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ek sawaal-kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge - 27th August 2014, 07:49 PM

yeh khyaal mujhe sadak par chalte ek bujurg damapatti ko dekh kar aaya pyar se ek dusre ka haath pakde duniya ki parwah kiye bagair dheere dheere chal rahe the. sach kahun to bohut he pyaare lag rahe the. aur phir yeh prashn mann mein aaya ki kya mera bhi budhapa itna khoobsoorat hoga?

Aapke sath share karti hun.................

Jab kali raat ka andhera, jeewan ke mod pe aayega
jab meri surmai aankhon se dikhna bhi kam ho jayega
Kya us pal-us kshan mein bhi tum mera saath nibhaoge?
sach-sach kehna priytamm mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab kali badri se baalon par chandniyaan lehraayegi
jab surkh gulabi gaalon par jhurriyan hi bas najar aayengi
kya phir in jaduii ungliyon se julfon ko meri sehlaaoge?
sach-sach kehna sartaaj mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

jab naagin si ye kamar meri, shaakhon ki tarah jhuk jaayegi
jab shokh nadi si chaal meri, laathi ke bina ruk jaayegi
Tab kya apne in kandhon par tum mera bhaar uthaoge?
sach sach kehna mehtaab mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab cake mere par mombattiyan lagaane ki jagah kam pad jaayegi
jab apne kaate cake ko khaane ko hi khane ki manaahi lag jaayegi
kya tab bhi sabki nazrein bachaa, tum mujhko cake khilaoge?
sach-sach kehna tum jaan mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge? kya tab bhi mujhko.............?


ये ख्याल मुझे सड़क पर चलते एक बुजुर्ग दम्पती को देख कर आया प्यार से एक दूसरे का हाथ पकड़े दुनिया की परवाह किये बगैर धीरे धीरे चल रहे थे. सच कहूँ तो बोहूत हे प्यारे लग रहे थे. और फिर येह प्रश्न मॅन में आया की क्या मेरा भी बुढ़ापा इतना खूबसूरत होगा?

आपके साथ सांझा करती हूँ........

जब काली रात का अंधेरा, जीवन के मोड पे आयेगा
जब मेरी सुरमई आँखों से दिखना भी काम हो जायेगा
क्या उस पल-उस क्षण में भी तुम मेरा साथ निभाओगे?
सच-सच केहना प्रियतम मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब काली बदरी से बालों पर चंदनियां लेहराएगी
जब सुर्ख़ गुलाबी गालों पर झुर्रियां ही बस नजर आयेंगी
क्या फिर इन जादुई उंगलियों से जुल्फों को मेरी सेह्लाओगे?
सच-सच केहना सरताज मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब नागिन सी ये कमर मेरी, शाखों की तरह झुक जायेगी
जब शोख नदी सी चाल मेरी, लाठी के बिना रुक जायेगी
तब क्या अपने इन कंधों पर तुम मेरा भार उठाओगे?
सच सच केहना मेहताब मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब cake मेरे पर मोमबत्तियाँ लगाने की जगह कम पड़ जायेगी
जब अपने काटे cake को ही खाने की मनाही लग जायेगी
क्या तब भी सबकी नज़रें बचा, तुम मुझको केक खिलाओगे?
सच-सच केहना तुम जान मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे? क्या तब भी मुझको.............?


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27th August 2014, 09:12 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!

Sarika jee... ishQ ki chaashni liye mohabbat se bharpoor nazm ki
soorat meiN aik sawaal...... be-inteha pyar ki jhalak de raha hai ...

DherooN daad iss khoobsorat ishQ ke khiyaal per... reps pending!

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DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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28th August 2014, 10:00 AM

nice one..... emotionally overflowing by reading these lines... just superbb and too good...

do keep writing lovely thoughts like this..

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28th August 2014, 11:41 AM

waaaaah waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
kyaa likhaa hai....... shabdoN ka bahut hi badiyaa istemaal kiyaa hai........
ek ek shabd har jahaH bahut hi sahi taraH se rakhaa hai....joki aapki rachnaa ko bahut upar le jaataa hai.........
umeed hai aage bhi yuN hi padne ko miltaa rahegaa...
likhte rahiyegaa..........


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28th August 2014, 11:49 AM

Lovely and so very touching. ...

Bohat achcha likhti hain aap sarika ji......

hats off to you....




