tumne Dekha Hi Nahi Apni Hatheli Ko Kabhi
Isme Dhundli Si Kahin "uski" Lakeer Bhi To Hai....
Bohat Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hain Shaan Saheb...yuhi Likhte Rahiye...
Zainy..
oh shukriya...... pehli baar aapse mukhatib ho raha hoon, but u alrealy know my name
acha laga jaankar
Quote:
tumne Dekha Hi Nahi Apni Hatheli Ko Kabhi
Isme Dhundli Si Kahin "uski" Lakeer Bhi To Hai....
Dekha bhi aur bahot koshish bhi ki,
par na mili koi lakeer us apne se begane ki,
cheer kar bhi dikhaya haath us zalim ko,
par shayad usko kadr na thi apne is Deewane ki ......!
hi shaan..
I like the sweetness hidden dehind this poem...
aur jaisa ke zainy jee ne kaha hum bhi kuch kehna chahenge aur aapko JHELNA paDega!!!!
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haan jee,
Gaur famaiyega,
" gar khuda hai kahin to lakeere.n badaleNgi khud-ba-khud
aajmaish uski aur apne jajbaato.n ki numaish na kar...."
God bless you
khush raho,
tumhari dost
ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
lovely............. wat abt this NAA RAHI AGAR LAKEER TERE NAAM KI MERE HAATHO MEI MAIN US KHUDA SE BHI LADD LUNGA KOI AAYA AGAR BEECH TERE MERE PYAAR KE POORE JAHAAN KO BARBAAD MAI KAR DUNGA
lovely............. wat abt this NAA RAHI AGAR LAKEER TERE NAAM KI MERE HAATHO MEI MAIN US KHUDA SE BHI LADD LUNGA KOI AAYA AGAR BEECH TERE MERE PYAAR KE POORE JAHAAN KO BARBAAD MAI KAR DUNGA
hi shaan..
I like the sweetness hidden dehind this poem...
aur jaisa ke zainy jee ne kaha hum bhi kuch kehna chahenge aur aapko JHELNA paDega!!!!
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haan jee,
Gaur famaiyega,
" gar khuda hai kahin to lakeere.n badaleNgi khud-ba-khud
aajmaish uski aur apne jajbaato.n ki numaish na kar...."
God bless you
khush raho,
tumhari dost
ritu
woww..........bahot khoob..................lekin aajkal tum kahan gayab ho
woww..........bahot khoob..................lekin aajkal tum kahan gayab ho
arreeyy!!!
kabhi to kuch jyada likha karo.........
yahin to hoon...
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference #
kuch apna ho and koi le jaa raha ho yaa cheen ne ki koshish kare toh agar hum use nahi rokenge toh kaun rokegaa yaar........... ahinsaa and all is gud.. but at places.................... not in this......... apne views change karo dear warna wo din door nahi rahegaa k haatho mei sirf chand lakeerein reh jaayegi
wooooooooooow.........bahut khoob shaan.....bahut hi kam lafzon me bahut kuch keh diya....lovely...
par ek baat to batao dear.....mere is pyaare se dost ko ho kya gaya hai yaar??....kahi pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya??
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
wooooooooooow.........bahut khoob shaan.....bahut hi kam lafzon me bahut kuch keh diya....lovely...
par ek baat to batao dear.....mere is pyaare se dost ko ho kya gaya hai yaar??....kahi pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya??
shan jee, badi der ke baad hi is thread ko dekha maine bahot achha likha hai dost
aise hi likhte raho god bless you
Diya
durghatna se der bhali Diya ji......... agar aap reply nai karte to main aapse ladai karne wala tha
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Originally Posted by sakhi1909
lakeer banan shayd upar wale ke hath hai aur padna bhiu kaha kisi insaan ke vash me jo hota jaye dekhte jana
acha likha
absolutely brother.... thanx
Quote:
Originally Posted by Aashique
Bohat Khoob Varnan Kiya Hai Lakeeron Me Apne Dil Ka Haal
HAATHON KI LAKIREIN NASEEB BAN GAYI..
DIL KE LIYE MERE "RAQEEB" BAN GAYI..
bahot bahot shukriya........!
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Originally Posted by khanak
kuch apna ho and koi le jaa raha ho yaa cheen ne ki koshish kare toh agar hum use nahi rokenge toh kaun rokegaa yaar........... ahinsaa and all is gud.. but at places.................... not in this......... apne views change karo dear warna wo din door nahi rahegaa k haatho mei sirf chand lakeerein reh jaayegi