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sirf 4 lines.......... - 6th November 2008, 05:24 PM

Doston,
main koi Sayaara nahin huN aap sab to yeh jaante hain

bahot soch soch ke 4 line aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun

agar aapko pasand aaye to Reply kijiyega


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sry meter main thori gadbadi hai ..........Muaafi chahati hun


Diya


(yeh sirf ek joke hai ....sabke dil bahelane ki chhotisi koshis ki huN....pls koi hume galat na samjhe)



Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


Goodbye SDC

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Doston,
main koi Sayaara nahin huN aap sab to yeh jaante hain

bahot soch soch ke 4 line aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun

agar aapko pasand aaye to Reply kijiyega

1;_____________________________

2;________________________________

3;_________________________________

4;________________________________


sry meter main thori gadbadi hai ..........Muaafi chahati hun


Diya
in char line me hoti hai dil ke baate bayan
hoti hai majburi fir bhi ho jati hai baate bayan
naa wo sunte naa hum kehte
yahi lebz hai chup rehkar bhi yaha ho jati hai baate bayan


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Love 6th November 2008, 06:49 PM

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Doston,
main koi Sayaara nahin huN aap sab to yeh jaante hain

bahot soch soch ke 4 line aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun

agar aapko pasand aaye to Reply kijiyega

1;____________________________

2;_____________________________

3;_________________________________

4;________________________________


sry meter main thori gadbadi hai ..........Muaafi chahati hun


Diya


(yeh sirf ek joke hai ....sabke dil bahelane ki chhotisi koshis ki huN....pls koi hume galat na samjhe)
















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Nice game Diya ... maine full nahi tha padda , aur mujhe lag raha tha ke mere pc mein koi problem ha





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Doston,
main koi Sayaara nahin huN aap sab to yeh jaante hain

bahot soch soch ke 4 line aapke samne pesh kar rahi hun

agar aapko pasand aaye to Reply kijiyega


1;____________________________

2;_____________________________

3;_________________________________

4;________________________________


sry meter main thori gadbadi hai ..........Muaafi chahati hun


Diya


(yeh sirf ek joke hai ....sabke dil bahelane ki chhotisi koshis ki huN....pls koi hume galat na samjhe)


wah bahut khoob....meter ki gadbad chalegi, par khaas baat to yeh hai ki hume tumhare ahsaas bahut pasand aaye.....Tusi GR8 ho DIYA Jii


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in char line me hoti hai dil ke baate bayan
hoti hai majburi fir bhi ho jati hai baate bayan
naa wo sunte naa hum kehte
yahi lebz hai chup rehkar bhi yaha ho jati hai baate bayan
Sukriya Dinesh ji

aapko humari shairi pasand aayi ...4 lines main jo hum kahna chate hain ,aap usko fir se ek baar samjhne ki koshish kijiye

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Durr Kahin Wadi Main Rahti Hai Woh
Har Lamha Khayal Main Rahti Hai Woh!
Kaisa Hai Woh Kis Haal Main Hai Woh!
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thanx Krenil ji
Achha hai aapke andaaz ............Fir 4 line try kijiye ..pls .......


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wah bahut khoob....meter ki gadbad chalegi, par khaas baat to yeh hai ki hume tumhare ahsaas bahut pasand aaye.....Tusi GR8 ho DIYA Jii

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aapko Humari Ehesaas pasand aayi ..Hum koshish karenge aage bhi aise likhein aur aap Humari tareef karein.....Bahot khus hun aaj ...aap ki Reply dekh kar aur 4 line likhne ki Gustakhi kar rahi hun
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