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Nobody knows its empty this smile that i wear... NM -
12th November 2013, 11:39 AM
Nobody knows its empty
this smile that i wear... the real one is left in the past because you have left me there... Nobody knows i m crying they wont see even my tears... when they think that i m laughing i still wishing you were here... Nobody knows it's painful they think that i m strong... they say that this wont kill me but i wander if they were wrong... Nobody knows i m praying that you will change my mind... they think that i let you go when you left me behind... Nobody knows i miss you they think i feel set free... but i feel like i m bound with chains trapped in the mystery... Nobody knows i need you they say that i can do it my own... but" they don't know i m crying "when i m alone.. ! Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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18th November 2013, 05:10 PM
Nice one............................................... .....................
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21st November 2013, 05:43 PM
Namaskar Anil Ji
A very touching poetry. Keep up the good work. Regards |
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27th November 2013, 07:35 PM
sukriya sukanya ji pasand aaye apko aur shoaib apka thanxks
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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9th December 2013, 01:17 AM
Anil..
Too emotional.. Poem is too good.. Keep writing.. Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se, Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein... The Demon Prince...  |
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