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20th December 2006, 02:15 PM
Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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20th December 2006, 02:35 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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sunita dost.......Mera maun shayed aap samajh paao....bahut kuchh hai isme...
GOD BLESS TO PYARI BETIYA.N
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GOOL LUCK
DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
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20th December 2006, 02:46 PM
meri pyaari sister ko chhotu ka pranaam
are wahhhh meri dono bhanji ka birtday isse badi kshui ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai bhala sister meri dono bhanjiyan ko apne is shaitaan mama ki taraf se janamdin ki dher sari subhakamneaye
sister main prarthna karta hu bhagvaan se k meri dono bhanjiyan hamesa khus rahe aur bhagvaan unke sare dukh mujhe dede siister ye to badi khusi ki baat hai k shagun aur vidhu dono ab badi hone lagi hai mujhe pata hai aapke seene me ek ma ka dil bhi hai jo apni betiyon se bichadne ke gam ke bare me soch raha hai unhe bhi ek bad me nayi zingagi suru karni hai sister aapke dil me sada ke liye wo dono rahengi ye kyakam hai mayus na hoiye main apakokabhi mayus hote nahi dekh sakta
aur apni dono bhanjiyo [ jo meri tarha bahot shaitaan hai mujhe pata hai ]
yehi ashirwad deta hu k dono hamesa aage bade aur sada khus rahe
lots of love beta 2 both of you...aur unse ye bhi kahunga k thoda bahot apni mummy ko meri aur se bhi pareshan kar liya kare wo kya hai mujhe jayda mauka nahi milta to meri bhanjiyan hi apako apne bhai ki aur se pareshan karti rahengi hahaha
sister aap bhi khus rahiye hamesa
apna khayal rakhiye
aapka shaitaan
chhotu
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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20th December 2006, 04:30 PM
sabse pehle to sunita ji main aapko beti ke b"day ki bhut bhut mubarakbaad deta hoon.....khuda kare aapki beti ko zindai ki har khushi mile ....aapne jo jo khaab bhee deke hon uske liye khuda un sabhi khaabon ko poora kare....har din khushiya lekar aaye uski zindagi mein.....
ab rahi baat aapke kalaam ki...to sunita ji aapne bhut gehre ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzon mein byaan kiya hai ....mujhe ehsaas hai ki isko likhte waqt aapke dil mein kaya kaya ho raha hoga....betiyan hoti hee itnee pyari hain or yeh bhee hakikat hai ek din unko susraal jana hee hoga ...is khubsurat kalaam par meri dil se daad hazir hai....aakhir mein chand lafaz aapki beti ke liye kehna chhahta hoon....
har lamha haseen ho teri zindagi ka
kabhi gam ka saya chhu na paye tujhe....
hasti muskurati rahe tu kaliyon ki tarha
chaand taaron ki ummar lag jaye tujhe....
har manzil mukaam ho teri dagar mein
khuda zindagi mein itna aage le jaye tujhe......
tere dam se ho roshan ma baap ka naam
aaftaab ki chamak bhee mil jaye tujhe......
har aansu teri aankh ka pee jaye 'veer'
ek pal ko bhee khuda na rulaye tujhe......
umeed hai aapko acha lagega..........shubh kaamnao ke saath.......raj.........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th December 2006, 06:00 PM
Namaskaar Sunita Ji
Aapki bitiya ke janadiwas per haardik shubhkaamnain.
aur aapki prastuti "Pyari Betiyaan" per kuch bhi kehne ke liye mere paas shabd hee nahin hain, bas itna kahunga ki yeh lajawaab hai.
aabhaar
vipin
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20th December 2006, 09:36 PM
Happy Birthday to my dearest Niece!!!!
Naam nahi jaanti...
Di... Aapne bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai.. Sach betiyaan hoti hi aisi hain..
Jinhe jitna bhi pyar karo woh kam hota hai.. aur ek din chod ke chali jati hain...
