me siva padhaai ke kya hoga.kuch nahi na isi liye exam khatam kar diye maine june aate aate..or result bhi...sab pass hue achhe marks se..or chhuttiya bhi aa gai....chhuttiyo me bhi masti kaha dosto ke siva isi liye collage return maarte hain......Rahul ke papa ka transfor ho gaya thha Kota to vo waha chala gaya {Main Rahul ka roal yahi khatm karti hu }

" Oye yaar 2 din baad hum 2nd year me honge...dhinn chaak dhin chaak...main to sab ki reging lunga, maje karenge yaar " Sahil ne phone pe Piyush se kaha

" Kar lena, lekin raat ke 2 baje mujhe kyu jagaa raha hai, sone de yaar " Piyush ne ankhe malte hue kaha fir phone rakh diya...

" Sala khadoos...." Sahil ne bhi phone rakh diya

2 din baad collage me :

Sahil or Piyush apni apni bick pe collage pahonch gaye, or Saara humesha ki tarha bhaiya ke saath aane waali thhi

" Hi, chal waha baitthte hain " Sahil ne Piyush se kaha

" Jaise hi koi fresher dikhe, pakad lena...." Piyush ne kaha

5 min baad :

"Oye dekh ek ladki jaa rahi hai, shaayad fresher ho, chal aaja " Sahil ne ishaara karte hue kaha

" Excuse us " Piyush ne pichhe se kaha, or ladki ne turn mara......or kya kahu dono ki ankhe ladki pe jam gai....dekhte hi rahe gaye use...

" Saba" Piyush ne kaha

" Goshhh tum dono, mujhe to yakeen nahi ho raha ke tum dono mujhe yahi miloge. Maine to socha tha ke ab maine tum logo ko kabhi mil hi nahi sakungi..main bahot khush hu tumhe fir se dekhke" Saba ne bahot khush hote hue kaha

Jee Saba wapas aa gai...wahi Saba, or usi roop me...ab to maano kayaamat lagti thhi vo..wahi hansmukh chehara...Lekin ek aadat nahi gai..chwing'gum ki...ufff

" Lekin tum sydeny se waapas kab aai or tumne to kaha thha ke tum nahi aaogi " Piyush ne bahot khush hote hue puchha

" Main chhuttiyo me aai, actually mera waha man nahi lagta thha, waha koi dost nahi koi bolnne wala nahi..mere cousens thhe to kisiki shaadi ho gai or koi nokri ke sil-sile me baahar chala gaya..isi liye akeli ho gai thhi to waapas aa gai..or yahi pe 2nd year me admission le liya " Saba ne bataya

Chaliye Saba ki bhi entry ho gai, Sahil Piyush Saba fir se ek baar saath thhe...Saara ko bhi ye baat pata chal gai vo bhi bahot khush hui ye sunke...chaaro ne aaj ka din celebrate kiya...raging ke chakkar me unhe Saba mil gai....hahaha..

" Dadddddddd, dad dad dad dad....give me a five.." Piyush bahot khush thha, isi khushi ke saath papa se mila ghar aake

" Yeh....tum bahot khush ho, kyu? " Papa ne puchha

" Guess what happened today " Piyush ne bahot x'aited hoke kaha

" What ? " Papa ne puchha

" Dad Saba came back...i feel like i m on top of the world....yuhuuuuuu " Piyush uchhalta fir raha thha

" Matlab vo sach me wapas aa gai hai " Papa ne bhi gaur kiya

" To kya main joke maar raha hu? " Piyush ne kaha

" Maine kaha thha na ke vo aayegi " Papa ne kaha

" Yes dad......love you dad...." Piyush ne papa ke gale lagte hue kaha...
Piyush fir wahi purana wala Piyush ban gaya thha, bas wahi Saba ke baare me sochta rahata thha....bahot khush thha...

1 Mahine baad collage me :

" Piyush, kya kar raha hai yaha " Sahil ne Piyush ke paas baitthte hue puchha

" Kuch nahi bas aise hi time pass kar raha hu, yaar Saba kyu nahi aai " Piyush ne kaha

" Pata nahi yaar, waise ek baat puchhu ? " Sahil serious thha

" Haa puchh na " Piyush ne kaha

" Dekh ek din vo thha jab tune Saba se pyaar ka izhaar is liye nahi kiya thha kyuki vo door jaa rahi thhi kabhi naa aane ke liye, lekin ab to vo waapas bhi aa gai hai, ab to tu usse kahega na ke tu usse pyaar karta hai " Sahil ne kaha

" Pata nahi " Piyush ne javaab diya

" Kya, abe kya pata nahi, dekh tu Saba se sab kahe raha hai bas " Sahil ne gusse me kaha

" Yaar, achha mauka dekhke kahunga " Piyush ne kaha

" Haa ye hui na baat, chalo isi baat pe Eco. ki class attend kar li jaaye...." Sahil khush hote hue bola...or dono hans pare...

Piyush thhoda dar raha thha, ke kahi Saba bura na maan jaue, kahi usne mana kar diya to, ya fir uska....kahi vo uski dosti bhi na kho de....isi liye vo Saba se kuch nahi kahe sakaa...Agast ka mahina thha...collage me 15 agast ke paavan awsar par program tha...chaaro ne programme me saath jaana taye kiya...Saba ka ghar sabse last me aata hai to Sahil Piyush or Saara use pick karne uske ghar pahonch jaate hain.

" Ting tong " Door bell baji.Saba ke ghar ki, ek naukar ne gate khola

" Saba kaha kaha hai " Saara ne puchha

"Vo apne room me hain " Naukar ne javaab diya

" Use kaho ke Piyush Sahil or Saara aaye hain " Piyush ne kaha, or naukar ne Saba ko inform kiya Saba ne sab ko apne room me bulaya

" Wow..what a big hous man...." Sahil ne makaan me idhar udhar dekhte hue kaha

" Saba ka room kaha hai " Piyush ne puchha

" Upar jaake left me 2nd room madam ka hai " Naukar ne bataya, or teeno uske room ki or badh chale...

" Come in guys " Saba ne kaha

" Hi, tu taiyaar nahi hui, are yaar aaj 15 agast hai teri shaadi nahi jo itna waqt laga rahi hai..get fast yaar " Saara ne kaha

" Oh please, tum log baittho main abhi aati hu " Saba ye kahake bathroom me chali gai...

" Yaar ye Ambaani ki family se belong rakhti hai kya, kya alishaan makaan kya kamra hai " Sahil ne kaha

Piyush idhar udhar dekh raha thha, bas room me ghumne laga tabhi Saba ki study table ki or badha...waha divaar pe bahot saari pic's thhi, uski mammy ki uski..or uski school time ki....tabhi table pe use kuch dairies nazar aai....unme se ek wahi laal dairy thhi jiske saath Piyush use aksar school me dekhta thha..usne vo dairy utthhai or uske panne palatne laga...uska use padhne ka koi iraada nahi thha, lekin uski nazar ek rangeen panne pe gai....

" Maa, aaaj apki bahot yaad aa rahi hai...kaash aap mere paas hoti.N to main aapse bahot baate karti...Maa mujhe Sydeny nahi janaa. Mujhe yahii rahana hai apne ghar me jaha aap ki yaade hain...lekin papa ka fesla hai ke main jaau...ek tarha se thheek bhi hai, waha jaaungi kamse kam koi pyaar karne wala to hoga..mama honge mami bhaiya jo sab mujhse pyaar karte hain...lekin...uska kya jisse main pyaar karti hu..."

Piyush ne yahi padhna rok diya, vo aage nahi padhna chaahta thha,

"Pyaar? Saba kisise pyaar karti thhi, nahi ye nahi ho sakta..." Piyush man hi man ro para..lekin usne aage padhna thhik samjha

" Haa Maa, tumhaare baad ek shaqs aisa mila jo mujhe samajhta hai, Maa vo tumhari hi tarha mere dukh ko bina kahe jaan jataa hai..Maa main Piyush ke bina kaise rahungi waha...maine to abhi tak use ye bhi nahi bataya ke main usse pyaar karti hu, shaayad ab kahe bhi nahi sakungi....kya faydaa hoga, main to chali jaaungi, fir jaate jaate use dukhi kyu karke jaau...lekin Maa tum kahati thhi na, ke jisse insaan dil se chaahta hai use vo zaroor milta hai..isi bharose jaa rahi hu ke main ek din fir laut kar aaungi....Love u Maa. I miss you. "

Piyush ke chehare pe maano zindagi ne khushiya chhod di ho...use yakeen hi nahi hua ke Saba bhi use usi waqt se pyaar karti aa rahi hai jabse vo pyaar kar raha hai...aaj uski zindagi ne use khushiya ko nazrana dediya...jise lena abhi baaki thha...

