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dil ka dard -
31st July 2008, 06:47 AM
ye duniya bhi badi ajeeb jagah hai, jab koi kuch kahta nahin to kahate hain ki tum chup rahate ho , agar bolo to kahate hai ki tum kahate ho, ye kashmakash shayad hum samjh na sake, isliye ye nazm pesh kar rahe hain,shayad yahi kuch samjha sake is duniya ko.
Regards vaishali Dil ka dard juban par aa nahin paya Arzoo to bahut thi kuch kah nahin paya Wo khush the mere zakhamo ko dekhkar Main chahkar bhi chupa na paya Usne kaha tha ki wo phir aayega Wo gaya aisa ki phir kabhi na aya Kisko fursat hai jo sune dil ki batein Kambhakat ye dil chup rah bhi na paya Waqt ne kar diya is dil ko pathar ,rona Jo chaha,to ek aansoo aankhon main na aya. ……………………………………………………………………..vaishali |
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31st July 2008, 08:49 AM
Vaishali Ji
Vakai Bahut khub Liha hai Shayad aap bhi es dour se gujar rahi ho jis dou say may gujar raha hu. " Tute dilo k b sapne hote hai, Dil milane k b nagme hote hai, Chahe koi b gum aaye apki Zindagi mai, Hume yaad karna Kyunki................... "APNE TO APNE HOTE HAI" Thanks |
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31st July 2008, 08:55 AM
"udas Nazro Me Khwab Milenge,
Kabhi Kaathe To Kabhi Gulab Milenge Meri Likhi Kitab Ko Kabhi Apni Nazro Se Padhkar To Dekhna "kabhi Aap To Kahi Aapki Yaad Dhikhenge |
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31st July 2008, 03:20 PM
Ikr-E-Shab-E-Firaaq Se Vahshat Usay Bhi Thi
Meri Tarah Kisi Se Muhabbat Usay Bhi Thi Mujh Ko Bhi Shauq Thaa Naye Chehroon Ki Deed Kaa Rastaa Badal Ke Chalnay Ki Aadat Usay Bhi Thi Mujh Se Bichhar Ke Shahar Mein Ghul Mil Gayaa Vo Shakhs Haalaanke Shahar Bhar Se Raqabat Usay Bhi Thi Vo Mujh Se Barh Ke Zabt Kaa Aadi Thaa Ji Gayaa Varnaa Har Ek Saans Qayaamat Usay Bhi Thi |
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31st July 2008, 03:37 PM
Vaishali hum_rahi here mera naam jay hain
mujhe aapki is hasi me dard ka gam mila aapke hoto se nikla har shabd ek paigaam sa mila tabhi main aapse kuch kah raha hu shayad na acha lage aap se puch raha hu dosti to sabhi karte hai haath milakar main sirf dosti aapse baaton baton me kar raha hu ------------ Kuch Jane Kuch Pahchane, Kuch Anjane Se Log Miley, Shayed Main Deewana Mujhko Deeewane Se Log Miley. |
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31st July 2008, 06:34 PM
Zakhme hazaron mile hain zamane se hai fir bhi ji lete hain tanhai main akshar aankhon main aasun baha lete hain  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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thanks -
1st August 2008, 09:18 AM
hello people thanks alot , bahut bahut shukiya aap sabhi ka , jo aapne waqt nikalkar mujhe padha ,ummid hai ki aage bhi app mujhe waqt denge.
shukriya vaishali "dil bhi ajeeb hai ,darta hai kabhi dird se,kabhi tarsta hai dird ke liye" |
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1st August 2008, 09:52 AM
bahut accha likha hai aapne.....
par itna kyun sacha likha hai aapne... |
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1st August 2008, 09:56 AM
mujhe yaad karke tu mujh par ehsaan na kar,
main to badnaam ho chuka hun tu khud ko badnaam na kar, ro rokar bhulaye the ye pyar k gam, ab tu firse rokar to is ujde shehar ko or viraan na kar.... |
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2nd August 2008, 02:53 PM
aap ki shayri acchi hai
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shukriya -
3rd August 2008, 01:24 PM
shukriya aap sabhi ka .