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Sarikaji aapne har ek premika ke dil meiN jo prashn uth'ta hai use badii hi khoobsutii se samjha hai aur utnii hi khoobsurtii se is kavita kii rachna kii hai, ye kavita padh'te waqt mere honthoN par muskaan thi, kitnii masumiyat hai aapke sawaal meiN, kitni fikr hai hamesha apne premi kii premika ban'ke rehne kii.....bahot khoob, impressive....its a masterpiece.....prem hi prem hai aapki kavita.....dheron dheron daad, yunhi likhtey rahiye
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!

Sarika jee... ishQ ki chaashni liye mohabbat se bharpoor nazm ki
soorat meiN aik sawaal...... be-inteha pyar ki jhalak de raha hai ...

DherooN daad iss khoobsorat ishQ ke khiyaal per... reps pending!

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Bohut -bohut shukriya hassan ji.

Bohut khushi hui mujhe


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nice one..... emotionally overflowing by reading these lines... just superbb and too good...

do keep writing lovely thoughts like this..

Shaad.....
Thank you so much.........................


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waaaaah waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
kyaa likhaa hai....... shabdoN ka bahut hi badiyaa istemaal kiyaa hai........
ek ek shabd har jahaH bahut hi sahi taraH se rakhaa hai....joki aapki rachnaa ko bahut upar le jaataa hai.........
umeed hai aage bhi yuN hi padne ko miltaa rahegaa...
likhte rahiyegaa..........
Bohut bohut shukriya Rajeev ji iss tarah dil khol kar tareef karne ke liye.

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Lovely and so very touching. ...

Bohat achcha likhti hain aap sarika ji......

hats off to you....
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Jab aap aise tareef karti hai toh dil khush ho jata hai, warna sach mein mujhe kuch nahi aata hai.


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Love 29th August 2014, 09:37 AM

Sarika Bhabhi...hame aapki yeh poetry behadddddddd pasand aaye, aur ham aik baat sachi sachi kahe, hame aapki es poetry par aik shakas ke reply ka intezaar bahut besabri hai...jo ki seede seede es poetry se related hai (hamare mast bhai) ki wo kaise apne ahsaas bayaaN karte hai...plssssss unse kahiye ki aayeN es poetry par...taaki en ahsaaso ko chaar chaand lag jaye

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Sarika Bhabhi...hame aapki yeh poetry behadddddddd pasand aaye, aur ham aik baat sachi sachi kahe, hame aapki es poetry par aik shakas ke reply ka intezaar bahut besabri hai...jo ki seede seede es poetry se related hai (hamare mast bhai) ki wo kaise apne ahsaas bayaaN karte hai...plssssss unse kahiye ki aayeN es poetry par...taaki en ahsaaso ko chaar chaand lag jaye

god bless u
Shukriya didi

Sach Kahun toh apne mere dil ki baat keh di, intezaar mujhe bhi hai, magar waqt lagega aaj gannu bhaiya matlab ki Ganpati bappa humare chief guest hain. Aur Apko toh pataa hai sari khudaayi ek Taraf aur joru ka bhai ek taraf. :P

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29th August 2014, 03:29 PM

Sarika ji ,
Namaste.. Aap ki kavita pari ,bahut hi romantic lagi Ek ek alfaz mein
sirf prem ka ras tapak raha tha..Aur aap ka flow of words bhi kamal ka tha.

hum dua karte hain ki budape mein aap ka prem itna ho Anubhab se ki ja ek khana
kha raha ho tau doosra use dekh ker muskuraye and vice versa. ( but is smile ke peeche
artificial denture ..daant ka set ka ek ek pair hona karan ho)
kyon ki ek baar mein ek jana hi daant laga sakta hai

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30th August 2014, 11:35 PM

Sarika ji .... Ye madhur geet meetha sundar pyaara komal to hai hi .... par khaas baat ye lagi ki chanchal bhaav hote huwe bhi is mein ek thehraav sa hai ... jo is ke ehsaas ko adbhut bana deta hai.

Aur ye jaankar bhi khushi huwee ki hindi ki itni achchhee kaviyatri, urdu shayari ka bhi shauq rakhteen hain, kyunki saari kavita shayari poetry aakhir ek hi to hai !!

Aap ko bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad is rachna par !!!


