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"PYARI BETIYA.n" - 20th December 2006, 02:15 PM

Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..



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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..



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sunita dost.......Mera maun shayed aap samajh paao....bahut kuchh hai isme...

GOD BLESS TO PYARI BETIYA.N

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20th December 2006, 02:46 PM

meri pyaari sister ko chhotu ka pranaam

are wahhhh meri dono bhanji ka birtday isse badi kshui ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai bhala sister meri dono bhanjiyan ko apne is shaitaan mama ki taraf se janamdin ki dher sari subhakamneaye


sister main prarthna karta hu bhagvaan se k meri dono bhanjiyan hamesa khus rahe aur bhagvaan unke sare dukh mujhe dede siister ye to badi khusi ki baat hai k shagun aur vidhu dono ab badi hone lagi hai mujhe pata hai aapke seene me ek ma ka dil bhi hai jo apni betiyon se bichadne ke gam ke bare me soch raha hai unhe bhi ek bad me nayi zingagi suru karni hai sister aapke dil me sada ke liye wo dono rahengi ye kyakam hai mayus na hoiye main apakokabhi mayus hote nahi dekh sakta

aur apni dono bhanjiyo [ jo meri tarha bahot shaitaan hai mujhe pata hai ]
yehi ashirwad deta hu k dono hamesa aage bade aur sada khus rahe

lots of love beta 2 both of you...aur unse ye bhi kahunga k thoda bahot apni mummy ko meri aur se bhi pareshan kar liya kare wo kya hai mujhe jayda mauka nahi milta to meri bhanjiyan hi apako apne bhai ki aur se pareshan karti rahengi hahaha

sister aap bhi khus rahiye hamesa

apna khayal rakhiye

aapka shaitaan
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bhut khub - 20th December 2006, 04:30 PM

sabse pehle to sunita ji main aapko beti ke b"day ki bhut bhut mubarakbaad deta hoon.....khuda kare aapki beti ko zindai ki har khushi mile ....aapne jo jo khaab bhee deke hon uske liye khuda un sabhi khaabon ko poora kare....har din khushiya lekar aaye uski zindagi mein.....

ab rahi baat aapke kalaam ki...to sunita ji aapne bhut gehre ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzon mein byaan kiya hai ....mujhe ehsaas hai ki isko likhte waqt aapke dil mein kaya kaya ho raha hoga....betiyan hoti hee itnee pyari hain or yeh bhee hakikat hai ek din unko susraal jana hee hoga ...is khubsurat kalaam par meri dil se daad hazir hai....aakhir mein chand lafaz aapki beti ke liye kehna chhahta hoon....

har lamha haseen ho teri zindagi ka
kabhi gam ka saya chhu na paye tujhe....

hasti muskurati rahe tu kaliyon ki tarha
chaand taaron ki ummar lag jaye tujhe....

har manzil mukaam ho teri dagar mein
khuda zindagi mein itna aage le jaye tujhe......

tere dam se ho roshan ma baap ka naam
aaftaab ki chamak bhee mil jaye tujhe......

har aansu teri aankh ka pee jaye 'veer'
ek pal ko bhee khuda na rulaye tujhe......

umeed hai aapko acha lagega..........shubh kaamnao ke saath.......raj.........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th December 2006, 06:00 PM

Namaskaar Sunita Ji
Aapki bitiya ke janadiwas per haardik shubhkaamnain.
aur aapki prastuti "Pyari Betiyaan" per kuch bhi kehne ke liye mere paas shabd hee nahin hain, bas itna kahunga ki yeh lajawaab hai.

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Happy Birthday to my dearest Niece!!!!

Naam nahi jaanti...

Di... Aapne bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai.. Sach betiyaan hoti hi aisi hain..

Jinhe jitna bhi pyar karo woh kam hota hai.. aur ek din chod ke chali jati hain...



