Dard ki kaun sune aawaaz

[TheDemonPrince]

Doobne do ek gehrai mein aaj,

Chhaane do har taraf mere andhera,

Ye khushiyan, Ye Duniyawaale raas nahin aate mujhe,

Bas tanha yuhin jeene do aaj..



Kisse karun main Dil ki baat,

Koi nahin hai apne paas,

Tha tanha main tab bhi,

Hoon tanha main ab bhi,

Bas ek tanhai reh gayi apne saath..



Rote hue Dil ki gehrai ko kaun dekhe,

Dikhta hai toh bas ek Patthar Dil Laash,

Jo chuban, jo jalan hai Dil ki meri,

Iske dard ki kaun sune aawaaz..


The Demon Prince...

[Hamdam]

Aman Miya Demon Prince Sahib ,

Aapke dil jalne se jo dhoona aap ke kalam mein uth raha hai , uske peeche
dhadhakte sholey saaf nazar aa rahe hain.

Aapke ehsaas pasand aye ..

sanjay sehgal

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by Hamdam

Aman Miya Demon Prince Sahib ,

Aapke dil jalne se jo dhoona aap ke kalam mein uth raha hai , uske peeche
dhadhakte sholey saaf nazar aa rahe hain.

Aapke ehsaas pasand aye ..

sanjay sehgal

Sanjay Bhai,
mere iss kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukr adaa karta hoon.
Waise yeh kuch yaadein hain jo saalon pehle likhi thi, jo kahin kho gayi thi.
Aaj dekhne ka mauka mila toh yahan post kar diya.

Shukriya Bhai aapka..
Khush rahiye..
Salaamat rahiye..

[zarraa]

DP ji ....behad intense feelings hain aap ke qalaam mein ... aap ne apne jazbaat ka asardaar bayaan kiya hai .... Daad !!!

[aru]

kya baat hai.....emotions ka sailaab aa gaya hai kalaam mein....bahut hee sundar....

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by N@zneen

Outstanding.....your feelings are so strong its almost tangible....grt expression...do keep writing

Thank you N@zneen ji..
Thank you very much for your kind words of encouragement and appreciation..
:-)

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by zarraa

DP ji ....behad intense feelings hain aap ke qalaam mein ... aap ne apne jazbaat ka asardaar bayaan kiya hai .... Daad !!!

Sir Zarraa ji..
Shukriya ji Bade Bhai..
I am not so good at Urdu to express my gratitude for your kindness in appreciating my efforts..
Thank you very much for taking your time..
:-)

I have read many of your works..
And thanks for the meanings you always do provide..
:-)

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by aru

kya baat hai.....emotions ka sailaab aa gaya hai kalaam mein....bahut hee sundar....

Dear Arvind Ji,
You have always been very kind appreciating even my ignorable efforts..

Your appreciation means a lot..
You, Shaad Bhai, Zainy Madam have always been supportive to appreciate and motivate to keep writing..
Thank you for having such great patience and making your valuable time available for my little efforts..

Thank you very much Arvind ji..
:-)

[aadeil]

DPji,

Bahot hi aalaa nazm hai..................

hamari jaanibse dheroN daad aur duaaeN................

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by aadeil

DPji,

Bahot hi aalaa nazm hai..................

hamari jaanibse dheroN daad aur duaaeN................

Aadeil Ji,

Very grateful to you for your kind words of appreciation.
I am honored.
Thank you very much.
Keep smiling.
:-)

[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by TheDemonPrince

Doobne do ek gehrai mein aaj,

Chhaane do har taraf mere andhera,

Ye khushiyan, Ye Duniyawaale raas nahin aate mujhe,

Bas tanha yuhin jeene do aaj..



Kisse karun main Dil ki baat,

Koi nahin hai apne paas,

Tha tanha main tab bhi,

Hoon tanha main ab bhi,

Bas ek tanhai reh gayi apne saath..



Rote hue Dil ki gehrai ko kaun dekhe,

Dikhta hai toh bas ek Patthar Dil Laash,

Jo chuban, jo jalan hai Dil ki meri,

Iske dard ki kaun sune aawaaz..


The Demon Prince...

bahut khoob....bahut dard hai aapki poetry meiN...!

likhtey rhiye, khush rhiye

[TheDemonPrince]

Originally Posted by sunita virender

bahut khoob....bahut dard hai aapki poetry meiN...!

likhtey rhiye, khush rhiye

Sunita Ji,

Shukriya aapka to aapne iss poetry ko pada aur pasand kiya.
:-)

Thank you for your encouragement.
Have a nice day.
Take Care.
:-)