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Kyun mere pyar ka imtihaan lete ho.. - 21st September 2004, 12:04 AM

Kyun mere pyar ka imtihaan lete ho..
Kyun har baar mujhe yun badnaam karte ho..
Kyun tum pyar karke bhi use chupa lete ho..
Kyun har baar mujhe tum yun naraaz karte ho..

Meri har choti si galati se tum khafa rehte ho..
Kyun mujhe har baar gam naam dete ho..
Kyun mera pyar tumhe samjh nahi aata..
"Main hun tumse khafa" Kaise tum yeh maan lete ho..

Kyun mere pyar ka imtihaan lete ho..
Kyun har baar mujhe tum yun naraaz karte ho..

Main to pal mein khafa hoke, pal mein maan jaati hun..
Kyun tum ek umar ke liye naraaz hote ho..
Kyun mere pyar se yun anjaan bante ho..
Kyun mujhe har raat tum rula jaate ho..

Kyun mere pyar ka imtihaan lete ho..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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21st September 2004, 10:37 AM

Priya...


Wo jo tumse naraaz sa lagta hai..
Har waqt ulfat ka imtehaan leta hai..
Shayad apni mohabbat par yakeen nahi..
Shayad tumhe kho dene se darrta hai.
Isi liye maangta hai saboot - e -wafa..
Anjaane hi kar jaata hai tumse jafa..
Har chhoti baat dukhaati hogi dil uska..
Isi liye rehta hai yuN khafa khafa.
Tumhe karna hoga ab zara sa sabar..
Karne lagega tumhaare pyaar ki kadar..
BaRi mushkil hoti hai raah e zindagi..
Sambhal kar saath tay karna ye safar.


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21st September 2004, 03:03 PM

MERA BACCHA PRIYA...

VO TUMARA NAHI APNI MOHHOBAAT KI IMTIHAAN LETA HAI...BAAR BAAR APNE DIL KO TASSALLI DENE KE LIYE KI TUM AB BHI UTNA HI PYAR KARTI HO ISKE LIYE VO YE SAB BAAR BAAR KARTA HAI...

KYU...SAMAJH GAYE...BACCHE....SO ENJOY IT...KHUSHI KHUSHI DE DO YE SARE IMTIHAN....AUR FIRST DIV. MERIT ME PAAS HOKER USKA MUH CHIRAO....FIR DEKHTE HAI...ZOR KITNA BAJUE KATIL ME HAI...

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22nd September 2004, 01:52 AM

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Priya...


Wo jo tumse naraaz sa lagta hai..
Har waqt ulfat ka imtehaan leta hai..
Shayad apni mohabbat par yakeen nahi..
Shayad tumhe kho dene se darrta hai.
Isi liye maangta hai saboot - e -wafa..
Anjaane hi kar jaata hai tumse jafa..
Har chhoti baat dukhaati hogi dil uska..
Isi liye rehta hai yuN khafa khafa.
Tumhe karna hoga ab zara sa sabar..
Karne lagega tumhaare pyaar ki kadar..
BaRi mushkil hoti hai raah e zindagi..
Sambhal kar saath tay karna ye safar.
hm... bahut khoob samjhaaya aapne mujhe... haan sach hai.. hum dono ek doosre ko kho dene ke khayaal se bahut darte hain.. bahut vakt jo ho gaya ab.. par kabhi kabhi sach mein choti choti baatein dil ko chot pohancha jaati hain, aur phir jab woh baatein saamne aati hain, to doosra ek dam hairaan ho jaata hai.. ki itni si baat...

shaayad yehi ho raha hai... chalo yeh bhi ek daur hai nikal jaayega.. aur vaise bhi aap sab jab tak saath ho chinta kis baat ki..

Aapke itne sundar jawaab ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..

Khush rahiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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22nd September 2004, 01:55 AM

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MERA BACCHA PRIYA...

VO TUMARA NAHI APNI MOHHOBAAT KI IMTIHAAN LETA HAI...BAAR BAAR APNE DIL KO TASSALLI DENE KE LIYE KI TUM AB BHI UTNA HI PYAR KARTI HO ISKE LIYE VO YE SAB BAAR BAAR KARTA HAI...

