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aarzoo -
27th November 2002, 02:37 PM
aarzoo kya thi dil me bata na saka
main use jaam-e-ishq pila na saka uski chahat me itna main kho gaya ek lamha bhi usko main bhula na saka uske honto ko,uski aankho ko uski zulfon ko, uski baaton ko aur use dil hi dil me main chahta raha kisi aur se bhi main pyar kar na saka har tarah se wo mujhko satati rahi chah kar bhi main usko sata na saka aarzoo.... ek din usko mujhse juda hona tha mere khwabon ko mujhse khafa hona tha apne dil ko to maine samjhaya bahot uska dil mera etbaar kar na saka mere armaan ke aansu kitne nikle magar uski furqat me aansu bhi main baha na saka aarzoo... jab wo jane lagi,aankh rone lagi dil machalne laga,jaan nikalne lagi us judai ke gham me tadapta raha par mohabbat ka izhaar kar na saka rokna chaha usko to dil ne bahut apne dil ki sada usko suna na saka aarzoo kya thi dil me bata na saka "do lamho ke hi waaste aa bazm mein FARAZ sadiyon se yeh nigaahein hain muntazir teri" |
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27th November 2002, 04:18 PM
very well said. i just luv wht u've written. it's dam good.
i can feel ur dard. sachmuch pyar karna kitna mushkil hai or usse bhi mushkil hai pyaar ka izhaar karna. well done man just keep it up. kuch kahna hi kuch nahi hota, khamoshi bhi juban hoti hai. har shaam gamon ke saaye mein, meri parchaai bhi bhoja dhoti hai. khamosh raat jab pasarti hai, nayi subah ki aas hoti hai. nayi subah jab julf bikherti hai, ek khamoshi si saath hoti hai. us khamoshi ke saath phir ek, nayi talaash shuru hoti hai. |
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ufff -
27th November 2002, 07:30 PM
faraz,
tumne kasam khayee hai hame gayal karne ki.....a-re itna dard bhara q likhte ho jara bataoge. Waise achchha karte ho jo likhte ho aur aage bhi likhte rehnaaaaa urs friend summy ======================= dard ka mere aap yaki kare na kare arj itni hai is raz ka charcha na kare |
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thanks -
28th November 2002, 11:35 PM
thanks a lot Raaz
Thanks for reading and appreciating my poem. U said it right, it was my dard that i have written in my words. Thanks again. Keep reading for me. Raz "do lamho ke hi waaste aa bazm mein FARAZ sadiyon se yeh nigaahein hain muntazir teri" |
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1st December 2002, 06:36 PM
Aamir ji
Bahut hee khoobsurat lafzon se aapne apna dukh bayan kiya. Dua karta hoon aapki khwaish jald poori ho. Vipin ...ek shoonya 
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too good |
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too good -
1st December 2002, 07:34 PM
ye chahat badi buri cheej hai ise lagne na dije
lamha lamha tadap ke use badhne na dije jam-e-ishq bahot mamooli ho gaya hai bajar main apni is anmol "aarjoo" ko aise jaya hone na dije -aapki sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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11th December 2002, 08:43 PM
dear friends aap logo ne nerie dard ko mehsoos kiya yehi kaafi hai.....maine to kabhi apne dil par zakhm khaye the ye mujhe hamesha yaad rahega....aur aage zakhm na kha saku aisi koshish karunga.....
vipinji, sanamji & (hum-naamji) raaz sahab aise hi mujhe encourage karte rehna......urs only raz "do lamho ke hi waaste aa bazm mein FARAZ sadiyon se yeh nigaahein hain muntazir teri" |
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Re: aarzoo -
12th December 2002, 03:21 AM
What to say, it was a wonderfull shayri. Simply superb.
aur ek baath, Zaruri To Nahi Ke Batayain Labon Se Dastaan Apni, Zabaan Ek Aur Bhi Hoti Hai Haal-e-Izhaar Ki |
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