Regards Vaishali |
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3rd August 2008, 07:38 PM
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mai aap ko kuch rep deraha hu shayad aap ko pasnd aaye Mahobatt Ki Duniya Hai,Mahobatt Kam Na Karna, Jiyenge To Milte Rahenge,Mar Jayenge To Gam Na Karna. Gam Ko Zindgi Ka Nam Buzdilo Ne Diya He, Humne To Gamo Ka Samna Khushi Se Kiya Hai, Marte Waqt Bhi In Hotoan Se Hasi Nahi Jayegi, Humne Ye Wada Zindgi Se Kiya Hai. mai aap ke rep ka intejar karunga Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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shukriya -
4th August 2008, 10:48 AM
gum maain jo nasha hai wo sharab main nahin,
tanhai main maza hai wo is jahan-e-kharab main nahin |
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4th August 2008, 02:25 PM
aap ka yeh Reply hume bahat pasand aayi....Rejaan aap ka naam bahat achha hai Ajib nehin....insan ke pehechan ek naam se hota hai per akshar bhid main woh benam hota hai ...sabke saath jab log usko dekhte hain ...hai koi ajnabee aise kehete hain......
me umrbhar shikaayat-e-ishq raha,bhatakta raha dar ba dar mujh me hauslaa-e-ishq kam thaa yaa mera yaar thaa sitamgar Quote:
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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5th August 2008, 09:32 AM
Mere Sabhi Dosto Ko es Ajnabhi Dost ka Salam
Aap sabhi Vaki Bahut Achha Likhtey Hai "Jab Ek-Ek phool uda le gayi hawa, Us din bahaar ko mera ghar ka pata chala, OR utha le chale hame jab 4 log, Us din mere yaar ko mere pyar ka pata chala, Agar aap sub ko pasand aay ko reply jauar dena, |
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5th August 2008, 01:21 PM
hello everyone ,
rijaan aapka nam bahut hi pyara hai , aur sher bhi bahut khubsoorat tha, prince sher bahut hi accha hai , bahut accha lagta hai jab sabhi ek doosre ki hausla afzai karte hain . Vaishali |
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5th August 2008, 01:25 PM
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Kehne ko toh waise laakh alfaaj hai is dil me..... bayaan karne ke liye magar ek jubaan hi nahi hai...., gar mil bhi gayi jubaan toh kya hona hai...? lafzon ko samazhnewala woh meherbaan hi nahi hai...! Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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5th August 2008, 01:26 PM
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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6th August 2008, 06:04 PM
Aap sbhi ko adab araj hai,
aap ney reply deya uskey ley thanks "Ho skta hai usne anjane me hume rula deya, Usne duniya k kehne pe hume bhula diya, Are hum to vese bhi akele hi the, Kya hua agar kisi ne fir "Ehass " dila diya |
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hello everyone |
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hello everyone -
8th August 2008, 11:46 AM
hello everyone ,
beshak divya sabhi bahut accha likhte hain , prince umda sher hai likhte rahiye. "ek tu hi nahin duniya main samndar ke kinare bahut hain khawab tha accha dil bahalane ko waise to duniya main fasane bahut hain." Regards Vaishali |
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9th August 2008, 11:47 AM
Thanks Vaishali ji
"Koi khawab in aankho ne sajaya hi nahi" "Hamare dil ki gehrai ko koi samaj paya hi nahi" "Kisi ko hamari kami mehsus ho" "Khuda ne hume aisa banaya hi nai.......... prince |
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9th August 2008, 12:12 PM
"Ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu teri,
Yaadon se her ek saans saja li meine, Jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut royi thi, Bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine, |
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9th August 2008, 12:15 PM
"jaane kya mujhse zamana chahta hai,
Mera dil tod kar mujhe hasana chahta hai, Jaane kya baat jhalakti he mere chehre se, Harsaks mujhe aazmana chahta hai |
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good one.. |
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good one.. -
9th August 2008, 01:32 PM
Nice one..i m new to this forum..read urs..its really too good..
