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Something.... - 14th September 2003, 05:16 PM

SOMETHING....

raises me,
when i breath.
asks me,
if i eat.
the question
is internal affair.
so the answer
is in me some where.
asks me to know,
my origin.
i say ,my parents.
and it frames,
situation to think,
think and think.
my origin, i can't see.
my destiny,
i can't feel.my prersent ,
but i see,no diffrence,
in dream i see.
i think ,
i thought toi extent.
she is my destiny,
i am for her.
but i think ,
does this i completes me.
i think, the extent can move.
as i am because of her.
the humanity seems to be the end.
it will keep arising,
situation and situations for me,
untill i know,
the punchuation of the question........


I don't care what i expect from life, i ask what life expects from me!!!!!!!!!
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Wow! - 15th September 2003, 05:01 AM

asks me to know,
my origin.
i say ,my parents.
and it frames,
situation to think,
think and think.
my origin, i can't see.
my destiny,
i can't feel.my prersent ,
but i see,no diffrence,
in dream i see.
i think ,
i thought toi extent.


This just makes one to think and think....indeed!!!

excellent thoughts you have portrayed!!!!!

keep writing...

fiza


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thanks - 18th September 2003, 02:37 PM

thanks, i am surprised, my words let u think. it's amazing, but it also surprises me.u never know your self better.on strange time you will discover your self with new habits, amazing!


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