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23rd March 2010, 08:14 PM
Din Do Din Kya,maah Do Maah Kya,saal Do Saal Bhi Koi Muddat Nahi
Umr Bhar Main Kar Lunga IntezaR Tera Magar Tum Aane Ka Waada Toh Karo.
Last edited by badnaam007; 23rd March 2010 at 08:15 PM..
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An Incomplite Dream
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6th April 2010, 03:56 PM
Gazab kiya tere waade pe aitebaar kiya
Tamaam raat kayamat kaa intezaar kiya
............ DaaG dehlvi sahab
Lab khamosh hai unke niahoN mein sawal hai
hay! yeh gile shikwon se intezaar achcha tha
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7th April 2010, 07:29 AM
Kabhi Khushi Se Khushi Ki Taraf Nahi Dekha
Tumhare Baad Phir Kisi Ki Taraf Nahi Dekha
Yeh Soch Kar Ke Tera Intezar Laazim Hai
Tamam Umr Ghadi Ki Taraf Nahi Dekha
Munnawar Rana Saahab
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7th April 2010, 02:12 PM
intzar kartey ho jaan sey janey ki,
koi to had hogi mujhko aazmaney ki,,
mujhey dekhkar apna munh fer letey ho,
itni badi saza apna haq jataney ki
....................... Not mine......
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7th April 2010, 03:35 PM
Kaatey nahi khat tey lamha-e-intezaar ke
Nazrein jamaye baithey hai raaste pe yaar ke......
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10th April 2010, 02:34 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Baqtiar
Kaatey nahi khat tey lamha-e-intezaar ke
Nazrein jamaye baithey hai raaste pe yaar ke......
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Woh aate bhi aur jaane kab guzar jate
Hum to kayal ho gaye the bus intezar ke .........
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24th April 2010, 04:58 PM
Chalo aaj fir intzaar pe kuch likhte hain
Bure lagte they jo pal intzaar ke...
Usne aane ka waada karke lamhe haseen bana diye...
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24th April 2010, 05:02 PM
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28th April 2010, 10:10 PM
maana k tere aane se ho gaya khatm intzaar....
ab dil ko samjhane ko kuch nahi hai yaar...
Chnd lamhe aur dede mujhe tu visaal ke...
E maut... ab to shayad aaa jaaye mera yaar...
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1st May 2010, 10:00 PM
Huyee muddat bahut tera intezaar karte karte
Hum chal pade tere aane ka itebaar karte karte
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2nd May 2010, 12:16 PM
Jhootey tere wadey ye kaam kartey hai
Bus Lamh-e-zindagi ke wo bada jatey hai.
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2nd May 2010, 02:08 PM
Unke milne ki khushi mein humne wada kar liya
Ta umar karenge intezaar jaldi mein irada kar liya
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3rd May 2010, 02:17 PM
ye kiski pic laga di sig me? Aur itna roothi hui kyu hai?
kya se kya ho gaye... Hum tere intzaar me...
2 baal bache they sir pe.. Wo b ud chale tere pyaar me...
Logo ki berukhi to dekho...
Takloo kehkar bulate hain hume bhare bazar me....
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3rd May 2010, 02:29 PM
"Hawa ke jonkey ki tarah aaye aur chale gaye,
jinko hume maanga tha din-raat duaoN meiN"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd May 2010, 02:40 PM
Aapke is sher (or whatever it is) se Ghalib ka ek sher yaad aa gaya
umre daraaz maang ker laaye the chaar baal
do aarzoo me jhad gaye, do intezaar meiN...
(hahahaha.... ..yeh Ghalib saheb ka sher nahi hai, unke sher ki waat lagaayi gayi hai, khair yahaaN char baal ki baat ho rahi hai, aapke tou do hi they......very sad..)
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
"Hawa ke jonkey ki tarah aaye aur chale gaye,
jinko hume maanga tha din-raat duaoN meiN"
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Di intezaar word kahaaN hai..??????
Meray dil ke darwazay pe dastak bhi deta hai woH,
Aur darwaza khulnay ka intezaar bhi nahi karta...nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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3rd May 2010, 02:55 PM
Hahahahahaha ....
Waise ghalib ji ka orig wala kya tha?
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3rd May 2010, 03:05 PM
OPPPPSS..!!..GHALIB ka nahi ,Bahadur shah zafar sahab ka sher hai;
Umr-e-daraaz maang ker laaye they char din
Do aarzoo me kat gaye, do intezaar meiN
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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3rd May 2010, 03:19 PM
Ohh ... Ok zainy ji and thanx for replying....
Aur last reply me sherni nahi shreni kehna chahta tha
Aur sunita ji k sher k writer ko ek baat kahi ja sakti hai...
Dil hai ya laal quile ka darwaaja jokes apart...
Khair... Continue the game..
Jaan se b zyada unhe pyaar kiya karte they...
Yaad me unki din raat jaga karte they...
Ab un raaho se guzra nahi jaata..
Jaha baith unka intzaar kiya karte they....(nm)
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3rd May 2010, 03:21 PM
Ooops..... I mean aapke sher k writer ko...
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3rd May 2010, 03:21 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
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Di intezaar word kahaaN hai..??????
Meray dil ke darwazay pe dastak bhi deta hai woH,
Aur darwaza khulnay ka intezaar bhi nahi karta...nm
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ZAINY, tu intzaar word pooch rahi hai, ki kahaN hai, meri halat dekhne ke baad bhi tuje intezaar word chahiye
darasal maine jo likhna tha woh sher intezaar wala hi tha, pata nahi kaise yeh likh sher likh diya, apni taraf se to maine intezaar wala sher hi likha tha
"apni halat ka ab to khud andaaza nahi hai muje,
logoN se suna hai kisi ke intezaar mein rahti hoon har pal maiN"
ZAINY, intezaar aur maiN shayad hum dono ek doosre ke bahut kareebi saathi haiN, barsoN se mere saath hai yeh
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd May 2010, 03:29 PM
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Hellloooooooooo Di ,sab khair tou hai na....???...lagta hai jijaji ki yaad sataa rahi hai aaj aapko....
Inteha hogayi intezaar ki
aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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3rd May 2010, 03:56 PM
Zainy...Seems like your Jija ji..... koi goori memma shemma ke chakkar mein hai
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