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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20th December 2006, 10:47 PM
meri mamma pranaam,
vidhu ko shubhkamnayen. aapka kalaam bahot pyara hai. ek ma ka dard saaf hai isme. meri daad kabuul kijiye
ab jara aapke bhaai khichai kar du
abe fizuul insan. dhaval.........dono kaa ek hi din b'day aa gaya kya..dhaval galat baat hai dono ko abhi se hi door kar diya di se.......to aap kya chahte ho dono bhanjiya bacchi hii rahe jaye(waise agar bacche bade hi na hote to kitna achha hota na....)
are aap apna ashirvad bacha ke rakho bacche...... ...are di shagun aur vidhya ko shaitan na banana. ek to hai hi do aur aa jayengi. fir jab jiju ayenge to kahenge.....dhavaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllll lllllll mein tujhe chhodunga nahi meri pyaari pyaari gudiyaon ko shaitan bana diya..........dusht........hai na di yahai kahenge na jiju
CHALO MERA ASHIRVAAD BAAKI RAHE GAYA.....YE TO FARZ HAI PURA KAR DU....(((BACCHIYO APNI MAMMA KO TANG KARNE KE TARIKE NAA AYE TO MUJHE CALL KARO.....MEIN BATA DUNGI.....MERE NU. HAI DI KE PAAS LELENA...ARE ABHI TO DIN HAI PARESHAN KARNE KE.....KAR LO JITNA KARNA HAI....AUR EK DIN APNE ISS FIZUUUL MAMA KO BHI JAM KE PARESHAN KARNA....USS DIN MUJHE BHI BULANA MEIN BHI AUNGI......FIR MILKE DHULAAI KARENGE ISSKI.... )>>>>>KHUSH RAHO BACCHIYO, HAR CLASS ME PAAS HONA. FIRST RENCK SE......FIR MUJHE SWEET SWEET SWEET>>SWEET KHILANA....FIR MEIN APKO GIRT DUNGI......))))di mera msg dedena dono bhanjiyo ko meri........okkkkkk..aaj kaa din in dono ke naam...kal kaa to thha hi aaj ka bhi sahi....
grazie
aapki gudiya rani (matko)
pooja
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21st December 2006, 09:59 AM
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sunita dost.......Mera maun shayed aap samajh paao....bahut kuchh hai isme...
GOD BLESS TO PYARI BETIYA.N
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GOOL LUCK
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ji ha dost mai.n aapki es chuppi ko acchi tarah samaj sakti hoon. aur dua karti hoon ki aap hamesha kush rahey....!
aapki dost
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21st December 2006, 10:02 AM
arrrrrrreeeee bhai, meri badi bitiya (Vidhu) ka janamdin tha...dono ka nahi.....tum bhi na..... padda pooja ne kaya likha hai....!
tumhari dil se di hue duaaey jaroor puri ho, yehi dua karti hoon...tum bhi sadha kush raho aur aagey badtey raho....!
tumhari diii
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21st December 2006, 10:05 AM
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sabse pehle to sunita ji main aapko beti ke b"day ki bhut bhut mubarakbaad deta hoon.....khuda kare aapki beti ko zindai ki har khushi mile ....aapne jo jo khaab bhee deke hon uske liye khuda un sabhi khaabon ko poora kare....har din khushiya lekar aaye uski zindagi mein.....
ab rahi baat aapke kalaam ki...to sunita ji aapne bhut gehre ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzon mein byaan kiya hai ....mujhe ehsaas hai ki isko likhte waqt aapke dil mein kaya kaya ho raha hoga....betiyan hoti hee itnee pyari hain or yeh bhee hakikat hai ek din unko susraal jana hee hoga ...is khubsurat kalaam par meri dil se daad hazir hai....aakhir mein chand lafaz aapki beti ke liye kehna chhahta hoon....
har lamha haseen ho teri zindagi ka
kabhi gam ka saya chhu na paye tujhe....
hasti muskurati rahe tu kaliyon ki tarha
chaand taaron ki ummar lag jaye tujhe....
har manzil mukaam ho teri dagar mein
khuda zindagi mein itna aage le jaye tujhe......
tere dam se ho roshan ma baap ka naam
aaftaab ki chamak bhee mil jaye tujhe......
har aansu teri aankh ka pee jaye 'veer'
ek pal ko bhee khuda na rulaye tujhe......
umeed hai aapko acha lagega..........shubh kaamnao ke saath.......raj.........