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yeh khyaal mujhe sadak par chalte ek bujurg damapatti ko dekh kar aaya pyar se ek dusre ka haath pakde duniya ki parwah kiye bagair dheere dheere chal rahe the. sach kahun to bohut he pyaare lag rahe the. aur phir yeh prashn mann mein aaya ki kya mera bhi budhapa itna khoobsoorat hoga?

Aapke sath share karti hun.................

Jab kali raat ka andhera, jeewan ke mod pe aayega
jab meri surmai aankhon se dikhna bhi kam ho jayega
Kya us pal-us kshan mein bhi tum mera saath nibhaoge?
sach-sach kehna priytamm mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab kali badri se baalon par chandniyaan lehraayegi
jab surkh gulabi gaalon par jhurriyan hi bas najar aayengi
kya phir in jaduii ungliyon se julfon ko meri sehlaaoge?
sach-sach kehna sartaaj mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

jab naagin si ye kamar meri, shaakhon ki tarah jhuk jaayegi
jab shokh nadi si chaal meri, laathi ke bina ruk jaayegi
Tab kya apne in kandhon par tum mera bhaar uthaoge?
sach sach kehna mehtaab mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab cake mere par mombattiyan lagaane ki jagah kam pad jaayegi
jab apne kaate cake ko khaane ko hi khane ki manaahi lag jaayegi
kya tab bhi sabki nazrein bachaa, tum mujhko cake khilaoge?
sach-sach kehna tum jaan mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge? kya tab bhi mujhko.............?


ये ख्याल मुझे सड़क पर चलते एक बुजुर्ग दम्पती को देख कर आया प्यार से एक दूसरे का हाथ पकड़े दुनिया की परवाह किये बगैर धीरे धीरे चल रहे थे. सच कहूँ तो बोहूत हे प्यारे लग रहे थे. और फिर येह प्रश्न मॅन में आया की क्या मेरा भी बुढ़ापा इतना खूबसूरत होगा?

आपके साथ सांझा करती हूँ........

जब काली रात का अंधेरा, जीवन के मोड पे आयेगा
जब मेरी सुरमई आँखों से दिखना भी काम हो जायेगा
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सच-सच केहना प्रियतम मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब काली बदरी से बालों पर चंदनियां लेहराएगी
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सच-सच केहना सरताज मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब नागिन सी ये कमर मेरी, शाखों की तरह झुक जायेगी
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तब क्या अपने इन कंधों पर तुम मेरा भार उठाओगे?
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क्या तब भी सबकी नज़रें बचा, तुम मुझको केक खिलाओगे?
सच-सच केहना तुम जान मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे? क्या तब भी मुझको.............?
Waaaaaahhh kya kahoon sarika ji.......aapne mere dil ko chchoo liya. ..bahut khoobsurati se ek premika ke bhawon ko vyakt kiya.....pad kar ek alag duniya me chali gayi main



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yeh khyaal mujhe sadak par chalte ek bujurg damapatti ko dekh kar aaya pyar se ek dusre ka haath pakde duniya ki parwah kiye bagair dheere dheere chal rahe the. sach kahun to bohut he pyaare lag rahe the. aur phir yeh prashn mann mein aaya ki kya mera bhi budhapa itna khoobsoorat hoga?
Aapke sath share karti hun.................
Jab kali raat ka andhera, jeewan ke mod pe aayega
jab meri surmai aankhon se dikhna bhi kam ho jayega
Kya us pal-us kshan mein bhi tum mera saath nibhaoge?
sach-sach kehna priytamm mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Jab kali badri se baalon par chandniyaan lehraayegi
jab surkh gulabi gaalon par jhurriyan hi bas najar aayengi
kya phir in jaduii ungliyon se julfon ko meri sehlaaoge?
sach-sach kehna sartaaj mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
jab naagin si ye kamar meri, shaakhon ki tarah jhuk jaayegi
jab shokh nadi si chaal meri, laathi ke bina ruk jaayegi
Tab kya apne in kandhon par tum mera bhaar uthaoge?
sach sach kehna mehtaab mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Jab cake mere par mombattiyan lagaane ki jagah kam pad jaayegi
jab apne kaate cake ko khaane ko hi khane ki manaahi lag jaayegi
kya tab bhi sabki nazrein bachaa, tum mujhko cake khilaoge?
sach-sach kehna tum jaan mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge? kya tab bhi mujhko.............?

