Death

Rohin · **Death -** 17th December 2003, 04:49 PM

DEATH

I ask you my friend a question.
What is it in this world?
That makes you yearn to live more.
That lets you not come with me.

Is it the scorching heat of the desert sun?
Or the numbing effect of the snowfields.
Is it the tempestuous wind of the caves?
Or it’s the darkness in the woods.

What are you waiting for my friend?
Come with me, I shall show you.
Come the new world awaits you.
Come and live your dreams.

I bring to you a world of pleasure.
Full of things that one can only dream.
But only it is very true;
Beautiful, wonderful, exotic and magical.

Death my friend, I can’t come.
Lot is left for me to overcome.
Many a things for me to explore.
Miles to go, before my last slumber.

The sun has just risen past the horizon.
And the night is far away.
I walk to reach my destination.
Death my friend, life has just begun.

Shimul · 18th December 2003, 03:16 AM

Bohot achha kalam likhhe hein aapne. Baas ek hi sawal hein:
Death my friend, life has just begun. Why you at the end wrote this line, it's a bit confusing. All others are ok. Baas mujhe sirf yeh samjha de ke ishke peeche keya raaz hein!! Thanks. Take care. God bless you.

Rohin · 10:00 AM

Well the poetry is a conversation between death and myself so the way it ends. Actually a person is fighting death and he is nearing his death moment and death has come to take him away saying there are better things yet to come. But he refuses saying no this world has better things to offer.
Its more like a conversation between death and that man.

Shimul · 18th December 2003, 03:02 PM

Robin Jee, I understood that. But it's ok. May be it's a way that the poetry falls in this way! Thanks once again. Waise ek baat hein, aapno ke sath hamesha rahna chahiye aur share karni chahiye. Haan, hum aksar aapno se chupate hein yeh ke hume koi bimari hein. Hum sochte hein ke ushko dukh pohche! Lekin na kehne se aur bhi dukh pohchate hein hum, hein na? Just my thinking, you may not ment that way. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you.

jiya · 14th January 2004, 05:55 AM

4 me death is deciteful yet divine, the only way 2 achive the extreme the eternity, for it can come only once, so recive it humbly

.i belive ur thoughts r really beautiful

Shimul · 14th January 2004, 06:16 AM

Jiya Jee, welcome to this site. Hope you will find what you wanna find here. Good luck. I agree with you about death. Nice to know. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.

Rohin · 9th February 2004, 10:40 AM

Shukriya jiyaji.

Aapko aacha laga to mujhe aacha laga
Thank you
Regards
Rohin

Rohin · 11th February 2004, 07:56 PM

Death at the end of a journey is what we want
but what i want is death before the end of the journey
as the journey is the one which is beautiful
the outcome is just the signal of the end

Thanks
Rohin

Shimul · 11th February 2004, 08:23 PM

I see. Nice one. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......

Rohin · 12th February 2004, 09:48 AM

Kabhi kabhi man ko lagta hai ki zindagi ka lakshy kya hai, maut haina, to insaan kyon darta hai isse. Ant mein har kissi ka aanjam yehi hota hai

Kyon khayal hai aap logon ka

Love
Rohin

Shimul · 12th February 2004, 01:15 PM

Haan, yeh haqikat hein. Nice one. Waise jo Jinda lash ke tarha jeeye jaa raha hein ush ke bade meh keya khayal hein aapka? Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......

Priyamitra · 12th February 2004, 04:20 PM

Well done my friend. It’s really beautiful. Death the only truth of life is waiting for us. To make us free from all pain. On the other hand, god has sent us for some definite porose .god has given us life for some fixed time. When the time is over, when the porpose of is achived, at that time we become die.
Jindaki to baywafa hai ek din thukra-e-gi
Mout mahaboba hai saath apnay laykar jayagi.

With best wishes
Priya mitra

Rohin · 12th February 2004, 05:09 PM

Hi priya

thanks and good thoughts do keep writing here
God Bless You
Take care

Rohin

Rohin · 13th February 2004, 04:46 PM

tu mil jaaye toh maut se bhi lad lenge
arre maut kya cheez hai
tujhe pale hum to
Bhagwan se bhi lad padenge

Love
Rohin

Shimul · 13th February 2004, 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Rohin
tu mil jaaye toh maut se bhi lad lenge
arre maut kya cheez hai
tujhe pale hum to
Bhagwan se bhi lad padenge

Love
Rohin

Ho tum sath ho jab aapne duniya ko dikhadenge hum mout ko jeene ki andaz sikhadenge.......ek gane ki bol yaad agaayi thi.

Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......

Priyamitra · 13th February 2004, 09:48 PM

Hi rohin, not priya that is priya mitra which means dear friend. By the way, my name is bikash. Don’t mind. Keep smiling

Rohin · 16th February 2004, 06:29 AM

Hi bikash,
Maaf karna galti ho gayi
Darasal bangal mein mitra ek title hai yeh sochke mein priya likh diya tha
Galti hogayi maffi chahoonga
hopei didnt really hurt ur sentiments

Regards
Rohin

Quote:

Originally posted by Priyamitra
Hi rohin, not priya that is priya mitra which means dear friend. By the way, my name is bikash. Don’t mind. Keep smiling

Shimul · 16th February 2004, 05:02 PM

Ek gazal ki bohot yaad aa rahi hein. Socha kyu na share karlu?
Koi nehi hein phir bhi aawaaz aa rahi hein shayad meri Mohabbat shayad meri Mohabbat mujhko bula rahi hein.......pehle bhi likhhi hein lekin phir bhi. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......

Priyamitra · 17th February 2004, 10:18 PM

Hi rohin
No problem.Its alyas happends with me.sorry kahenay ka koi jarorat hi nahi hai.App samaj gaya itna hi kafi hai. Thanks
Bikah.

Rohin · 22nd February 2004, 04:49 PM

thanks friend for understanding and hey if you like what i write then do watch out for the novel i am gonna post on this site very soon

Regrds
Rohin

Rohin · 25th February 2004, 09:56 AM

tere ek deedar ke liye
jee rahe the hum abhi tak
Ab aur koi khwahish hi nahi
Maut aajaye toh bhi koi gum nahi

Regards
Rohin

Priyamitra · 26th February 2004, 09:30 PM

maut to ak din jaroor ayagi meray dost mager jindagi bhito samay say bandha hai pahelay ussay to pura ho janay do. keep writing &keep smiling

bikash

Rohin · 22nd June 2004, 01:43 PM

Maut se ab dar nahi
Maut ka to ab inteezar hai
Kab aayegi e maut tu
Ab jeene ki koi wazah nahi

reemzi · 22nd June 2004, 07:35 PM

hi ROHIN

how r u? once agen uv ritten a really nice poem, i am a lil late to reply to it, coz i hadnt seen it b4, but really it is wonderful. thanx for sharin it with us yaar, hope u keep riting as beautifully, god bless u and good luk.

once agen an amazing shayri of urs.

bye tc

Rohin · 25th June 2004, 11:08 PM

wazah nahi hoti koi jeene ki
jeene ki to aas hoti hai
doobte hue ko hota hai jaise
kafi tinke ka sahara
hai mere liye kafi
tere yadoon ka sahara

Rohin · 17th November 2004, 11:19 PM

Maut ka samna karoon kaise
Intezaar karonga tera
Yeh wada kiya tha mein
Us vade ko tod mein yeh jahan chodon kaise

Rohin · 21st December 2004, 03:56 PM

Hi Everyone,

I want to bring this thread to a close thanks to one and all who read it and those who replied.

Thanks a lot
Rohin

shayri12345 · **hi -** 29th September 2005, 01:25 AM

Dear Rohin
Very nice poem a conversion that u talked abt i liked it, Death my friend, Life has just Began wow! himmat lagti hai in lines me...zindagi ko jeene ki,,,saamna karne ki....abhi life me bahut kuch aur hai, maut usey to aana hi hai thenwhy wait for it..thsi again made me remmebber my poem saying jiska hum intzaar kartey hai par kya hum kuch bhul rahe hai,,,saying that...life has a lot to offer why wait for death when it has to come one day...there is journey if pleasure somewhere that we are not abel to see cuz we want death..and ourselaves out of the pain and anger of life.....but u summarized whole peom into one sentence, Death my friend, life has just began

i see a strong courage of urs in this writing....the courage to fight the life...and the spirit besides all the other pains in life. I like dit