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rajveer ji namaskaar...!
duaaeo ke liye shukriya...aapne meri bitiya ke liye jo anmol shawado mai.n dua di hai, mai.n chahti hoon ki woh dua har kisi ki beti ko lagey...betiya sadha hansti muskurati hi pyari lagti hai.n.....!
aapki dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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21st December 2006, 10:06 AM
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Namaskaar Sunita Ji
Aapki bitiya ke janadiwas per haardik shubhkaamnain.
aur aapki prastuti "Pyari Betiyaan" per kuch bhi kehne ke liye mere paas shabd hee nahin hain, bas itna kahunga ki yeh lajawaab hai.
aabhaar
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shukriya vipin ji, yu saath detey rahiye....!
aapki dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st December 2006, 10:07 AM
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Happy Birthday to my dearest Niece!!!!
Naam nahi jaanti...
Di... Aapne bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai.. Sach betiyaan hoti hi aisi hain..
Jinhe jitna bhi pyar karo woh kam hota hai.. aur ek din chod ke chali jati hain...
~Priya
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shukriya priya, tumhari bhanji ka naam vidhu hai....!
betiya aise hi hoti hai.n...sahi kaha hai tumne....!
tumhari dii
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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21st December 2006, 10:09 AM
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meri mamma pranaam,
vidhu ko shubhkamnayen. aapka kalaam bahot pyara hai. ek ma ka dard saaf hai isme. meri daad kabuul kijiye
ab jara aapke bhaai khichai kar du
abe fizuul insan. dhaval.........dono kaa ek hi din b'day aa gaya kya..dhaval galat baat hai dono ko abhi se hi door kar diya di se.......to aap kya chahte ho dono bhanjiya bacchi hii rahe jaye(waise agar bacche bade hi na hote to kitna achha hota na....)
are aap apna ashirvad bacha ke rakho bacche...... ...are di shagun aur vidhya ko shaitan na banana. ek to hai hi do aur aa jayengi. fir jab jiju ayenge to kahenge.....dhavaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllll lllllll mein tujhe chhodunga nahi meri pyaari pyaari gudiyaon ko shaitan bana diya..........dusht........hai na di yahai kahenge na jiju
CHALO MERA ASHIRVAAD BAAKI RAHE GAYA.....YE TO FARZ HAI PURA KAR DU....(((BACCHIYO APNI MAMMA KO TANG KARNE KE TARIKE NAA AYE TO MUJHE CALL KARO.....MEIN BATA DUNGI.....MERE NU. HAI DI KE PAAS LELENA...ARE ABHI TO DIN HAI PARESHAN KARNE KE.....KAR LO JITNA KARNA HAI....AUR EK DIN APNE ISS FIZUUUL MAMA KO BHI JAM KE PARESHAN KARNA....USS DIN MUJHE BHI BULANA MEIN BHI AUNGI......FIR MILKE DHULAAI KARENGE ISSKI.... )>>>>>KHUSH RAHO BACCHIYO, HAR CLASS ME PAAS HONA. FIRST RENCK SE......FIR MUJHE SWEET SWEET SWEET>>SWEET KHILANA....FIR MEIN APKO GIRT DUNGI......))))di mera msg dedena dono bhanjiyo ko meri........okkkkkk..aaj kaa din in dono ke naam...kal kaa to thha hi aaj ka bhi sahi....
grazie
aapki gudiya rani (matko)
pooja
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bahut accha lagga tera reply padkar...aur mera bhai jarra thoda sa.......hai, pls uski khichai jarra kum kiya kar....!
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21st December 2006, 11:33 AM
hi di kaisi ho
sabse pahle to vidhu ke liye der sari badhai......... or der saara pyar........
har ek maa.n baap ke dil ki aah jhalakti hai aapke is sher main
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
bakai ye ek matra esa jhad hota hai jahan esa lagta hai ki mano ek pahad hi toot pada ho.....
ehsaso.n se bharpoor aapki betiyon ke liye samarpit is gazal ke liye main aapko koti koti pranam karta hoon. har ek ehsas esa laga jaise mere hi dil se bayaa.n kiya gaya ho. main janta hoon kyun ki main bhi ek beti ka pita hoon.
