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24th February 2007, 11:03 AM
sabhi doston ko raj ka salaam ......dosto dil ki gehrai se kush moti aapki khidmat mein hazir hain umeed hai aapko pasand aiynge.......arz kiya hai.....
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
na chupao 'veer' tum koii raaz inse
is shahar ke log sayaane bahut hai.N.......
aapki raye ka muntzir..........raj.......... 24/02/2007
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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24th February 2007, 12:32 PM
mere pyaare big B ko chhotu ka pranaam,
wah ji wah kya baat hai...maza aa gaya aaj to paRH ke behtrin se andaaz-e-bayaaN ke sath ehsaasoN ko baRe hi khoobsooraT tarike se pesH kiya hai aapne...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
big B is ghazal ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenGaa..apna khaYaal rakheN aur khusH raheN..
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka chhotu
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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24th February 2007, 12:55 PM
janab raajveer ji
namaskar janab kaise hain
bhai aaj aapki ye gazal pad ke dil khus ho gaya yaar
bakai main bahut umda gazal likhi hai aapne ek baat sach bataun maine usi andaz main pada ise jis andaz main janab bashir badra sahab gazal sunate hain. to main kya bataun janab bada maza aa gaya. bahut badiya
dili daad kabool kigiyega janab
shukriya
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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24th February 2007, 01:44 PM
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
Namaskar Rajveer ji
Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hay aapne...mere daad kabul kijeyega....upar quote kiye huay sher dil ko chuu gaye...bharne wale zakham purane bahut hain....very touching note......yuun hi likhtey rahiye
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24th February 2007, 04:13 PM
kaise hai Veer Bhai!!
Bahut dino baad aapkaa likhaa naseeb huaa ....
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
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bahut khoob sher kahe hai sahab!!! Daad kabool farmaayiyega!!
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25th February 2007, 03:01 PM
wah wah rajveer ji apne hbot khub likha hai
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
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25th February 2007, 04:52 PM
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wah wah rajveer ji apne hbot khub likha hai
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
je line to dil ko shu ghi
aise hi likhte rehna
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raj ji
bahut khub khyaal hai ismein apke.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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26th February 2007, 01:04 AM
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sabhi doston ko raj ka salaam ......dosto dil ki gehrai se kush moti aapki khidmat mein hazir hain umeed hai aapko pasand aiynge.......arz kiya hai.....
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
na chupao 'veer' tum koii raaz inse
is shahar ke log sayaane bahut hai.N.......
aapki raye ka muntzir..........raj.......... 24/02/2007
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hello rajvir ji behad khoobsurat si ghazal par dil se mubaarakbaad haazir hai
aise hi likhte rahiye
regards
manu
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26th February 2007, 02:48 PM
HI RAJ JI,
KAISE HAIN AAP?
RAJ JI aap to hamesha hi ek alag andaaz main apni aamad karte ho.
aaj bhi aapne...apna ek alag hi andaz pesh kiya hain!
aap jin baato ko...apni nazm main bayan karte hain,wo kahi had tak samaaj per tanz bhi karta hain,
jaise aapne is shair main paid ke baare main kaha hai.
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
bas aise hi likhte rahiye.
aapki agli post ka intezaar rahega,,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz
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5th March 2007, 11:48 AM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
mere pyaare big B ko chhotu ka pranaam,
wah ji wah kya baat hai...maza aa gaya aaj to paRH ke behtrin se andaaz-e-bayaaN ke sath ehsaasoN ko baRe hi khoobsooraT tarike se pesH kiya hai aapne...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
big B is ghazal ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenGaa..apna khaYaal rakheN aur khusH raheN..
