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Usko lafz-e-muhabbat sikhata raha - 10th June 2014, 10:29 PM
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उसको लफ्ज़ ए मुहब्बत सिखाता रहा,
नज़्म वो लिखती .....धुन मैं बनाता रहा ।

उसकी तहरीरें दिल को.....चुबती रहीं,
मिसरा दर मिसरा उसका रुलाता रहा ।

हम मुहब्बत में शायद.......नाकाम रहे,
फिर भी दिल मैं.....उसी पे लुटात़ा रहा ।

मैंने सदियों कही....गम पे ग़ज़लें बहुत,
पर मैं नज्में उसी की........सुनाता रहा ।

रूठ कर जब वो दिल से हुई बे-दखल ,
जाने अफ़साने....जग क्या बनाता रहा ।

उम्र भर मैकदा से.............रहा दूर दूर,
अब मैं बज्मों में पीता..... पिलाता रहा ।

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Usko lafz-e-muhabbat sikhata raha,
lafz wo likhti dhun maiN banata raha.

Uski tehreereiN dil ko chubti rahiN,
Misra dar misra uska rulaata raha.

Ham muhabbat meiN shayad naakaam rahe,
Phir bhi dil maiN usi pe lutaata raha.

Maine sadiyoN kahiN gam pe ghazleiN bahut,
Par maiN nazmeiN usi kii sunaata rahaa.

Rooth kar jab wo jo dil se hui be-dakhal,
jaane afsaane jag kya banataa rahaa.

Umra bhar maikadaa se raha door-door,
Ab maiN bazmoN meiN peeta pilaata raha.
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10th June 2014, 10:55 PM
Wah wah wah kya kehne

Subhan Allah. .bohat hi shandaar aur jaandaar ghazal kahi hai aapne..

Ek ek misra dil ko chu gaya..bohat khoob harsh ji. .

Zara ek baar teesra sher check kar lijiye..misra e saani me kuch typing mistake lagti hai mujhe

Yuhi likhte rahiye. .khush rahiye. .



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10th June 2014, 11:47 PM
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Wah wah wah kya kehne

Subhan Allah. .bohat hi shandaar aur jaandaar ghazal kahi hai aapne..

Ek ek misra dil ko chu gaya..bohat khoob harsh ji. .

Zara ek baar teesra sher check kar lijiye..misra e saani me kuch typing mistake lagti hai mujhe

Yuhi likhte rahiye. .khush rahiye. .
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haaN agar us sher ko pesh karne ke andaz meiN likhooN toh shayad kuchh samjhaane ke nazdeek pahooNch sakooN....??
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फिर भी, दिल मैं,.....उसी पे, लुटात़ा रहा ।

शायद अब कुछ क्लियर हो....

agar ab bhi kisi aamad ki zaroorat hai to kahiye.....aap be-shaq kah sakte haiN...

Shukriyaa ek baar phir...

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10th June 2014, 11:50 PM
Hmm hindi me sahi hai...roman me ghalti kardi aapne......



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Hmm hindi me sahi hai...roman me ghalti kardi aapne......

OH!!! haaN......Sahi farmaya aapne.......yahi hota hai.....Hindi meiN direct tha....our Roman !! zabardasti wala... .....Please isey edit keejiyega......

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OH!!! haaN......Sahi farmaya aapne.......yahi hota hai.....Hindi meiN direct tha....our Roman !! zabardasti wala... .....Please isey edit keejiyega......

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उसको लफ्ज़ ए मुहब्बत सिखाता रहा,
नज़्म वो लिखती .....धुन मैं बनाता रहा ।

उसकी तहरीरें दिल को.....चुबती रहीं,
मिसरा दर मिसरा उसका रुलाता रहा ।

हम मुहब्बत में शायद.......नाकाम रहे,
फिर भी दिल मैं.....उसी पे लुटात़ा रहा ।

मैंने सदियों कही....गम पे ग़ज़लें बहुत,
पर मैं नज्में उसी की........सुनाता रहा ।

रूठ कर जब वो दिल से हुई बे-दखल ,
जाने अफ़साने....जग क्या बनाता रहा ।

उम्र भर मैकदा से.............रहा दूर दूर,
अब मैं बज्मों में पीता..... पिलाता रहा ।

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Usko lafz-e-muhabbat sikhata raha,
lafz wo likhti dhun maiN banata raha.

Uski tehreereiN dil ko chubti rahiN,
Misra dar misra uska rulaata raha.

Ham muhabbat meiN shayad naakaam rahe,
Phir bhi dil maiN usi pe lutaata raha.

Maine sadiyoN kahiN gam pe ghazleiN bahut,
Par maiN nazmeiN usi kii sunaata rahaa.

Rooth kar jab wo jo dil se hui be-dakhal,
jaane afsaane jag kya banataa rahaa.

Umra bhar maikadaa se raha door-door,
Ab maiN bazmoN meiN peeta pilaata raha.
Bahut khoob harsh bhai behad aachi nazm kahi aapne yun to har sher shayad apne aap mein muqammal hai par yeh ashaar dil chu gaye

Uski tehreereiN dil ko chubti rahiN,
Misra dar misra uska rulaata raha.

Kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa

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Bahut khoob harsh bhai behad aachi nazm kahi aapne yun to har sher shayad apne aap mein muqammal hai par yeh ashaar dil chu gaye

Uski tehreereiN dil ko chubti rahiN,
Misra dar misra uska rulaata raha.

Kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa

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Ham muhabbat meiN shayad naakaam rahe,
Phir bhi dil maiN usi pe lutaata raha.

Maine sadiyoN kahiN gam pe ghazleiN bahut,
Par maiN nazmeiN usi kii sunaata rahaa.

harash bhaiyaa bahot khoob likhaaa hai aapne.... har sher iskaa apne aap me mukammal hai... aur ehsaas dil tak utar gaye iske..... khoob likhaa hai likhte rahiye

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Ham muhabbat meiN shayad naakaam rahe,
Phir bhi dil maiN usi pe lutaata raha.

Maine sadiyoN kahiN gam pe ghazleiN bahut,
Par maiN nazmeiN usi kii sunaata rahaa.

harash bhaiyaa bahot khoob likhaaa hai aapne.... har sher iskaa apne aap me mukammal hai... aur ehsaas dil tak utar gaye iske..... khoob likhaa hai likhte rahiye

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Harash Mahajan sahab adaab ek khoobsoorat dil ko chooti hui ghzl ke liyN daad qubool farmaaiye ghzal ke tamaam ashaar bhut khoob rhe yun hi apne kalaamoN se mehfil mai chaar chaand lagaate rahiye



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Harash Mahajan sahab adaab ek khoobsoorat dil ko chooti hui ghzl ke liyN daad qubool farmaaiye ghzal ke tamaam ashaar bhut khoob rhe yun hi apne kalaamoN se mehfil mai chaar chaand lagaate rahiye



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