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Dhundte hain! - 21st July 2005, 11:58 AM

Dosto...dosti badi hi hasii hai..!
ye na ho toh yaaro kya ye zindagi hai!
...ye song.. jisne likha hai sach likha hai.


dosti....Bas ek bund hi mil jaye iski..daaman bhig jata hai!
Aur kuch dost toh ,barsaato se hote hein..dil ko bhigo kar chal dete hain!
mahek chhod jate hain, aur chhod jate hain intezaar..
phir se mil paane ka!!


Bundo mein AassmaaN dhundte hain!
teri yaado mein jahaaN dhundte hain!

palkeN bhigo ke, khud pe has dete hain
kya hua ye, kab, kahaaN? dhundte hain

yun toh din guzar jata hai akele hi..,
shaamo ko naye kaarvaan, dhuundte hain

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain

Hum tanha toh nahi.., magar mere dost..
tanhayi me dosti k nishaaN, dhundte hain

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!

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25th July 2005, 01:54 PM

Komal ji.....

Dhoondte- dhoondte aapki post mil gayi.....aapko sabse pehle jawab -e-daad dene ki inayat mili hai......

bahut khoob....apni talash ko bayan kiya hai.....

jaroor milega.....khuda pe bharosa aur apni wafa ki khaatir koi na koi jaroor milega......

khush rahiye....

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25th July 2005, 02:25 PM

Bundo mein AassmaaN dhundte hain!
teri yaado mein jahaaN dhundte hain!

palkeN bhigo ke, khud pe has dete hain
kya hua ye, kab, kahaaN? dhundte hain

Waaaaaaahhh... Beautifully said...!


yun toh din guzar jata hai akele hi..,
shaamo ko naye kaarvaan, dhuundte hain

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain

Beautifulll..!


Hum tanha toh nahi.., magar mere dost..
tanhayi me dosti k nishaaN, dhundte hain

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!

Kyaa baat hai...!

Dear Komal!

Bahut hi pyaari gahzal likhi hai.. on the beautiful most relation.. Dosti.... As always.. nice words and nice feelings... Meri daad kubool kar lena... Take Good Care


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hi! - 25th July 2005, 03:36 PM

Aman ji..apne is dhunda...shukriya!
apko jo line pasand aayi hai mujhe bhi vanhi sabse achhi lagi hain, bas ab maiine badal kar ise firse padhiye..shayad kuch aur pasand aye...! kidding!

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hi! - 25th July 2005, 03:38 PM

Pulkit...
m glad u liked these feeling on frenship...sach kaha tumne its one of the most beautiful relations!!...shabd apne achhe ho jate hain, jasba sachha ho toh!...thx a lott!

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Re: Dhundte hain! - 25th July 2005, 04:35 PM

Bundo mein AassmaaN dhundte hain!
teri yaado mein jahaaN dhundte hain!

palkeN bhigo ke, khud pe has dete hain
kya hua ye, kab, kahaaN? dhundte hain


Wah...

yun toh din guzar jata hai akele hi..,
shaamo ko naye kaarvaan, dhuundte hain

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain


Kya baat hai ... bhai wah....

Hum tanha toh nahi.., magar mere dost..
tanhayi me dosti k nishaaN, dhundte hain

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!


Jyada dhoondna nahi padega.... bus dil ki aankhein khuli honi chahiye...

Hi Komal,

Kaafi acha likha hai tumne dosti ke ehsaas par.....

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Re: Dhundte hain! - 25th July 2005, 06:30 PM

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Dosto...dosti badi hi hasii hai..!
ye na ho toh yaaro kya ye zindagi hai!
...ye song.. jisne likha hai sach likha hai.


dosti....Bas ek bund hi mil jaye iski..daaman bhig jata hai!
Aur kuch dost toh ,barsaato se hote hein..dil ko bhigo kar chal dete hain!
mahek chhod jate hain, aur chhod jate hain intezaar..
phir se mil paane ka!!


Bundo mein AassmaaN dhundte hain!
teri yaado mein jahaaN dhundte hain!

palkeN bhigo ke, khud pe has dete hain
kya hua ye, kab, kahaaN? dhundte hain

yun toh din guzar jata hai akele hi..,
shaamo ko naye kaarvaan, dhuundte hain

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain

Hum tanha toh nahi.., magar mere dost..
tanhayi me dosti k nishaaN, dhundte hain

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!

-komal
21/07/05
Bahout hi acha likha hai aapne...Komal Ji!

aap ke makte ka kya kehna...

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!


Behad pasand aaya!



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25th July 2005, 11:21 PM

KOMALJI AAPKI TAREEF MEIN KYA KAHOON ,
MAIN TO AAPKA STUDENT BANNA CHAHUNGA .
KYA ZABRDAST KHOJ HAI AAPKI,
AAPKI NAZAR KUCH TO KHAS HOGI KI APKO
ITNI ACHHA SONG MILA , DOSTI KE BAARE
MEIN MAIN SIRF ITNA KAHUNGA KI


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26th July 2005, 06:45 AM

Bundo mein AassmaaN dhundte hain!
teri yaado mein jahaaN dhundte hain!

palkeN bhigo ke, khud pe has dete hain
kya hua ye, kab, kahaaN? dhundte hain

yun toh din guzar jata hai akele hi..,
shaamo ko naye kaarvaan, dhuundte hain

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain

Hum tanha toh nahi.., magar mere dost..
tanhayi me dosti k nishaaN, dhundte hain

bahot mile, bahot mil jayenge dost, komal
tujh sa koi mile, aaj bhi HAN, Dhundte hain!!
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26th July 2005, 10:41 AM

Ali ji,

It feels gud 2 know u liked my words...magar student banne ki zarurat kya hai, hum sab yaha hai,.. kyu ki hum already student hain
kyu sahi kaha na..!

THanx so much for the apreciation...keep coming!
n ya keep sharing ur work also..!
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hi! - 26th July 2005, 10:43 AM

Parul ji....
as usual ur reply was also short but sweet!...
thx so much...for coming!

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Re: hi! - 26th July 2005, 10:51 AM

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Aman ji..apne is dhunda...shukriya!
apko jo line pasand aayi hai mujhe bhi vanhi sabse achhi lagi hain, bas ab maiine badal kar ise firse padhiye..shayad kuch aur pasand aye...! kidding!

thx a lot!
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to lo Komal....

ek misra phir se dil mein utar gaya....

adhure adhure se kuch palcheen hein,
apni baatoN main teri zubaan, dhundte hain


wah kya baat kahi hai.......



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26th July 2005, 11:00 AM

...so sweet! aman ji!
apne bas.. vo baat dekh li jispe shayad kisi ki nazar nahi padi...har saade lafz mein ek gehraii si hai...aapne un mein se ek gehraii bhaanp li....shukriya!

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26th July 2005, 02:01 PM

Amanush jji...m very very sorry for replying u so late!...
atually i realised just now tht i missed 2 reply u yestrday!

its a pleasure 2 know tht u liked my post
thx so much ...for a sweet reply...!
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