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Bahut achche Raj Bhai...... bahut umdaa kaha hai dear tumne...  aur wakai behad sach bhi tum to sach mein buland shayar ho Bhai.. chalo sher khata huN.... per subject change karke...   Itna rutha huN tujhse ke teri tasveer nahi dekhta Tujhse jude kisi khawab ki tabeer nahi dekhta 
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 Par apne last wale sher se aage ka kuch banane ki koshish ki hai...Nosh farmaiyega.... 'Khuda' agar mujh pe yu 'meherbaan' hota... 'To' banda bhi aaj 'pehelwaan' hota... kyun k 'gadha' bande ka naam nahi hai... Isiliye khuda bande pe meherbaan nahi hai....  |
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10th May 2010, 12:43 AM
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hmm zarur... woh gazal abhi shuru hi kiya huN....... Tu meri hai hi nahi main yeh jaan gaya huN haath ki lakeeren dekhta huN taqdeer nahi dekhta yeh secound sher hai......... ummid hai pasand aaya honga tumhe Kyunki aashique tum bhi ho magar chot khaye huye, humara kya hai dil ke tukde tukde bikhare haiN.... 
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10th May 2010, 11:20 AM
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Iska kya matlab hua?  hhaath ki lakeeere kyu dekhte ho? Kya uski shaql aisi hai k jo haatho ki lakeero se milti julti hai |
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Zindagi me waqt -
10th May 2010, 02:58 PM
Zindagi me waqt ke patthar se aaine takaraane lage hai
bandagi me bewaqt paar se maaine badalane lage hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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11th May 2010, 12:42 PM
Zindagi ko jo samjha wo zindagi pe rota hai....
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14th May 2010, 08:10 AM
iska bhi jawab ho sakta hai kya...
kya dun??? chalo try karta hun... aksar zindagi bewafai maut wafaa kar jaati hai aise sher post kar ke kya aapko bhi hansi aati hai |
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14th May 2010, 10:31 AM
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bewafa ke naam se is dunia me jo mashoor hai... Naam hai Buland uska aur ghamo se choor hai...  |
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14th May 2010, 05:18 PM
hehhehehe thanks shayar jii..
or aapka sher bahut acha laga mujhe baras jata har jagah tu saawan ki tarah 'aakash' bahaa kar aansu apne main to ro bhi nahi sakta |
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14th May 2010, 07:02 PM
sadaayen aati thi in mehfilo me ashiqo ki bhi
ab koi na diljala hoga jo dard e dil sunayega..................... khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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15th May 2010, 12:06 AM
Kyu ji... Aap kahi ja re le ho????
Diljalo ki bheed me ye kaun aaya e khuda... Dil iska saabut dekh kar kyu todne par hain tule.... |
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15th May 2010, 06:21 PM
abhi abhi to aaye hain jiii..
yun todkar dil mera tujhe or kya milega aakash aayine or bhi hain tere paas apna didaar karne ko |
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15th May 2010, 07:48 PM
Ye to kafi high level ki shayri hai janaab...
Mai abhi us level tak nahi pahucha... Khair... Deedaar de deedaar de deedaar de deedaar de... Hai ishq to... Hai ishq to ishq to.. Gale se lagale.... Ik jhalak ko.... Ik jhalak ko ankh taras gayi... Something-2 par gana achha hai aur haan ... ( not mine hai ji... ) |
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15th May 2010, 08:59 PM
hahhahaha.. sahi hai shayar ji. kuch samjh na aaye to gaana hi likh dena chahiye
andaaza na tha use ki hum bhi unhe bhool jayenge aakash koi bata de use ki andaaze hi aksar ghalat hua karte hain |
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15th May 2010, 10:47 PM
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mera andaaza hai k aap ek achhe HUMAN ho ... Hahahaha Don't mind akaash jiii just kidding Bhoolkar humko tumne,hume jo tohfa diya hai.... Hum kya bataye tumko,humpe kya ehsaan kiya hai... Jab yaad krte they hume, to hichkiya aati thi... Ab jaake chain o sukuun ka humne pyala piya hai... |
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Kis kadar zindagi teri -
16th May 2010, 06:40 AM
Kis kadar zindagi teri saadagi ke dayare me hai
jaise meri har saas ki bandagi ek ishare me hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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16th May 2010, 10:50 AM
Gulo me rang bhare baad e nau bahaar chale..
