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Ek Lakeer tere naam ki - 7th March 2009, 12:08 PM



Aik Lakeer Terey Naam Ki,

kuch udaas kuch khamosh

kuch bebas see lakeerien merey haath ki?

Dhoondta Rehta hoon aksar in Lakeeron main


Aik lakeer tere naam ki !

Kuch maloom bhi hey

Kuch dil bhi janta hey

Ke in lakeeron main koi lakeer Nahi tere naam ki

Phir bhi naa jane kyun dhondta Rehta hoon

Aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki.........!!!!!


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tumne Dekha Hi Nahi Apni Hatheli Ko Kabhi
Isme Dhundli Si Kahin "uski" Lakeer Bhi To Hai....


Bohat Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hain Shaan Saheb...yuhi Likhte Rahiye...

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Bohat Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hain Shaan Saheb...yuhi Likhte Rahiye...

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par na mili koi lakeer us apne se begane ki,
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par shayad usko kadr na thi apne is Deewane ki ......!


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awesome Dude..............tumne Bht Achcha Likha Hai............bht Gehrai Hai Tumhare Is Poem Mei...........keep It Up!
   
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Aik Lakeer Terey Naam Ki,

kuch udaas kuch khamosh

kuch bebas see lakeerien merey haath ki?

Dhoondta Rehta hoon aksar in Lakeeron main


Aik lakeer tere naam ki !

Kuch maloom bhi hey

Kuch dil bhi janta hey

Ke in lakeeron main koi lakeer Nahi tere naam ki

Phir bhi naa jane kyun dhondta Rehta hoon

Aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki.........!!!!!

hi shaan..
I like the sweetness hidden dehind this poem...
aur jaisa ke zainy jee ne kaha hum bhi kuch kehna chahenge aur aapko JHELNA paDega!!!!
.................................................. .....................

haan jee,
Gaur famaiyega,


" gar khuda hai kahin to lakeere.n badaleNgi khud-ba-khud
aajmaish uski aur apne jajbaato.n ki numaish na kar...."


God bless you
khush raho,
tumhari dost
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Aik Lakeer Terey Naam Ki,

kuch udaas kuch khamosh

kuch bebas see lakeerien merey haath ki?

Dhoondta Rehta hoon aksar in Lakeeron main

Aik lakeer tere naam ki !

Kuch maloom bhi hey

Kuch dil bhi janta hey

Ke in lakeeron main koi lakeer Nahi tere naam ki

Phir bhi naa jane kyun dhondta Rehta hoon

Aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki.........!!!!!
lovely.............
wat abt this
NAA RAHI AGAR LAKEER TERE NAAM KI MERE HAATHO MEI
MAIN US KHUDA SE BHI LADD LUNGA
KOI AAYA AGAR BEECH TERE MERE PYAAR KE
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lovely.............
wat abt this
NAA RAHI AGAR LAKEER TERE NAAM KI MERE HAATHO MEI
MAIN US KHUDA SE BHI LADD LUNGA
KOI AAYA AGAR BEECH TERE MERE PYAAR KE
POORE JAHAAN KO BARBAAD MAI KAR DUNGA
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hi shaan..
I like the sweetness hidden dehind this poem...
aur jaisa ke zainy jee ne kaha hum bhi kuch kehna chahenge aur aapko JHELNA paDega!!!!
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haan jee,
Gaur famaiyega,


" gar khuda hai kahin to lakeere.n badaleNgi khud-ba-khud
aajmaish uski aur apne jajbaato.n ki numaish na kar...."


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khush raho,
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woww..........bahot khoob..................lekin aajkal tum kahan gayab ho


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woww..........bahot khoob..................lekin aajkal tum kahan gayab ho
arreeyy!!!
kabhi to kuch jyada likha karo.........
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shan jee,
badi der ke baad hi is thread ko dekha maine
bahot achha likha hai dost

aise hi likhte raho
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lakeer banan shayd upar wale ke hath hai aur padna bhiu kaha kisi insaan ke vash me jo hota jaye dekhte jana
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22nd May 2009, 03:21 PM

Bohat Khoob Varnan Kiya Hai Lakeeron Me Apne Dil Ka Haal


HAATHON KI LAKIREIN NASEEB BAN GAYI..
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kuch apna ho and koi le jaa raha ho yaa cheen ne ki koshish kare toh agar hum use nahi rokenge toh kaun rokegaa yaar........... ahinsaa and all is gud.. but at places.................... not in this.........
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Aik Lakeer Terey Naam Ki,

kuch udaas kuch khamosh

kuch bebas see lakeerien merey haath ki?

Dhoondta Rehta hoon aksar in Lakeeron main

Aik lakeer tere naam ki !

Kuch maloom bhi hey

Kuch dil bhi janta hey

Ke in lakeeron main koi lakeer Nahi tere naam ki

Phir bhi naa jane kyun dhondta Rehta hoon

Aksar ek lakeer tere naam ki.........!!!!!

wooooooooooow.........bahut khoob shaan.....bahut hi kam lafzon me bahut kuch keh diya....lovely...
par ek baat to batao dear.....mere is pyaare se dost ko ho kya gaya hai yaar??....kahi pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya??


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wooooooooooow.........bahut khoob shaan.....bahut hi kam lafzon me bahut kuch keh diya....lovely...
par ek baat to batao dear.....mere is pyaare se dost ko ho kya gaya hai yaar??....kahi pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya??
Pyar to hua hai dear.............


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hahahahaa.......... array dear jyada to tab likhoonga na jab tumhe online dekhoonga.......

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pyaar bhi kar liya aur hum doston ko pata bhi nahi hai....bas ye hi hai tumhari dosti??...............


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aise hi likhte raho
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HAATHON KI LAKIREIN NASEEB BAN GAYI..
DIL KE LIYE MERE "RAQEEB" BAN GAYI..
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kuch apna ho and koi le jaa raha ho yaa cheen ne ki koshish kare toh agar hum use nahi rokenge toh kaun rokegaa yaar........... ahinsaa and all is gud.. but at places.................... not in this.........
apne views change karo dear warna wo din door nahi rahegaa k haatho mei sirf chand lakeerein reh jaayegi

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