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka chhotu
dhaval
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dhaval mere chhotu bhut bhut shukria jo tumne mujhe parha or saraha......yun hii saath dete rehna......raj......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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5th March 2007, 11:49 AM
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janab raajveer ji
namaskar janab kaise hain
bhai aaj aapki ye gazal pad ke dil khus ho gaya yaar
bakai main bahut umda gazal likhi hai aapne ek baat sach bataun maine usi andaz main pada ise jis andaz main janab bashir badra sahab gazal sunate hain. to main kya bataun janab bada maza aa gaya. bahut badiya
dili daad kabool kigiyega janab
shukriya
dilip
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dilip ji aapne is nacheez ki poetry ke liye waqt nikala tahe dil se shukar guzaar hoon........yn hii saath dete rehna........raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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5th March 2007, 11:51 AM
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marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
Namaskar Rajveer ji
Bahut khoobsurat ghazal likhi hay aapne...mere daad kabul kijeyega....upar quote kiye huay sher dil ko chuu gaye...bharne wale zakham purane bahut hain....very touching note......yuun hi likhtey rahiye
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sukanya ji aapne jis lehje mein meri gazal ki tareef ki hai or jitne dil se tareef ki hai mere liye shukria bolne ke liye lafaz kam par rahe hain.....phir bhii aapka bhut bhut shukria......yun hii saath deti rehna........raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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5th March 2007, 11:53 AM
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kaise hai Veer Bhai!!
Bahut dino baad aapkaa likhaa naseeb huaa ....
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
bahut khoob sher kahe hai sahab!!! Daad kabool farmaayiyega!!
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dheer ji aapke reply ka to mujhe hamesha hii intzaar rehta hai....aap jaise parne waale bhut kam hote hain mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hai ki aap bhut dil se parte ho......yun hii apni nazrain hum khaakhsaaron par rakhna.......raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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5th March 2007, 08:52 PM
Rajveer ji Aadaab...aapka kalaam padhha bahut pasand aaya,har sher apni tarjumaani khud karta hua nazar aaya,hamari daad aapki khidmat me haazir hai dost
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6th March 2007, 01:10 AM
Rajveer!
You have just flooded my eyes...... I forgive u for digging my pain so deep inside.... I love my pain nevertheless......
How beautiful expression of pain! Hats off!
mere quatil tera mei is tarha insaaf karta hun
Ja bewafa har khata teri mei muaf karta hun
Warm Regards
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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6th March 2007, 03:23 AM
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
Adaab Rajveer ji,
Aapne bahut hi accha likha.......thanks for sharing
~yash~
Yun na dekho nafrat bhari nigahon se,
dil mera kaanch hai toot ke bikhar jayega...
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6th March 2007, 05:30 AM
veer jee,
aapko paDhna bahut achcha laga.
thanks for sharing your thoughts
regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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6th March 2007, 10:30 AM
hi rajveer ji
bhai maaf kar dena deri se padh raha hu aapki ya rachna par aaj aapki rachna ne hamare dil ko chhua hai aapki is rachna mein ek andruni dard jalakta hai jo hamare dil ko bhaya hai
rajveer ji aapki is rachna ka javab shayri ke andaaz mein dena chahta hu gaur farmaiyega...
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
Kaun kehta hai dard mein taqlif hoti hai,
Usse to mera ishq aur bhi mauj marta hai,
Zalimo se kehdo ki sitam aur badha dein,
Abhi bhi mere ragoon me ishq ka zanoon daudta hai.
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
Pyaar chhupta nahi aankhe jukane se,
Dil rukta nahi kisi ke samjane se,
Hum aapko yaad karte hai jine ke bahane se,
Kyuki ruk jati hai dhadkane aapko bhul jane se.
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
Aandhiyon me bhi jaise kuch chirag jala karte hai,
Utni hi himmat-e-hosla hum bhi rakha karte hai,
Manzilon abhi aur dur hai hamari manzil,
Chand sitare to rahon me mila karte hai,
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
Aankho ki aawaz kuch aur hoti hai,
Aansuo ki aawaz kuch aur hoti hai,
Kaun chahta hai bichdna tumse,
Par kismat ki baat kuch aur hoti hai.
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
Dard se dosti ho gayi yaaron,
Zindagi be dard ho gayi yaaron,
Kya hua jo jal gaya aashiyana hamara,
Dur tak roshni to ho gayi yaaron.