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9th August 2008, 02:28 PM
Salaam muhtarma,
bashut dino baad yahaaN ka rukh kiya to aapki ghazal pe nazreN gayiN. Kuch savaalaat jehan meN aayeN, aur kuch mashvara dene ka khayal aaya to javaab de baitha. Waise jaan kar ahcha laga ki naye log ghazal likhne ki kosishen kar rahe haiN. Mere jehan meN ye savaal aaya ki aapne apne mashooq ko v male gender meN dikhaya hai aur khud ko v, jo mere khayal se vaajib nahin hai. dono ke gender different hone chahiye. doosri baat aapki ghazal meN bahut se fizool alfaaz dikhe, jinhone ghazal ke flow aur khoobsurati dono ko bahut ghata diya hai, jaise aap apne is sher ko dekheN, Usne kaha tha ki wo phir aayega Wo gaya aisa ki phir kabhi na aya is sher meN usne kehne ke baad fir se wo ki koi jarurat nahin hai, fir 2nd line meN kabhi lafz ki jarurat nahin hai. umeed hai aage se aap likhte waqt fizool ke alfaazoN ko hataane ki kosish kareNge, aur ek buniyaadi bata, kosish kareN ki har sher ki lambaai ek si ho, padhne meN ahcha lagta hai...!! waise agar kahin v jyada keh gaya hunga, ya aapko meri kisi baat ka bura lage, to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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15th August 2008, 05:31 PM
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muje bahoot khushi hui aap ne muje itna acha rep dia aur, ye jaan kar bi aap ko mera naam pasand aaya thaks vaishali ji. ho sake to pls muje mere is e-mail, id par rep de dena my Id rijaan007@yahoo.com rijaan007@rediffmail.com Suraj Se Accha Sitara Koi Nahi Jaisa Rishta Hai Humara Dusara Koi Nahi Chahe Sari Duniyame Dhundlo Muj Jaisa Sweet Aur Aap Jaisa Pyaara Koi Nahi 4 My Friends Diya........., Vailshai....., Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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15th August 2008, 06:01 PM
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Diya ji ho sake to pls muje mere is e-mail, id par rep de dena my Id rijaan007@yahoo.com rijaan007@rediffmail.com Suraj Se Accha Sitara Koi Nahi Jaisa Rishta Hai Humara Dusara Koi Nahi Chahe Sari Duniyame Dhundlo Muj Jaisa Sweet Aur Aap Jaisa Pyaara Koi Nahi 4 My Friends Diya........., Vailshai....., Aye dost teri dosti uss ghadi tadpaayegi, Jab zindagi kahegi alvida, Aur maut bhi naa aayegi ! . aap k rep ka muje intejar rahenga...., ok by see u......., Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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BAHOOT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAP NE VAISHALI JI WERY NICE EK REP MAI BI AAP KO BI PASAND AAYE Kal Raat Jab Aankh Lagi Tho Ek Khwaab mein aaya, Kitne Dino Baad Milne Mujse, “Wo Shakhas” Aap aaya Usne Batayi Apni Majboori, Hmne bhi Apna Dard Sunaya Kar Yaad Beete Dino Ko, Wo Khud Roya, Mujhe bhi rulaya Kuch Diye Dilaase Usne, Kuch Kosa TaqdeeroN Ko Phir Jane Ke Liye Usne, Apna Qadam Uthayaa Usse Rokne ko Jaise hi Hmne Apna hath badhaya Aankh khull Gayi Hmari Aur Khud ko Phir Tanha Paaya…!! Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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15th August 2008, 09:09 PM
rijaan .. from whr are you belong
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muje rep jarur dena allah hafiz rijaan....., Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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