KYU...SAMAJH GAYE...BACCHE....SO ENJOY IT...KHUSHI KHUSHI DE DO YE SARE IMTIHAN....AUR FIRST DIV. MERIT ME PAAS HOKER USKA MUH CHIRAO....FIR DEKHTE HAI...ZOR KITNA BAJUE KATIL ME HAI...

UDAS
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Sach kaha aapne bhi.. imtihaan to dono ka hi hota hai... haan aur yeh parakhte rehte hain ki abhi pyar zinda hai ki nahi.. par bhagwaan ki daya se.. aur aap sab ki dua se.. sab acha hai.. yeh time bhi nikal jaayega.. jaise baaki mushkil vakt nikal gaya.. yeh bhi kahin ud jaayega..

Ache se samjh gayi.. khushi khushi de doongi ab saare imtihaan.. a re first division kya cheez hai.. main to super first div. mein paas houngi.. lolz..

Khayal rakhiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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hi - 22nd September 2004, 04:36 PM

Priya ji

aapki rachana ko padhane ke saath feel kerne ki jaroorat hai..
bahut hi sensitive words aapne diye.. bhavook palo ko aapne jinda rakha hai..nice.,.


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Re: hi - 22nd September 2004, 08:21 PM

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Priya ji

aapki rachana ko padhane ke saath feel kerne ki jaroorat hai..
bahut hi sensitive words aapne diye.. bhavook palo ko aapne jinda rakha hai..nice.,.


Akant...
Ji haan.. kuch bhaavook palon mein hi likha tha yeh..

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mere ehsaas ko saraaha..

Take care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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22nd September 2004, 10:57 PM

chaht ji

bohat khoob .... gud nazm .... keep it up

bye & tc

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22nd September 2004, 11:51 PM

priya...

lagta hai bahut harjaayi hain yeh 'chaahat' paane wale...anjaan hain ki kya heera paya hai inhone hai na

Main to pal mein khafa hoke, pal mein maan jaati hun..
Kyun tum ek umar ke liye naraaz hote ho..
Kyun mere pyar se yun anjaan bante ho..
Kyun mujhe har raat tum rula jaate ho..

yeh alfaaz dil lazeez rahe...simple but very touching...sach...

yeh andaaz unke sitam ka hai chupi chaahat ismein
tum yoon udas na ho ki wo bhi hai pashemaan tum bin

ab muskura do zara zara...

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23rd September 2004, 12:42 AM

Oh priya...mein to paras se 110% sehmat hoon 'chahat' anmol heere ki pehchaan kisko hai yaha....

Bahut khoob likha hai yaar

tumhare dard se dil bhar aaya....

likhti rehna

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23rd September 2004, 07:51 PM

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chaht ji

bohat khoob .... gud nazm .... keep it up

bye & tc

raj

bas raj hi raj
Bahut bahut shurkiya Raj ji..

Khush rahiye..

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priya...

lagta hai bahut harjaayi hain yeh 'chaahat' paane wale...anjaan hain ki kya heera paya hai inhone hai na

Main to pal mein khafa hoke, pal mein maan jaati hun..
Kyun tum ek umar ke liye naraaz hote ho..
Kyun mere pyar se yun anjaan bante ho..
Kyun mujhe har raat tum rula jaate ho..

yeh alfaaz dil lazeez rahe...simple but very touching...sach...

yeh andaaz unke sitam ka hai chupi chaahat ismein
tum yoon udas na ho ki wo bhi hai pashemaan tum bin

ab muskura do zara zara...

paras
Vaah Paras ji.. kya keh gaye aap... "yeh andaaz......"

Bahut khoob.. haan sach to hai.. par kabhi kabhi bas aise hi dil ho jaata hai...

Aapko pasand aaya jaan ke bahut khushi hui...

"Chaahat...heera.." thoda jyada nahi ho gaya???

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Oh priya...mein to paras se 110% sehmat hoon 'chahat' anmol heere ki pehchaan kisko hai yaha....

Bahut khoob likha hai yaar

tumhare dard se dil bhar aaya....

likhti rehna
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Anu ji...

aap bhi... Anmol heera.. hm... haan PYAR ke anmol heere ki pehchaan kise hai yahan... yeh theek hai...

Aapko pasand aaya.. bahut khushi hui... a re dard itna nahi hai. dil mat bhariye aap.. dil ko to sirf khushiyon se bhariye... dard se nahi...

Saath dene ke liye ek baar phir bahut bahut shukriya..

khush rahiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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