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20th December 2006, 10:47 PM

meri mamma pranaam,

vidhu ko shubhkamnayen. aapka kalaam bahot pyara hai. ek ma ka dard saaf hai isme. meri daad kabuul kijiye

ab jara aapke bhaai khichai kar du
abe fizuul insan. dhaval.........dono kaa ek hi din b'day aa gaya kya..dhaval galat baat hai dono ko abhi se hi door kar diya di se.......to aap kya chahte ho dono bhanjiya bacchi hii rahe jaye(waise agar bacche bade hi na hote to kitna achha hota na....)
are aap apna ashirvad bacha ke rakho bacche...... ...are di shagun aur vidhya ko shaitan na banana. ek to hai hi do aur aa jayengi. fir jab jiju ayenge to kahenge.....dhavaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllll lllllll mein tujhe chhodunga nahi meri pyaari pyaari gudiyaon ko shaitan bana diya..........dusht........hai na di yahai kahenge na jiju

CHALO MERA ASHIRVAAD BAAKI RAHE GAYA.....YE TO FARZ HAI PURA KAR DU....(((BACCHIYO APNI MAMMA KO TANG KARNE KE TARIKE NAA AYE TO MUJHE CALL KARO.....MEIN BATA DUNGI.....MERE NU. HAI DI KE PAAS LELENA...ARE ABHI TO DIN HAI PARESHAN KARNE KE.....KAR LO JITNA KARNA HAI....AUR EK DIN APNE ISS FIZUUUL MAMA KO BHI JAM KE PARESHAN KARNA....USS DIN MUJHE BHI BULANA MEIN BHI AUNGI......FIR MILKE DHULAAI KARENGE ISSKI.... )>>>>>KHUSH RAHO BACCHIYO, HAR CLASS ME PAAS HONA. FIRST RENCK SE......FIR MUJHE SWEET SWEET SWEET>>SWEET KHILANA....FIR MEIN APKO GIRT DUNGI......))))di mera msg dedena dono bhanjiyo ko meri........okkkkkk..aaj kaa din in dono ke naam...kal kaa to thha hi aaj ka bhi sahi....

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sunita dost.......Mera maun shayed aap samajh paao....bahut kuchh hai isme...

GOD BLESS TO PYARI BETIYA.N

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ji ha dost mai.n aapki es chuppi ko acchi tarah samaj sakti hoon. aur dua karti hoon ki aap hamesha kush rahey....!

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meri pyaari sister ko chhotu ka pranaam

are wahhhh meri dono bhanji ka birtday isse badi kshui ki baat mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai bhala sister meri dono bhanjiyan ko apne is shaitaan mama ki taraf se janamdin ki dher sari subhakamneaye


sister main prarthna karta hu bhagvaan se k meri dono bhanjiyan hamesa khus rahe aur bhagvaan unke sare dukh mujhe dede siister ye to badi khusi ki baat hai k shagun aur vidhu dono ab badi hone lagi hai mujhe pata hai aapke seene me ek ma ka dil bhi hai jo apni betiyon se bichadne ke gam ke bare me soch raha hai unhe bhi ek bad me nayi zingagi suru karni hai sister aapke dil me sada ke liye wo dono rahengi ye kyakam hai mayus na hoiye main apakokabhi mayus hote nahi dekh sakta

aur apni dono bhanjiyo [ jo meri tarha bahot shaitaan hai mujhe pata hai ]
yehi ashirwad deta hu k dono hamesa aage bade aur sada khus rahe

lots of love beta 2 both of you...aur unse ye bhi kahunga k thoda bahot apni mummy ko meri aur se bhi pareshan kar liya kare wo kya hai mujhe jayda mauka nahi milta to meri bhanjiyan hi apako apne bhai ki aur se pareshan karti rahengi hahaha

sister aap bhi khus rahiye hamesa

apna khayal rakhiye

aapka shaitaan
chhotu
arrrrrrreeeee bhai, meri badi bitiya (Vidhu) ka janamdin tha...dono ka nahi.....tum bhi na..... padda pooja ne kaya likha hai....!

tumhari dil se di hue duaaey jaroor puri ho, yehi dua karti hoon...tum bhi sadha kush raho aur aagey badtey raho....!


