Read & Always Remember This GhazaL

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Read & Always Remember This GhazaL

Jab Tu Peda Howa Kitna Majbour Tha
Yeh Jahan Teri Socho Se Bhi Dour Tha

Hath Paon Bhi Tab Tere Apne Na Thay
Teri Ankhon Main Duniya K Sapne Na Thay

Tujh Ko Ata Sirf Rona Hi Tha
Doodh Pi K Kaam Tera Sona He Tha

Tujh Ko Chalna Sikhaya Tha Maan Ne Teri
Tujh Ko Dil Main Basaya Tha Maan Ne Teri

Maan Ke Saye Main Parwan Charne Laga
Waqt Ke Sath Qad Tera Barne Laga

Ahista Ahista Tu Kariyal Jawan Ho Gaya
Tujh Pe Sara Jahan Meharban Ho Gaya

Zor Bazoo Pe Tu Baat Karne Laga
Khood He Sajne Laga Khud He Sanwarne Laga

Aik Din Ek Larki Tujhe Bha Gaye
Ban Ke Dulhan Woh Tere Ghar Agayi

Apne Farz Se Tu Dour Hone Laga
Beej Nafrat Ka Khud He Tu Bone Laga

Phir Tu Maan Baap Ko Bhi Bhulane Laga
Teer Baton K Phir Tu Chalane Laga

Baat Be Baat Unn Se Tu Larne Laga
Qayda Ik Naya Tu Phir Parne Laga

Yaad Kar Tujh Se Maan Ne Kaha Ik Din
Abb Humara Guzara Nahi Tere Bin

Sunn Ke Yeh Baat Tu Tesh Main Agiya
Tera Gussa Teri Aqal Ko Kha Giya

Josh Main Aake Tu Ne Yeh Maan Se Kaha
Main Tha Khamosh Sub Dekhta He Raha

Aaj Kehta Hoon Peecha Mera Chor Do
Jo Hai Rishta Mera Tum Se Woh Tor Do

Jao Ja Ke Kahin Kaam Dhanda Karo
Log Marte Hain Tum Bhi Kahin Ja Maro

Beth Kar Ahain Bharti Thi Maan Raat Bhar
Inki Ahon Ka Tujh Par Howa Na Asar

Aik Din Baap tera Chala Roth Kar
Kese Bikhri Thi Phir Teri Maan Tout Kar

Phir Woh Bhi Bass kal Ko Bulati Rahi
Zindagi Isko Har Roz Satati Rahi

Aik Din Mout Ko Bhi Taras Agaya
Iska Rona Bhi Taqdeer Ko Bha Gaya

Ashk Ankhon Main Thay Woh Rawana Howi
Mout Ki Aik Hichki Bahana Howi

Ik Sukoon Us k Chehre Pe Chane Laga
Phir Tu Mayyat Ko Uski Sajane Laga

Muddatain Ho Gayi Aaj Budda Hai Tu
Touti Khatiya Pe Para Bora Hai Tu

Tere Bache Bhi Abb Tujh Se Darte Nahi
Nafrate Hain, Muhabbat Woh Karte Nahi

Dard Main Tu Pukare Ke O MERI MAAN
TERE DAM SE ROSHAN THAY DONO JAHAN

Waqt Chalta Rahta Hai Waqt Rukta Nahi
Tout Jata Hai Woh Jo Ke Jhukta Nahi

Bann Ke Ibrat Ka Tu Abb Nishan Reh Gaya
Dhond Zor Tera Kahan Reh Gaya

Tu EHKAM-E-RABBI Bhulata Raha
APNE MAAN BAAP KO TU SATATA RAHA

Kaat Le Tu Wohi Tu Ne Boya Tha Jo
Tujh Ko Kese Mile Tu Ne Khoya Tha Jo

Yaad Kar K Gaya Dor Tu Rone Laga
Kal Jo Tu Ne Kiya Aaj Phir Hone Laga

Mout Mange Tujhe Mout Aati Nahi
Maan Ki Surat Nigahon Se Jati Nahi

Tu Jo Khanse Tu Aulad Dante Tujhe
Tu Hai Nasoor Sukh Kon Bante Tujhe

[deewaana]

ASLAAMMALEIKUUM NAMASTE AND SAT SRI A KAAL


WAH !!!!!! WAH !!!!!

NAHEE HAIN KOI LAFZ SACHEE NAHE HAIN ,, KADR KARTA HOON MEIN APKEE SHAYADD RULLA BHI DIYA THAA KAHEEN PEH AAPNEEH

LIKHTEE RAHIYEGHA DUA KEH SAATH IJJAJAT MANGHOONGHA


APNEE DUA MEIN MUJHE BHI SHAMEEEL KIJIYEGHA

[Sanskruti]

Hi sohail

bassss..........ab main kya kahu.........u have just made me spellbound..............i dont have words of praise for this creation of urs.......padhte padhte ankhon mein pani sa aa gaya............sachhi baat kahee hai aapne........sach much aapne dil ko chu liya.........its just amazinnnnnnnnnnn.........ab main kitni tarif karu..........chalo bye n take care


~*~ Sanskruti ~*~

[bela sagar]

hi sohail ji....

u really did a great job.
a fantastic poem filled with truthness.
be happy.
take care
bye

[vipul23]

hi

Its Toooo Nice ..

