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"Dekho" - 26th December 2004, 11:18 AM

Dosto,
Bahut dino ke baad yahan phir se aana huya hai!!!
Aap sab logo ko season greetings ke saath-saath mera pyar bhara Adaab, Namaskaar, aur Satsri-a-kaal.


Dil ke kooche ko choRd kar dekho
Apni raaho ko moRd kar deko

Meri soorat bikhar ke taRdpegii
Dil ke sheehey ko toRd kar dekho

Samait lenge hum aapne aanchal mei
Tum dard, dil ka nichoRd kar dekho

Kaanch ka dil hai toot jaane do
Pyar se pyar joRd kar dekho

Kiss tarha shaakh chatpataatii hai
Tum zara phool toRd kar dekho


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Thumbs up hi - 26th December 2004, 07:50 PM

h'llo seemakshiji...i just loved ur composition..its very beautiful...keep writing!!!!!...bye 4 now!..take care


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27th December 2004, 07:35 AM

achhi shayari hai Seemakshi.

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27th December 2004, 11:40 AM

Apne dil ke kooche ko tum sja ke toh dekho..
apne kadmoon ko uss angaan mein bicha ke toh dekho..

savar jayegyee har kisi ki surat...
apne dil ek ayene ko.. diwar pe lga toh dekho..

har anchaal smeataa hai apne hee gum ko..
uss gum mein zra muskra ke toh dekho...

dil agar baar baar na tute toh pyar kaise hoga...
tum b-e-fikar ho ke ussse pyar kar ke toh dekho...

shaakh ko pta hai ke yeh phuul tere mehboob ke liye hai..
tum shaakh ki trah apna dil uss mehboob ko de ke toh dekho....

(just a reply to ur lines.....
i liked ur lines a lot...which actually inspired me to reply:-))


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27th December 2004, 03:16 PM

Shivani ji, Khallopapa ji, aur Aparn_jot ji,

Aap theeno k reply ka bahut-bahut shukriya. Aparn-jot ji aapne jo jawaab diya hai, vo la-jawab hai. Khaas taur par yeh lines:

dil agar baar baar na tute toh pyar kaise hoga...
tum b-e-fikar ho ke ussse pyar kar ke toh dekho...

Daad ka shukriya kabool kiijeeye.


Seema


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4th January 2005, 12:33 AM

Seema
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Lekin hums ejyada tumeh koun chahega
Tumhe jarur koi chahat se dekhega
Magar wo ankh hum jaisi kaha se layega


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