" Hey, tum meri dairy padh rahe ho, bad haa kisiki dairy padhna " Saba ne dairy haath se chhinte hue kaha

" Saba, tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho " Piyush ne Saba ko dekhte hue kaha
Saba samajh chuki thhi ke Piyush ne uska likha padh liya hai, ab chhupaane se koi fayda nahi....

" Piyush, main....Haa, mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai vo din...jab tumne pahali baar mujhe apna hone ka ehsaas karaya thha, 5 sittambar...main to usi din se tumnse pyaar karne lagi thhi...lekin kabhi kahe nahi saki...or jab kahana chaaha to mere tumse door jaane ka waqt aa gaya thha..." Saba ne chhuki nazro se javaab diya

" Saba, main kitna tadpa hu tumhare jaane ke baad, isi aas pe raha itne saal ke tum wapas aaogi...jab tum waapas aai to aisa laga mujhe zindagi mil gai ho...main bhi tumse bahot pyaar karta hu..bahot " Piyush ne kaha

" Piyush main wapas sirf tumhare liye aai hu...sirf tumhare liye " Saba ye kahake Piyush ke seene se lag gai...

Sahil or Saara sab sun rahe thhe. dono khush thhe ye jaanke ke Piyush or Saba mil gaye hain....

" Akhir mere yaar ko uska pyaar mil hi gaya " Sahil ne dono ke paas aake kaha...

" Are ye madhur milan baad me kar lena...programme shuru ho gaya hoga....chalo jaldi " Saara ne ghadi dekhte hue kaha...or chaaro nikal gaye... kareeb 1 baje programme khatam hone ke baad Saara ko Sahil ne uske ghar tak chhoda or Saba Piyush ke saath nikal gai lekin Piyush ke ghar.

" Hi mum...mamma ye Saba hai...aapko bataya thha na vo Saba " Piyush ne ghar me entry ki or mamma ko Saba se milvaya..

" Haa yaad hai mujhe..aao andar aao...baittho.....main Piyush ke papa ko bulaati hu " Piyush ki mamma ne kaha

" Hmmm to tum ho Saba " Piyush ke papa bhi aa gaye

" Namaste uncle " Saba ne kaha

" Baittho beta...tumhare baare me Piyush ne bahot bataya hai...bahot khushi hui ke tum humare ghar aai.." Piyush ke papa ne Saba ko lunch ke liye kaha...sab ne lunch ek saath kiya...or fir sabne bahot baate ki kareeb 1,2 ghante tak...fir...SAba ke jaane waqt hua

" Dad main Saba ko uske ghar tak chhodke aau " Piyush ne puchha

" Haa haa jaao kyu nahi " Papa ne ijaazat dedi...or dono nikal gaye...

Saba ke ghar ke mane gate pe:

" Lo bhai, tumhara ghar aa gaya..." Piyush ne bick rokte hue kaha

" Thanks " Saba ne kaha or andar jaale lagi...

" Saba " Piyush ne pichhe se roka

" Haa kaho " Saba ne waapas aate hue puchha

" Do you really love me ? " Bada ajeeb saval Piyush ka

" Kyu, yakeen nahi hai " Saba ne muskurate hue kaha

" Tumpar to yakeen hai, lekin kismat par nahi...kabhi milaati hai kabhi juda kar deti hai...ab to kabhi judaa nahi hogi na mujhse " Piyush ne kaha

" Ab to maut hi juda karegi " Saba ne kaha

" Hey, fir kabhi marne ki baat mat karna..." Piyush ke maathhe pe shikand thhi

" Hahaha, nahi kahungi..." Saba ne hanste hue kaha

" Waise bhi tumse pahale main hi upar jaaunga, or upar jaake bhagvaan se kahunga ke ab tumhe bhi bula le, mujhe nahi achha lagta ke meri jaan mere bina rahe....hahahahaha" Piyush ne mazaak karte hue kaha

" Achha...." Saba ne use pinch karte hue kaha

" Achha ab main jaati hu " Saba ne kaha

" Hey, raatko milogi naa" Piyush ne uska haath pakadte hue puchha

" Raat ko,,?" Saba ne puchha

" Abe sapne me chirkut...ya koi or aane wala hai...dekho aisa ho to bata dena fir main bhi kisi or ko dhundhu sapne me jaane ke liye " Piyush ne fir use chidhaate hue kaha

" Achha, jaao fir ab to kisi or ko hi dhundho..main to jaa rahi hu..." Saba chidhte hue chali gai

" Oye......mazaak thha" Piyush ne aawaaz lagate hue kaha

" Ab jaao tummmmm " Saba ne door se kaha....or fir Saba ke andar jaane ke baad Piyush bhi chala gaya.....

To Be Continoued

Grazie

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waah ek kahani ki toh happy ending huyi bhagwaaan
chalo abh Piyush ki train bhi track per le aao tum

waise babz ek baat jo mujhe acchi lagi tumhari woh yeh ki tum zyada w8 nahi karwati next episode ke liye..like it



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yaar abhi kaha, abhi to l ove shuru hua hai..aage aage dekho hota hai kya....and thanks for ur compliment....

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Hi..........
Pooja ji.............
main khush hi rehta hu ....
aap btaiye kaise ho .................

aap ki story such me bahut achi hai
or haan MAUSAM DI ki pasand etni bhi buri nahi hai
pr jo koi bhi sara k kuch jyada kareeb ayega fir chaahe wo
rahul ho ya fir sourav to $ahil ko to bura lagega hi
becoz "$ahil love her damit"
or usske bina to jingi bejaan c ho jayegi
mano jine ki ichha hi kahtam ho jayegi
main na to koi writer hu or na hi shayer..
bs jindgi ne bahut kuch sikha diya or main muhfat hu
jo bhi dil me aata hai bol deta hu ,, dil me koi baat rakhna
meri adat nahi hai..
or haan jyada daant mt nikalo story etni serious hai or
apko majak ki padi hai ....
kaheen ye saba tum..............????
kya main sahi soch raha hu ..........????{$}


keep it up

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i m perfact yaar..and goshh u got the point...and u cought my character.....great dude...waise u r right..Saba is as funny as i m.....but must say that i m less noughty then her yaar...hahaha
Saba ka character mujhe sabse jyada pasand hai is kahaani me.kyuki vo meri jaisi hai..jab ye kahaani shuru ki thhi tab aisa hi ek roall dhundh rahi thhi, khud ko dekha to khud hi ko waha rakh diya .....or sacchi kahu chwing'gum ko add maine apni hi wajha se kiya...main khud bahot pasand karti hu chwing'gum......ya really.....waise is kahaani me ek or roall hai mera....vo nahi bataaungi..is kahani me 2 charachter aise hain jo hakikat se waasta rakhte hain........koi banaavat nahi.....

or kya yaar hansna mana thhode hi hai...in Saba's style...." Oye, Hansne pe ban hai kya "....vo kya hai na kahaani me twiest aane wala hai bahot jald......to end aate aate aap sabke aansoo na nikal aaye to bata dena.....aage rona hai na isi liye abhi hansa rahi hu.....and i enjoyed my sunday with chhola bhatura........hihihihihhihihi

u enjoy urself.....and keep reading dear.....