aapki is khoobsurat ehsaso.n se sarabor aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai
kabool farmaiyega
shukriya
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" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
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21st December 2006, 12:07 PM
sunita ji bohat khushi huyi aapka ye kalaam padhkhar duaa karta hoon aagey bhi aise he likhengey aap aur ye baat bohat sachi kahin aapney sach bohat pyaari hoti hain betiya maa behney ye bhagwaan hummey bohat acha bohat pyaara rishta diya hain aur har kisi ko is rishtey ki kadar karni chaahiye bohat khushi huyi
jitne gunaah karne yahaan karley aadam
kaun jaaney mulk-e-adam mein saza kya hogi
patey jhadtey hain magar peidh khadha rehta hain
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hi di kaisi ho
sabse pahle to vidhu ke liye der sari badhai......... or der saara pyar........
har ek maa.n baap ke dil ki aah jhalakti hai aapke is sher main
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
bakai ye ek matra esa jhad hota hai jahan esa lagta hai ki mano ek pahad hi toot pada ho.....
ehsaso.n se bharpoor aapki betiyon ke liye samarpit is gazal ke liye main aapko koti koti pranam karta hoon. har ek ehsas esa laga jaise mere hi dil se bayaa.n kiya gaya ho. main janta hoon kyun ki main bhi ek beti ka pita hoon.
aapki is khoobsurat ehsaso.n se sarabor aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai
kabool farmaiyega
shukriya
dilip
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dear dilip
kaise ho tum.......!
tumhara reply padda tumharey ahsaaso ko samjana accha lagga.....betiya.... bas es se aagey aur kush nahi.............!
tumhari dii
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sunita ji bohat khushi huyi aapka ye kalaam padhkhar duaa karta hoon aagey bhi aise he likhengey aap aur ye baat bohat sachi kahin aapney sach bohat pyaari hoti hain betiya maa behney ye bhagwaan hummey bohat acha bohat pyaara rishta diya hain aur har kisi ko is rishtey ki kadar karni chaahiye bohat khushi huyi
jitne gunaah karne yahaan karley aadam
kaun jaaney mulk-e-adam mein saza kya hogi
patey jhadtey hain magar peidh khadha rehta hain
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ajay ji namaskaar..........!
bahut acchey ahsaas hai aapke, sach mai.n kai baar reply padkar aisa lagta hai ki jaise kisi se ru-ba ru baat ho rahi ho.....aapka reply padkar aisa hi lagga.............!
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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15th November 2007, 01:56 PM
Dear Sunitaji
aapke mail ke baad is kavita ko padha... kya kahu..vakay dil bhar ayake betiya kyu chalijati he? aapko aur aapki dono betiyo ke bhagvan dher sari khusiya de.
dono ko meri tarafse pyar
Raj
Raj
Teiro mat...........
Baho
(Dont Sweem..... Just Flow)
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15th November 2007, 11:03 PM
Hi Didi,
Bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne... aapki betiyaan padhengi to naaz hoga unko ke aap unhe itna pyaar karti hain... Betiyaan hoti hi bahut pyaari hain... ghar ki raunka hi betiyon se hoti hai... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega is khoobsoorat ehsaas ke liye...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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16th November 2007, 05:32 PM
Aadaab Sunita ji
Sabse pehle toh meri or se Vidhu ke janm din par dheroN mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN. Jis tarah aapne beTiyoM ke baare mein apane jazbaat hum se share kiye hai wo waqai khoobsoorat haiN. Aur khud ek beti ka pita hone ke naate aapke jazbaat samajh bhi paa raha huuN. Phir ek baar duaoN ke saath
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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16th November 2007, 08:33 PM
Sunita
Aaj bohat arse baat is site per aanaa huaa.
aap ki nazm ka unwaan hi mere liye bayes e kashish hai.
Betiyaan hoan yah behnein in ka tasawwur zahen mein aate hi her su phool aur khushbu mahek jaati hai.
meri bharpoor mubarakbaad qabool karein itni khoobsurat takhleeq per. aur yaqeenan apni bachchiyon ko bhi mera pyaar aur asheerwaad dijiye.
God bless you.
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16th November 2007, 09:36 PM
Sunita
Bahut Bahut ache subject ko chua ehi aapne.