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sabse pehle to sunita ji main aapko beti ke b"day ki bhut bhut mubarakbaad deta hoon.....khuda kare aapki beti ko zindai ki har khushi mile ....aapne jo jo khaab bhee deke hon uske liye khuda un sabhi khaabon ko poora kare....har din khushiya lekar aaye uski zindagi mein.....

ab rahi baat aapke kalaam ki...to sunita ji aapne bhut gehre ehsaaso ko behtreen lafzon mein byaan kiya hai ....mujhe ehsaas hai ki isko likhte waqt aapke dil mein kaya kaya ho raha hoga....betiyan hoti hee itnee pyari hain or yeh bhee hakikat hai ek din unko susraal jana hee hoga ...is khubsurat kalaam par meri dil se daad hazir hai....aakhir mein chand lafaz aapki beti ke liye kehna chhahta hoon....

har lamha haseen ho teri zindagi ka
kabhi gam ka saya chhu na paye tujhe....

hasti muskurati rahe tu kaliyon ki tarha
chaand taaron ki ummar lag jaye tujhe....

har manzil mukaam ho teri dagar mein
khuda zindagi mein itna aage le jaye tujhe......

tere dam se ho roshan ma baap ka naam
aaftaab ki chamak bhee mil jaye tujhe......

har aansu teri aankh ka pee jaye 'veer'
ek pal ko bhee khuda na rulaye tujhe......

umeed hai aapko acha lagega..........shubh kaamnao ke saath.......raj.........
rajveer ji namaskaar...!

duaaeo ke liye shukriya...aapne meri bitiya ke liye jo anmol shawado mai.n dua di hai, mai.n chahti hoon ki woh dua har kisi ki beti ko lagey...betiya sadha hansti muskurati hi pyari lagti hai.n.....!

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Namaskaar Sunita Ji
Aapki bitiya ke janadiwas per haardik shubhkaamnain.
aur aapki prastuti "Pyari Betiyaan" per kuch bhi kehne ke liye mere paas shabd hee nahin hain, bas itna kahunga ki yeh lajawaab hai.

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Happy Birthday to my dearest Niece!!!!

Naam nahi jaanti...

Di... Aapne bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai.. Sach betiyaan hoti hi aisi hain..

Jinhe jitna bhi pyar karo woh kam hota hai.. aur ek din chod ke chali jati hain...



~Priya
shukriya priya, tumhari bhanji ka naam vidhu hai....!

betiya aise hi hoti hai.n...sahi kaha hai tumne....!

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meri mamma pranaam,

vidhu ko shubhkamnayen. aapka kalaam bahot pyara hai. ek ma ka dard saaf hai isme. meri daad kabuul kijiye

ab jara aapke bhaai khichai kar du
abe fizuul insan. dhaval.........dono kaa ek hi din b'day aa gaya kya..dhaval galat baat hai dono ko abhi se hi door kar diya di se.......to aap kya chahte ho dono bhanjiya bacchi hii rahe jaye(waise agar bacche bade hi na hote to kitna achha hota na....)
are aap apna ashirvad bacha ke rakho bacche...... ...are di shagun aur vidhya ko shaitan na banana. ek to hai hi do aur aa jayengi. fir jab jiju ayenge to kahenge.....dhavaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllll lllllll mein tujhe chhodunga nahi meri pyaari pyaari gudiyaon ko shaitan bana diya..........dusht........hai na di yahai kahenge na jiju