Luv u
Priya

shayri12345 · 29th September 2005, 01:32 AM

Maut se ab dar nahi
Maut ka to ab inteezar hai
Kab aayegi e maut tu
Ab jeene ki koi wazah nahi

this is another version i guess when is eethis side...hmm!!
jeene ki wajah hoti nahi banani padti hai rohin

jeene wohi jo jinda dil hoke jeeya jaaye

but at times we do feel like this when we dont get what we want and life gives us games to play from...and result is alwys the same...but wajjah banai padti hai jeene ki this is life..jeena hai to sir utha ke jeeeyo i wud say

Priya

shayri12345 · 29th September 2005, 01:33 AM

Maut ka samna karoon kaise
Intezaar karonga tera
Yeh wada kiya tha mein
Us vade ko tod mein yeh jahan chodon kaise

aaj ek aur apni is dost se vada karo yaar

khushi se jeeyoge, sir utha kar jeeyoge aur himmat se jeeyoge

jo darr gaya so pehli hi marr gaya

Priya

shayri12345 · 29th September 2005, 01:34 AM

wazah nahi hoti koi jeene ki
jeene ki to aas hoti hai
doobte hue ko hota hai jaise
kafi tinke ka sahara
hai mere liye kafi
tere yadoon ka sahara

yaadon ke sahare bujdil jeetey hai rohin!

jeena hai to shaan se jeeyo

Priya

shayri12345 · 29th September 2005, 01:35 AM

Death at the end of a journey is what we want
but what i want is death before the end of the journey
as the journey is the one which is beautiful
the outcome is just the signal of the end

live this journey before red signal comes rohin until its green its life

Priya

shayri12345 · 29th September 2005, 01:39 AM

kehtey hai eh maut mujhe jeene do.........zindagi ke pahiye rukne se pehley.........why die a bit a bit a bit, when death will come one day..

one quote for u :

Life is like an icecream eat it before it melts"

PRIya

Rohin · **Re: hi -** 29th September 2005, 06:37 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by LuvPriya
Dear Rohin
Very nice poem a conversion that u talked abt i liked it, Death my friend, Life has just Began wow! himmat lagti hai in lines me...zindagi ko jeene ki,,,saamna karne ki....abhi life me bahut kuch aur hai, maut usey to aana hi hai thenwhy wait for it..thsi again made me remmebber my poem saying jiska hum intzaar kartey hai par kya hum kuch bhul rahe hai,,,saying that...life has a lot to offer why wait for death when it has to come one day...there is journey if pleasure somewhere that we are not abel to see cuz we want death..and ourselaves out of the pain and anger of life.....but u summarized whole peom into one sentence, Death my friend, life has just began i see a strong courage of urs in this writing....the courage to fight the life...and the spirit besides all the other pains in life. I like dit

Luv u
Priya

Yes Priya... I live life positively.... and this was at the height of negativity...

Rohin · 29th September 2005, 06:38 AM

Priya,

thanks for all the replies...

Love
Rohin

farhana · 30th September 2005, 10:45 PM

hi rohin,

bahaut accha likkha hai tumne....maut aur tumhare beech ki baat cheet badi khubsurti se bayaan ki hai tumne.
take care

Rohin · 30th September 2005, 11:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by farhana
hi rohin,

bahaut accha likkha hai tumne....maut aur tumhare beech ki baat cheet badi khubsurti se bayaan ki hai tumne.
take care

Hi Farhana,

AApko mere kissi thread par dekh bahut khushi hui... yunhi aate rahiyega... aur yeh guftagu to chalti hi rehti hai...

Take Care
Rohin

karthik · 1st October 2005, 02:48 PM

wowww...rohin bhai...kya likha hain aapnee...
u've left me speechless once again....
magnificient poem....this was fantastic....
grt work...cant stop praisin u
keep writin
take care

Rohin · 23rd October 2005, 06:19 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by karthik
wowww...rohin bhai...kya likha hain aapnee...
u've left me speechless once again....
magnificient poem....this was fantastic....
grt work...cant stop praisin u
keep writin
take care

Karthik,

Thanks for so much appreciation...
Sorry for the late reply...

Take Care
Rohin

Mukhra · 23rd October 2005, 06:46 AM

hi big b,

this is really really really really really-10000000 nice...i loved reading this one...death...a topic one wants to write abt...one wants to reveal...a topic whic hu have used to create a masterpiece

take care
keep writing

Bye
ek nanny si jaan...chotta sa bacha!