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dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz -
25th April 2005, 09:11 AM
aik taaza Ghazal.......ehbaab ki nazar
mulai'zaa farmaayeN dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz allah qasam maine to socha bhi nahiiN tha voh "itnaa" mere dil ko dukhaayeNge kisi roz har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..? udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz "maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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25th April 2005, 09:45 AM
Aapke bayaan mein shaamil hain...
Bahut khoobsurat alfaaz, aur us se bhi khoobsurat andaaz..... Kuch humari taraf se bhi arz hai.... Mujhko apne dard-e-dil ke zakhm na dikhaana, apni ghazalon se kabhi mujhko na behlaana... meri zidd mein khudaa-ra mujhko na jhukaana, mere bulaane se pehle tum mujhko manaana... Yeh to jugalbandi ho gayi! Abhi bas itna hi... Mohabbat... Naina Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein... |
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25th April 2005, 10:18 AM
haaye, shabdoN mein itnii bebasii ko qeh'd rakhnaa achii baat nahiN hai mere bhai! ..jinke liye dil tadapta hai, kaash woh bhii paD sakte apne aashiqoN ke jazbaat.
bahot zordaar ghazal hai miyaan, aur har sher daad ke qaabil hai! "udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz" «-- waaaaaah! kya umDa khayaal hai janaab! laa-jawaab.. bahot hii geh'raaii mein le gaye aap to khayaalat kii kashtii ko! aapkii ghazaloN mein chuphaa ek aaiina hai, aur aapke alfaaz ki parchaayii mein main aksar khud ko paataa hoon; aglii ghazal kaa be'sabrii se intezaar rahe gaa! mehfil sajaate rahiiye, aur duaa hai kii ek din aapkii mehboob ko yeh ghazaleiN paDne kaa maukaa mile aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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25th April 2005, 12:17 PM
Adaab Maikash Sahab,
Bohot acchha laga aapko yaha vaapis paa kar. Janab ek bohot hi umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne jis ke liye humari daad qabool kare. Ek ajeeb se bebasi, kuch naummeedi aur kaafi dard. Bohot khoob. Likhte rahe. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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25th April 2005, 01:30 PM
udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz Maikash Sahab SSA..... aapke aane se bazm phir dilkash ho uthi hai...... aur rahi baat aapke kalaam ki to......use padna humesha hi aacha lagta hai..... dard aur sitam se bhare is kalaam pe is nacheez ki daad kabool kijiye..... umeed hai aage bhi aap isi tarah se bazm ko sajate rahenge...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz -
26th April 2005, 10:33 AM
Maikash Miyaan...
Ghazal tau aap khuub kehte hain janaab...yeh aakhiri sher dil ko chaak chaak karne pe tula hai... "maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz ab aap jis alam mein yeh likh gaye hain...usi ko barqaraar rakhte huye...yeh Faiz sahib ke chand ashaar apki nazar karti hoon... tez hai aaj dard-e-dil saaqii talKhii-e-may ko tez-tar kar de josh-e-mahashar hai tashnaakaam abhii chaak-e-daaman ko taa-jigar kar de Do shauq-e-shahadat rakhne wale, mere azeez Shayron ko ek saath yahan dekh bus yaad aaya...Jee Sharaabi Sahib aap bhi zara nazar-e-sani kijieygaa... jahaan bhi rahieye...khush rahieye... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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26th April 2005, 10:33 AM
maikash saheb
mein behad khush hoon ke aap ne arse baad is forum ke liye kuch likha. hazb e mamool aap ka kalam aap ka khoobsurat andaaz e bayan, laayeq e satayesh hai. her shayr bohat khayal afreen, aur lateef jazbe ka haamil hai. meri bharpoor daad qabool karein, aur please isi tarah is forum ko apne kalam se roshan kerte rahein. meri duayein aap ke liye aap ki khushiyon aur sehat ke liye. musharrafhusain |
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26th April 2005, 06:51 PM
bahut hi accha likha hain apne maikashjee.............shabdon ka pirona bhi kamal ka hain.....
udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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16th May 2005, 12:44 PM
maikashji
aapki ghazal behad pasand aayi sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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Re: dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz -
16th May 2005, 12:58 PM
dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz WaaaaH.. bahut khoob!! allah qasam maine to socha bhi nahiiN tha voh "itnaa" mere dil ko dukhaayeNge kisi roz har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..? Waaahhh... !! udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz Behad khoobsurat!! "maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz Waaaaahhh!! Maikash ji! Ek aur behad khoobsurat kalaam.. bahut accha laga ise padhkar... yun hi khhobusrta ashaar humaare beech laate rahiyega.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd July 2005, 12:18 AM
Bahut khoob...