take care

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mujhe to bilkul samajh nahi aa raha hai....pata nai ye ho kya raha hai.......????
Kahaani thoda bor kar rahi hai....pata nai ab aage kaun sa twist aayega...saba ke dad usko ghar main band kar denge kyunki vo to hain he khadushh naa.....
uske baad fir madam kahanni ko aage kaise badhaati hain ye thoda suspense jarorr hai.....
Kahaani ke 6th and 7th part ko padhkar laga ki madam dil se nahi likh rahi hain....bas jaldi se ise end karna chahti hai......Dekho next part main kya hota hai....
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Hi,

i m perfact yaar..and goshh u got the point...and u cought my character.....great dude...waise u r right..Saba is as funny as i m.....but must say that i m less noughty then her yaar...hahaha
Saba ka character mujhe sabse jyada pasand hai is kahaani me.kyuki vo meri jaisi hai..jab ye kahaani shuru ki thhi tab aisa hi ek roall dhundh rahi thhi, khud ko dekha to khud hi ko waha rakh diya .....or sacchi kahu chwing'gum ko add maine apni hi wajha se kiya...main khud bahot pasand karti hu chwing'gum......ya really.....waise is kahaani me ek or roall hai mera....vo nahi bataaungi..is kahani me 2 charachter aise hain jo hakikat se waasta rakhte hain........koi banaavat nahi.....

or kya yaar hansna mana thhode hi hai...in Saba's style...." Oye, Hansne pe ban hai kya "....vo kya hai na kahaani me twiest aane wala hai bahot jald......to end aate aate aap sabke aansoo na nikal aaye to bata dena.....aage rona hai na isi liye abhi hansa rahi hu.....and i enjoyed my sunday with chhola bhatura........hihihihihhihihi

u enjoy urself.....and keep reading dear.....

take care

grazie

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hey pooja.dz z ur new fan 4rm new zealand .aap ki khahani bari achi hai ber ber isse paarne ko dil chahat hai maloom nahi kyun .ur stry hs sme different kina feelin & expression with some emotion & courage.itz jst 1 in da million i relllllyyyyyy loved it sis . du write some more intersting strz lyk dz bst wshz
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mazaa agaya Piyush ko Sabaa or Sahil ko Saaraa mil gayi
do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

acche ja rahee ho

taek caer


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Chirkut.......

Yahaa holi nahi manaate, yaha gulaal, rang nahi milta....badi cities me milta ho to pata nahi,lekin humare town me nahi milta......isi liye humne holi nahi kheli.........3 saal ho gaye mujhe to holi khele hue, sorry aapki ye rang me leepa mera muh dekhne ki ichha ichha hi rahe gai is baar..

Or ehsaan hi kiya hai Rahul naam rakke.....warna main to Saurav rakh rahi thhi....
or kyu kar du puri kahaani ek saath post? Sunita di to bholi hain, unhe 29 ki chaal samajh nahi aati .... aap logo ko padhte waqt nahi lagta lekin mujhe to likhte hue waqt lagta hai na.....kitni typing karni padhti hai......maine abhi tak 6th chapter tak hi typing ki hai, or vo maine post kar diya....jaise jaise typing puri hoti hai waise waise parts post kar deti hu........padhna hai to aise hi chapters me padho, warna nahi padhna ho to bhi padho...ab kahogi ke jabar'jasti hai kya...? ha hai...ab bolo kya karogi

Grazie

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are koi baat nahin.......kabhi aur din iccha puri kar lenge......par karenge zaroor

eee koi ehsaan nahin kiya.......ab tu dekh tune di ko bholi aur mujhe... abhi teri kahani khatam hone de fir main ek short story likhti hoon jiska main character ka naam hoga pooja....aur woh gharkaam main bilkul nikammi hogi..... fir ayega mazaa..........bas teri kahani khatam ho jayee....fir meri shuru...............


haaaan.chal fatafat agla part post kar de........


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apko bahut badi khushfehmi hai apne baare me madam ji....................
k aap perfect ho .........ok mere life ka exprience to ye kehta hai k
es duniya me koi bhi perfect nahi hai
kabhi akele me, tanhai me baith kr khud k baare me sochna k wakeyi me
aap perfect ho ........... try it aapko eska jawab khud b khud mil jayega ok

or haann

Hi......

kya haal hai apka pooja ji....
main to puchna hi bhool giya

or sorry main kal zra busy tha esliye reply nahi kr paya baki
bahut acha laga k apne chaaro ka pyar milwa diya
pr abhi to unke pyar ki shuruaat hai ..... age dekhenge
kya hota hai...

or madam jiii.......................................... ye jo apne sunday enjoy kiya na with chhola bhatura (ye eisye nahi bolte ya to chhole bhature or ya fir channa bhatura bolte hai ok plz cought it ) or choole bhature bina lassi k kya enjoy kiya hoga apne aisa kijiega agle baar chhole bhature k saath lassi liejiga malai mar k or fir enjoy kiejiega ok {$}

Best of luck

keep writing

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Hi,

i m perfact yaar..and goshh u got the point...and u cought my character.....great dude...waise u r right..Saba is as funny as i m.....but must say that i m less noughty then her yaar...hahaha
Saba ka character mujhe sabse jyada pasand hai is kahaani me.kyuki vo meri jaisi hai..jab ye kahaani shuru ki thhi tab aisa hi ek roall dhundh rahi thhi, khud ko dekha to khud hi ko waha rakh diya .....or sacchi kahu chwing'gum ko add maine apni hi wajha se kiya...main khud bahot pasand karti hu chwing'gum......ya really.....waise is kahaani me ek or roall hai mera....vo nahi bataaungi..is kahani me 2 charachter aise hain jo hakikat se waasta rakhte hain........koi banaavat nahi.....

or kya yaar hansna mana thhode hi hai...in Saba's style...." Oye, Hansne pe ban hai kya "....vo kya hai na kahaani me twiest aane wala hai bahot jald......to end aate aate aap sabke aansoo na nikal aaye to bata dena.....aage rona hai na isi liye abhi hansa rahi hu.....and i enjoyed my sunday with chhola bhatura........hihihihihhihihi

u enjoy urself.....and keep reading dear.....

take care

grazie

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Hahahaha.........

ye to diet expert nikle....ek bi mauka nahi chhodte bolne ka.....itna bada lecture de diya hai.......
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apko bahut badi khushfehmi hai apne baare me madam ji....................
k aap perfect ho .........ok mere life ka exprience to ye kehta hai k
es duniya me koi bhi perfect nahi hai
kabhi akele me, tanhai me baith kr khud k baare me sochna k wakeyi me
aap perfect ho ........... try it aapko eska jawab khud b khud mil jayega ok

or haann

Hi......

kya haal hai apka pooja ji....
main to puchna hi bhool giya

or sorry main kal zra busy tha esliye reply nahi kr paya baki
bahut acha laga k apne chaaro ka pyar milwa diya
pr abhi to unke pyar ki shuruaat hai ..... age dekhenge
kya hota hai...

or madam jiii.......................................... ye jo apne sunday enjoy kiya na with chhola bhatura (ye eisye nahi bolte ya to chhole bhature or ya fir channa bhatura bolte hai ok plz cought it ) or choole bhature bina lassi k kya enjoy kiya hoga apne aisa kijiega agle baar chhole bhature k saath lassi liejiga malai mar k or fir enjoy kiejiega ok {$}

Best of luck

keep writing

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hi di me apko reply nahi kar paya iske liye sorry kyu ki mera nett band ho gaya tha aur work bhi tha to apko reply nahi kar paya magar di mene aaj apke dono hi part padhe hai
per di ab kya hoga aage saba bhi vapas aa gayi hai aur sara sahil se pyar karne lagi aur sahil sara se aur saba piyush se aur piyush saba se kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai di akhish iska end kya hai sayad bahut hi dukh bhara end ho ga ya to saba ki shadi kahi aur ho jayega ya fir piyush ki vo dono bahut pyar karte hai ek dusre se to di pata nahi chal raha hai ki aage kya hoga kher jo bhi ho di app end jaldi se jaldi karna aur haan khash karke iska end 1 ya 2 ya 3 april ko mat karna thik hai.
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Chapter 8

Piyush ko Saba mili to maano ek musaafir ko manziil ka raasta mil gaya ho, ab sirf use manziil pe dastak dena baaki rahe gaya...Saba ko apna banana or use tamaam khushiya or be'panaah muhabbat dena hi Piyush ki zindagi ke eham kaamo me se ek ban gaya thha....