God Bless you
Thanks & Regards
Sush
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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17th November 2007, 12:43 AM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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sunita jii bahut purjosh aur suljhe hue khayaalat hai aap is kaavish ke,sach kahe to hamare hinduo men kahaavat hai betiyaa ma lakshami ka roop hoti hai, jahaa jaye vaha zindagi khushhaal kar de,aur sach kahoo to aaj ke zamane men betiyaa beto se hat ke sabhi rishtey aur zimmedaariya bakhoobi nibhaati hai.
bahut bahut shukriya aisee umda ghazal likhane ke liye aur share karne ke liye.
dil se mubarakbaad kabool kare,aise hee likhate rahe
regards
manu
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19th November 2007, 11:52 AM
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Dear Sunitaji
aapke mail ke baad is kavita ko padha... kya kahu..vakay dil bhar ayake betiya kyu chalijati he? aapko aur aapki dono betiyo ke bhagvan dher sari khusiya de.
dono ko meri tarafse pyar
Raj
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raj ji namaskaar..........mere ahsaaso.n ko mahsoos karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.....
aapki dost
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th November 2007, 11:53 AM
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Hi Didi,
Bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne... aapki betiyaan padhengi to naaz hoga unko ke aap unhe itna pyaar karti hain... Betiyaan hoti hi bahut pyaari hain... ghar ki raunka hi betiyon se hoti hai... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega is khoobsoorat ehsaas ke liye...
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dear pulkit..........aapki baato.n se main sahmat hoon, betiya.n hoti hi bahut pyari haiN.......aapki daad mujhe dil se kabool hai.
kush raho
tumhari didi
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2007, 04:00 PM
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Aadaab Sunita ji
Sabse pehle toh meri or se Vidhu ke janm din par dheroN mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN. Jis tarah aapne beTiyoM ke baare mein apane jazbaat hum se share kiye hai wo waqai khoobsoorat haiN. Aur khud ek beti ka pita hone ke naate aapke jazbaat samajh bhi paa raha huuN. Phir ek baar duaoN ke saath
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namaskaar parveen ji.....aapko apni es post par dekh kar bahut accha laga....ji bitiya ko dua dene ke liye shukriya....ji main samaj sakti hoon aapke ahsaas.
thanks alot
regards
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2007, 04:02 PM
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Sunita
Aaj bohat arse baat is site per aanaa huaa.
aap ki nazm ka unwaan hi mere liye bayes e kashish hai.
Betiyaan hoan yah behnein in ka tasawwur zahen mein aate hi her su phool aur khushbu mahek jaati hai.
meri bharpoor mubarakbaad qabool karein itni khoobsurat takhleeq per. aur yaqeenan apni bachchiyon ko bhi mera pyaar aur asheerwaad dijiye.
God bless you.
musharrafhusain
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mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha aap aur meri post par.....aji aap to kahi nazar hi nahi aatey arse se....aur aaj nazar aaye aur woh bhi jaha meri post par....yeh mere aho-bhaya haiN....ki aapki nazar mere ahsaaso.n par gaye....ji es pyar aur dulaar ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...!
aatey raha kijiye....aap jaise shayro.n ke bina site adhoori si lagti hai.
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2007, 04:04 PM
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Sunita
Bahut Bahut ache subject ko chua ehi aapne.
God Bless you
Thanks & Regards
Sush
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shusheel ji aapko apni post par phele baar dekh rahi hoon.....shayri pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut dil se shukriya.
kush rahiye....duao.n ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2007, 04:07 PM
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sunita jii bahut purjosh aur suljhe hue khayaalat hai aap is kaavish ke,sach kahe to hamare hinduo men kahaavat hai betiyaa ma lakshami ka roop hoti hai, jahaa jaye vaha zindagi khushhaal kar de,aur sach kahoo to aaj ke zamane men betiyaa beto se hat ke sabhi rishtey aur zimmedaariya bakhoobi nibhaati hai.
bahut bahut shukriya aisee umda ghazal likhane ke liye aur share karne ke liye.
dil se mubarakbaad kabool kare,aise hee likhate rahe
regards
manu
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manu ji aapne mere ahsaao.n ko dil se pada aur mahsoos kiya...behad accha lagta hai jab apne likhey koi dil se mahsoos karta hai to...ji aapki baat se main sahmat hoon...ki beti, bahu ghar ki laksmi hoti haiN...jis ghar meiN beti nahi meri nazar meiN woh pariwaar adhoora hai....!