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
Paani se pyaas na buji to maikhane ki taraf chal nikla,
Socha ki siqayat karu khuda se par khuda bhi tera chahne wala nikla.
behad khub dost
ese hi likhte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
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sabhi doston ko raj ka salaam ......dosto dil ki gehrai se kush moti aapki khidmat mein hazir hain umeed hai aapko pasand aiynge.......arz kiya hai.....
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
na chupao 'veer' tum koii raaz inse
is shahar ke log sayaane bahut hai.N.......
aapki raye ka muntzir..........raj.......... 24/02/2007
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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7th March 2007, 11:13 AM
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wah wah rajveer ji apne hbot khub likha hai
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
je line to dil ko shu ghi
aise hi likhte rehna
hamari bhi daad kabul kijiye
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kamal ji bhut bhut shukria jo tusee aine pyaar naal parhya meri tehreer nu.....umeed karda haan ise tarha thuada saath milda rahega........raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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raj ji
bahut khub khyaal hai ismein apke.
sakhi
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sakhi ji dil se shukria aada karta hoon housla afzai ke liye.......raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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hello rajvir ji behad khoobsurat si ghazal par dil se mubaarakbaad haazir hai
aise hi likhte rahiye
regards
manu
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manu ji aapka sawagat hai is nacheez ki mehfil mein jab aap jaise umda sukhanwaro ki daad naseeb hoti hai to dil or acha likhne ki soachta hai.....tahe dil se shukar guzaar hoon.....yun hii aapka saath chahta hoon.......raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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8th March 2007, 07:09 PM
waah raaj saheb.....sabse pehle mera salaam kabool keejiye.....aapki Ghazal padi ..ek sakooN sa mila ek muddat ke baad.....janaab bahoot dil se chali....
Dard ab is kader bahne laga ai 'harash'
yuiN laga teri GhazaloN main rehne laga
Harash
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11th March 2007, 02:21 PM
Namaskaar Rajveer Ji
Aako parhna bahaut pasand hai, aapke shabd hamesha parhnewale ko baandh liya kartey hain. Aapki aaj ki peshkash bhi bahaut lajawaab hai.
aabhaar
vipin
विपिन
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14th March 2007, 10:49 AM
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HI RAJ JI,
KAISE HAIN AAP?
RAJ JI aap to hamesha hi ek alag andaaz main apni aamad karte ho.
aaj bhi aapne...apna ek alag hi andaz pesh kiya hain!
aap jin baato ko...apni nazm main bayan karte hain,wo kahi had tak samaaj per tanz bhi karta hain,
jaise aapne is shair main paid ke baare main kaha hai.
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
bas aise hi likhte rahiye.
aapki agli post ka intezaar rahega,,
apna khayal rakhiye
Allah hafiz
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sony ji ko raj ka salaam......aapne meri bazm mein aakar jo is nacheez ko izaat bakshi hai main uske liye tahe dil se shukar guzaar hoon......umeed karta hoon aage bhi yun hii aapka saath milta rahega......raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th March 2007, 10:51 AM
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Originally Posted by Asif jamil
Rajveer ji Aadaab...aapka kalaam padhha bahut pasand aaya,har sher apni tarjumaani khud karta hua nazar aaya,hamari daad aapki khidmat me haazir hai dost
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asif bhai ko raj ka duaaon ke saath bhut sara pyaar....janaab aapka andaaz-e-tareef humme bhut bhaya.....is zara nawazish ke liye bhut shukria.....yun hii saath dete rehna........raj.........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th March 2007, 10:53 AM
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Originally Posted by Dard-e-sush
Rajveer!
You have just flooded my eyes...... I forgive u for digging my pain so deep inside.... I love my pain nevertheless......