Charo dost itne khush nazar aate, saath rahate to masti na ho, ho hi nahi sakta thha.....inhi lamho ke chalte agast beet gaya or sitamber shuru ho gaya...or ek baar fir Piyush ko ek kaam karna thha...5 sittambar aane wala thha....or Saba ka janam'din bhi....Piyush ko maluum thha ke Saba humesha ki tarha is baar bhi apna janm'din nahi manaayegi, or fir wahi udaasi uske chehare pe dekhne ko mil sakti hai jo Piyush ko barso pahale dikhi thhi...Piyush to Saba ke chahare pe pareshani ki lahar kar bardaasht nahi kar sakta thha...usne taye kiya ke is baar se Saba apna janm'din manayegi....lekin iske liye use madad ki zaruurat thhi....

Piyush ke ghar pe 2 sittambar ki shaam :

" Yaar Sahil, hume kuch to karna hi hai...lekin kya....samajh nahi aa raha..Saba apni or se to kabhi ijaazat nahi degi...gussa or ho jayegi vo " Piyush pareshan thha

" Hmmmm, idea....plan banate hain..party tumhare ghar pe dete hain...tumhare mammy papa se vo mil bhi chuki hai, to agar hum use ye kahe ki tumhare mammy papa ne hum sab ko apne ghar bulaya hai to vo mana nahi karegi...." Sahil ne idea diya

" Yeah, you are right...lekin hume mamma papa se baat karni hogi pahale...." Piyush ne agree kiya

" Ok, to fir abhi sab decide karte hain..chal " Sahil ne kaha, or dono niche aa gaye Piyush ke papa or mammy wahi pe thhe

" Dad, apse ek baat puchhni thhi " Piyush ne soffe pe baitthte hue kaha

" Ha kaho " Papa ne kaha, or Piyush ne unko sab bataya, Piyush ke papa ye baat pahale se jaante thhe ke Saba apna B'day nahi manaati, vo bhi chaahte the ke Saba khush rahe us din isi liye uske papa ne ka kahe di...party ka arrangement Sahil Piyush or Piyush ke papa ne milke karna taye kiya....Saara ko bhi bata diya gaya sab...Party me Piyush, uske mamma papa, Sahil or Saara shaamil thhe....

3 sittamber ko collage ki canteen me :

" Saba parso mere mammy papa ne tum sab ko mere ghar bulaya hai " Piyush ne kaha

" Parso....sorry Piyush main nahi aa sakungi..." Saba ne excues kiya

" Oh please Saba, main mammy papa ko kahe chuka hu ke tum aa rahi ho, please yaar aisa mat karna warna meri immage kharab ho jayegi please please..." Piyush ne request ki

" Hmm ok done...kab aana hai?" Saba ne ha kahe diya

" Shaam ko thhik 7 baje main tumhe lene aaunga ok " Piyush ne time bataya

" Saara tumhe to koi problem nahi hogi naa shaam ko aane me " Piyush ne Saara se puchha

" Nahi, main bhaiya mujhe chhod jayenge..fir lene bhi aa jayenge " Saara ne kaha

" Are aisa karo tum bhaiya ko bhi le aana, vo bhi sab se mil lenge ok " Piyush ne kaha

" Lekin, tumhare ghar, kuch hai kya ghar me koi party ya kuch ? " Saba ne puchha Piyush se

" Nahi nahi, vo kya hai ke papa bahot dino se tum sab se ek saath milne ka soch rahe thhe, to papa parso free hain isi liye papa ne parso ka din decide kiya...bas or to kuch nahi, or khana bhi wahi hai sab ka ok...." Piyush ne bataya

" Ok fine..hum sab aa jayenge " Saba ne kaha.....Fir class ka time ho gaya isi liye sab chale gaye...or fir ghar jaane ka bhi...Piyush ne ghar jaake khana khaya or room me chala gaya...shaayad sone ke liiye.....shaam ho gai tab niche aaya, papa bhi aa chuke thhe...usne papa ko bataya jo baate hui Saba se sab...fir aise hi raat ho gai or firr din bhi nikal aaya ek naya savera leke....

4 sittambar Shaam ko Saba ke ghar pe:

" Saba, ye tumhare liye " Piyush ne ek packet Saba ko diya, Saba ne use khola or..

" Wow....itni pyaari dress...mere liye " Saba ne puchha

" Nahi tumhari padhosi ke liye hai...oh comeon honey...tumko di hai to tumhare liye hi hai na...or tum kal yahi pahanogi " Piyush Saba ke liye white suite laya thha bahot hi sundar....

" Thanku....achha kitne ka hoga...mujhe bata dena paise dedungi ok " Saba ne suite dekhte hue kaha

" Ek thhappad marunga, jaanta hu bahot paise hian tumhare paas...lekin unhe apne hi paas rakho to achha hoga...meri hasiyat itni o hai ke main tumhe ek dress de saku " Piyush ne gusse me kaha

" Oh jaani sorry if i hurt u....ok fine...main kal yahi pahanungi " Saba ne Piyush ko hug karte hue kaha

" ok main chalta hu ab, kal shaam thheek 7 baje taiyaar rahana ok...apna khayal rakhna, bye love u " Piyush ne kaha or chala gaye....

5 sittambar bhi aa gaya...aaj Sahil or Piyush collage nahi aaye...kaaran Saara ko to maluum thha lekin Saba ko nahi.usne puchha to Saara ne bahaana bana diya...Sahil or Piyush dono shaam ki party ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe....poore saal Saba bahot khush rahati, lekin 5 sittambar aate aate dukhi ho jaati ye soch soch ke ki uske janm'din ne uski Maa ko usse door kar diya...use 5 sittamabar ko kabhi khush nahi dekha kisine....deere deere waqt guzra...subha se dopahar or dopahar se shaam ho gai....6 baj gaye thh...Saara apne bhaiya ke saath 6 baje hi Piyush ke ghar pahonch gai thhi, unka kaam me haath bataane ke liye...Piyush ki mammy or Saara dinner ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe or Piyush, Piyush ke papa, Sahil, or Saara ke bhaiya ghar ko dacoration me lage thhe....cake bhi taiyaar thha...bas Saba ke aane ki der thhi....6.45 pe Piyush Saba ko pick karne uske ghar ke liye nikal diya...or uske ghar pahonch gaya...

Saba bilkul ready thhi, Piyush ke aane ka na jaane kaise pata chala use, Piyush ke door bell bajane se pahale hi usne gate khol diya

'' SITAM DDAANE KO ADAAYE.N KAM THHI.N JO AAJ KAYAMAT SE MILA DIYA ''

'' Tum bahot pyaari lag rahi ho is dress me " Piyush ne gate pe khade hue Saba se sher ke saath kaha

" Thanku...ab chale " Saba ne kaha

" Ya sure " Or dono nikal diye....

Ghar pahonche to Saba ke gate open karte hi :

"Happy bairth day to you...." Sab waha thhe, sab Saba ko wish kar rahe thhe....Saba to ye dekh kar dang rahe gai, uske ankho se ek baar fir wahi saahil-e-ashq bahane lage...or vo waha se waapas lautne lagi....

" Main dekhta hu use..wait " Piyush ne ghar me maujood logo se kaha...sab jaante thhe ke aisa hi kuch hoga...lekin ye bhi jaante thhe ke Piyush Saba ko sambhaal lega isi liye kisine jyada fikr nahi ki...

" Saba " Piyush ne pichhe se Saba ka haath pakadke use roka

" Piyush tumne cheat kiya mere saath, dhokha diya mere wishwaas ko " Saba ne rote hue kaha

" Kya ? maine cheat kiya " Piyush ne puchha

" Haa tumne, tumhe pata hai main apna b’day nahi manaati, mujhe dard hota hai jab koi mujhe wish karta hai to...yun lagta hai ke koi meri Maa ki maut pe jashn mana raha ho " Saba ki ankho se lagataar ansoo bahe rahe thhe

" Ok, fine, maine cheat kiya...bilkul dhokha diya tumhe...agar aajke din tumhe khushi dena dhokha hai to ha maine kiya hai.. koi sazaa dena chaahti ho..dedo..lekin ye mat bhoolo ke tum apne is bartaav se apni Maa ki atma ko kitna dukh deti hogi...tumhi ne kaha thha na ke tum apni Maa ko mehasoos karti ho apne aas’paas, vo bahot khush hongi ye dekh kar ke unki beti aaj ke din khud ko dukho ke andhere me jhhonk deti hai....tum kya sochti ho, tumhare janm’din na manane se tumhari Maa khush hoti hongi...Maa kabhi nahi chaahti ke uske saath uske baccho ki khushiya bhi chali jaaye...tum pure saal khush raheti ho aar aajke din itna dukhi udaas rahe kar poore saal ka badla nikaal leti ho...jaao jaha jaana hai jaao...main kon hota hu tumhe rokne waala...maine bas itna chaaha thha ke jis tarha tum zindagi ka har din jeeti ho usi tarha aajka din bhi jiiyo...main to sirf tumhe khushi dena chaahta thha...mujhe kya pata thha yahi baat tumhare dukh ka kaaran ban jayegi..." Piyush ki ye baate Saba se

" I m sorry Piyush, mujhe maaf kardo " Ye kahate hue Saba Piyush ke gale lag gai...

