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Amrita Ji - 6th November 2007, 03:54 PM

Dosto ajj Amrita ji di ik nazm suni, te man bhar aayeyaa. Tuhaadey naal share kar rihaa haaN.


Oh mere dost
mere ajnabi
ik waar achanak tu ayeyaa
taaN waqt asloN hairaan
mere kamrey ch khalota reh gia...

tarkalaaN da sooraj lehan wala c
par leh na sakia...
te ghadi k us ne vi dubban di kismat visaar ditti...


fer azlan de nem ne ik duhaai ditti
te waqt ne beetey khalotey chaNNaa nu takkia
te ghabar k baari cho chaal maar ditti...

oh beetey khalotey chaNNaa di ghatna
hun tainu vi badi ascharaz lagdi hai
te mainu vi badi ascharaz lagdi hai
te shayad waqt nu vi fer oh galti gawaara nahi

hun sooraj roz weley sir dub jaanda hai
te hanera roz meri chaati vich khubh janda hai...

par beete khalote chaNNaa da ik sach hai
hun tu te main uhnu man-Na chahiye ya na
eh wakhri gal hai...

par us din waqt ne jadoN baari cho chaal mari c
te us de godian vicho jo lahu simmia c
oh lahu
meri baari de thalle
aje tak jammia hoya e...

Ik waar achanak tu ayeyaa
taaN waqt asloN hairaan
mere kamrey ch khalota reh gia...

Amrita Pritam
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6th November 2007, 05:12 PM

thanks tilk ji,
thoda bhut bhut shukrya ik mahan writer de jubani sade sahmne le k ae , bhut achha lagda hai jd kise mahan writer di jubani sahmne aundi hai
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13th November 2007, 12:50 PM

Tilak ji namaskaar..........bahut changa lagiya Amrita ji di eh poetry padke....unha da likhiya te ek ek lafaz rooh nu chu jaanda hai...te unha de eh ahsaas sade naal share karan da bahut bahut shukriya.

kush raho...kushiya.n maande raho


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