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Main kyon likhti hoon... - 26th January 2007, 05:06 AM

Na samajhna ke main tere pyar ke beech aa rahi hoon,
Apne jazbaaton ko bas isi tarah azaad kar sakti hoon.
Bura na maan-na tum mere is chhote se paigaam ka,
Bas yehi raasta hai ab tere saath-saath chalne ka.


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26th January 2007, 10:08 AM

anupama ji namskaar

hmm to kuch kaha ja raha hai kisise

achha laga paRh ke

aise hi likhti raheN hamesa khus raheN

aapka dost
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27th January 2007, 05:32 AM

Hello Dhaval,

Aaisa hi samajh lo ke kissi se kuch kahaa jaa raha hai. Shayri likhi jaati hai isiliyain, hai na?

Padhne ka shukriya.

Khush rehna,
Anupama


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anupama ji namskaar

hmm to kuch kaha ja raha hai kisise

achha laga paRh ke

aise hi likhti raheN hamesa khus raheN

aapka dost
dhaval


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Thumbs up 27th January 2007, 11:50 AM

hi anupama ji
kese ho?

sach mein aapne bahut hi khub likha hai, par mujhe aapka sabject samaj mein nahi aaya ye aapki is shayri se kis tarah ka sambandha rakhta hai?
please zara mujhe batana

par sach mein aapne achchha likha hai..

harari taraf se aapke liye..
gaur kijiyega..

Meri har baat mere jazbaat kuch yu jude the usse,
Uske na hone par bhi mil saki mujhe tanhaai nahi,
Dil mein samil thi jo dhadkano ka shabab banker,
Khudko batata kaise ki rahi wo meri parchhai banke


milte rehna
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Na samajhna ke main tere pyar ke beech aa rahi hoon,
Apne jazbaaton ko bas isi tarah azaad kar sakti hoon.
Bura na maan-na tum mere is chhote se paigaam ka,
Bas yehi raasta hai ab tere saath-saath chalne ka.


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27th January 2007, 05:42 PM

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Na samajhna ke main tere pyar ke beech aa rahi hoon,
Apne jazbaaton ko bas isi tarah azaad kar sakti hoon.
Bura na maan-na tum mere is chhote se paigaam ka,
Bas yehi raasta hai ab tere saath-saath chalne ka.
lagta hai fir bhi adhura hi kah rahi hai aap,bas apni tasalli ke liye goodwork

"yu hum chhipa lete hai apne izhar ke andaz ko
jo padhta hai bas sochata hai ki likha kya hai"


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28th January 2007, 03:52 PM

Hi Anupamaji
Shukriya Mujhe Msg Karne Ka..
Actually Mai Yaha New Hu Aur Mujhe Pata Nahi Ki Kaha Msg Karte Hai..kaha Reply Dete Hia Etc Etc...to Kya Aap Meri Madat Kar Sakte Ho??
Kya Aap Mujhe Shayri.com Surf Karna Sikha Sakte Ho???
Muskaan..
   
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27th February 2007, 12:03 PM

hi ,
anupama ji aapko pahli barr padha ..........aur laga abb tak kyo nahi padha aapko.........you are great..........bahut khubsurat khayal haine.ya sach bhi haine ....rasta to bahut sa hota haine par apna jo rasta apnaya haine wo shayad acha haine............................aapki.....dost saloni

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