CHALO MERA ASHIRVAAD BAAKI RAHE GAYA.....YE TO FARZ HAI PURA KAR DU....(((BACCHIYO APNI MAMMA KO TANG KARNE KE TARIKE NAA AYE TO MUJHE CALL KARO.....MEIN BATA DUNGI.....MERE NU. HAI DI KE PAAS LELENA...ARE ABHI TO DIN HAI PARESHAN KARNE KE.....KAR LO JITNA KARNA HAI....AUR EK DIN APNE ISS FIZUUUL MAMA KO BHI JAM KE PARESHAN KARNA....USS DIN MUJHE BHI BULANA MEIN BHI AUNGI......FIR MILKE DHULAAI KARENGE ISSKI.... )>>>>>KHUSH RAHO BACCHIYO, HAR CLASS ME PAAS HONA. FIRST RENCK SE......FIR MUJHE SWEET SWEET SWEET>>SWEET KHILANA....FIR MEIN APKO GIRT DUNGI......))))di mera msg dedena dono bhanjiyo ko meri........okkkkkk..aaj kaa din in dono ke naam...kal kaa to thha hi aaj ka bhi sahi....

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hi di kaisi ho
sabse pahle to vidhu ke liye der sari badhai......... or der saara pyar........


har ek maa.n baap ke dil ki aah jhalakti hai aapke is sher main

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


bakai ye ek matra esa jhad hota hai jahan esa lagta hai ki mano ek pahad hi toot pada ho.....
ehsaso.n se bharpoor aapki betiyon ke liye samarpit is gazal ke liye main aapko koti koti pranam karta hoon. har ek ehsas esa laga jaise mere hi dil se bayaa.n kiya gaya ho. main janta hoon kyun ki main bhi ek beti ka pita hoon.

aapki is khoobsurat ehsaso.n se sarabor aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai
kabool farmaiyega

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sunita virender - 21st December 2006, 12:07 PM

sunita ji bohat khushi huyi aapka ye kalaam padhkhar duaa karta hoon aagey bhi aise he likhengey aap aur ye baat bohat sachi kahin aapney sach bohat pyaari hoti hain betiya maa behney ye bhagwaan hummey bohat acha bohat pyaara rishta diya hain aur har kisi ko is rishtey ki kadar karni chaahiye bohat khushi huyi

jitne gunaah karne yahaan karley aadam
kaun jaaney mulk-e-adam mein saza kya hogi
patey jhadtey hain magar peidh khadha rehta hain


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hi di kaisi ho
sabse pahle to vidhu ke liye der sari badhai......... or der saara pyar........


har ek maa.n baap ke dil ki aah jhalakti hai aapke is sher main

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


bakai ye ek matra esa jhad hota hai jahan esa lagta hai ki mano ek pahad hi toot pada ho.....
ehsaso.n se bharpoor aapki betiyon ke liye samarpit is gazal ke liye main aapko koti koti pranam karta hoon. har ek ehsas esa laga jaise mere hi dil se bayaa.n kiya gaya ho. main janta hoon kyun ki main bhi ek beti ka pita hoon.

aapki is khoobsurat ehsaso.n se sarabor aapki is gazal per dil se daad hazir hai
kabool farmaiyega

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kaise ho tum.......!

tumhara reply padda tumharey ahsaaso ko samjana accha lagga.....betiya.... bas es se aagey aur kush nahi.............!

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sunita ji bohat khushi huyi aapka ye kalaam padhkhar duaa karta hoon aagey bhi aise he likhengey aap aur ye baat bohat sachi kahin aapney sach bohat pyaari hoti hain betiya maa behney ye bhagwaan hummey bohat acha bohat pyaara rishta diya hain aur har kisi ko is rishtey ki kadar karni chaahiye bohat khushi huyi

jitne gunaah karne yahaan karley aadam
kaun jaaney mulk-e-adam mein saza kya hogi
patey jhadtey hain magar peidh khadha rehta hain
ajay ji namaskaar..........!

bahut acchey ahsaas hai aapke, sach mai.n kai baar reply padkar aisa lagta hai ki jaise kisi se ru-ba ru baat ho rahi ho.....aapka reply padkar aisa hi lagga.............!

