Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard
Reload this Page Band Wala

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Band Wala
Old
  (#1)
Vipinbox
ek shoonya
Vipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to behold
 
Vipinbox's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,748
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: दिल्ली व देहरादून
Rep Power: 30
Band Wala - 21st June 2009, 07:16 PM

विपिन
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
zainy
Aapki dost
zainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comzainy is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
zainy's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 7,325
Join Date: Feb 2008
Rep Power: 57
21st June 2009, 07:41 PM
I must say this one is a masterpiece vipin jee........bohat kam log is tarah soch sakte haiN........har koi to jaise apne hi gham me dooba hai......kisi aur ke dard ko itni gehrai se mehsus karna,bohat badi baat hai...........hats off to you

reps added...++++



Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

Nm
  Send a message via MSN to zainy  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
21st June 2009, 09:49 PM
Vipin jee:

Pranaam!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki rachnaa haMeShaa sab se alag rahee haii.. aapki ees rachnaa ko paRhne ke baad merii aaNKheN waheeN kii waheeN Thehar ga'ii... maiN niShabd huuN... aapki rachanaa kaa sadaa iNtezaar rehtaa hai mujhe.. dil ko aik sukuuN saa haasil hotaa haii aapko paRh ke..YuuNhi liKhate raheN !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
Pulkit_gupta
Humanity
Pulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant future
 
Offline
Posts: 6,227
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 42
22nd June 2009, 12:16 AM
Humesha ki tarah ek alag soch liye hain aapki kavita vipin bhai... very nice words...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
  Send a message via Yahoo to Pulkit_gupta  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
kwahish
An Incomplite Dream
kwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud of
 
kwahish's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
22nd June 2009, 03:42 PM
Wah Vipin jii

Amazing thougts, very nice bahut ache se kahe hai aapne kise ke
dil ka haal superB.......

Kep it up...........

But don't mind...... Humari soch sirf kisi ek shaks pe simat jaye to
un lakho carodo logoN ke baaren mein koun sochenga" then friend
agli baar socho to sab ke liye sonchna " is jahan mein har koi tanha
hai har shaks dard ka maara hai"........

Yahan sabhi ko sabse ummid rehti hai....... koi uska dard banthle
hume agar khuda ne woh niyamat bakshi hai to usko bantna bhi chahiye..

ummid hai aap meri baat se sehmat hua hoge..........

Khush rahiye.........


  Send a message via Yahoo to kwahish  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Dard-e-sush
Registered User
Dard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the rough
 
Dard-e-sush's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 605
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Moscow, Russia
Rep Power: 23
24th June 2009, 02:33 PM
Wah Wah Wah!

Trust me you brought tears in my eyes!

God Bless You
Susheel

लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
Vipinbox
ek shoonya
Vipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to behold
 
Vipinbox's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,748
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: दिल्ली व देहरादून
Rep Power: 30
25th June 2009, 07:16 PM
ZANNY Jee
Aapne isse parha ...iske liye aapka bahauat bahaut dhanyavaad.

aabhaar
vipin

-----


Pranaam DHAVAL Ji
Main theek hoon..... aap sunayein kaise hain aap??
Aap mere har prayaas per mujhe hausla detey hain yeh dekh bahaut khushi milti hai..

aabhaar
vipin

------------

Dhanyavaad PULKIT Ji
bahaut samay baad aapse milna hua....
accha laga aap bhi is prayaas ko parhney aaye.

aabhaar
vipin

---------

KWAHISH Ji
aapne mere prayaas ko parha aur apney vichaar rakhey tow bahaut accha laga.
Kwahish ji....yeh soch kewal ek hee shaqs per nahin simti hai balki yeh uss jaise lakhon logo ki musibaton ka, unko viraasat mein miley hue naam 'Gareeb' ka pratinidhitv kar rahi hai jo is tarah ki zindagi jee rahe hain. Jinki dincharya mein yeh sab shaamil ho gaya hai. Unhi ke beech mein se yeh 'Band Wala' nikalkar aaya hai.
Main aapki baat se 100-pratishat sehmat hoon.

aabhaar
vipin
------


SUSHEEL Ji
Aapne mere prayaas ko parha, usse mehsoos kiya tow samajhiye mera yeh prayaas safal hua.
aapka bahaut bahaut dhanyavaad

aabhaar
vipin

विपिन
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
naresh_mehra110
Anshumali
naresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comnaresh_mehra110 is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
naresh_mehra110's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 7,420
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DELHI (INDIA)
Rep Power: 87
25th June 2009, 10:59 PM


Vipin ji......aapne apni rachna mai viyakti vishesh ke maadhiyam se sachachai ke saath uss dard ko samajhne aur samjhane ki koshish ki hai.....jo is shreni mai viyaapt hai.....aapki shabd rachna se bhi bahut prabhavit hua main........very nice creation....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

---Naresh Mehra----
  Send a message via Yahoo to naresh_mehra110  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
mann_chand
Registered User
mann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud of
 
mann_chand's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,089
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Toronto,Canada
Rep Power: 31
26th June 2009, 09:14 AM
vipin ji

kaise hain aap?
aapko bahut dino baad alag kavita ke saath dekh kar aacha laga..

aapki rachna behaat pasand aayii.. kabhie kabhie aapne dard mein itna bebas ho jaate hain ....

aapne vichaar pesh karte rahye

take care
mandeep


~ Mandeep Kaur ~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#10)
Vipinbox
ek shoonya
Vipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to beholdVipinbox is a splendid one to behold
 
Vipinbox's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,748
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: दिल्ली व देहरादून
Rep Power: 30
28th June 2009, 05:19 PM
NARESH Ji
Aapne mere prayaas per itni ruchi dikhayee yeh dekh harsh hua. Mera dhanyavaad sweekaar karein.

aabhaar
vipin

-------
MANDEEP Ji ........Namaskaar
main kushal se hoon ....aap sunayein aap kaise hain?
aap bhi mere is chotey se prayaas per aaye tow bahaut accha laga. Aapka bahaut bahaut dhanyavaad.

aabhaar
vipin

विपिन
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#11)
Dard-e-sush
Registered User
Dard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the rough
 
Dard-e-sush's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 605
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Moscow, Russia
Rep Power: 23
6th July 2009, 02:32 PM
Vipin Bhai!

You are not just one of the best, You are the best in your writing here!
You are giving a new dimension to meaningful writing!
Something that has it to really makes a diference in lives!

God Bless You
Regards
Susheel

लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#12)
sajid_ghayel
Registered User
sajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant futuresajid_ghayel has a brilliant future
 
sajid_ghayel's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,849
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 32
7th July 2009, 03:54 PM
Samajh me yeh nahi aa raha ke kin alfazo me main aapko dad du Vipin jee, sara manzar mano aakho ke samne aa gaya aur aakhe bheeg gaye aapki yeh rachna padhkar.....

Mujhme to himmat nahi main is rachna ke bare me kuch kahu....bas itna kahuga ke khuda aapko bohat khushiya de..AAMEEN

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

Mob.: +971 501297654
  Send a message via Yahoo to sajid_ghayel  
Reply With Quote
Reply

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Linear Mode Linear Mode
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com

Contact Us - www.shayri.com - Archive - Top