Jitni tareef karoongs kamm hi hogi.. |
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hi -
29th July 2005, 07:54 PM
thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane
mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz wow tooo good ek khaamoshii hai sunatii hai kahaa karatii hai naa ye bujhatii hai naa rukatii hai naa Thaharii hai kahii.n nuur kii buu.Nd hai sadiyo.n se bahaa karatii hai sirf ehasaas hai ye, ruuh se mahasuus karo pyaar ko pyaar hii rahane do, koii naam naa do..... hamane dekhii hai in aa.Nkho.n kii mahakatii khushabuu haath se chhuuke ise rishto.n kaa ilzaam na do........... |
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9th August 2005, 08:15 PM
wah wah wah,
mujhe is jagah aap se bohot kuch seekhne ko mila, mai bohot inspire hoti hoon aap ki shayri se. zeba |
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10th August 2005, 09:05 AM
maikash ji,
taarif mai koi jawaab nahi milae aisi gajal. khush raho. |
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21st March 2006, 01:12 AM
wow...
Very nice maikash ji... Take care! |
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bhai waah -
24th March 2006, 10:06 PM
Aadaab huzoor. i hope ki aapne pehchaan to liya hi hoga. arse baad in sheroN ke zariye mulaakaat ho rahi hai.
bahot khoob ghazal hai. Aaj ek arse baad shayri.com per lauta aur aapki ye ghazal padhi to dil khush ho gaya. Reply kiye bina dil nahi mana. Ek aur baar mubaarakbaad dena chaahunga. Bahot acchi ghazal hai. chaliye aapki ghazal padhte padhte 2 sher zahen me aa gaye. aapki nazar kar raha hun. Raat itni to teri baahoN me guzaar lunga. ki saher tarsegi har pal, saher hone tak. ek aur.... mulaaizaa farmaayein.. Kal raat mujhse meri besabr zindagi ne kaha Soch lo "rahul" kal fir vohi saher hogi. aise na jaane tamaam sher zahen me aate rehte hain. waqt ki paabandi ki wajah se mehfil me aa nahi pata. per jab bhi waqt milta hai aapki ghazalein search kar ke jaruur padhta hun. Shumailaa jee se bhi hamara aadaab kahiyega. Chalta hun. Rab aapko salaamat rakkhe. Rahul. ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote |
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11th September 2006, 06:57 PM
Maiksah bhaa'i,
paRh kar mazaa aaa gaya.. MaikaShi ka kyaa aalam hai.. bohat khoob! ess naa-cheez ka daad haazir hai, qubool keejiye... -Mayank |
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11th September 2006, 08:48 PM
maikash sir ek aur bahut hi udma peshkash thi ye aapki.aapko jab v padhte hain jee karta hain padhte rahen.aapse bas yahi guzarish karunga ki aap aage v bas yunhi likhte rahiye hum jaise nacheezon ke liye.taki hume kuch andaaz-e-bayaan seekhne ko mil jaye.
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12th September 2006, 01:11 AM
kya kaheN bhai ye miyaaN maikash kuch ziyada hi bad'tameez ho gaye haiN aaj-kal....dostoN ne itni muravvat se apne tabsire se nawaaza aur huzuur ne kisi ka bhi shukriya adaa nahiiN kiya...!!
dosto sabse mazrat chahta huuN......tabiyat zaraa na'saaz hai isliye sabhi ka ek hi post maiN dhanyavaad karne ki gustaakhi kar raha huuN Ghazal ko dobara na padhne ki jurrat shayad isliye nahiiN ke is Ghazal ki beher meiN behisaab laGhzisheiN numaayaaN haiN...isko maine pphir se kehne ki koshish ki hai kisi roz post karuuNga jin dostoN ne husala badhaaya hai unka shukurguzaar huuN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th September 2006, 03:22 AM
thi unki yeh zidd ke maiN jaauN unko manaane mujhko yeh veham tha voh bulaayeNge kisi roz
Wah wah kya baat hai..........bahut acche....Really liked it!!! |
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12th September 2006, 11:05 AM
bahut dino bad kuch aisa padha hai ... jisk ek ek shabd ko taar bana du ... to tar ki jhankaar se dard ka sitaar baj uthe....!!
