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"Jaan Lijiye" -
8th August 2008, 02:35 PM
Namaskaar dosto.....aaj phir main apni ek adna si koshish lekar aap sabke saath bazam mein hazir hoon.....maine yeh gazal film “Umra-o-jaan” ki gazal “Dil cheez kaya hai aap meri jaan lijiye” ki zamee par likhne ki koshish ki hai....umeed hai aap sab ki rai jaroor mileygi ki kaha sahi hoon aur kahaN galat hoon
 "Jaan Lijiye" “Bepanaah hai mohabat aapse jaan lijiye, nahi hai jara bhi fareb sach maan lijiye, yoon to har koi jatlaye hai aapse pyar, hai kahaN saachi wafa pahchaaN lijiye, mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna, sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye, jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, ho gai ab “Sunita” bhi be-ImaaN lijiye (08.08.2008) .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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8th August 2008, 03:18 PM
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kaisii hain aap muddaton baad aapko padne ka mouka mila , kya kare.n aapki gazal badi hi khoobsurat bani hai per ye sher mujhe pasand nahi aaya ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, ho gai ab “Sunita” bhi be-ImaaN lijiye aap kabhii bhii beimaan nahi ho sakti bus ye jaan ligiye......... ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, na hogi “Sunita” kabhibe-ImaaN jaan lijiye...... ese kaho to koi baat hai...... shandar gazal per daad hazir hai..... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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8th August 2008, 03:21 PM
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Duaaon ke saath...! Regards Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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8th August 2008, 04:57 PM
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"Pata nahi apke likayime vo kais kashish hai jo bar bar padneko dil kare" Apki ye rachana bahut sunder hai, aise hi aur ache ache racha aap likte rehana taki hum jaise jo intazar karte hai padne keliye apke rachana" |
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8th August 2008, 07:35 PM
sunita ji namaskaar.....aapki koshish sach mein hii qabil e tareef hai......khyaal bhut ache lagge lakin aidaigii mein kami khal rahi hai zara is janib tawajjo de.....khuda khair kare.....raj.....
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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10th August 2008, 11:16 PM
Please send some new to me I am Yunus khan want to chat me
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10th August 2008, 11:53 PM
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Pranaam!! aapki ees Ghazal ko sunaa bhee thaa aapse aur aaj yahaaN aake paRh bhee liyaa.. aik baar fir se mubaaraqbaad ... YuuNhi liKhate rahiye .. bazm ki raunaq meiN izaafaa karte raheN..! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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11th August 2008, 07:47 AM
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Aaj muddatoN baad padha aapko, alfaazoN meN thodi aur wajan ki jarurat mehsus hui, kaavish thodi kamjor si lagi aapke lihaaj se, umeed hai ki aage v aapko yuNhi padhne ka mauka milta rahegaa, aur aage bahut behtar kalaam bhi mileNge...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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11th August 2008, 12:58 PM
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yoon to har koi jatlaye hai aapse pyar, hai kahaN saachi wafa pahchaaN lijiye, yeh linc hume bahat pasand aaye ........ aapki Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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11th August 2008, 05:39 PM
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Waah waah bahut umda gazal likhi hai aapne mujhe bahut pasand ayi aapki gazal daad hazir hai kubool kijiye Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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12th August 2008, 01:04 PM
bahut khuub suneeta ji,likhte rahe,share karte rahe.
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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13th August 2008, 01:09 AM
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Muaaf kiijiye agar aap ko Thiik nahiN lagaa ho ki ham ne aap ke iss sher kaa harf-ba-harf matlab nikaalne ki koshish ki. -Prasad maut bhi maiN shaayraana chaahtaa huuN -Qateel Shifai |
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22nd August 2008, 02:24 PM
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aur bhai main bhi ensaaN hoon....be-imaaN ho sakti hoon kabhi bhi  gazal padne aur saath dene ke liye bhai shukriya nahi kahuNgi...yeh to aapka far z haiyoon hi saath detey rahna aapki diii aapne .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd August 2008, 02:28 PM
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es nacheez ko pada aapne, shukriya janab.regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd August 2008, 02:52 PM
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25th August 2008, 07:33 PM
sunita jee !
zameen zaroor parayi thi par juzbaat to apne hi thee .. naa .. behad khoobsorat ghazal likhi aapne yahaN pe ! yakinan jin koshishoN ke sath aapne ye ghazal mukammal ki vo kabil e tareef haiN ! mujhe har ashaar behad pasand aaya aur ye bayaan dete hue tanik bhi parhez nahi hai ki aap iss buzm ki ek maroof shaayraa haiN ! baki kya kahuN ! malik aapko aur Qaifiyat takseer kare ! apna khyaal rakhiye ! |
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27th August 2008, 11:18 AM
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Namaskar Sunita G Waise to aapka likha hua hamein hamesha hi pasand aata hai. iss baar bhi hamein aapko padhna bahut achha laga lekin yeh do lines to bahut hi khaas lagi yoon to har koi jatlaye hai aapse pyar, hai kahaN saachi wafa pahchaaN lijiye, Deri se jawaab dene ke liye muaafi chahunga.. Yunhi likhte rahiye. Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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3rd September 2008, 02:21 AM
SuniTa Jee...
