Khamoshi Bhi Juban Hoti Hai

[ursonly]

Kuch kahna hi kuch nahi hota,
khamoshi bhi juban hoti hai.
har sham gamon ke saaye main,
meri parchain bhi bhoja dhoti hai.
khamosh raat jab pasarti hai,
nayi subah ki aas hoti hai.
nayi subah jab julf bikherti hai,
ek khamoshi si saath hoti hai.
us khamoshi ke saath,
phir ek nayi talaash hoti hai.

[ZaraSuniye]

ursonly jee:

aapne durust farmaaya.....ke khamoshi bhii zubaan hoti hai. Bin kahe kya kya kaha jaa sakte hai hamari sab se nayii ghazal ka bhii yehi kehnaa thaa.....waqt mile to apni raaye se zaruur nawaaziyegaa.....title hai "hum kuch nahi kehte (Kuch ankahi si baatein)"

aap hi ki soch ke hamaare alfaaz hai shaayad


aur yuhi likhte rahiyega........bahut haseen khayaal hai.....khamoshi bhii zubaan hoti hai......

duaayon ke saath
- Zara Suniye ("Deepa")

[ursonly]

Deepa ji,
Zara Suniye

aap ki gazal padi, aur sach kahoon to pehli baar main samaj hi nahi aaya ki "yeh sirf ek gazal thi ya phir kisi ki shikayat".
haalan ki (gazal) maaf kijiyega "shikayat" bahut hi umda thi. sach main it was excellent. main kabhi sapne main bhi aisa nahi likh sakta. particularly yeh line
khud nazron se gir jaayega jo ham kehne pe aayeN
hamaarii to sharaafat hai, ham kuch nahi kehte
yeh line to sachmuch bahut hi khoobsurat thi. waise aapne bhi bina kuch kahe, mera matlab hai ki khamoshi ka saath le kar sab kuch kah diya. ya phir yun kahiye ki khamoshi ki juban ka kaafi sahi istemaal kiya hai aapne. bahut khoob....keep on.
jahan tak meri raaye ka sawaal hai, to main itna bata doon ki ek bahut hi adna sa shayar hoon, jise ki raaye lene ki jaroorat hai na ki raaye dene ki. is shayri ki duniya main mera mukaam kaafi chota hai, aur aap ke muqabale main to kaafi chota.
anyway, aab ke liye bye
take care

ursonly