How beautiful expression of pain! Hats off!
mere quatil tera mei is tarha insaaf karta hun
Ja bewafa har khata teri mei muaf karta hun
Warm Regards
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janaab dard-e-sush sahib aap pehli daffa meri mehfil mein aaye ho sab se pehle to aapka khair maqdam karta hoon....or ab rahi baat mere kalaam ki to janaab aap dosto ki duaa hai jo meri kalam rawaa hai.....warna is nacheez ko kon puchhta hai.......yun hii saath dete rehna........raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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11th April 2007, 04:47 PM
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Originally Posted by mohdyash
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
Adaab Rajveer ji,
Aapne bahut hi accha likha.......thanks for sharing
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yash ji aap meri post par aaye.....mujhe parha or saraha aapka bhut bhut shukar guzaar hoon.......raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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hi -
11th April 2007, 04:48 PM
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Originally Posted by aarya
veer jee,
aapko paDhna bahut achcha laga.
thanks for sharing your thoughts
regards
aarya
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aarya aapko mere ehsaas ache lage main tahe dil se aapka shukar guzaar hoon......raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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11th April 2007, 04:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Merul
hi rajveer ji
bhai maaf kar dena deri se padh raha hu aapki ya rachna par aaj aapki rachna ne hamare dil ko chhua hai aapki is rachna mein ek andruni dard jalakta hai jo hamare dil ko bhaya hai
rajveer ji aapki is rachna ka javab shayri ke andaaz mein dena chahta hu gaur farmaiyega...
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
Kaun kehta hai dard mein taqlif hoti hai,
Usse to mera ishq aur bhi mauj marta hai,
Zalimo se kehdo ki sitam aur badha dein,
Abhi bhi mere ragoon me ishq ka zanoon daudta hai.
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
Pyaar chhupta nahi aankhe jukane se,
Dil rukta nahi kisi ke samjane se,
Hum aapko yaad karte hai jine ke bahane se,
Kyuki ruk jati hai dhadkane aapko bhul jane se.
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
Aandhiyon me bhi jaise kuch chirag jala karte hai,
Utni hi himmat-e-hosla hum bhi rakha karte hai,
Manzilon abhi aur dur hai hamari manzil,
Chand sitare to rahon me mila karte hai,
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
Aankho ki aawaz kuch aur hoti hai,
Aansuo ki aawaz kuch aur hoti hai,
Kaun chahta hai bichdna tumse,
Par kismat ki baat kuch aur hoti hai.
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
Dard se dosti ho gayi yaaron,
Zindagi be dard ho gayi yaaron,
Kya hua jo jal gaya aashiyana hamara,
Dur tak roshni to ho gayi yaaron.
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
Paani se pyaas na buji to maikhane ki taraf chal nikla,
Socha ki siqayat karu khuda se par khuda bhi tera chahne wala nikla.
behad khub dost
ese hi likhte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
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merul ji ko raj ka namaskaar.....dost aapne jis andaaz mein mere kalaam ki tareef ki hai wo wakiya hi qabil-e-tareef hai.....appko bhut bhut dhanyabaad......umeed karta hoon yun hi aap saath dete rahainge.......raj..........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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11th April 2007, 09:56 PM
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
veer kia tareeef karun mujhe to aap ki her ghazal hi itni achi lagti hai haan mager jo ashaar uper quote kiye hain main ne wo itne achae lagey ke dil kiya her her sher per daad dun her sher main itni gehrayee hai aur her sher mukammal hai apni jagah .....bohat acha likha hai khush rahain humesha ... apna khayal rakhiyega rab rakha
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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12th April 2007, 06:31 PM
Ek aur khoobsoorat ghazal ke liye mubarakbaad dena chaahungi..
Daad kubool keejiye..
Aise hi mehfil ko apne rango se sajaate rahiye..
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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14th April 2007, 06:26 PM
Rajveerji behad khubsurat ehsaas behad khubsurat alfaaz. vaah mazaa aa gaya padhkar behad pasand aaya
aksar yaad karte hain un guzre hue lamho ko
aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko
kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare
jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha
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16th April 2007, 10:17 AM
assalam Rajveerji apne jo likha hai who to kabile tarif hai.......
umid hai hai apse app aise hi mehfil sajate rahe.....
khuda apki hifazat kare
Allah Hafiz
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18th April 2007, 10:19 AM
hi rajveer
kaafi umda likha hai aapne. kaafi acche lage yeh jazbaat.