PehLi BaaR PaD RaHa HooN... Aur PaD Kar BahuT AccHa LeGa! |||||| AaP Ka Likha QaLaaM Wakai .. KhoobSuRaT Hai Jaisa Ki Aap Ne Likha Ki KoshisH Kar Rahi Hai.. To YakeeN ManeeYe! Aap ki KoshisH RanG Le AaYi Hai.... Waise Bhi KoshisH HameshA KaMeeyaaB HoTi Hai.. jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, Kabhi Kabhi AasooDGi Ke Liye Na Jane Kaha Kaha Hum Sab FhirTe Hai... Aur kaHa MiL JaTi haiiii ... NaCheeZ Ke DaaD QaBoooL KaRe!.......... IntZaaR KareeGe! Aap Ke NayE QaLaaM Ka! ChalTa! HooN... AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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kuch lafz udhar dijye -
5th September 2008, 11:33 PM
sunita ji, bahut aacha likha hai aapne, daad kaise du samajh nahi aata,
aasha karta hun aapko yun hi padte rehne ke mauke se aagey bhi navaza jaunga allaharakha Quote:
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6th September 2008, 10:15 AM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th September 2008, 10:16 AM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th September 2008, 10:18 AM
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pyar ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th September 2008, 10:20 AM
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muddatoN baad pada., khair aapne pada to sahi aur apne keemti waqt se mujhe rai bhi di.....bahut shukriya aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th September 2008, 12:09 PM
my sweet sweet di..bahut hi accha likha hai..aapki shayri padhna humesha hi accha lagta hai...intzaaar rahta hai aapki shayri ka...
ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, ho gai ab “Sunita” bhi be-ImaaN lijiye ye lines to scah me...kya kahe ab... |
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6th September 2008, 12:31 PM
Sunita didi,
Kaisi hain aap? ummeed hai acche se hongi... Mujhe aapke ehsaas bahut pasand aaye... Itni mashhoor zameen par likhne ki koshsih karn bhi aasaan nahin aur aapne to bahut khoobsurati se jazbaat piroye hain aapne... Aise hi aage bhi likhti rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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9th September 2008, 05:21 PM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th September 2008, 05:27 PM
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shukriya kashif jee .......... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th September 2008, 05:28 PM
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shukriya baggi jee................ .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th September 2008, 07:24 PM
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jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, ho gai ab “Sunita” bhi be-ImaaN lijiye ............... Sunita Very Good Indeed. God Bless Regards Susheel इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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9th September 2008, 10:31 PM
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mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna, sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye, bohat hi acha likha hai di aapne yunhi likhte rahiye khush rahain apna khayal rakhiyega apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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15th September 2008, 10:44 AM
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dil se shukriya jee god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th September 2008, 10:45 AM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th September 2008, 04:15 AM
SALAM
BOHAT ACHA LIKHTI HAIN SUNITA APP.AISA HI LIKTI RAHAIN. TAKECARE ALLAHHAFIZ JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE, PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE, MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE, AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI, KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI, HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE, JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE. |
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15th August 2010, 03:00 PM
mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna,
sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye, jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, Sunita Ji.....happy independence day.... Bahut hi khoobsurat lagi ......aapki yeh peshkash mujhe....khaas kar upar ankit sher dil ko abhi tak apni chhooan de rahe hai.....maqta bhi ek umdaa khayal se labrez raha....very nice creation.... dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi hi likhti rahen...ab toh aapki nayi rachna ka intezaar hai....sabr tuut raha hai... Reps+++++++++adedd khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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15th August 2010, 07:59 PM
sunita ji namaskaar...!
kaisi haiN aap...? bahut achhi likhi hai aapne ye ghazal, saare sher hi umda haiN lekin ye neeche waala sher bahut pasaNd aaya aur dil ko chhu gaya... mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna, sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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devil ! forgive me
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15th August 2010, 09:42 PM
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07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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15th August 2010, 10:16 PM
mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna,
sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye, sunita ji bahut hi achha lag ise pad kar very true aapki dost |
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15th August 2010, 10:45 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob.......dil se daad.......saare hi ashar ek se badhkar hain par ye ashar to dil ko chhoo gaya jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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17th August 2010, 04:08 AM
mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna,
sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye bhut khoob Sunita jii is suchchay hosle par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai qubool keejiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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17th August 2010, 11:36 AM
"Jaan Lijiye"
“Bepanaah hai mohabat aapse jaan lijiye, nahi hai jara bhi fareb sach maan lijiye, yoon to har koi jatlaye hai aapse pyar, hai kahaN saachi wafa pahchaaN lijiye, mushkil nahi bahte dariya ka rukh modna, sab-kuch aasaaN hai agar thaaN lijiye, jis shajar taley paya saakoon do pal, umr bhar ke liye uska ahsaaN lijiye, ki hai ab talak pathro.n ki bhi pooja, ho gai ab “Sunita” bhi be-ImaaN lijiye SUNITA DI ..aap ne bahut hi khhobsurati de likhi hai yeah poem.. |
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