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Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali - 6th December 2010, 08:00 PM

Aik Aise Insaan Ki Feelings Ko Pesh Kar Raha Hoon.. Jo Saalon Baat Apni Purane Ghar Aur Basti Main Laut-ta Hai .... Aur Un Sabhi Puraani Yaadon Ko Yaar Karta Haii


Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali

Jise Chod Aaye The Milon Kabhii...

Aaj Usi Ghar Me.. Hai Sannato Ka Shor..
Khushiyon Ki .. Dhun Jahaa Bajti Thi Kabhii..

Woh CharMarati Khatiya Bikhari Padi Hai ..
Jispe Nindiyaa Lagti Thi...Pyaari Badii...

Woh Dhool Me Lepta Aangan. Chup Saaa Hai..
Jahaa Subah Roshan Hoti Thi Kabhii..

Ek Kone Me Surkh Pade Chule Ko Dekh.. Ro Pada...
Jispe Maa Rotiyaa Pakaati Thi Kabhii...

Chhat Pe Khada Hoke Basti Ko Maine Dekha...
Jahaa Mera Bachpan Badaa Huwa Hai Kabhi..

Aakhri Saanse Lene Ki..Khwaish Hai Yahaa..
Jahaa Pehli Saans Li Thi.. Maine Kabhii..

Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali
Jise Chod Aaye The... Milon Kabhii...


   
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6th December 2010, 08:04 PM

bahot khoob , bahot khoob.. amaa rulaa hi diyaa aapki is koshsih ne to.. saara ka saara aalam nazar ke samne yoon utar aaya jaise ki mere hi jazbaat bayaan ho rahe hon... mashallah.. reps+++ added for this amazing sharing. keep it up.


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bahut khoob.............................................


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'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है


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7th December 2010, 04:10 PM

Aadi Ji ... Aapne tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurati se pesh kiye hai ... dil ko kahi dravit zaroor karte hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen ... aate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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7th December 2010, 05:10 PM

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Aik Aise Insaan Ki Feelings Ko Pesh Kar Raha Hoon.. Jo Saalon Baat Apni Purane Ghar Aur Basti Main Laut-ta Hai .... Aur Un Sabhi Puraani Yaadon Ko Yaar Karta Haii



Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali
Jise Chod Aaye The Milon Kabhii...

Aaj Usi Ghar Me.. Hai Sannato Ka Shor..
Khushiyon Ki .. Dhun Jahaa Bajti Thi Kabhii..

Woh CharMarati Khatiya Bikhari Padi Hai ..
Jispe Nindiyaa Lagti Thi...Pyaari Badii...

Woh Dhool Me Lepta Aangan. Chup Saaa Hai..
Jahaa Subah Roshan Hoti Thi Kabhii..

Ek Kone Me Surkh Pade Chule Ko Dekh.. Ro Pada...
Jispe Maa Rotiyaa Pakaati Thi Kabhii...

Chhat Pe Khada Hoke Basti Ko Maine Dekha...
Jahaa Mera Bachpan Badaa Huwa Hai Kabhi..

Aakhri Saanse Lene Ki..Khwaish Hai Yahaa..
Jahaa Pehli Saans Li Thi.. Maine Kabhii..

Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali
Jise Chod Aaye The... Milon Kabhii...
khoobsoorat alfaaz khoobsoorat jazbaat khoobsoorat andaaze bayaaN khoobsoorat labo lehja khoobroorat bunat khoobsoorat tasalsul in tamaam ko jab ikhatta kiyaa jaaye to banti hai aap ki ya ghazal
to bhalaa bataaiye main mobaarakbaad kiun na dun
mukhlis
masood hassaas



   
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bahot khoob , bahot khoob.. amaa rulaa hi diyaa aapki is koshsih ne to.. saara ka saara aalam nazar ke samne yoon utar aaya jaise ki mere hi jazbaat bayaan ho rahe hon... mashallah.. reps+++ added for this amazing sharing. keep it up.


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Bohat Dino Baad MAine Bhi Kuch Likha... Aapko Pasand Aaya Accha LAga...

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Aadi Ji ... Aapne tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurati se pesh kiye hai ... dil ko kahi dravit zaroor karte hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen ... aate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ...


Namaste Naresh Ji..

Bade Dino Baad WApas Aayaa..

Aur Apko Apni Post Pe Paake Aacha Laga..

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khoobsoorat alfaaz khoobsoorat jazbaat khoobsoorat andaaze bayaaN khoobsoorat labo lehja khoobroorat bunat khoobsoorat tasalsul in tamaam ko jab ikhatta kiyaa jaaye to banti hai aap ki ya ghazal
to bhalaa bataaiye main mobaarakbaad kiun na dun
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Aik Aise Insaan Ki Feelings Ko Pesh Kar Raha Hoon.. Jo Saalon Baat Apni Purane Ghar Aur Basti Main Laut-ta Hai .... Aur Un Sabhi Puraani Yaadon Ko Yaar Karta Haii



Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali
Jise Chod Aaye The Milon Kabhii...

Aaj Usi Ghar Me.. Hai Sannato Ka Shor..
Khushiyon Ki .. Dhun Jahaa Bajti Thi Kabhii..

Woh CharMarati Khatiya Bikhari Padi Hai ..
Jispe Nindiyaa Lagti Thi...Pyaari Badii...

Woh Dhool Me Lepta Aangan. Chup Saaa Hai..
Jahaa Subah Roshan Hoti Thi Kabhii..

Ek Kone Me Surkh Pade Chule Ko Dekh.. Ro Pada...
Jispe Maa Rotiyaa Pakaati Thi Kabhii...

Chhat Pe Khada Hoke Basti Ko Maine Dekha...
Jahaa Mera Bachpan Badaa Huwa Hai Kabhi..

Aakhri Saanse Lene Ki..Khwaish Hai Yahaa..
Jahaa Pehli Saans Li Thi.. Maine Kabhii..

Laut Kar Aaya Hoon Phir Woh Gali
Jise Chod Aaye The... Milon Kabhii...
bahuat khoob ashique ji !! behad kasak aur khalish bhare aashaar the aapke. dheron daad aur dua ke saath .... zarra
   
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Thanks a Ton ZAraa.. Bohat Bohat Shukriyaa Tareef Ke Liye..


   
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