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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18th April 2007, 11:40 AM
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sabhi doston ko raj ka salaam ......dosto dil ki gehrai se kush moti aapki khidmat mein hazir hain umeed hai aapko pasand aiynge.......arz kiya hai.....
iss dil ke afsane bahut hai.N
abhi dard ke khazane bahut hai.N.....
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
nahi baat sab me.N teri nazar jaisee
yu.N to dunia me.N maikhane bahut hai.N.....
na chupao 'veer' tum koii raaz inse
is shahar ke log sayaane bahut hai.N.......
aapki raye ka muntzir..........raj.......... 24/02/2007
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rajveer ji namaskaar
bahut umda gazal se ru-ba-ru karvaya hai aapne, kisi ek sher ki tareef nahi ki ja sakti...har sher pad kar jubaan se "wah - wah" nikalata hai.
yu hi umda likhne ki taqat kudha aapko deta rahey...!
aapki dost
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25th April 2007, 10:11 AM
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Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan
waah raaj saheb.....sabse pehle mera salaam kabool keejiye.....aapki Ghazal padi ..ek sakooN sa mila ek muddat ke baad.....janaab bahoot dil se chali....
Dard ab is kader bahne laga ai 'harash'
yuiN laga teri GhazaloN main rehne laga
Harash
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harash ji ko bhi raj ka salaam......janaab kahan rehte hoi aaj kal aap?dikhai hii nahi dete.......aapne itne gaur se is nacheez ko parha bhut bhut shukria umeed karta hjoon yun hi aapka saath bana rahega.......raj.........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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25th April 2007, 10:13 AM
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Namaskaar Rajveer Ji
Aako parhna bahaut pasand hai, aapke shabd hamesha parhnewale ko baandh liya kartey hain. Aapki aaj ki peshkash bhi bahaut lajawaab hai.
aabhaar
vipin
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vipin ji kahan ho aap bhut dino baad aapse ru b ru ho raha hoon.......is ijajat afzai ke liye bhut bhut shukria......yun hii saath dete rahiyega.........raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th April 2007, 10:18 AM
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Originally Posted by koi to ho
bacha ke rakho abhi ashq apne
abhi zakham tumko dikhane bahut hai.N......
marna jo chaha to mar na sake hum
kambakth jeene ke bahane bahut hai.N....
abhi na chalao seene pe khanzar
bharne wale zakham purane bahut hai.N...
bichda to shayad jee na sakunga
tere shahar se mere yarane bahut hai.N......
mat kaato paid tum zara taras khao
shakho.N pe iskii aashiane bahut hai.N.....
veer kia tareeef karun mujhe to aap ki her ghazal hi itni achi lagti hai haan mager jo ashaar uper quote kiye hain main ne wo itne achae lagey ke dil kiya her her sher per daad dun her sher main itni gehrayee hai aur her sher mukammal hai apni jagah .....bohat acha likha hai khush rahain humesha ... apna khayal rakhiyega rab rakha
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mani ji ko raj ka salaam.......mainb janta hoon aapne kis qadar gehrai mein doob kar meri koshish ko parha hoga or aapko kis qadar sakoon hasil huaa hoga.....yun hi saath deti rehna........raj........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th April 2007, 10:21 AM
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Originally Posted by chaahat
Ek aur khoobsoorat ghazal ke liye mubarakbaad dena chaahungi..
Daad kubool keejiye..
Aise hi mehfil ko apne rango se sajaate rahiye..
Take Care..
~Priya
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priya jo raj ka namaskaar.......priya aap un mere apno mein se ho jo mere liye dil se duaa mangte ho or yakeen maniye ye sab aapki duaaon ka hii kamaal hai jo main kush likhne ke qabil hoon ......bhut bhut shukria mujhe parne or pasand karne ke liye........raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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1st August 2007, 10:19 AM
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Originally Posted by reena
Rajveerji behad khubsurat ehsaas behad khubsurat alfaaz. vaah mazaa aa gaya padhkar behad pasand aaya
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reena ji ko raj ka namaskaar .......aapka bhut bhut shukria jo aapne meri koshish ko parha or saraha...........raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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