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26th November 2013, 06:46 PM
Aadaab hazraat, aaj bahot arse ke baad ek choti si koshish ki hai, kalam chalaane ki koshish, zyaada kuch na likh sakaa mahaz chand ehsaasaat aapki khidmat me pesh kar rahaa hoon, ummeed hai pasand kijiyegaa...
Aap se Guftagoo badhaane ko,
Dil hai taiyaar JaaN se jaane ko.
Laut aayenge jinkaa Vaada thaa,
wo hamee ko haiN bhool jaane ko.
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
GhazleN tumko na hum sunaa paaye,
Rah gayee haiN faqat Zamaane ko.
Aise raddo-badal hue is me,
kyaa se kyaa ho gayaa fasaane ko.
Chehraa pehchaan bhi na paaoge,
Zidd na kar aaj MuhN dikhaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.
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26th November 2013, 08:15 PM
Shaad bhaii:
namaste!
bhaii Ghazal to bahot umdaah liKhi hai aapne... Shaad ki Ghazal paDh kar dil Shaad Shaad ho gayaa
yuuNhi liKhte rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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27th November 2013, 10:26 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Aadaab hazraat, aaj bahot arse ke baad ek choti si koshish ki hai, kalam chalaane ki koshish, zyaada kuch na likh sakaa mahaz chand ehsaasaat aapki khidmat me pesh kar rahaa hoon, ummeed hai pasand kijiyegaa...
Aap se Guftagoo badhaane ko,
Dil hai taiyaar JaaN se jaane ko.
Laut aayenge jinkaa Vaada thaa,
wo hamee ko haiN bhool jaane ko.
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
GhazleN tumko na hum sunaa paaye,
Rah gayee haiN faqat Zamaane ko.
Aise raddo-badal hue is me,
kyaa se kyaa ho gayaa fasaane ko.
Chehraa pehchaan bhi na paaoge,
Zidd na kar aaj MuhN dikhaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.
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Waaaaaah.................. Waaaaaaaah.............................
Kya jazbaat hai aur kya jazba hai iss ghazal me.
Behterin se behterin hai ye.
~~ Salaam Shaad saab
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th November 2013, 05:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Shaad bhaii:
namaste!
bhaii Ghazal to bahot umdaah liKhi hai aapne... Shaad ki Ghazal paDh kar dil Shaad Shaad ho gayaa
yuuNhi liKhte rahiye aage bhee
KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Dhaval mere bhai...
kaise ho aap... aaj aapko apni bazm me dekh kar itnikhushi ho rahi hai k e bataaya nahi jaa sakta.... bahot accha laga jaankar ke ye kalaam aapko pasand aaya.. aate rahiyega.. khush rahiye
Shaad...
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28th November 2013, 05:23 PM
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Originally Posted by aadeil
Waaaaaah.................. Waaaaaaaah.............................
Kya jazbaat hai aur kya jazba hai iss ghazal me.
Behterin se behterin hai ye.
~~ Salaam Shaad saab
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Aadaab Safeer saahab.....
aapki inaayat se behad mamnoon hoon... hauslaafzaai farmaate raheN... aate raheN...
Shaad...
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29th November 2013, 10:51 AM
Aap se Guftagoo badhaane ko,
Dil hai taiyaar JaaN se jaane ko.
Laut aayenge jinkaa Vaada thaa,
wo hamee ko haiN bhool jaane ko.
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
GhazleN tumko na hum sunaa paaye,
Rah gayee haiN faqat Zamaane ko.
Aise raddo-badal hue is me,
kyaa se kyaa ho gayaa fasaane ko.
Chehraa pehchaan bhi na paaoge,
Zidd na kar aaj MuhN dikhaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.
SHAAD BAHI AAPNE KUCH NAHI BAHUT KUCH KEH DIYA HAI
YE AASHAR BEHAD SARAHNIYE HAI
DEROON DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD
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29th November 2013, 03:16 PM
Sameer saab,
Aadaab. Unda khaayaalon ko daad haazir hai tah-e-dil se. Kubool framaayiyega.Bahut shukriya aapne in ehsaason ko hamare saath baanta.
Likhte rahiye.
Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
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29th November 2013, 05:30 PM
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Originally Posted by shakir ali 01
Aap se Guftagoo badhaane ko,
Dil hai taiyaar JaaN se jaane ko.
Laut aayenge jinkaa Vaada thaa,
wo hamee ko haiN bhool jaane ko.
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
GhazleN tumko na hum sunaa paaye,
Rah gayee haiN faqat Zamaane ko.
Aise raddo-badal hue is me,
kyaa se kyaa ho gayaa fasaane ko.
Chehraa pehchaan bhi na paaoge,
Zidd na kar aaj MuhN dikhaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.
SHAAD BAHI AAPNE KUCH NAHI BAHUT KUCH KEH DIYA HAI
YE AASHAR BEHAD SARAHNIYE HAI
DEROON DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD
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aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon Shakir saahab..... tashreef laate rahiyegaa.. khush raheN aur apnaa kahyaal rakkheN
Shaad...
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29th November 2013, 07:59 PM
shoiab bhai...this one is wonderful....loved it...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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29th November 2013, 11:19 PM
WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.[/CENTER][/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/I][/B][/QUOTE]
Shaad mere bhai ... kya naazuk khayaal piroye hain .... phool ko nashtar banaane ka kaam kiya hai !!!! dheron dheron daad aur duaein aap ko !!!
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30th November 2013, 11:13 AM
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Originally Posted by Krishnasharma
Sameer saab,
Aadaab. Unda khaayaalon ko daad haazir hai tah-e-dil se. Kubool framaayiyega.Bahut shukriya aapne in ehsaason ko hamare saath baanta.
Likhte rahiye.
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bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka Krishna ji...... aate rahiyega
Shaad
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4th December 2013, 09:57 PM
just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Aur To Kuch Nahi Chaiye Mujhe aye zindagi Tujhse...
Bas Wo Ek Shakhs Lota De Jo Mujhe Tujhse Bhi Pyaara Hai...
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5th December 2013, 10:13 AM
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shoiab bhai...this one is wonderful....loved it...
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aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa aru bhai................................
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5th December 2013, 10:16 AM
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WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Ab jo bhoole ho, bhool hi jaao,
Maine maanaa tere bahaane ko.
Tumne MaaNgii bhi to Anaa maaNgee,
maiN to niklaa tha ChaaNd laane ko.
Ek hum bhaagte haiN khud se "Shaad"
Ek wo Aainaa dikhaane ko.[/CENTER][/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/I][/B]
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Shaad mere bhai ... kya naazuk khayaal piroye hain .... phool ko nashtar banaane ka kaam kiya hai !!!! dheron dheron daad aur duaein aap ko !!![/QUOTE]
Zarraa bhai.... aapki nazre inaayat ka main shuru se hi kaayal rahaa hoon.. aapko khayaalaat pasand aaye... ehsaas acche lage meri khushnaseebi hai ye, yooN lagaa likhnaa kamyaab huaa... saath banaae rakhiye, aur apna khayaal rakhiye
Shaad...
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5th December 2013, 10:17 AM
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just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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bahot bahot shukriyaa dear.......... just keep coming and keep reading.
thanks once again..
Shaad...
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9th December 2013, 01:03 AM
Shaad bhai..
Samajhne ki koshish zaroor ki
Par meri Urdu itni acchi nahin ki sab kuch samajh loon..
:-(
Please translate few words jaise anaa..
Sorry for disturbing..
Bas samajhne ki koshish mein aapko taklief de raha hoon..
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
The Demon Prince...
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