Garmi me hawa ki thandi fuhaar chale.. Aa bhi jaao k A.C. Kharaab ho chuka... Teri thandi saanso pe hamara ekhtiyaar chale... |
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16th May 2010, 04:44 PM
KHULE PADEY HAIN MERI ZINDAGI KE SAAREY WARK
NA JAANEY KAB KOI AANDHI UDAA KE LE JAAYE… KISI KA DARD MEIN KAHAN TAK APNEY PAS RAKHUN..? YEH JIS KA HAI WOH NISHANI BATA KE LE JAAYE…..!!!! |
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Meri aakho se roz baya -
16th May 2010, 08:28 PM
Meri aakho se roz baya hoti hai meri dilagi
Teri aahat me roz thahar jati hai ye zindagi. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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17th May 2010, 05:33 PM
bayaan kiya na gaya mujhse dard gairon ka aakash
apne dard ko kaise fir sar e aam ruswaa hum karte |
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Tere aaine se bhi |
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Tere aaine se bhi -
17th May 2010, 08:05 PM
Tere aaine se bhee mera deedaar pura hota nahi
dil todkar bhi mera shuok-e-izhaar pura hota nahi. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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17th May 2010, 08:34 PM
bahut khoob ajay jee
karte hain wo izhaar e ishk chhup chhupke duniya se or kabhi kabhi ye bhi kehte hain ki woh bewafa nahi |
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18th May 2010, 11:32 AM
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chhupa ke rakhte hain,aise raj khola nahi karte.. duniya ne hi sikhaya hai,ab dard-e-dil bola nahi karte... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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Vo izhaar jo tune meri |
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Vo izhaar jo tune meri -
18th May 2010, 02:23 PM
Vo izhaar jo tune meri aakho me kiya uska ek gawah tha
vo pyar jo parwaan chadaa us me wajood -e-panaah tha. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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19th May 2010, 07:58 AM
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maut se pehle par saanso ke baad aaye tujhe khone ka gham utna nahi ab aakash par labon pe shayad hi koi fariyaad aaye |
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Har palak ke |
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Har palak ke -
19th May 2010, 02:49 PM
Har palak ke jhapakne se aahat kee gunj uthati hai dil me
mai simat sa jaata hu tanhaai ki is chhai hue teri mahfil me. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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19th May 2010, 09:46 PM
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acha hai log meri khamoshi se sehamey huye hain |
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Tum falak ho fir simat |
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Tum falak ho fir simat -
20th May 2010, 09:58 AM
Tum falak (aakash) ho fir simat kaise sakte ho apni ada se
teri hi to panah me ye jami apna sar chupye rakhati hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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20th May 2010, 07:41 PM
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baat wo kuch or thi simatna aata nahi aakash ko us jamee ki pyaas meri hadon se bhi badh ke thi |
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Simatna to mumkin |
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Simatna to mumkin -
21st May 2010, 03:31 PM
Simatna to mumkin nahi hai teri pyas me aakash
Talash me teri yaha samundaar bhi ratha hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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21st May 2010, 05:32 PM
nahi mumkin ki chaah yahaan har kisi ki poori ho ajay
log samandar ke kinare aake bhi pyase reh jaate hain |
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21st May 2010, 09:23 PM
chand taron ka noor tuh per barse
har koi tere pyar ko tarse..... tujhe itni khushi mile ASMA Gham tere paas aane ko tarse.... |
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Mai vo smundar nahee |
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Mai vo smundar nahee -
21st May 2010, 09:29 PM
Mai vo samandar nahee jiske kinare aake log pyase raha jaye
Tere falak me jitni uchaai hogi vaha tak gahaar ki aahat hogi. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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22nd May 2010, 08:07 AM
maana ki tu wo samandar nahi ye inaayat hai aakash ki
apne aansuon ko mila ke tujhme jo tujhe namkeen kar gaya... |
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Meri aakho se gira ek |
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Meri aakho se gira ek -
22nd May 2010, 03:46 PM
Meri aakho se gira ek katra gar samandar hota
usi jami ke aakash me thahra ye muqqdar hota http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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22nd May 2010, 06:15 PM
mukkadar ki jamee chhoti bahut hoti hai ajay
isme milta bhi kuch nahi or khota bhi kuch nahi |
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Milne aur khone ka hisaab |
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Milne aur khone ka hisaab -
22nd May 2010, 06:56 PM
Milne aur khone ka hisaab na kar aakash
Pal me yaha hastiya banti aur bigadti hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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22nd May 2010, 09:06 PM
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baat bigadna ya banna sab kismat ka khel hai ajay isliye hum wakt or mauke ka ab aitbaar nahi karte |
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Aitbaar to har baar rakhana hi |
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Aitbaar to har baar rakhana hi -
22nd May 2010, 11:08 PM
Aitbaar to har baar rakhana hi padta hai aakash
mumkin hai ki waqt ki karvat bhi tere hisse me ho. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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23rd May 2010, 10:32 AM
aitbaar khud par se to kya khuda se bhi uthh chuka hai
wakt ki karwat ka intezaar karna bhi ek wakt ki baat thi aakash |
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