Vipul :-)

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hii frnds

thanx for u all's support n those beautifull comments
chalo at least there r people who appreciate mine little hard work.

but to be honest i dont want to be in the skin of some others work.
tht was send to me by a gooddy frnd of mine from pakistan.
thought of sharing with u all n did the same.
Sory but tht's the truth n reality
i'll deff pass this mesg of u all's to her.

chalo am off catch u people some other time bye tc
salam duwa!

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w/salam deewana bhai! oops am sory ,did'nt ask u ,ur name
humara naam sohail hain, aur pyar say log hume sirf soahil hee bolatay hain.he he he~!
hum to khaday hyderabadi aur aap kaha kay hoon ? bhai

shukriya aap ka jawab kaa
phir milangay
allahfeez

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hello Ms Sanskruti
howz u doing ? thanx for u kind attention \n tht lovelyu expresshion of ur feelings

i feel like u r an typical Punjabi Kudi! wht eva but thanx

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huh u r still alive ? BEla is tht u or else some one else ?
i feel so ambarassed last time whn i have chated with u online. how can u say those words to me ? huh
i guess it was not u, still let me confirm it ? coz i dont wanna miss a frnd for a small misunderstanding ok
chalo bye aur ek reply do
" y did u miss-behaved with me last time" even i deleted u from my frnds list to tht extent u made me anger
bye

[bela sagar]

hi sohail ji

well main ne asa kuch naheen kia jo bhi app ne kaha main ne jab apni last poetry post ki thee uske sath hi woh id close kardiya tha means main ab woh use naheen karte.
my another friends...
plz ye baat app sab ke liyee bhi hai jin jin se main baat karte thee us id see, ke main ab ye id use naheen karte agar koi is id see baat karee tu woh main naheen hoon.
mind ittttttttttt
belashah_sagar@hotmail/yahoo.com

n sohail ji apka istharhaan se baat karna mujhko acha naheen laga but ok haan apka ye kehna ke main conferm karoon ke main thee ya naheen ? .... tu aik tharhaan se app ne apni baat wapis bhi leli warna i really mind it.app ne mujhse itna arsa baat ki apko andaza naheen ke main kese baat karti hoon ya jo bhi kahega ke woh bela hai app believe karlenge....?

any ways reply kardiya hai main ne apko.
u can read it but care fully.
aik baat kehna chahongi.....
life main, main kisi se aik bar baat karoon ya bar bar.....
mistake naheen karte.....
honesty aur truthness hi mere liyee sab kuch hai.
aur good behaviour in doono categories main ata hai.
take care of urself

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hii bela
oops am so sory dear,mine idea was not to hurt u but, ask u
i guess u can understand right?
good gal
ok i copied u r words right now bye tc

[Sanskruti]

Hi Sohail

me is fine...........howz u?............btw........i am not punjabi at all ....chalo bywe n take care

~*~ Sanskruti ~*~

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hii am fine doing reallly g8. the weather os pretty coool in hyderabad now..thanx to the 2 day rain.
hey where u r from ? wht u do n quit more thing abt u ?

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hii am fine doing reallly g8. the weather os pretty coool in hyderabad now..thanx to the 2 day rain.
hey where u r from ? wht u do n quit more thing abt u ?

[Parastaar]

Sohail...

aaj apki post kee huyi is sachi rachna ko padha...tau jisne bhi likha uske liye khuub duaayein niklin...hamari daad un tak pahuncha dijieygaa...bilkul sach aur itna kathor sach...i hope iss rachna ko aur hamare dost bhi padheinge...shukriya


paras

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Socha naheen accha bura
Dekha suna kuch bhee naheen
Manga khuda say hur waqt...
Teray siwa..... Kuch bhee naheen!

Dekha tujhey chaha tujhey
Socha tujhey pooja tujhey
Meri wafa meri khata....
Teri khata kuch bhee naheen!

Jis par hamari aankh nay
Moti bichayey raat bhar

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~*~DashT-e-TanHai~*~







KABHI YOON BHI AA MERI AANKH MEIN
KE MERI NAZAR KO KHABAR NA HOO
MUJE EK RAAT NAWAZ DE
MAGAR US KE BAAD SAHER NA HOOO


WOH BARA RAHEEM-O-KAREEM HAI
MUJHE YEH SIFT BHI ATA KARE
TUJHE BHOLNE KI DUWA KARO
TU DUWA MEIN MERI ASAR NA HOO

KABHI DIN KI DHOOP MEIN JHOOM KE
KABHI SHAB KE PHOOL CH

[Alisha]

Its a very nice poem.
Keep it up.