ये ख्याल मुझे सड़क पर चलते एक बुजुर्ग दम्पती को देख कर आया प्यार से एक दूसरे का हाथ पकड़े दुनिया की परवाह किये बगैर धीरे धीरे चल रहे थे. सच कहूँ तो बोहूत हे प्यारे लग रहे थे. और फिर येह प्रश्न मॅन में आया की क्या मेरा भी बुढ़ापा इतना खूबसूरत होगा?
आपके साथ सांझा करती हूँ........
जब काली रात का अंधेरा, जीवन के मोड पे आयेगा
जब मेरी सुरमई आँखों से दिखना भी काम हो जायेगा
क्या उस पल-उस क्षण में भी तुम मेरा साथ निभाओगे?
सच-सच केहना प्रियतम मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
जब काली बदरी से बालों पर चंदनियां लेहराएगी
जब सुर्ख़ गुलाबी गालों पर झुर्रियां ही बस नजर आयेंगी
क्या फिर इन जादुई उंगलियों से जुल्फों को मेरी सेह्लाओगे?
सच-सच केहना सरताज मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
जब नागिन सी ये कमर मेरी, शाखों की तरह झुक जायेगी
जब शोख नदी सी चाल मेरी, लाठी के बिना रुक जायेगी
तब क्या अपने इन कंधों पर तुम मेरा भार उठाओगे?
सच सच केहना मेहताब मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
जब cake मेरे पर मोमबत्तियाँ लगाने की जगह कम पड़ जायेगी
जब अपने काटे cake को ही खाने की मनाही लग जायेगी
क्या तब भी सबकी नज़रें बचा, तुम मुझको केक खिलाओगे?
सच-सच केहना तुम जान मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे? क्या तब भी मुझको.............?
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Namaste.. Aap ki kavita pari ,bahut hi romantic lagi Ek ek alfaz mein
sirf prem ka ras tapak raha tha..Aur aap ka flow of words bhi kamal ka tha.

hum dua karte hain ki budape mein aap ka prem itna ho Anubhab se ki ja ek khana
kha raha ho tau doosra use dekh ker muskuraye and vice versa. ( but is smile ke peeche
artificial denture ..daant ka set ka ek ek pair hona karan ho)
kyon ki ek baar mein ek jana hi daant laga sakta hai

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Waise baaki sab toh theek hai magar denture wala zyada ho gaya ��. Please bhagwaan ji se kahe ki itne paise zaroor dein ki do denture khareed sakein ��
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Sarika ji .... Ye madhur geet meetha sundar pyaara komal to hai hi .... par khaas baat ye lagi ki chanchal bhaav hote huwe bhi is mein ek thehraav sa hai ... jo is ke ehsaas ko adbhut bana deta hai.

Aur ye jaankar bhi khushi huwee ki hindi ki itni achchhee kaviyatri, urdu shayari ka bhi shauq rakhteen hain, kyunki saari kavita shayari poetry aakhir ek hi to hai !!

Aap ko bahaut si daad aur dheron mubaarakbaad is rachna par !!!
Shukriya zarra ji

Aapne meri adna si koshish ko itna sarahaa ki mann prasann ho gaya.

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Very nice..:-) So full of emotions..


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Bohut umdah Sarika ji....ek taweel nazm ehsasaat se bharpur.

jab surkh gulabi gaalon par jhurriyan hi bas najar aayengi
kya phir in jaduii ungliyon se julfon ko meri sehlaaoge?...mashallah...kya jazbaat hai!!

...striking future fate ..may be good ..may be bad for any body.. !! ..well done.

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Housla afzaayi ke liye shukriya, Sanjay ji........


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yeh khyaal mujhe sadak par chalte ek bujurg damapatti ko dekh kar aaya pyar se ek dusre ka haath pakde duniya ki parwah kiye bagair dheere dheere chal rahe the. sach kahun to bohut he pyaare lag rahe the. aur phir yeh prashn mann mein aaya ki kya mera bhi budhapa itna khoobsoorat hoga?

Aapke sath share karti hun.................

