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tum ho... - 21st May 2008, 01:56 AM
kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho
apne ummid ki thi na to ummid kabhi fail nahi jaati hai apkne gazal bahut achi tarah se pesh ki hai kash jitna apne kisi ke liye liha hai vo bhi apko itna pyar kare yahi dua karua me.

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho




bohat acha likha hai janab kafi dino baad acha laga hai parh ker.khush rahoo.app ne umeed ki hum ne appki umeed puri ker di.

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Shabd nahi mere paas bayan karne ko, ki kitni pasand aayi tumhari yeh rachna mujhe.

Apne dil ke bahut kareeb lagi.......

Khush raho!


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Hamein bhi aap ki yaha rachna pasand aayi, Mani Ji...!

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

Shayad upar wale sher main sirf ki kami reh gayi hai...!

Yunhi likhti rahein

Duaaon ke saath


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apne ummid ki thi na to ummid kabhi fail nahi jaati hai apkne gazal bahut achi tarah se pesh ki hai kash jitna apne kisi ke liye liha hai vo bhi apko itna pyar kare yahi dua karua me.

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bohat acha likha hai janab kafi dino baad acha laga hai parh ker.khush rahoo.app ne umeed ki hum ne appki umeed puri ker di.

Bohat nawazish janab sarahne ke liye

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Shabd nahi mere paas bayan karne ko, ki kitni pasand aayi tumhari yeh rachna mujhe.

Apne dil ke bahut kareeb lagi.......

Khush raho!

thank u soooooooooooooooooo much priya dear bohat acha laga tumhe yahan dekh ker tumbhi humesha khush raho ameeeeeeeen

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Hamein bhi aap ki yaha rachna pasand aayi, Mani Ji...!

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

Shayad upar wale sher main sirf ki kami reh gayi hai...!

Yunhi likhti rahein

Duaaon ke saath


danny ji aapka yahan aana hi mere liye bohat maa'ni rakhta hai behad shukriya aapne apna qeemti waqt yahan serf kia aur aapne bilkul baja fermaya waqai sirf likhna bhool gaye bohat shukriya is ki taraf tawajuh dilaye aapne apna khayal rakhiyega

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho
Maanii didi:

aadaab!!

ees kavviSh ko fir se paRh ke be-Had KhuShii hu'ii.. aapne bahot hi mehnat kii thee ees kavviSh par.. bas YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe.. merii duaaeN aapke saath haiN.. daad!!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Maanii didi:

aadaab!!

ees kavviSh ko fir se paRh ke be-Had KhuShii hu'ii.. aapne bahot hi mehnat kii thee ees kavviSh par.. bas YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe.. merii duaaeN aapke saath haiN.. daad!!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho
kya baat hakikat mai bahut achi hai agar koi bhi padega to sidi dil ko choo jayegi usi tarah humare dil ko bhi choo gayi very well bahut achi lagi isi tarah likhte rahiay


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Bahut khub mani.............

maine to isse pehle padha hi nahin tha................

sarre ke saare ashar bahut khub.....................

yunhi likhti raho...........

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kya baat hakikat mai bahut achi hai agar koi bhi padega to sidi dil ko choo jayegi usi tarah humare dil ko bhi choo gayi very well bahut achi lagi isi tarah likhte rahiay
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Bahut khub mani.............

maine to isse pehle padha hi nahin tha................

sarre ke saare ashar bahut khub.....................

yunhi likhti raho...........

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thank u sooo much didi apka saath mila bohat acha laga

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maaf kijiyega aapka naam nahi maloom aapka behad shukriya ke aap ne meri hosla afzai ki bohat nawazish...

Muje Inder kahte hai muje aap sab dosto ko sath ye apki shayri padna aur game khelna bahad pasand hai kafi acha lagta hai


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bohat Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hain Mani Ji..............per Aajkal Kahan Ghayab Hain Aap, Kuch Likhe Huye To Ek Arsa Ho Gaya Hai, Laut Aayiye Mehfil Me, Aapki Bohat Yaad Aati Hai............bohat Jald Aapki Jaanib Se Kuch Naye Kalaam Ka Intezaar Rahega ......

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Thank you so much zainy ji aapki hosla afzai se behad khushi hoi aaj kal kuch masroofiyat hai aur jahan hoon wahan filhal net ki sahoolat nahi hai so jald hi regular aaongi INSHALLAH aaj bhi bas itefaq se moqa mila to aagayi hoon online apna khayal rakhiyega khush rahain

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


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ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

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mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
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jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

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kafi arsa pehle likhi thi jis main kuch changes dhaval ne ki thin moqa hi nahi mila post kerne ka aaj mila to yahan paish ker rahi hoon umeed hai doston ka saath milega pata nahi rules ko follow kia ya nahi mager bas ahsasaat paish kiye hain .. aur dear dhaval bohat shukriya wesay main janti hoon shukriya kehne pe naraz hojaoge per kia keroon adat se majboor hoon


meri aankhon main jo chamakte sitare hain
unki roshni ka merkaz sirf tum ho

ees dil meiN jo jage armaaN haiN
uN meiN har pal basey sirf tum ho

chaahat sey bhari muskuraahat ke
sachche haqdaar sirf tum ho

mere dil ki her ik dharrkan main
her pal bajta saaz sirf tum ho

jis ki khuwahish thi jeevan main
us intezar ka mehkta inaam tum ho

main jin socho main gum rehti hoon
un khayalat ka mehwar sirf tum ho

wo KhuShbu jo ziNdagi ko mehaka jaaye
wo dil pazeer sa ehsaas sirf tum ho



bahut khoob dear ........!

arse baad nazar gaye tumhari es poetry par.............bahut accha likha hai, tum dono ko daad hazir hai.

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Aisay hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS YOU

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bahut khoob dear ........!

arse baad nazar gaye tumhari es poetry par.............bahut accha likha hai, tum dono ko daad hazir hai.

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thank u so much dii aapki hosla afzai se humesha khushi milti hai

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Maani Ji,

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ke liye daad qabool kijiyee

Aisay hi likhtay rahiye,

GOD BLESS YOU
Bohat shukriya hassan sahab

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