teri dhadkan ki koi aahat sunne ke liye tadapta hai

dil_e_sikast

tere dhadkan ki koi aahat ko sunne ke liye tadapta hai
tere hoto pe koi lafz banne ke liye machalta hai
pagal hai dil teri mohabbat main, tu jik-ra kare na kare
meri aankho se ye aansu, tera naam ban ke chhalakta hai

main janti hu bewafa nahi tu, hai teri bhi majboori
par aag banke dil main mere, sulagti hai teri doori
ye maanta nahi mera kaha, samjau bhi to kaise
dil to ye bas trea hai jo tere tasavvur se bahekta hai

sambhalna ab mera muskil hai, kuchh to kije hamsaya
agar himmat na thi thamne ki, to kyu ise behkaya
jinda rehne ki aas bhi nahi, jindagi ki talash bhi nahi
fir bhi aakhri waqt main bhi, tere naam se dhadakta hai

Vipinbox · 25th November 2002, 11:27 PM

Dil_e_sikast ji

Bahut accha likha hai aapne, behtareen lafzon se aapne apna dard bayan kiya hai.
Dua karta hoon jo aap maange woh apko jald haasil ho.

vipin
...ek shoonya

dil_e_sikast · **sukriya -** 26th November 2002, 09:40 AM

Dear vipinji,
aap ka bahot bahot sukriya ki aapne apna kimti waqt is nacheej ki koi rachna padhne ke liye nikala. Muje ummeed hai aap jaise shayaro ki hosla afjayee se muj me koi improvement ho. Aur aapki duao ke liye bahot sukriya
-sanam

Vipinbox · 27th November 2002, 01:54 AM

dil_e_sikast ji,

Main shukriya kehna chahata hoon apni aankhon ko. Jinki badolat aapki shayri padne ka mauka mila.

dhanyavaad

Vipin
...ek shoonya

naraz · **wow -** 27th November 2002, 07:01 PM

Ek baar fir hila diya na aapne. Par is bar kuchh jiyada hi tanha lag rahi hai app. Kya baat hai.....
apne dard ko bas simat ne ki dua de
kahi dard ka fawwara duniya ko na duba de.
Waise hamari yahi dua hai ki aap ka dard simat ne se pehle hi khatm ho jaye.
aapka chahnewala
aaquib

dil_e_sikast · **thank u very much -** 27th November 2002, 07:43 PM

Dear Vipinji,
Aap muje sarminda kar rahe hai. Aapki aankho ko sukriya to muje kehna chahiye. Again, thanks for all ur love and kindness. Aur han mera naam sanam hai, dil_e_sikast nahi.bye and take care
-sanam

dil_e_sikast · **how -** 27th November 2002, 07:52 PM

Dear Aaquib,
u said wow, i ask how. I mean how do u able to read all poetry of mine. Its really ur kindness that i always get ur reply or say comment or compliment for all my poem. Thanks a lot for it.
-sanam

aamirfaraz · 27th November 2002, 11:29 PM

hi sanam i wanna give u new name sharara...sharara
sabko hila diya &mujhe jala diya yaar
bahut achcha likha hai
likhte rehna ...mere liye
likhna sirf mere liye & jeena sirf mere liye.....
yaur adorable friend..........razzzzzzzz

dil_e_sikast · **oho -** 27th November 2002, 11:43 PM

My dear raz
thank u, thank u, thank u, thank u very much. Thanks a lot for ur new name. But now at this stage i m not able to change my name. And for u.....i will try to write. aur suno re..ye hilne-jalne wali baat hi chhod do hamari shayri to sirf aapko hilati hai-jalati hai aur aapke lafz hame khak kar dete hai....sahi hai ki nahi? Well c u soon dear. Bye and take care
-urs sanam

Sharaabi · 28th November 2002, 03:54 AM

Likhne ka style pasand aaya, saath mein aapke lafz bhi.

Likhte rahiye,
Aman

naraz · **heyyyyyyy -** 28th November 2002, 11:46 PM

heyyyyyyy sanam
tuje meri kasam
kar muj par thoda raham
mita de apni ye saram
kar de ham par itna karam
keh de "hum tumhare hai sanam"
y u ask me that how can i able to read ur all poetry. Actually i m here to read UR poetry. Cause ur each and every word make me crazy to read and read and read it.
keep writing as i m keep reading
bye and take care
urs aaquib

Shayar 4ever · **Really nice... -** 29th November 2002, 08:10 PM

Salam Dil-e-Sikast ji,
how are you? Aji ek aur baar aapke is post se humaare Dil ki aawaz ko shabdo ka sahara mila..Thank you very much..Bahut hi khub likha hai aapne..Aise hi likhte rehna..Sanam...bye..take care..have a nice time..
Hamza

dil_e_sikast · **thanks -** 30th November 2002, 07:38 PM

thank u very much hamjaji,
keep reading and responsing. I like u to view my shayries. thanks again.
sanam

ursonly · 1st December 2002, 05:57 PM

hello shayra ji,

main bahut hi kam is shayri ki duniya main aata hoon, bahut hi kam likhta hoon aur replies to bahut hi kam likhta hoon. lekin aap ka kalam pad kar sachmuch bahut aacha laga. actually i like ur middle stanza the most, coz here the true love is decribed as the lover has not been blamed. tht's wht the true love is all about, not blaming ur lover.
anyway nice writing and just keep on writing
bye
take care

dil_e_sikast · **thanks -** 1st December 2002, 07:10 PM

dear RAAZ sahab
aapki ye "kam" wali baat muje pasand aayee. Qki insaan ko har cheej limit main karni chahiye. Aur is baat se muje bahot bahot bahot khusi hui ki aapne itne kam schedule main mere liye waqt nikalkar reply diya.And i also appreciate ur definition of true love. Thanks a lot for it. Keep reading...
bye and take care
sanam

naraz · **wat happen 2 u -** 3rd December 2002, 07:57 PM

hi sanamji,
aapko kya ho gaya, mere last reply ka ans kyu nahi diya. Kahi aap mere majak se naraz to nahi hui....agar aise hai to bande ki galti muaf kije. Magar please is tarah khafa na rahe. Is baar aapke reply ka besabri se intajar karunga.

aapke intajar ka har lamha ek saal barabar hoga
mere tasavvur me aapka charcha harbaar hoga
-aapka fan
aaquib

dil_e_sikast · **sorry -** 6th December 2002, 03:19 PM

sorry aaquibji,
actually i was quite ill and also busy with ramdan and eid so i could not reply u earlier. I did not have any other intension for not to replying u....so pls dont missunderstand.
bye and take care