Jab kali raat ka andhera, jeewan ke mod pe aayega
jab meri surmai aankhon se dikhna bhi kam ho jayega
Kya us pal-us kshan mein bhi tum mera saath nibhaoge?
sach-sach kehna priytamm mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab kali badri se baalon par chandniyaan lehraayegi
jab surkh gulabi gaalon par jhurriyan hi bas najar aayengi
kya phir in jaduii ungliyon se julfon ko meri sehlaaoge?
sach-sach kehna sartaaj mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

jab naagin si ye kamar meri, shaakhon ki tarah jhuk jaayegi
jab shokh nadi si chaal meri, laathi ke bina ruk jaayegi
Tab kya apne in kandhon par tum mera bhaar uthaoge?
sach sach kehna mehtaab mere, kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?

Jab cake mere par mombattiyan lagaane ki jagah kam pad jaayegi
jab apne kaate cake ko khaane ko hi khane ki manaahi lag jaayegi
kya tab bhi sabki nazrein bachaa, tum mujhko cake khilaoge?
sach-sach kehna tum jaan mere kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge?
Kya tab bhi mujhko chahoge? kya tab bhi mujhko.............?


ये ख्याल मुझे सड़क पर चलते एक बुजुर्ग दम्पती को देख कर आया प्यार से एक दूसरे का हाथ पकड़े दुनिया की परवाह किये बगैर धीरे धीरे चल रहे थे. सच कहूँ तो बोहूत हे प्यारे लग रहे थे. और फिर येह प्रश्न मॅन में आया की क्या मेरा भी बुढ़ापा इतना खूबसूरत होगा?

आपके साथ सांझा करती हूँ........

जब काली रात का अंधेरा, जीवन के मोड पे आयेगा
जब मेरी सुरमई आँखों से दिखना भी काम हो जायेगा
क्या उस पल-उस क्षण में भी तुम मेरा साथ निभाओगे?
सच-सच केहना प्रियतम मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब काली बदरी से बालों पर चंदनियां लेहराएगी
जब सुर्ख़ गुलाबी गालों पर झुर्रियां ही बस नजर आयेंगी
क्या फिर इन जादुई उंगलियों से जुल्फों को मेरी सेह्लाओगे?
सच-सच केहना सरताज मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब नागिन सी ये कमर मेरी, शाखों की तरह झुक जायेगी
जब शोख नदी सी चाल मेरी, लाठी के बिना रुक जायेगी
तब क्या अपने इन कंधों पर तुम मेरा भार उठाओगे?
सच सच केहना मेहताब मेरे, क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?

जब cake मेरे पर मोमबत्तियाँ लगाने की जगह कम पड़ जायेगी
जब अपने काटे cake को ही खाने की मनाही लग जायेगी
क्या तब भी सबकी नज़रें बचा, तुम मुझको केक खिलाओगे?
सच-सच केहना तुम जान मेरे क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे?
क्या तब भी मुझको चाहोगे? क्या तब भी मुझको.............?
Sarika maine tumhe iskaa reply to diya tha par shayad yaha post karna bhool gaya to yeh raha mera jawaab...

हाँ सच है यह की एक दिन हम तुम बूढ़े हो जाएंगे
आसमान छूते एहसास भी तब थोड़े मद्धम हो जाएंगे
उस दिन साँसों की खामोशी से तुमको मैं गीत सुनाऊंगा
एक जनम काफी नहीं हमदम हर जनम मैं तुमको चाहूंगा .....

हाँ ! काली घनी इन ज़ुल्फ़ों पर बादल तो एक दिन छाएगा
यकीन है मुझे ए जानेमन यह खौफ कितना सताएगा
उम्र के उस मोड़ पे भी मैं साथ तेरा ही चाहूँगा
एक जनम काफी नहीं हमदम हर जनम मैं तुमको चाहूंगा .....

वक़्त के ऐसे मोड़ पे जब न ख्वाब भी अच्छा आएगा
शायद आइना भी मुझसे खुद मेरा अक्स छुपायेगा
तब भी तुझको इन कन्धों पर हौले से मैं सुलाऊँगा
एक जनम काफी नहीं हमदम हर जनम मैं तुमको चाहूंगा .....

मुरझाती हुई इन आखियों से जब तारे भी गिण न पाउँगा
मुस्कुराते हुए तुमको तब भी मैं अपना चाँद बताऊंगा
तब भी तुम मुझसे पूछूँगी की क्या मैं तुमको चाहूंगा ?

कहने का शायद तब मौक़ा न मिले पर तब भी यह कहना चाहूंगा
एक जनम काफी नहीं हमदम हर जनम ............................

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