" Andar chalogi na...hmmm " Piyush ne puchha, Saba ne haa me sir hilaya..or vo dono andar chale gaye....chaliye Saba ko wahaa paa kar sabhi khush hue...Saba ne cake kaata...or fir sabne use gift diye...aajke din Saba ke chahare pe muskaan dekhkar Piyush bahot khush thha...

" Mere hote hue mera baccha khud ko akela kaise mahsoos kar sakta hai...hmmm " Piyush ki mamma ne Saba ke paas jaake kaha

" Beti main tumhaari Maa to nahi, lekin Maa jaisi to hu naa....kabhi bhi Maa ki yaad aaye mere paas aa jaana " Mamma ne use gale lagate hue kaha

" Cheen hi liya na tumne meri Maa ko " Piyush ne mazaak me kaha...or sab hans pare...fir kuch der baad sabne khana khaaya....raat 10 baje party khatm hui...or sab apne apne ghar jaane ko taiyaar thhe...sabne ek dusre ko bye kaha or chale gaye...Saba ko chhodne Piyush gaya...

Saba ke ghar :

"Saba i promise, main tumhe zindagi me kabhi udaas nahi hone dunga..." Piyush ne bahot masoomiyat se kaha, Saba bas muskura ke rahe gai..or kuch der baad andar chali gai...

To be continoued

Grazie

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Piyush ko Saba mili to maano ek musaafir ko manziil ka raasta mil gaya ho, ab sirf use manziil pe dastak dena baaki rahe gaya...Saba ko apna banana or use tamaam khushiya or be'panaah muhabbat dena hi Piyush ki zindagi ke eham kaamo me se ek ban gaya thha....

Charo dost itne khush nazar aate, saath rahate to masti na ho, ho hi nahi sakta thha.....inhi lamho ke chalte agast beet gaya or sitamber shuru ho gaya...or ek baar fir Piyush ko ek kaam karna thha...5 sittambar aane wala thha....or Saba ka janam'din bhi....Piyush ko maluum thha ke Saba humesha ki tarha is baar bhi apna janm'din nahi manaayegi, or fir wahi udaasi uske chehare pe dekhne ko mil sakti hai jo Piyush ko barso pahale dikhi thhi...Piyush to Saba ke chahare pe pareshani ki lahar kar bardaasht nahi kar sakta thha...usne taye kiya ke is baar se Saba apna janm'din manayegi....lekin iske liye use madad ki zaruurat thhi....

Piyush ke ghar pe 2 sittambar ki shaam :

" Yaar Sahil, hume kuch to karna hi hai...lekin kya....samajh nahi aa raha..Saba apni or se to kabhi ijaazat nahi degi...gussa or ho jayegi vo " Piyush pareshan thha

" Hmmmm, idea....plan banate hain..party tumhare ghar pe dete hain...tumhare mammy papa se vo mil bhi chuki hai, to agar hum use ye kahe ki tumhare mammy papa ne hum sab ko apne ghar bulaya hai to vo mana nahi karegi...." Sahil ne idea diya

" Yeah, you are right...lekin hume mamma papa se baat karni hogi pahale...." Piyush ne agree kiya

" Ok, to fir abhi sab decide karte hain..chal " Sahil ne kaha, or dono niche aa gaye Piyush ke papa or mammy wahi pe thhe

" Dad, apse ek baat puchhni thhi " Piyush ne soffe pe baitthte hue kaha

" Ha kaho " Papa ne kaha, or Piyush ne unko sab bataya, Piyush ke papa ye baat pahale se jaante thhe ke Saba apna B'day nahi manaati, vo bhi chaahte the ke Saba khush rahe us din isi liye uske papa ne ka kahe di...party ka arrangement Sahil Piyush or Piyush ke papa ne milke karna taye kiya....Saara ko bhi bata diya gaya sab...Party me Piyush, uske mamma papa, Sahil or Saara shaamil thhe....

3 sittamber ko collage ki canteen me :

" Saba parso mere mammy papa ne tum sab ko mere ghar bulaya hai " Piyush ne kaha

" Parso....sorry Piyush main nahi aa sakungi..." Saba ne excues kiya

" Oh please Saba, main mammy papa ko kahe chuka hu ke tum aa rahi ho, please yaar aisa mat karna warna meri immage kharab ho jayegi please please..." Piyush ne request ki

" Hmm ok done...kab aana hai?" Saba ne ha kahe diya

" Shaam ko thhik 7 baje main tumhe lene aaunga ok " Piyush ne time bataya

" Saara tumhe to koi problem nahi hogi naa shaam ko aane me " Piyush ne Saara se puchha

" Nahi, main bhaiya mujhe chhod jayenge..fir lene bhi aa jayenge " Saara ne kaha

" Are aisa karo tum bhaiya ko bhi le aana, vo bhi sab se mil lenge ok " Piyush ne kaha

" Lekin, tumhare ghar, kuch hai kya ghar me koi party ya kuch ? " Saba ne puchha Piyush se

" Nahi nahi, vo kya hai ke papa bahot dino se tum sab se ek saath milne ka soch rahe thhe, to papa parso free hain isi liye papa ne parso ka din decide kiya...bas or to kuch nahi, or khana bhi wahi hai sab ka ok...." Piyush ne bataya

" Ok fine..hum sab aa jayenge " Saba ne kaha.....Fir class ka time ho gaya isi liye sab chale gaye...or fir ghar jaane ka bhi...Piyush ne ghar jaake khana khaya or room me chala gaya...shaayad sone ke liiye.....shaam ho gai tab niche aaya, papa bhi aa chuke thhe...usne papa ko bataya jo baate hui Saba se sab...fir aise hi raat ho gai or firr din bhi nikal aaya ek naya savera leke....

4 sittambar Shaam ko Saba ke ghar pe:

" Saba, ye tumhare liye " Piyush ne ek packet Saba ko diya, Saba ne use khola or..

" Wow....itni pyaari dress...mere liye " Saba ne puchha

" Nahi tumhari padhosi ke liye hai...oh comeon honey...tumko di hai to tumhare liye hi hai na...or tum kal yahi pahanogi " Piyush Saba ke liye white suite laya thha bahot hi sundar....

" Thanku....achha kitne ka hoga...mujhe bata dena paise dedungi ok " Saba ne suite dekhte hue kaha

" Ek thhappad marunga, jaanta hu bahot paise hian tumhare paas...lekin unhe apne hi paas rakho to achha hoga...meri hasiyat itni o hai ke main tumhe ek dress de saku " Piyush ne gusse me kaha

" Oh jaani sorry if i hurt u....ok fine...main kal yahi pahanungi " Saba ne Piyush ko hug karte hue kaha

" ok main chalta hu ab, kal shaam thheek 7 baje taiyaar rahana ok...apna khayal rakhna, bye love u " Piyush ne kaha or chala gaye....