Magar har ghar mein aisa hota nahin hai.
Some kids are really wonderful all throughtout to their parents.

Anyway, keep posting.

[chaahat]

Sohail ji,
Sach mein bahut achi gazhal likhi hai aapne.
Ek ek shabd mein itni sachaai hai ki kya kahun.

Jaane anjaane mein jo bache apne maa-baap ko dukh dete hain unhe bhi ek na ek din woh sab bughatna padega..

Lekin kabhi kabhi haalat hi kuch aise ho jaate hain ki maa-baap se sehmat nahi hua jaata. lekin iske liye unka apmaan karne ki zaroorat nahi hoti, lekin apni baat ko bhi nakaara nahi jaata.

Bas kabhi kabhi jaane anjaane mein galati ho jati hai, lekin gaur se dekha jaye to woh galati kisi ki bhi nahi hoti, woh to bas ek aisa vakt hota hai, jis mein do peedhiyan apne apne nazariye se alag alag sochte hain.. Generation gap kills sometimes...

[$hivani]

Hello sohailji
already everyone have appreciated u so much now i just dont have words to appreciate u....ur composition is one of the best that this place has ever seen or rather read.....i just wish everyone could think like u, that would definitely make all of us more happy and merrier.....aapki agli nazm ka intezaar rahe ga...likhtey rahiyega..bye 4 now!..take care!

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hii alisha,chahat n shivani!
sory frnds has to reply at once ..............it's been a quit long time did'nt checked the mail. any ways thanx for those aprecition's u guyz made it.............
keep in touch
allahfeez
bye tc

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sochnay kee baath hain..wayse aap log kaafee deep soch tay hain.humne to jazbaath main aakarr lekh diya tha.pata nahee tha kisi kay dill ko choo jaayengay eetna kareeb say.
khair : spne apne kismat aur jazbah

Aiza kYon h0ta hai ke aitbar ki to0ti dehleez0n Per
Jo buhat aPna h0 aPna naheen rehta...
Woh aks ban ker mere chashme ter men rehta hai...
aJeeb shakhs hai Pani kai Gher men rehta hai...

[Dard-e-sush]

Salam Karta hun Tumhein Bhai

U have not written on this site but on my heart.

Well done my friend. God Bless sons and daughters like u


Regards

[san04]

hello sohail ji
aaj apki is rachna ko sach salaam kerne ko dil chah raha hai...
kitni sacchai aur bebasi hai,,hamara samaj..ka ye ek badsoorat aena bhi hai,,,,
ho sakta hai is apke khayal ko parhker kuch log sambahal jayen!
good work.....keep it up
swati

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Tum Udaas Ho

Raat Ko Chand Taron Se Batein Mut Kia Karo
Pholon Ko Daikh Kar Mut Chonka Karo
Koi Tabyat Ka Pochay Tu Mausam K Baray Main Mut
Bataya Karo
Kaghiz Par Aarhi Tircheen Lakeerain
Mut Kheencha Karo
Warna Loag Kahain Gay K ...


“Tum Udaas Ho”

[diptikesh]

REALY GR8



DIPTIKESH

Pune

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thanx allot dude

[saim khan(k)]

Originally posted by bela sagar

hey mujhe samajh nahi aya yeh kis ki ghazal hai sohail ji apki bela ji apki ya maine 1 kitab main parhi thi unki plz tell me truth kis ki ghazal hai yeh ok babaye huh



hi sohail ji

well main ne asa kuch naheen kia jo bhi app ne kaha main ne jab apni last poetry post ki thee uske sath hi woh id close kardiya tha means main ab woh use naheen karte.
my another friends...
plz ye baat app sab ke liyee bhi hai jin jin se main baat karte thee us id see, ke main ab ye id use naheen karte agar koi is id see baat karee tu woh main naheen hoon.
mind ittttttttttt
belashah_sagar@hotmail/yahoo.com

n sohail ji apka istharhaan se baat karna mujhko acha naheen laga but ok haan apka ye kehna ke main conferm karoon ke main thee ya naheen ? .... tu aik tharhaan se app ne apni baat wapis bhi leli warna i really mind it.app ne mujhse itna arsa baat ki apko andaza naheen ke main kese baat karti hoon ya jo bhi kahega ke woh bela hai app believe karlenge....?

any ways reply kardiya hai main ne apko.
u can read it but care fully.
aik baat kehna chahongi.....
life main, main kisi se aik bar baat karoon ya bar bar.....
mistake naheen karte.....
honesty aur truthness hi mere liyee sab kuch hai.
aur good behaviour in doono categories main ata hai.
take care of urself

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salam! thts true the shayri is not mine, as i said i've liked it n pasted so tht i can share with all of u!
regards
no issues bela jii