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aapke mail ke baad is kavita ko padha... kya kahu..vakay dil bhar ayake betiya kyu chalijati he? aapko aur aapki dono betiyo ke bhagvan dher sari khusiya de.
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Bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne... aapki betiyaan padhengi to naaz hoga unko ke aap unhe itna pyaar karti hain... Betiyaan hoti hi bahut pyaari hain... ghar ki raunka hi betiyon se hoti hai... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega is khoobsoorat ehsaas ke liye...


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Mubarakbaad - 16th November 2007, 05:32 PM

Aadaab Sunita ji

Sabse pehle toh meri or se Vidhu ke janm din par dheroN mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN. Jis tarah aapne beTiyoM ke baare mein apane jazbaat hum se share kiye hai wo waqai khoobsoorat haiN. Aur khud ek beti ka pita hone ke naate aapke jazbaat samajh bhi paa raha huuN. Phir ek baar duaoN ke saath

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Aaj bohat arse baat is site per aanaa huaa.
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Betiyaan hoan yah behnein in ka tasawwur zahen mein aate hi her su phool aur khushbu mahek jaati hai.
meri bharpoor mubarakbaad qabool karein itni khoobsurat takhleeq per. aur yaqeenan apni bachchiyon ko bhi mera pyaar aur asheerwaad dijiye.
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Bahut Bahut ache subject ko chua ehi aapne.

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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..



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sunita jii bahut purjosh aur suljhe hue khayaalat hai aap is kaavish ke,sach kahe to hamare hinduo men kahaavat hai betiyaa ma lakshami ka roop hoti hai, jahaa jaye vaha zindagi khushhaal kar de,aur sach kahoo to aaj ke zamane men betiyaa beto se hat ke sabhi rishtey aur zimmedaariya bakhoobi nibhaati hai.
bahut bahut shukriya aisee umda ghazal likhane ke liye aur share karne ke liye.
dil se mubarakbaad kabool kare,aise hee likhate rahe

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aapke mail ke baad is kavita ko padha... kya kahu..vakay dil bhar ayake betiya kyu chalijati he? aapko aur aapki dono betiyo ke bhagvan dher sari khusiya de.
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Bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne... aapki betiyaan padhengi to naaz hoga unko ke aap unhe itna pyaar karti hain... Betiyaan hoti hi bahut pyaari hain... ghar ki raunka hi betiyon se hoti hai... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega is khoobsoorat ehsaas ke liye...
dear pulkit..........aapki baato.n se main sahmat hoon, betiya.n hoti hi bahut pyari haiN.......aapki daad mujhe dil se kabool hai.

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Sabse pehle toh meri or se Vidhu ke janm din par dheroN mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN. Jis tarah aapne beTiyoM ke baare mein apane jazbaat hum se share kiye hai wo waqai khoobsoorat haiN. Aur khud ek beti ka pita hone ke naate aapke jazbaat samajh bhi paa raha huuN. Phir ek baar duaoN ke saath

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namaskaar parveen ji.....aapko apni es post par dekh kar bahut accha laga....ji bitiya ko dua dene ke liye shukriya....ji main samaj sakti hoon aapke ahsaas.

