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View Poll Results: meri pasand ka sher
matla 1 12.50%
pahla 3 37.50%
doosra 1 12.50%
teesra 1 12.50%
chautha 1 12.50%
sab sher 8 100.00%
koi nahi 0 0%
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jis ki khaatir..gazal. - 8th June 2008, 02:34 PM
JIS KI KHAATIR MAIN DIWAANA HO GAYA
US KO DEKHE BHI ZAMAANA HO GAYA.

BIJLIYAAN TOOTEEN MERE EHSAAS PAR
AAP KA TO MUSKURAANA HO GAYA.

GHAR KE HAR KONE MEIN IK KHUSHBOO SI HAI
JAB SE TERA AANA JAANA HO GAYA.

WO NAYE RISHTON KA KHWAAHISH MAND HAI
US KI KHAATIR MAIN PURAANA HO GAYA.

JHOOTE WAADON SE NA BAHLAO MUJHE
'VASL' AB MAIN BHI SAYAANA HO GAYA.

PRASHANT VASL's gazal read in ALL INDIA MUSHAYRA,LUCKNOW(ganna sansthan)on 10.03.03.

Note:the matla earlier was..

AAP KE GUM KA NISHAANA HO GAYA
ACHHA KHAASA DIL DIWANA HO GAYA.
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10th June 2008, 02:38 PM
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JIS KI KHAATIR MAIN DIWAANA HO GAYA
US KO DEKHE BHI ZAMAANA HO GAYA.

BIJLIYAAN TOOTEEN MERE EHSAAS PAR
AAP KA TO MUSKURAANA HO GAYA.

GHAR KE HAR KONE MEIN IK KHUSHBOO SI HAI
JAB SE TERA AANA JAANA HO GAYA.

WO NAYE RISHTON KA KHWAAHISH MAND HAI
US KI KHAATIR MAIN PURAANA HO GAYA.

JHOOTE WAADON SE NA BAHLAO MUJHE
'VASL' AB MAIN BHI SAYAANA HO GAYA.

PRASHANT VASL's gazal read in ALL INDIA MUSHAYRA,LUCKNOW(ganna sansthan)on 10.03.03.

Note:the matla earlier was..

AAP KE GUM KA NISHAANA HO GAYA
ACHHA KHAASA DIL DIWANA HO GAYA.
waah vasl saahab waah!

ek saath itne saare khuub-suurat sher ek hi Ghazal par dekh kar behad behad achchha laga... main to bas yahi soch raha huu.n ki kaun sa sher sab se behtar hai.. par shaayad yeh ta'ey nahiii.n kar paaunga ki kaun sa sab se behtar hai.... kyun ki sabhi ek se baRh kar ek hai... Ghazal paRh kar behad khushii huii... yuu.n hi likhate rahe.n..

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10th June 2008, 10:57 PM
Wah Mayank Saaheb waah!
Itni saari taareef ek gazal ke liye.aap ka message padh kar behad khushi ho rahi hai..us se zyada jitni aap ko hui hogi..khush rahiye aur hausla dete rahiye...mashwara bhi.SHUKRIYA.
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WO NAYE RISHTON KA KHWAAHISH MAND HAI
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16th June 2008, 05:52 PM
Prashant jee:

namaskaaR!!

baRii hi beHteriN Ghazal haii.. har Sher laa-jawaab!! YuuNhi bazm ko rauShan karte rahiYe!! daad!!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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WO NAYE RISHTON KA KHWAAHISH MAND HAI
US KI KHAATIR MAIN PURAANA HO GAYA.

JHOOTE WAADON SE NA BAHLAO MUJHE
'VASL' AB MAIN BHI SAYAANA HO GAYA.

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