maaf karna dost taarif k liye shabd nahi hai ... mehroom rahna padega tumhe !!! |
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12th September 2006, 11:27 AM
maikash ji aap ki ghazal jab bhi padhte hai, bas padhate hi rahate hai,kyaa khoob rawaani hai ,padh kar sach mai mazaa aa gaya,aap ki agli ghazal ka besabri se intzaar rahegaa,aur is dilkash kavish par meri dil se daad kabool kijiyega janaab
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29th September 2006, 08:58 PM
sabse pahale pranam maikash ji,
to ab shuru karu............? dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz maikash ki Ghazal tumko sunaayeNge kisi roz shayad hum aapki gazal hi parh rahe hai ji.......... ''dard kyaa hota hai bataayeNge kisi roz'' ye line achhi lagi hume. har roz aayi'ne se yahi puuchta huuN maiN kya rukh pe tabbassum bhi sajaayeNge kisi roz..? ye tabbassum kya hota hai? apne sitam ka dekh lena khud hi asar tum zakhm-e-jigar tam'aam dikhaayeNge kisi roz masha allah.............. "maikash miyaaN" jo peete rahe yuuN hi dosto hum keh rahe haiN jaan gaNwaayeNge kisi roz maikash miyaan aapne kya likha hai ye..............behatariin. bahot hi pyara sher laga ye hume.......... apki gazal ki jitni tariif karun kam lagti hai, humari to palken bhi aaj num lagti hai.. hmmmm kahan se laye itna dard haa boliye boliye..... sach kaun to aapki ye gazal dil ko chhu gai aaj humare....unhi likhte rahiye ji yahi dua hai dene ke liye ok ji bye bye graze aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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29th August 2008, 05:08 PM
maikash bhaii.....bahut khoob kaha aapne...har sher kabiley tareef hai....par yeh sher sabse khaas laga :
udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz bahut umda khayaal haiN kush rahiye god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th August 2008, 05:24 PM
lafzo ki tarah dil ki kitab main milenge,
ya banke mahak aapko gulab main milenge, milne ke liye e dost zara theek se sona, aaj hum tumse khwabon main milenge.... |
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26th July 2009, 12:41 AM
aap ko padh ke kabhi dil wah wah kiye bagair is site par se nahi jaata.
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17th October 2009, 08:11 PM
Soch rahi hooN kaise is kalaam par nazar nahiN gayi meri ab Tak!! Is Ke Liye pehle to mein aap se maafi Chaahugi! ..
KahNe Ko Kaafi kuch hai.. par Samjh meiN nahiN aa raha ki Shuru kaha se Kare, Har sher Laa-jaawaB hai Jis tarah se baayaaN kiya hai aapne usay pad Kar bahuT aasudgi mili wakay ye kalaaM khabil-e-tareef hai! Bohat hi khuubsurat aur dil azeez ghazal likhi hai aap ne... padha to sirf padhti hi reh gayi.. maikash ji... aap shayri.com ke un shayeroN me shaamil haiN jin ke Ghazalein yahaan ki raunaq badha deti hain.... aapki ghazaloN ka hamesha se intezaar rehta hai... yuhi likhte rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Janaab takreeban teen mahine hue haiN mujhe sdc join kiye aur meri badkismati dekhiye ki jo khojta hua aaya tha woh mujhe aapki Ghazal meiN teen mahine baad mila.... Pehle aapko na padh paana shayad ghaflat ho sakti hai, lekin ab na padhna badkismati hogi... Main Kya tareef karunga aapki Ghazal ki, likhne ka sabab matr apni haazari darz karvana tha... Ijaazat... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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18th January 2013, 03:29 PM
Maikash ji, aapki yeh gazal aaj maine Facebook ke apne page Shayri Through Emotions par share ki hai...muje behad pasand hai yeh gazal....!!
rabb raakha .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th January 2013, 04:48 PM
Wuaahhhh saaheb..
Mazaa aa. Gaya ..purasar kalaam zabardast aihsaas .. Jitnii tareef kareiN utni kam special thanks to sunita jee daad qubool farmaaeiN |
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18th January 2013, 05:07 PM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th January 2013, 05:56 PM
udne do in pariiNdoN ko aazaad fazaa meiN
tumhaare hoNge agar lauT hi aayeNge kisi roz maikash ji poori maikash hai yeh gazal.........zabardast. rajinderseep |
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18th January 2013, 06:19 PM
Sunita jee ..
Kaisi haiN aap ..yaad to use karte haiN jise bhula diya jaaye .. Maine ek ghazal likhi hai shayad dard section ke pehle page pe hi hai Aapka intezaar hai |
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18th January 2013, 07:57 PM
Maikash ji,
bahut behtereen ghazal...Ek baar punjabi poetry section mein Shiv di Ghazal thread.me aap se mukhatib hua tha... aaj aap ki gazal Kisi roz pari , bAut khoob. sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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