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meri bharpoor mubarakbaad qabool karein itni khoobsurat takhleeq per. aur yaqeenan apni bachchiyon ko bhi mera pyaar aur asheerwaad dijiye.
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sunita jii bahut purjosh aur suljhe hue khayaalat hai aap is kaavish ke,sach kahe to hamare hinduo men kahaavat hai betiyaa ma lakshami ka roop hoti hai, jahaa jaye vaha zindagi khushhaal kar de,aur sach kahoo to aaj ke zamane men betiyaa beto se hat ke sabhi rishtey aur zimmedaariya bakhoobi nibhaati hai.
bahut bahut shukriya aisee umda ghazal likhane ke liye aur share karne ke liye.
dil se mubarakbaad kabool kare,aise hee likhate rahe

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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


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Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


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Love Dear Sunita , Sajan with love - 20th November 2007, 11:02 PM

You have done a good job.
Much better .... carry on ...
I wish you all the best..
Keep it up .......
Happy Birthday For your Betiya.
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dd late aayee hun maaf karna
vidhu ko blated wish dena meri

bahut khub subject chuna hai mera to priy sub hai ye betiyo ke liye kuch liihna

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hi sunitaji kya khub likha hai bahut achha laga bas aise hi likhti rahena

aansu aate hai aankho me hamari
jab aati hai yaad tumhari
khushiya hi khushiya hamare pass thi
jab tum mere pass hoti thi
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Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


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Sab se pahle toh beti saalgirah bahut bahut mujarak ho, dua kariti hoon usse duniya bharki khushiyan mile. har sukh mile. Amen

aapke vichar betiyon ke prati dekh dil khush ko gaya. shabd nahi ki kahoon kya.
aor unke sasuraal jane ka sochkar abhi se ankhe num ho jati hai. aapne bahut acha kalaam pesh kiya hai. yunhi likhti rahiyega.

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Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..


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Aadab sunita ji,
kaise hain aap?

sunita ji hamari pyari bitiya kjo hamari taraf se bohot saari duae,or mubarak baad,
maafi chahte hain,mubarak baad dene me kafi der ho gayi,

aaj aapki yeh nazam padh kar ,mehsus hua,,k ab hamari ammi ko bhi yehi dard mehsus hota hoga,

per allah ne yeh dastur banakar,kayi khushiya b to di hain,
hai na?

to ab aap b muskuraye,,
hamari bitiya ko bohot bohot pyaar,

khush rahiye,
apna or bitiya ka khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Dosto kal meri bitiya ne 10 saal purey kiya hai.n, uske janamdin par mai.n bahut kush bhi thi par dil ke kisi kone mai.n ek ajeeb se dard bhi tha, bas usi dard ko kagaz par likh diya hai…yakeenan yeh dard har maa ka hoga, aap sab ke saath share kar rahi hoon……!


Pyari Betiya.n

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....

Ek maa hoon, mere paas bhi hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Zamane ki har kushi se pyari hoti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Mere bachpan ki parchai hai.n meri pyari betiya.n,
Ghar mahak jata hai jab muskurati hai.n pyari betiya.n…

Mere adhoorey khaab purey karengi meri pyari betiya.n,
Mere dukh-sukh ki humdard hai.n meri pyari betiya.n...…

Bahut sapne sajate hai.n har maa-baap betiyo ke liye,
Dua karti hoon sadha kush rahey sabki pyari betiya.n...…

Doli mai.n beth jab sasuraal chali jayengi pyari betiya.n,
“Sunita” ko bahut tanha kar jayengi pyari betiya.n..…..



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main to bohat hi late hogai hoon didi humesha ki tarah kia likha hai aapne didi aik aik word main sachai aur aapki betiyon ke liye aapka pyar chalak raha hai bohat khoob di meridua hai aapki donon betiyan humesha khush rahain aur aapki umeedon per pooriutrain ameeen sum ameen ye ashaar bohatttt gehraye liye howe hain di..........

Ghar aangan mai.n cha-chahati hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Chidiyo jaise edhar udhar udti firti hai.n pyari betiya.n….

Ek aah ke saath janam leti hai.n pyari betiya.n,
Ek aah dekar hi phir chorr jatti hai.n pyari betiya.n…....


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aap ki ye nazm padhkar dil khush ho gaya....betiyon ke bareme aap ka ye khayal bahut hi umda hai....behad khubsoorat ehsaas hai aap ke DIDI.....dad kabul farmaye................
   
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