kush rahiye...duao.n ke saath
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th November 2007, 05:59 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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Salaam Sunita ji Aapke is kalaam ne to dil chuliya.Betiyon ke liye yeh khayaal aur pyaar bhari nazam bahut acchi lagi sabhi lo ese khayalat samajhle to dunia mein bete aur betiyon ka fark khatam ho gayega................Ek pyari gazal ke liye mubarakbaad kubool kiiye......khush rahiye
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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20th November 2007, 09:12 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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DEAR SUNITA DI,
aap ki ye nazm padhkar dil khush ho gaya....betiyon ke bareme aap ka ye khayal bahut hi umda hai....behad khubsoorat ehsaas hai aap ke DIDI.....dad kabul farmaye................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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Dear Sunita , Sajan with love -
20th November 2007, 11:02 PM
You have done a good job.
Much better .... carry on ...
I wish you all the best..
Keep it up .......
Happy Birthday For your Betiya.
From :- Sajan with love
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20th November 2007, 11:59 PM
dd late aayee hun maaf karna
vidhu ko blated wish dena meri
bahut khub subject chuna hai mera to priy sub hai ye betiyo ke liye kuch liihna
sakhi with love and wish
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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Kya Khob Kaha Hai Apne Kya Baat Hai Janab
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Kya Aap Mujh Se Baat Kerna Passand Kerenge Janab Plz
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hi -
21st November 2007, 03:11 AM
hi sunitaji kya khub likha hai bahut achha laga bas aise hi likhti rahena
aansu aate hai aankho me hamari
jab aati hai yaad tumhari
khushiya hi khushiya hamare pass thi
jab tum mere pass hoti thi
hazaro gum mile hume jab
tum mujse dur chali gai
hum ko rahena tha sirf saath tumhare
par chal na sake tum saath hamare
jab jab dekhi hum ne tasveer tumhari
tab tab roye hai yaad me tumhari
jab se dur hui hai chatat tumhari
tab se koi saath nahi hai hamare
bas tumhari yaade kafi hai hamare pass
aur vo yaad karke yu hi gujar jati hai zindagi hamari
rahengi to hamesha dil me tasveer tumhari
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24th November 2007, 05:29 AM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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Sunita ji
Sab se pahle toh beti saalgirah bahut bahut mujarak ho, dua kariti hoon usse duniya bharki khushiyan mile. har sukh mile. Amen
aapke vichar betiyon ke prati dekh dil khush ko gaya. shabd nahi ki kahoon kya.
aor unke sasuraal jane ka sochkar abhi se ankhe num ho jati hai. aapne bahut acha kalaam pesh kiya hai. yunhi likhti rahiyega.
aapki dost
nira
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29th November 2007, 12:00 PM
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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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Aadab sunita ji,
kaise hain aap?
sunita ji hamari pyari bitiya kjo hamari taraf se bohot saari duae,or mubarak baad,
maafi chahte hain,mubarak baad dene me kafi der ho gayi,
aaj aapki yeh nazam padh kar ,mehsus hua,,k ab hamari ammi ko bhi yehi dard mehsus hota hoga,
per allah ne yeh dastur banakar,kayi khushiya b to di hain,
hai na?
to ab aap b muskuraye,,
hamari bitiya ko bohot bohot pyaar,
khush rahiye,
apna or bitiya ka khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
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29th November 2007, 06:52 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!
Pyari Betiya.n
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…
Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…
Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…
Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..
aapki dost
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main to bohat hi late hogai hoon didi humesha ki tarah kia likha hai aapne didi aik aik word main sachai aur aapki betiyon ke liye aapka pyar chalak raha hai bohat khoob di meridua hai aapki donon betiyan humesha khush rahain aur aapki umeedon per pooriutrain ameeen sum ameen ye ashaar bohatttt gehraye liye howe hain di..........
Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….
Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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30th November 2007, 07:20 PM
DEAR SUNITA DI,
aap ki ye nazm padhkar dil khush ho gaya....betiyon ke bareme aap ka ye khayal bahut hi umda hai....behad khubsoorat ehsaas hai aap ke DIDI.....dad kabul farmaye................
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