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Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya... -
27th February 2004, 11:32 AM
Kuch matlaBi baat hai....shaayaD harr ek insaaN kii chahaT hai....
yaa merii soch hai... Mere Aale* mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... *Aale=Shelf Meri khushii ki sakhii woh Meri tannha_ii kii sathii woh Mere ansuno ko kanDha woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Kabhii na karen shikayaT woh MileN hamesha pyaaR se woh Duniya mai aa_ee sirF mere liye woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Merii haRr baaT ko sunne woh Mujhe harr ghadii sarahe woh 'sanju' kai liye sirf sanse letii woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Merii kalpana hai woh mere armano ki udaaN hai woh Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Mere sapnno ki pari jo Na pa_o_gey isse duniya mai tum Zhako DIL mai tau miloge isse tum Aesii hii ek pyaari sii gudiya se tum Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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27th February 2004, 11:57 AM
mere sanjjjjjjj
khubsurati ki pari hai woh tumhare liye bani hai jo...... har kisi ke naseeb maie nahi hota jaankna yunh dil maie jis dil maie ho pyaar hi pyaar, wahi hota hai basera ooska |
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27th February 2004, 07:46 PM
Waah Sanjoo,
Kitna pyaara sa nagma likh dala tumne... Mere sapnno ki pari jo Na pa_o_gey isse duniya mai tum Zhako DIL mai tau miloge isse tum Aesii hii ek pyaari sii gudiya se tum aaj bahut der baad tumhein dard ke kamre se door nikalaa hua dekha tau bahut achhaa laga...tumhaari kalpana bhi khoob hai...yoonhi khush nazar aao tum yahi dua karti hoon... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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27th February 2004, 09:19 PM
Dear Sanjoo, keise ho? Wow, really so sweet. I am so happy to see you write like this. Please continue writing like this. Mujhe bohot khushi hogi agar tum aise hi likhte raho toh. Haan, yeh aur baat hein ke dard toh yeaha bhi chupi huyi hein lekin phir bhi. Khush raha karo, ok? Duwa toh hein hi sath sath. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiye. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling.......plz. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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27th February 2004, 10:08 PM
Sanjoo bhai,
WAAH! maiN kyaa kahooN yaar aapke in lafzoN ke baare meiN.. bas paDte hii ghaayal kar daala! "Merii kalpana hai woh mere armano ki udaaN hai woh Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh" «-- haaye, merii maiiyat hogii isse paDte hi! aapkii sapno kii Gudiya bahot khush-kismat hogii mere bhai.. aapke alfaaz dil ko behad pasand aaye.. isii taraH likhte rehnaa! taareef ke saath, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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hi -
28th February 2004, 07:56 AM
sanjoo ji
me yahi kahungi aapke sapno wali gudiya bahut hi haseen khoobsurat au khush kismat hai  "Merii kalpana hai woh mere armano ki udaaN hai woh Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh" ver nice lines touched the heart Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Bahut achhe Sanjoo |
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Bahut achhe Sanjoo -
28th February 2004, 11:18 AM
Ye kya um.meed laga baithe ho
jameeN par ho or aasmaaN chaah baeithe ho, Chaah to hamaari bhi kuchh eisi hi hai Kaheen isi khwaab ko tum bhi Jindgi to nahi bana beithe ho. bahut achhe Sanjoo.... Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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29th February 2004, 09:49 AM
SaNjj,
aahhhaaa!! baddiii pyaarrriii haii teri gudiyaaa re....!! bohatttt hiiii bada aarmaan hai re...kya kahu tujse...bass meri tarah hai...ek dam cute cute sa  u know u can't deniye that!! j/k haha wow!! greatt!!~ likhte raho boss...likhte raho... luv, tulsika!~ P.S. Had to read it few times!! thats why very late @ replying
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29th February 2004, 12:05 PM
Meena beN...Meri sakhi....ap kai reply k binna humari post adhuri rahtii hai...ap ka ye prem yuu hii banaye rakhoo...Sanju!