5 sittambar bhi aa gaya...aaj Sahil or Piyush collage nahi aaye...kaaran Saara ko to maluum thha lekin Saba ko nahi.usne puchha to Saara ne bahaana bana diya...Sahil or Piyush dono shaam ki party ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe....poore saal Saba bahot khush rahati, lekin 5 sittambar aate aate dukhi ho jaati ye soch soch ke ki uske janm'din ne uski Maa ko usse door kar diya...use 5 sittamabar ko kabhi khush nahi dekha kisine....deere deere waqt guzra...subha se dopahar or dopahar se shaam ho gai....6 baj gaye thh...Saara apne bhaiya ke saath 6 baje hi Piyush ke ghar pahonch gai thhi, unka kaam me haath bataane ke liye...Piyush ki mammy or Saara dinner ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe or Piyush, Piyush ke papa, Sahil, or Saara ke bhaiya ghar ko dacoration me lage thhe....cake bhi taiyaar thha...bas Saba ke aane ki der thhi....6.45 pe Piyush Saba ko pick karne uske ghar ke liye nikal diya...or uske ghar pahonch gaya...

Saba bilkul ready thhi, Piyush ke aane ka na jaane kaise pata chala use, Piyush ke door bell bajane se pahale hi usne gate khol diya

'' SITAM DDAANE KO ADAAYE.N KAM THHI.N JO AAJ KAYAMAT SE MILA DIYA ''

'' Tum bahot pyaari lag rahi ho is dress me " Piyush ne gate pe khade hue Saba se sher ke saath kaha

" Thanku...ab chale " Saba ne kaha

" Ya sure " Or dono nikal diye....

Ghar pahonche to Saba ke gate open karte hi :

"Happy bairth day to you...." Sab waha thhe, sab Saba ko wish kar rahe thhe....Saba to ye dekh kar dang rahe gai, uske ankho se ek baar fir wahi saahil-e-ashq bahane lage...or vo waha se waapas lautne lagi....

" Main dekhta hu use..wait " Piyush ne ghar me maujood logo se kaha...sab jaante thhe ke aisa hi kuch hoga...lekin ye bhi jaante thhe ke Piyush Saba ko sambhaal lega isi liye kisine jyada fikr nahi ki...

" Saba " Piyush ne pichhe se Saba ka haath pakadke use roka

" Piyush tumne cheat kiya mere saath, dhokha diya mere wishwaas ko " Saba ne rote hue kaha

" Kya ? maine cheat kiya " Piyush ne puchha

" Haa tumne, tumhe pata hai main apna b’day nahi manaati, mujhe dard hota hai jab koi mujhe wish karta hai to...yun lagta hai ke koi meri Maa ki maut pe jashn mana raha ho " Saba ki ankho se lagataar ansoo bahe rahe thhe

" Ok, fine, maine cheat kiya...bilkul dhokha diya tumhe...agar aajke din tumhe khushi dena dhokha hai to ha maine kiya hai.. koi sazaa dena chaahti ho..dedo..lekin ye mat bhoolo ke tum apne is bartaav se apni Maa ki atma ko kitna dukh deti hogi...tumhi ne kaha thha na ke tum apni Maa ko mehasoos karti ho apne aas’paas, vo bahot khush hongi ye dekh kar ke unki beti aaj ke din khud ko dukho ke andhere me jhhonk deti hai....tum kya sochti ho, tumhare janm’din na manane se tumhari Maa khush hoti hongi...Maa kabhi nahi chaahti ke uske saath uske baccho ki khushiya bhi chali jaaye...tum pure saal khush raheti ho aar aajke din itna dukhi udaas rahe kar poore saal ka badla nikaal leti ho...jaao jaha jaana hai jaao...main kon hota hu tumhe rokne waala...maine bas itna chaaha thha ke jis tarha tum zindagi ka har din jeeti ho usi tarha aajka din bhi jiiyo...main to sirf tumhe khushi dena chaahta thha...mujhe kya pata thha yahi baat tumhare dukh ka kaaran ban jayegi..." Piyush ki ye baate Saba se

" I m sorry Piyush, mujhe maaf kardo " Ye kahate hue Saba Piyush ke gale lag gai...

" Andar chalogi na...hmmm " Piyush ne puchha, Saba ne haa me sir hilaya..or vo dono andar chale gaye....chaliye Saba ko wahaa paa kar sabhi khush hue...Saba ne cake kaata...or fir sabne use gift diye...aajke din Saba ke chahare pe muskaan dekhkar Piyush bahot khush thha...

" Mere hote hue mera baccha khud ko akela kaise mahsoos kar sakta hai...hmmm " Piyush ki mamma ne Saba ke paas jaake kaha

" Beti main tumhaari Maa to nahi, lekin Maa jaisi to hu naa....kabhi bhi Maa ki yaad aaye mere paas aa jaana " Mamma ne use gale lagate hue kaha

" Cheen hi liya na tumne meri Maa ko " Piyush ne mazaak me kaha...or sab hans pare...fir kuch der baad sabne khana khaaya....raat 10 baje party khatm hui...or sab apne apne ghar jaane ko taiyaar thhe...sabne ek dusre ko bye kaha or chale gaye...Saba ko chhodne Piyush gaya...

Saba ke ghar :

"Saba i promise, main tumhe zindagi me kabhi udaas nahi hone dunga..." Piyush ne bahot masoomiyat se kaha, Saba bas muskura ke rahe gai..or kuch der baad andar chali gai...

To be continoued

Grazie

Pooja
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25th March 2008, 09:24 PM

chalo madam ne b'day toh celebrate karna seekha
sacch baat hai...
pyar sab seekha deta hai


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kya filmi drama chal raha hai......... - 25th March 2008, 09:24 PM

kya mast chal rahi hai kahaani.....piyush ka character to mujhe suru se he achha lag raha hai......usne to pure bollywood style main pata liya saba ko.......Kashh main hota piyush ki jagah........
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maine bhi 2-4 filmi dialogue maare the ek ladki ko..lakin galat ladki par maar diye the kyunki usne pehle se filmen dekh akhi thi aur kuchh hone se pehle he mere Pyar ka the end ho gaya

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Piyush ko Saba mili to maano ek musaafir ko manziil ka raasta mil gaya ho, ab sirf use manziil pe dastak dena baaki rahe gaya...Saba ko apna banana or use tamaam khushiya or be'panaah muhabbat dena hi Piyush ki zindagi ke eham kaamo me se ek ban gaya thha....

Charo dost itne khush nazar aate, saath rahate to masti na ho, ho hi nahi sakta thha.....inhi lamho ke chalte agast beet gaya or sitamber shuru ho gaya...or ek baar fir Piyush ko ek kaam karna thha...5 sittambar aane wala thha....or Saba ka janam'din bhi....Piyush ko maluum thha ke Saba humesha ki tarha is baar bhi apna janm'din nahi manaayegi, or fir wahi udaasi uske chehare pe dekhne ko mil sakti hai jo Piyush ko barso pahale dikhi thhi...Piyush to Saba ke chahare pe pareshani ki lahar kar bardaasht nahi kar sakta thha...usne taye kiya ke is baar se Saba apna janm'din manayegi....lekin iske liye use madad ki zaruurat thhi....

Piyush ke ghar pe 2 sittambar ki shaam :

" Yaar Sahil, hume kuch to karna hi hai...lekin kya....samajh nahi aa raha..Saba apni or se to kabhi ijaazat nahi degi...gussa or ho jayegi vo " Piyush pareshan thha

" Hmmmm, idea....plan banate hain..party tumhare ghar pe dete hain...tumhare mammy papa se vo mil bhi chuki hai, to agar hum use ye kahe ki tumhare mammy papa ne hum sab ko apne ghar bulaya hai to vo mana nahi karegi...." Sahil ne idea diya

" Yeah, you are right...lekin hume mamma papa se baat karni hogi pahale...." Piyush ne agree kiya

" Ok, to fir abhi sab decide karte hain..chal " Sahil ne kaha, or dono niche aa gaye Piyush ke papa or mammy wahi pe thhe

" Dad, apse ek baat puchhni thhi " Piyush ne soffe pe baitthte hue kaha

" Ha kaho " Papa ne kaha, or Piyush ne unko sab bataya, Piyush ke papa ye baat pahale se jaante thhe ke Saba apna B'day nahi manaati, vo bhi chaahte the ke Saba khush rahe us din isi liye uske papa ne ka kahe di...party ka arrangement Sahil Piyush or Piyush ke papa ne milke karna taye kiya....Saara ko bhi bata diya gaya sab...Party me Piyush, uske mamma papa, Sahil or Saara shaamil thhe....

