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22nd June 2008, 09:30 PM
aap logon ke saamne aik baar phir apne ahsasaat le kerhazir hoon umeed hai pasand ayegi......
sukun e dil ke liye kia kia mashagil apnaye bereham waqt ne kia kia zulm nahi dhaye jinhain apna tha maana unki berukhi dekhi jinhain anjan samjha wo kandha dene ko aye chehre pe chehra saja rakha hai logon ne zara jo aanch lagi khul ke sabhi samne aye kis se shikwa karoon apne armaan chinne ka kon hai jo mere bemol aansuu churane aye ab to ye hai faisla dil e nakaam ka mani aese khuloos ka khatma acha jo kaam na aye aapki raaye ki muntazir............ apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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23rd June 2008, 01:31 AM
Aadab Maani Ji,
Kaise ho aap??? Ap ki nazm padi... Behad pasand aayi... Aakhri ke do asharoon ne aankhon ko nam kar diya... Dard bhari hai isliye daad nahi doonga... Mashq jaari rakhe... Duaon ke saath Ijazat... Apka dost... Abrar...  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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23rd June 2008, 02:12 PM
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Wah Wah !!! kiya baat hai mohterma ... Bahut hi khoob ... alfazon ko ghazal mein pirona khoob jaanti hain ... likhte rahiye ... aik achi ghazal per dil se dad kabool kijiye .... Khush rahiye Mujeeb |
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23rd June 2008, 04:36 PM
wakay bahot khoob likha hai......very touching indeed.....aap bahot acchi acchi ghazle likhti hai....
aapke liye ye sher arz hai... KUCH BIKHRE SAPNO SE AANKHON ME NAMI HAI, CHOTA SA AASMAA ,UMEEDON KI ZAMEEN HAI, YU TO BAHOT KUCH HAI KHAYAL-E-ZINDEGI ME, SIRF JISE CHAHTE HAI,USI KI KAMI HAI, ZAINY |
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28th June 2008, 05:49 PM
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28th June 2008, 05:53 PM
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mujeeb ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne parrha saraha aur ghazal to nahi kahoongi ghazal likhna to bohat barri cheez hai mere liye haan mager nazam keh sakti hoon ise bohat bohat shukriya aapne apna qeemti waqt dia ummed hai saath milta rahega apna khayal rakhiyega apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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28th June 2008, 06:01 PM
Mani ji aapka yeh gazal bahut acchi lagi aap jab bhi likhti hai.n bahut dil se likhti hai.n meri daad aapke umda kalaam ke liye qubool kijiye ese hi likhti rahiye
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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29th June 2008, 10:19 AM
Maanii didi:
asalaam-o-alaikum! aaj subHaa meN aate hi aapki naYii Ghazal naZar nawaaZ hu'ii.. aik beHteriiN koShiSh kii hay aapne apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko lafzoN ke zar'iiYe peSh karne kii.. waise to sabhee Sher bahot khuub hai.. par yeh Sher dil ke qareeb saa rahaa,! Quote:
daad hi daad!! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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30th June 2008, 01:10 AM
subhaan-allah.........................kya khoob kaha hai aap ne.
dinoN baad kisi ki kalam ne zakhmoN ko kureda hai. bohot khoob............likhte rahiye n take care |
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3rd July 2008, 01:43 AM
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zainy ji bohat shukriya aapka ke aapne ise parrha aur sher ka bhi behad shukriya takecare apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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3rd July 2008, 01:45 AM
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3rd July 2008, 02:21 AM
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Dil ka dard bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai tumne.. Bhagwaan kare tumhare dil se yeh dard kahin door chala jaaye, aur dher saari khushiyan aa ke samaaye!!! Take Care Dear! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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20th July 2008, 01:57 AM
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dear chottu bohat shukriya ise parrhne ka aur mujhe sarahne ka ye sab tum logon ka pyar aur saath hai jo mujhe kuch yahan post kerne ki himmat deta hai humeshaa khush raho Ameeenn apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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20th July 2008, 01:59 AM
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20th July 2008, 02:02 AM
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20th July 2008, 05:21 PM
mohtarmaa jee
bahut achhi ghazal likhne ki koshish kari yahaN pe aapne .. khas taur pe ye ashaar mujhe behad pasand aaye chehre pe chehra saja rakha hai logon ne zara jo aanch lagi khul ke sabhi samne aye ab to ye hai faisla dil e nakaam ka mani aese khuloos ka khatma acha jo kaam na aye baki ek ya do misroN meiN kaafiya milane meiN thodi si kasar rah gayi hai ummeed karta huN aage khayaal rakha jayega ! Qalaam behad khoobsorat hai tareef Qabool ki jaye ! |
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25th July 2008, 12:43 PM
hello mani..yeh ghazal pata nahin kyun maine nahin padhi...bahut khub..................................dear,,,,aajk al kam aati ho? kya baat hain net fir se gone kya??????
 chehre pe chehra saja rakha hai logon ne zara jo aanch lagi khul ke sabhi samne aye sare ke saare ashaar bahut khub!!!! mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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25th July 2008, 03:57 PM
Mujhse mat pooch kyon aankh jhukali maine
Teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupali maine Jispe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mai nahi Apne mathe ki wo tehreer mitali maine Har janam sabko yaha saccha pyaar kaha milta hai Teri chahat mai to umr bitali maine Mujhko jane kaha ehsas mera le jaye Waqt ke haatho se ek nazm uthali maine Ghere rehti hai mujhko ek anokhi si khushbu Teri yaado se har ek saans sajali maine Jiske sheron ko wo sunkar bohot roya tha Bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupali maine Salam to everyone ...its been long time ...i did not write anything here ...but hope u people will like this ghazal .... |
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4th September 2008, 05:22 PM
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4th September 2008, 05:30 PM
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yunhi sath dete rahiyega di apna khayal rakhiyeapne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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