Parastar ji....ap ki maujudgii bata tii hai humne kuch tau achha likha hii hogaa..shukriya apka aur apki duao kaa...Sanju! Shimul.....ap bass hume yuu hii khush dekhna chahatii hai tau..humar OK... kabul karoo.... Sanju!muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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29th February 2004, 12:16 PM
Aman,
Mere bhai.....kyaa kahuu....bass chup chaP sunni apki baaT...Bhagwaan se sawal hoga mera sab se pahale...kyun??? ek achhe sath ka pal bhaRbaR ka bhii aehsas jinndagii bhar ki mitthi yaade de jata hai...mitrr Sanju! Priyaaa.....Shukriyaa..kuch waqt bemani baton par dene kai liye...pata nahi koon khushkismat hai...haan mai tau huu..uska pata nahii!!!LOL...Sanju! Rakesh jii...apko achha laga tau humara likhan bhii kamayab hua....aur khawaab khawaab hote hai...isen jinndagi kaha se bann sakte hai....Sanju! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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29th February 2004, 12:24 PM
Haan mera chhote se bachhe tulsii kii tarah......( bass meri tarah hai...ek dam cute cute sa
) woh gudiyaa cute cute hai...chaloo ab boss bhii bann gaya tumhare....tau boss ko guzarish kari jatii hai tau hii likhta hai woh... ...gaR ab kuch padhnaa hai humara likha tau...bass minnat karnna....LOL!!! chall jaaon chhu...majaa karr....Sanju! PS: paoo bhajii khane jaa raha huu ab.... muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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29th February 2004, 08:08 PM
Sanjj Bhaiye,
Bahut hi khoobsurat qalam likha hai aap ne. Durust khayaaal hain aap ke. Hume pasand aaye. Daad ka saath taareef Kabul farmaiiega. TC. Bye. Mayank |
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1st March 2004, 04:47 PM
namastee...baade..bhaiya.. kaise.. hoo kya chal raha hai yar... kya baat hai... apki ...gudiya... ko...dekh kar.. mujhe.. kuch yaad aya hai...woh mein apko..baad mein kabhi ....ph...pe baataunga.. aur haan...aisi ek gudiya.. mere..paass bhi..thi.. app jaisi.. nai ..per.... ek thi sahi.... per.. khambkhat...woh bhi ..sath chor k..chali gai yar....bahut khoob likha hai yar..apne..bahut khoob....specially these.. line are..g.r8---
Merii kalpana hai woh mere armano ki udaaN hai woh Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh" ... bahut khoob bhai aise hi likhte rahiye...aur mehfil sajate rahiye... bye and take care. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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2nd March 2004, 12:39 PM
Sanju Sanju Sanju..
Is baar to tumne kamaal kar diya! Lagta hai tumhaare dil me basi guDiya ne hi khud ki shaan me kaha hai.. Sach.. bohat hi khubsoorat khayaal aur bayaan hai.. hum sab ke dil me, kahi na kahi.. aisi hi ek murat.. ek armaan hota hai.. jo har waqt saath deta hai.. Apni is murat, is guDiya ko sambhaal kar rakhna.. bohat pyaari hai.. |
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2nd March 2004, 07:38 PM
Anjana Rahi...Bhaiye, ...shukriyaa...
ap ka PM mila sorry jawab nahi de saka samay ki kamii hai par pehali fursat mai woh kahani padh kar reply karta huu..ummid hai ap bura nahi manenge.....Sanju! Manish.....mele choote chhe bha_iiya...shukriyaa...merii baaT manne kaa.. .....hum jinndagii bhar aehsaan mandh rahenge meena jii ka jo ap jaisa achha sa chhota sa pyaara sa bhai se hume milwaya....joo humari baaT DIL se sunnta hai auR DIL se hii samjhata haii...dimaG ka kaam nahi..LOL choo sweeT..Sanju!muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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2nd March 2004, 07:48 PM
Afshan...Areeee Tum fhiR aagayii....manogii nahii....Sanju koo iss baR tum naa jhhaD par maT chadhoo...ab kai hum himalay kii chhotii par chale jate hai....Har baR kii jhanjhaT hii khataM !!!!!!!!!
Achha lag apko yahan dekha karr kuch doston k binna baaT adhuRii raha jatii haii..... shukriya iiseN pura karne kaa....Sanju! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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16th April 2004, 05:02 PM
Meri khushii ki sakhii woh
Meri tannha_ii kii sathii woh Mere ansuno ko kanDha woh acha laga padke ise mein janti hun ye sakhi mein nahi ye khushi ki dost hogi hai na. ok ok dont angry with me dear are baba bhuit hi pyara post hai apka ye. i like it coz ismein gudiya ki baatein hai jo dil ke sanbke kareeb hoti hai sakhi with wishes शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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1st July 2004, 08:23 PM
Mere Aale* mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya
Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... *Aale=Shelf Meri khushii ki sakhii woh Meri tannha_ii kii sathii woh Mere ansuno ko kanDha woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Kabhii na karen shikayaT woh MileN hamesha pyaaR se woh Duniya mai aa_ee sirF mere liye woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Merii haRr baaT ko sunne woh Mujhe harr ghadii sarahe woh 'sanju' kai liye sirf sanse letii woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Merii kalpana hai woh mere armano ki udaaN hai woh Mere MANDIR ki muRat hai woh Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Mere sapnno ki pari jo Na pa_o_gey isse duniya mai tum Zhako DIL mai tau miloge isse tum Aesii hii ek pyaari sii gudiya se tum Mere Aale mai rakhii jaisii Gudiya Kitnni achhi kitnni pyaaRi woh Gudiya.... Sanjoo, Bahut achi hai yeh kavita.. aur yahan sabne jo bhi kaha bilkul sach kaha hai... koi aapko jhaad pe nahi chada raha, jaise aap Afshan ko keh rahe ho. Sach mein ek khoobsoorat si, ek maasoom si kavita hai... bahut achi lagi mujhe.. and thakyou very much.. agar aaj aap link na dete, to shaayad main padh hi na paati... Aise hi mehfil ko sajaate rehna... Khush rehna... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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26th August 2004, 12:04 PM
hiiii...
once again 100 points.... ab gudiaya tumhe kyun acchi lagti thi pata chal gaya..... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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