Mat pooch hisaab mere dard-o-gam ka...

[Tanha_Dil]

Mat pooch hisaab mere dard-o-gam ka,
Wo to behisaab hain.

Hanste hain log padh kar, meri jindagi to ab,
Ek khuli kitaab hai.

Tera masoom chehra, lagta hai kitna dilkash,
Par wo to ek naqaab hai.

Ankhon mein reh reh kar chubhta hai kyon,
Toota jo Khwaab hai.

Ab dhal chuki hai wo gam ki raat yahan,
Nikla phir aaftaab hai.

Kya kya na diya tune mujhe ae jindagi,
Tujhe mera “aadaab” hai.

Aur aakhri sher par khaas daad chahunga….

Ye jalaa sa kya banaya hai tune naashte mein?
Are ye to ‘kabaab” hai.

Mazaak ke liye maafi chahunga doston par kya karun… mujhse raha nahi gaya aur ye likh dala.Ummeed hai aap log bura nahi manenge aur meri rachnaye padhte rahenge…Dhanyawaad.

[Praneeta]

Originally Posted by Tanha_Dil

Mat pooch hisaab mere dard-o-gam ka,
Wo to behisaab hain.

Hanste hain log padh kar, meri jindagi to ab,
Ek khuli kitaab hai.

Tera masoom chehra, lagta hai kitna dilkash,
Par wo to ek naqaab hai.

Ankhon mein reh reh kar chubhta hai kyon,
Toota jo Khwaab hai.

Ab dhal chuki hai wo gam ki raat yahan,
Nikla phir aaftaab hai.

Kya kya na diya tune mujhe ae jindagi,
Tujhe mera “aadaab” hai.

Aur aakhri sher par khaas daad chahunga….

Ye jalaa sa kya banaya hai tune naashte mein?
Are ye to ‘kabaab” hai.

Mazaak ke liye maafi chahunga doston par kya karun… mujhse raha nahi gaya aur ye likh dala.Ummeed hai aap log bura nahi manenge aur meri rachnaye padhte rahenge…Dhanyawaad.

achchi gazal hai .... bahot khubsurat especially the first 4 lines

and and....

Ye jalaa sa kya banaya hai tune naashte mein?
Are ye to ‘kabaab” hai.

iske liye kuch likhna chahungi....hope u dont mind

Naa kar bewaqt ka naashta dost, warna kahoge
Haaye mera peth kharaab hai

good work keep writing
God bless
Regards
Praneeta

[Tanha_Dil]

Originally Posted by Praneeta

achchi gazal hai .... bahot khubsurat especially the first 4 lines

and and....

Ye jalaa sa kya banaya hai tune naashte mein?
Are ye to ‘kabaab” hai.

iske liye kuch likhna chahungi....hope u dont mind

Naa kar bewaqt ka naashta dost, warna kahoge
Haaye mera peth kharaab hai

good work keep writing
God bless
Regards
Praneeta

bahot khoob Praneeta ji...maan gaye aap ke "Humour of Sense" ko...