3 sittamber ko collage ki canteen me :

" Saba parso mere mammy papa ne tum sab ko mere ghar bulaya hai " Piyush ne kaha

" Parso....sorry Piyush main nahi aa sakungi..." Saba ne excues kiya

" Oh please Saba, main mammy papa ko kahe chuka hu ke tum aa rahi ho, please yaar aisa mat karna warna meri immage kharab ho jayegi please please..." Piyush ne request ki

" Hmm ok done...kab aana hai?" Saba ne ha kahe diya

" Shaam ko thhik 7 baje main tumhe lene aaunga ok " Piyush ne time bataya

" Saara tumhe to koi problem nahi hogi naa shaam ko aane me " Piyush ne Saara se puchha

" Nahi, main bhaiya mujhe chhod jayenge..fir lene bhi aa jayenge " Saara ne kaha

" Are aisa karo tum bhaiya ko bhi le aana, vo bhi sab se mil lenge ok " Piyush ne kaha

" Lekin, tumhare ghar, kuch hai kya ghar me koi party ya kuch ? " Saba ne puchha Piyush se

" Nahi nahi, vo kya hai ke papa bahot dino se tum sab se ek saath milne ka soch rahe thhe, to papa parso free hain isi liye papa ne parso ka din decide kiya...bas or to kuch nahi, or khana bhi wahi hai sab ka ok...." Piyush ne bataya

" Ok fine..hum sab aa jayenge " Saba ne kaha.....Fir class ka time ho gaya isi liye sab chale gaye...or fir ghar jaane ka bhi...Piyush ne ghar jaake khana khaya or room me chala gaya...shaayad sone ke liiye.....shaam ho gai tab niche aaya, papa bhi aa chuke thhe...usne papa ko bataya jo baate hui Saba se sab...fir aise hi raat ho gai or firr din bhi nikal aaya ek naya savera leke....

4 sittambar Shaam ko Saba ke ghar pe:

" Saba, ye tumhare liye " Piyush ne ek packet Saba ko diya, Saba ne use khola or..

" Wow....itni pyaari dress...mere liye " Saba ne puchha

" Nahi tumhari padhosi ke liye hai...oh comeon honey...tumko di hai to tumhare liye hi hai na...or tum kal yahi pahanogi " Piyush Saba ke liye white suite laya thha bahot hi sundar....

" Thanku....achha kitne ka hoga...mujhe bata dena paise dedungi ok " Saba ne suite dekhte hue kaha

" Ek thhappad marunga, jaanta hu bahot paise hian tumhare paas...lekin unhe apne hi paas rakho to achha hoga...meri hasiyat itni o hai ke main tumhe ek dress de saku " Piyush ne gusse me kaha

" Oh jaani sorry if i hurt u....ok fine...main kal yahi pahanungi " Saba ne Piyush ko hug karte hue kaha

" ok main chalta hu ab, kal shaam thheek 7 baje taiyaar rahana ok...apna khayal rakhna, bye love u " Piyush ne kaha or chala gaye....

5 sittambar bhi aa gaya...aaj Sahil or Piyush collage nahi aaye...kaaran Saara ko to maluum thha lekin Saba ko nahi.usne puchha to Saara ne bahaana bana diya...Sahil or Piyush dono shaam ki party ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe....poore saal Saba bahot khush rahati, lekin 5 sittambar aate aate dukhi ho jaati ye soch soch ke ki uske janm'din ne uski Maa ko usse door kar diya...use 5 sittamabar ko kabhi khush nahi dekha kisine....deere deere waqt guzra...subha se dopahar or dopahar se shaam ho gai....6 baj gaye thh...Saara apne bhaiya ke saath 6 baje hi Piyush ke ghar pahonch gai thhi, unka kaam me haath bataane ke liye...Piyush ki mammy or Saara dinner ki taiyaari kar rahe thhe or Piyush, Piyush ke papa, Sahil, or Saara ke bhaiya ghar ko dacoration me lage thhe....cake bhi taiyaar thha...bas Saba ke aane ki der thhi....6.45 pe Piyush Saba ko pick karne uske ghar ke liye nikal diya...or uske ghar pahonch gaya...

Saba bilkul ready thhi, Piyush ke aane ka na jaane kaise pata chala use, Piyush ke door bell bajane se pahale hi usne gate khol diya

'' SITAM DDAANE KO ADAAYE.N KAM THHI.N JO AAJ KAYAMAT SE MILA DIYA ''

'' Tum bahot pyaari lag rahi ho is dress me " Piyush ne gate pe khade hue Saba se sher ke saath kaha

" Thanku...ab chale " Saba ne kaha

" Ya sure " Or dono nikal diye....

Ghar pahonche to Saba ke gate open karte hi :

"Happy bairth day to you...." Sab waha thhe, sab Saba ko wish kar rahe thhe....Saba to ye dekh kar dang rahe gai, uske ankho se ek baar fir wahi saahil-e-ashq bahane lage...or vo waha se waapas lautne lagi....

" Main dekhta hu use..wait " Piyush ne ghar me maujood logo se kaha...sab jaante thhe ke aisa hi kuch hoga...lekin ye bhi jaante thhe ke Piyush Saba ko sambhaal lega isi liye kisine jyada fikr nahi ki...

" Saba " Piyush ne pichhe se Saba ka haath pakadke use roka

" Piyush tumne cheat kiya mere saath, dhokha diya mere wishwaas ko " Saba ne rote hue kaha

" Kya ? maine cheat kiya " Piyush ne puchha

" Haa tumne, tumhe pata hai main apna b’day nahi manaati, mujhe dard hota hai jab koi mujhe wish karta hai to...yun lagta hai ke koi meri Maa ki maut pe jashn mana raha ho " Saba ki ankho se lagataar ansoo bahe rahe thhe

" Ok, fine, maine cheat kiya...bilkul dhokha diya tumhe...agar aajke din tumhe khushi dena dhokha hai to ha maine kiya hai.. koi sazaa dena chaahti ho..dedo..lekin ye mat bhoolo ke tum apne is bartaav se apni Maa ki atma ko kitna dukh deti hogi...tumhi ne kaha thha na ke tum apni Maa ko mehasoos karti ho apne aas’paas, vo bahot khush hongi ye dekh kar ke unki beti aaj ke din khud ko dukho ke andhere me jhhonk deti hai....tum kya sochti ho, tumhare janm’din na manane se tumhari Maa khush hoti hongi...Maa kabhi nahi chaahti ke uske saath uske baccho ki khushiya bhi chali jaaye...tum pure saal khush raheti ho aar aajke din itna dukhi udaas rahe kar poore saal ka badla nikaal leti ho...jaao jaha jaana hai jaao...main kon hota hu tumhe rokne waala...maine bas itna chaaha thha ke jis tarha tum zindagi ka har din jeeti ho usi tarha aajka din bhi jiiyo...main to sirf tumhe khushi dena chaahta thha...mujhe kya pata thha yahi baat tumhare dukh ka kaaran ban jayegi..." Piyush ki ye baate Saba se

" I m sorry Piyush, mujhe maaf kardo " Ye kahate hue Saba Piyush ke gale lag gai...

" Andar chalogi na...hmmm " Piyush ne puchha, Saba ne haa me sir hilaya..or vo dono andar chale gaye....chaliye Saba ko wahaa paa kar sabhi khush hue...Saba ne cake kaata...or fir sabne use gift diye...aajke din Saba ke chahare pe muskaan dekhkar Piyush bahot khush thha...

" Mere hote hue mera baccha khud ko akela kaise mahsoos kar sakta hai...hmmm " Piyush ki mamma ne Saba ke paas jaake kaha

" Beti main tumhaari Maa to nahi, lekin Maa jaisi to hu naa....kabhi bhi Maa ki yaad aaye mere paas aa jaana " Mamma ne use gale lagate hue kaha

" Cheen hi liya na tumne meri Maa ko " Piyush ne mazaak me kaha...or sab hans pare...fir kuch der baad sabne khana khaaya....raat 10 baje party khatm hui...or sab apne apne ghar jaane ko taiyaar thhe...sabne ek dusre ko bye kaha or chale gaye...Saba ko chhodne Piyush gaya...

