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Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon - 16th July 2009, 06:02 PM
doston...bazm ko mera Aadaab........bahot dino baad ek koshish ki hai ....bahot saari ghazalein shru to ki..par unhe poori na kar paya...ye ek koshish aaj poori ki hai...ummeed hai aap sabko pasand aayegi..

Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon,
Meri taqdeer apni rah chalti hai, Mai apni rah chalta hoon.

Girta hoon raah mein thokar har baar khaa kar,
Meri shiddat to dekhiye, uth kar mai phir sambhaltaa hoon.

Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

Jaane kaun hoon ? shayad tufaan se ladta ek diya hoon,
Bujhta hoon kabhi to kabhi jalta hoon.

Muqaddar hai mera jalna har pal; mai ek,
Aaftaab hoon ,har shaam ko usi dariya mein dhalta hoon.

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21st July 2009, 08:00 PM
Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon,
Meri taqdeer apni rah chalti hai, Mai apni rah chalta hoon.

bohat khuub!

puuri koshish achchhi lagii. yuu.n hi likhte rahiye..

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Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon,
Meri taqdeer apni rah chalti hai, Mai apni rah chalta hoon.

bohat khuub!

puuri koshish achchhi lagii. yuu.n hi likhte rahiye..

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doston...bazm ko mera Aadaab........bahot dino baad ek koshish ki hai ....bahot saari ghazalein shru to ki..par unhe poori na kar paya...ye ek koshish aaj poori ki hai...ummeed hai aap sabko pasand aayegi..

Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon,
Meri taqdeer apni rah chalti hai, Mai apni rah chalta hoon.

Girta hoon raah mein thokar har baar khaa kar,
Meri shiddat to dekhiye, uth kar mai phir sambhaltaa hoon.

Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar, Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

Jaane kaun hoon ? shayad tufaan se ladta ek diya hoon,
Bujhta hoon kabhi to kabhi jalta hoon.

Muqaddar hai mera jalna har pal; mai ek,
Aaftaab hoon ,har shaam ko usi dariya mein dhalta hoon.
bahot khub dost...........each n every word praiseworthy
keep up dear
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AadaaB Tanha Sahab,

Aapki koshish bahut kabile tarif lagi, sabhi ashar apni zindagii ke kareeb lage..
Bahut khoob... Likhate rahiye..

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AadaaB Tanha Sahab,

Aapki koshish bahut kabile tarif lagi, sabhi ashar apni zindagii ke kareeb lage..
Bahut khoob... Likhate rahiye..

Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..
Kwahish ji...bahot bahot shukriya aapka.....hausla afzaai ke liye.......aapka saath banaye rakhiye..yuhi padhte rahiye

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25th July 2009, 01:18 AM
bohat hi umda .. mujhe behad pasand aaya aapka likha hua khash kar ye sher

Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

har kisi ki kahani sa lagta hai ... apna sa .. aur kya kahuN.. likhte rahiye aise hi

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Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

Tanha Dil ji...

Ishq mein yahi hota hai... kya karein...dil hai ke maante nahi...

likhte rahiye...


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bohat hi umda .. mujhe behad pasand aaya aapka likha hua khash kar ye sher

Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

har kisi ki kahani sa lagta hai ... apna sa .. aur kya kahuN.. likhte rahiye aise hi

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yeh gazhal padke aisa laga jaise kisi ne mere saamne aaina rakh diya........ tanha ji, kehte hain ki jab koi insaan sacch dil se dua deta hia toh uski har dua kubool hoti hai....

apki gazhal padke aankhne bheegi hain meri, aur zindagi ek arsa phir se mere saamne aa gaya hai, meri dua hai ki apki har muraad puri ho aur ap safalta ki unchaiyaan dekhe........ apki yeh gazhal mere maan ko bha gayi.......

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doston...bazm ko mera Aadaab........bahot dino baad ek koshish ki hai ....bahot saari ghazalein shru to ki..par unhe poori na kar paya...ye ek koshish aaj poori ki hai...ummeed hai aap sabko pasand aayegi..

Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon,
Meri taqdeer apni rah chalti hai, Mai apni rah chalta hoon.

Girta hoon raah mein thokar har baar khaa kar,
Meri shiddat to dekhiye, uth kar mai phir sambhaltaa hoon.

Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
Jaan kar us bedard ki hi gali se nikalta hoon.

Jaane kaun hoon ? shayad tufaan se ladta ek diya hoon,
Bujhta hoon kabhi to kabhi jalta hoon.

Muqaddar hai mera jalna har pal; mai ek,
Aaftaab hoon ,har shaam ko usi dariya mein dhalta hoon.


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Hai rahein aur bhi sheher mein jafar,
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Tanha Dil ji...

Ishq mein yahi hota hai... kya karein...dil hai ke maante nahi...

likhte rahiye...

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yeh gazhal padke aisa laga jaise kisi ne mere saamne aaina rakh diya........ tanha ji, kehte hain ki jab koi insaan sacch dil se dua deta hia toh uski har dua kubool hoti hai....

apki gazhal padke aankhne bheegi hain meri, aur zindagi ek arsa phir se mere saamne aa gaya hai, meri dua hai ki apki har muraad puri ho aur ap safalta ki unchaiyaan dekhe........ apki yeh gazhal mere maan ko bha gayi.......

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