Saba ke ghar :

"Saba i promise, main tumhe zindagi me kabhi udaas nahi hone dunga..." Piyush ne bahot masoomiyat se kaha, Saba bas muskura ke rahe gai..or kuch der baad andar chali gai...

To be continoued

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hey pooja.dz z ur new fan 4rm new zealand .aap ki khahani bari achi hai ber ber isse paarne ko dil chahat hai maloom nahi kyun .ur stry hs sme different kina feelin & expression with some emotion & courage.itz jst 1 in da million i relllllyyyyyy loved it sis . du write some more intersting strz lyk dz bst wshz
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Thanku very much for coming, and liking..well i have rad a lot of stories. one day i was reading, then i thought " Can i wright a sotory ? "... than i got a short story in my mind...and i started working on that...i have never forced myself to keep writing..i m having the opportunity to write a story and really its first...i m having a great experience....now i m working at the end of this story...first i have to shut this story with good end than i would look farward....

thanku very much it was great to answer you...and thanks for ur all commpliments that u have written here for my story.....keep coming on SDC

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wowwwwwwwwwwww
mazaa agaya Piyush ko Sabaa or Sahil ko Saaraa mil gayi
do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke

acche ja rahee ho

taek caer
yeah mil rahe hain chupke chupke......hahaha..........thanks sis

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Kya baat hai tumne to 4 dil ek saath mila diye......lakin uska kya jis bechare ka dil isme tut gaya......
main Rahul ki baat kar raha hun....tumhne nahi lagta vo bechara bhi sara se pyar kar sakta hai....aur vo sirf isliye vahan se chala gaya taaki sara aur sahil ek saath rahen....aur vo bechara apne pyar ka ijhar bhi nahi kar paya aur un do dilon ko milkar hamesha ke liye chala gaya..( sara ki zindagi se bahut door....fir kabhi na milne ke liye..)

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dost ....................
Hi..........
main koi diet expert nahi hu.........ok
bs jo dil me baat aati hai main bol deta hu agar
tumko bura laga to realy sorry..............
apni feeling ko kisi se shear krna agar lecture hai to thik hai yaar ye lecture hi sahi {$}

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Hahahaha.........

ye to diet expert nikle....ek bi mauka nahi chhodte bolne ka.....itna bada lecture de diya hai.......


JANE LAGE JAB VO CHORD KAR DAMAN MERA,,
TUTE DIL NE HIMAKAT KARDI,,
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PAR KAMBAKHT ANKHON NE BGAWAT KARDI............{$}
   
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dost ....................
Hi..........
main koi diet expert nahi hu.........ok
bs jo dil me baat aati hai main bol deta hu agar
tumko bura laga to realy sorry..............
apni feeling ko kisi se shear krna agar lecture hai to thik hai yaar........... ye lecture hi sahi {$}

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Hahahaha.........

ye to diet expert nikle....ek bi mauka nahi chhodte bolne ka.....itna bada lecture de diya hai.......


JANE LAGE JAB VO CHORD KAR DAMAN MERA,,
TUTE DIL NE HIMAKAT KARDI,,
SOCHA THA KI CHUPA LENGE GAMM APNa ,,,
PAR KAMBAKHT ANKHON NE BGAWAT KARDI............{$}
   
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Haan to main kahan kisi aur se bulwata hun, main bhi jo dil main aata hai likh deta hun...
Ab usme diet ki itni saari baaten thi to maine socha aap diet expert ho sakte hain....guess kiya tha.....agar tumhe bura laga ho to I'm really very sorry...
Chalo thik hai aapka lecture humne bhi sun liya..isme bura kya hai.....
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dost ....................
Hi..........
main koi diet expert nahi hu.........ok
bs jo dil me baat aati hai main bol deta hu agar
tumko bura laga to realy sorry..............
apni feeling ko kisi se shear krna agar lecture hai to thik hai yaar........... ye lecture hi sahi {$}

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are koi baat nahin.......kabhi aur din iccha puri kar lenge......par karenge zaroor

eee koi ehsaan nahin kiya.......ab tu dekh tune di ko bholi aur mujhe... abhi teri kahani khatam hone de fir main ek short story likhti hoon jiska main character ka naam hoga pooja....aur woh gharkaam main bilkul nikammi hogi..... fir ayega mazaa..........bas teri kahani khatam ho jayee....fir meri shuru...............


haaaan.chal fatafat agla part post kar de........


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apko bahut badi khushfehmi hai apne baare me madam ji....................
k aap perfect ho .........ok mere life ka exprience to ye kehta hai k
es duniya me koi bhi perfect nahi hai
kabhi akele me, tanhai me baith kr khud k baare me sochna k wakeyi me
aap perfect ho ........... try it aapko eska jawab khud b khud mil jayega ok

or haann

Hi......

kya haal hai apka pooja ji....
main to puchna hi bhool giya

or sorry main kal zra busy tha esliye reply nahi kr paya baki
bahut acha laga k apne chaaro ka pyar milwa diya
pr abhi to unke pyar ki shuruaat hai ..... age dekhenge
kya hota hai...

or madam jiii.......................................... ye jo apne sunday enjoy kiya na with chhola bhatura (ye eisye nahi bolte ya to chhole bhature or ya fir channa bhatura bolte hai ok plz cought it ) or choole bhature bina lassi k kya enjoy kiya hoga apne aisa kijiega agle baar chhole bhature k saath lassi liejiga malai mar k or fir enjoy kiejiega ok {$}

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Hi,

Well aapne bilkul sahi kaha....kisi or ka to nahi pata but in reallty i m not purfect...hmmm

or shukriya janaab mujhse galti batane ke liye.....

saath dete rahiyega...kahaani ka ant kareeb hai

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per di ab kya hoga aage saba bhi vapas aa gayi hai aur sara sahil se pyar karne lagi aur sahil sara se aur saba piyush se aur piyush saba se kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai di akhish iska end kya hai sayad bahut hi dukh bhara end ho ga ya to saba ki shadi kahi aur ho jayega ya fir piyush ki vo dono bahut pyar karte hai ek dusre se to di pata nahi chal raha hai ki aage kya hoga kher jo bhi ho di app end jaldi se jaldi karna aur haan khash karke iska end 1 ya 2 ya 3 april ko mat karna thik hai.
ab apke 8th part ka wait karuga di jaldi se jaldi ab bhejna
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keep reading till parso

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di ab kahani ki end kab ho raha hai pls jaldi se jaldi end karo kyu ki 1 mahina ho gaya hai apki kahani padhkar aur bahut acha bhi laga hai kyu ki app ek ek karke part bhejte hona hume intzaar karvaate ho na isi liye aur haa jo app kar rahe ho na bilkul sahi kar rahe ho agar ek sath bhej doge na to koi nahi padhta use aur ab to aisa hai ki kisi ne ek part bhi padha na to vo ab puri kahani padhega
di thoda sa to end batavo ki last me kya hone wala hai
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Kya baat hai tumne to 4 dil ek saath mila diye......lakin uska kya jis bechare ka dil isme tut gaya......
main Rahul ki baat kar raha hun....tumhne nahi lagta vo bechara bhi sara se pyar kar sakta hai....aur vo sirf isliye vahan se chala gaya taaki sara aur sahil ek saath rahen....aur vo bechara apne pyar ka ijhar bhi nahi kar paya aur un do dilon ko milkar hamesha ke liye chala gaya..( sara ki zindagi se bahut door....fir kabhi na milne ke liye..)
jee nahi,

Rahul ne pahale hi kahe diya thha ke vo saara se pyaar nahi karta...or Rahul ke dil me kya hai vo mujhe nahi pata...or kisika dil nahi toota...jo tootega vo ab tootega...

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ye saurav aur sahil ka kya chakkar hai.....mujhe lagta hai...mausam ka boyfrnd ka naam saurav hai aur pooja ke boyfrnd ka naam sahil.....tabhi tum dono ladti rehti hoooooo
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thank u very muchhhh........mere post par reply karne ke liye......
mujhe to laga tha main he akela is forum par likhta rehta hun.....
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Rahul ne pahale hi kahe diya thha ke vo saara se pyaar nahi karta...or Rahul ke dil me kya hai vo mujhe nahi pata...or kisika dil nahi toota...jo tootega vo ab tootega...

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